Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICKS 8 30 & 34
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes Michael. I wrote literally one or two poems around 1992, then not much until about 2010 onwards, except special occasions.
November 26th, 2017 03:12
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes Michael. I wrote literally one or two poems around 1992, then not much until about 2010 onwards, except special occasions.
November 26th, 2017 03:12
DEPARTURE
Christina8 said:
There is something about this painting that really draws me to it.! A beautiful write to compliment the painting! Stellar job!
November 25th, 2017 19:12
Christina8 said:
There is something about this painting that really draws me to it.! A beautiful write to compliment the painting! Stellar job!
November 25th, 2017 19:12
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting! I truly admire your artwork! Also, a great poem! It reminds me of a place where I Once lived! I too have learned about the Octelle form from you! You are a master teacher for certain!
Thank you!
November 25th, 2017 17:27
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting! I truly admire your artwork! Also, a great poem! It reminds me of a place where I Once lived! I too have learned about the Octelle form from you! You are a master teacher for certain!
Thank you!
November 25th, 2017 17:27
DEPARTURE
FineB said:
A lovely poem Michael.
I love the picture that accompanies it too.
Keep writing
FineB
November 25th, 2017 15:44
FineB said:
A lovely poem Michael.
I love the picture that accompanies it too.
Keep writing
FineB
November 25th, 2017 15:44
DEPARTURE
orchidee said:
Ohh it\'s all too much for me! I\'m swooning at words like \'importunate\'. Only cos I dunno what it means! Swooning at anything over, oh about 3 syllables long.
November 25th, 2017 10:40
orchidee said:
Ohh it\'s all too much for me! I\'m swooning at words like \'importunate\'. Only cos I dunno what it means! Swooning at anything over, oh about 3 syllables long.
November 25th, 2017 10:40
DEPARTURE
orchidee said:
Ooh I dunno Michael. Brian has explained \'enigma\'. *Dashes off to look up idiosympathetic*. 7 syllables there. That could take up a whole line of one of my poems!
November 25th, 2017 09:32
orchidee said:
Ooh I dunno Michael. Brian has explained \'enigma\'. *Dashes off to look up idiosympathetic*. 7 syllables there. That could take up a whole line of one of my poems!
November 25th, 2017 09:32
DEPARTURE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the visual the visual MIKE ~ The White Horse of the Apocalypse ~ coming soon ! An ENIGMA \"Something very puzzling ~ which you can\'t explain ~ but nevertheless (useful word !) you experience and enjoy\" ALL your poetry falls roughly into this category ~ so no need to apologise we love it ALL !Especially when you are denied Pole Position be the delectable CHRISTINA ! In your honour I have posted an OCTELLE today ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 25th, 2017 05:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the visual the visual MIKE ~ The White Horse of the Apocalypse ~ coming soon ! An ENIGMA \"Something very puzzling ~ which you can\'t explain ~ but nevertheless (useful word !) you experience and enjoy\" ALL your poetry falls roughly into this category ~ so no need to apologise we love it ALL !Especially when you are denied Pole Position be the delectable CHRISTINA ! In your honour I have posted an OCTELLE today ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 25th, 2017 05:03
DEPARTURE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Enigmatic? Oh, I won\'t spot the meaning then, if too much \'thinking\' is involved! heehee.
November 25th, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Enigmatic? Oh, I won\'t spot the meaning then, if too much \'thinking\' is involved! heehee.
November 25th, 2017 02:59
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the OCTELLE form ~ Great economy of Rhyme and Rhythm ~ Powerful inditement of the Industrial Revolution and its scaring of the Countryside ! Love the pyramidal painting ~ Yours BRIAN
November 24th, 2017 18:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the OCTELLE form ~ Great economy of Rhyme and Rhythm ~ Powerful inditement of the Industrial Revolution and its scaring of the Countryside ! Love the pyramidal painting ~ Yours BRIAN
November 24th, 2017 18:33
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
FredPeyer said:
I think, Michael, that this is the best of the three missing lines poems.
But where are the lines in your painting? Did you paint them over?
November 24th, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
I think, Michael, that this is the best of the three missing lines poems.
But where are the lines in your painting? Did you paint them over?
November 24th, 2017 12:14
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
FredPeyer said:
You quite nailed this mathematical poem. Too early in the morning for me to count anything!
The painting seems to be a departure from your usual style, you are really very gifted, Michael!
November 24th, 2017 11:04
FredPeyer said:
You quite nailed this mathematical poem. Too early in the morning for me to count anything!
The painting seems to be a departure from your usual style, you are really very gifted, Michael!
November 24th, 2017 11:04
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
Louis Gibbs said:
Where in the world do you come up with so many formal structures of poetry, Michael? I had no idea. This one is intriguing, and well done.
November 24th, 2017 09:31
Louis Gibbs said:
Where in the world do you come up with so many formal structures of poetry, Michael? I had no idea. This one is intriguing, and well done.
November 24th, 2017 09:31
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
FineB said:
Many thanks Michael.
Great poem.
I loved the picture too accompanying your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
November 24th, 2017 06:09
FineB said:
Many thanks Michael.
Great poem.
I loved the picture too accompanying your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
November 24th, 2017 06:09
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Oohh good, syllable counting! I shall probably think of a tune to this before long, though it\'s a bit of a tricky layout (metre). Well, use yards then Orchi!
November 24th, 2017 02:52
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Oohh good, syllable counting! I shall probably think of a tune to this before long, though it\'s a bit of a tricky layout (metre). Well, use yards then Orchi!
November 24th, 2017 02:52
MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, I have not come across that structure before.
Is the artwork another one of your styles, I like it.
November 24th, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, I have not come across that structure before.
Is the artwork another one of your styles, I like it.
November 24th, 2017 02:12
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
Fay Slimm. said:
Some of these finds are more subtle than the originals methinks - ha h a.
November 23rd, 2017 15:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Some of these finds are more subtle than the originals methinks - ha h a.
November 23rd, 2017 15:15
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
Christina8 said:
Just after I read the second one that I liked, the third one was funnier! This abstract is different but I like it very much!
November 23rd, 2017 13:14
Christina8 said:
Just after I read the second one that I liked, the third one was funnier! This abstract is different but I like it very much!
November 23rd, 2017 13:14
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ I correct GOLDIE ~ what he sees as an abstract I know to be photo of a FISH through the sparkling waters of the AVON \"The Chard of Avon !\" Loved all the M L\'s 3 ~ My fave has to be No. 5 ~ but I thought it was attributed to Harvey Smith \"My Kingdom fer An \'Orse !\" BRIAN \"Bard of Essex \"
November 23rd, 2017 11:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ I correct GOLDIE ~ what he sees as an abstract I know to be photo of a FISH through the sparkling waters of the AVON \"The Chard of Avon !\" Loved all the M L\'s 3 ~ My fave has to be No. 5 ~ but I thought it was attributed to Harvey Smith \"My Kingdom fer An \'Orse !\" BRIAN \"Bard of Essex \"
November 23rd, 2017 11:18
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
Louis Gibbs said:
What\'s this? Regarding number four ... A lawyer drawing conclusions obviously without having thoroughly examined the evidence? I would like my retainer back please, good sir.
Just messing with you, Michael. Off course we all are free to believe whatever we choose.
November 23rd, 2017 10:12
Louis Gibbs said:
What\'s this? Regarding number four ... A lawyer drawing conclusions obviously without having thoroughly examined the evidence? I would like my retainer back please, good sir.
Just messing with you, Michael. Off course we all are free to believe whatever we choose.
November 23rd, 2017 10:12
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
Accidental Poet said:
Another beauty Michael. Poem and painting superb.
November 23rd, 2017 09:29
Accidental Poet said:
Another beauty Michael. Poem and painting superb.
November 23rd, 2017 09:29
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know Romeo and Juliet was such a windy tale!
November 23rd, 2017 06:21
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know Romeo and Juliet was such a windy tale!
November 23rd, 2017 06:21
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Did Juliet have too many baked beans?!
November 23rd, 2017 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Did Juliet have too many baked beans?!
November 23rd, 2017 02:43
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
Some more good ones.
The scheme of your abstract works that I prefer are back - like them very much.
November 23rd, 2017 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Some more good ones.
The scheme of your abstract works that I prefer are back - like them very much.
November 23rd, 2017 02:41
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2).
WL Schuett said:
Made me smile, good job
November 22nd, 2017 16:23
WL Schuett said:
Made me smile, good job
November 22nd, 2017 16:23
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2).
FredPeyer said:
Oh heck, Michael, you did it again! This time you curved some the bard\'s missing lines in the painting as well as throwing us some curve balls in the poem.
You get a three chuckle for this from me!
November 22nd, 2017 13:11
FredPeyer said:
Oh heck, Michael, you did it again! This time you curved some the bard\'s missing lines in the painting as well as throwing us some curve balls in the poem.
You get a three chuckle for this from me!
November 22nd, 2017 13:11
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2).
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ These are getting bluer & bluer ~ especially Nos. 3 & 5 ~ I\'m surprised Cardinal Orchi didn\'t demand an 18 for innuendoes ! Can\'t wait for tomorrow ! Yours BRIAN. Your abstract is an exact painting of the referees box (in which I have sat !) and the track ~ in our local VELODROME !
November 22nd, 2017 11:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ These are getting bluer & bluer ~ especially Nos. 3 & 5 ~ I\'m surprised Cardinal Orchi didn\'t demand an 18 for innuendoes ! Can\'t wait for tomorrow ! Yours BRIAN. Your abstract is an exact painting of the referees box (in which I have sat !) and the track ~ in our local VELODROME !
November 22nd, 2017 11:42
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2).
rrodriguez said:
This is so hilarious and so realistic. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your painting, as always, beautiful.
November 22nd, 2017 11:09
rrodriguez said:
This is so hilarious and so realistic. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your painting, as always, beautiful.
November 22nd, 2017 11:09
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2).
myself and me said:
Shakespeare would laugh his skeleton off.
November 22nd, 2017 10:57
myself and me said:
Shakespeare would laugh his skeleton off.
November 22nd, 2017 10:57
SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2).
Louis Gibbs said:
Pipe organ or mouth organ ... err, harmonica ... both make for fine music. Clever writes, Michael!
November 22nd, 2017 09:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Pipe organ or mouth organ ... err, harmonica ... both make for fine music. Clever writes, Michael!
November 22nd, 2017 09:29
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