Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
SHORTIES FROM FUSIONS
dusk arising said:
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i guess we all have jottings of ideas which we hadnt developed, im thinking of a few ideas which i jotted down whilst working on another piece. I\'m inspired.
February 3rd, 2018 05:49
dusk arising said:
Hmmm i think i just might copy your idea of publishing shorts ..... i guess we all have jottings of ideas which we hadnt developed, im thinking of a few ideas which i jotted down whilst working on another piece. I\'m inspired.
February 3rd, 2018 05:49
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Jooles said:
I love cabbage , sprouts and gravy...id have a feast 🤣
February 2nd, 2018 19:47
Jooles said:
I love cabbage , sprouts and gravy...id have a feast 🤣
February 2nd, 2018 19:47
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
dusk arising said:
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like these
Your long necked bird is a farce
For he could kiss his own a.....
And generally do as he pleased
alternative last line:-
But i\'d advise him not to sniff the breeze
February 2nd, 2018 18:15
dusk arising said:
After sleeping on Danish blue cheese
I began writing poems like these
Your long necked bird is a farce
For he could kiss his own a.....
And generally do as he pleased
alternative last line:-
But i\'d advise him not to sniff the breeze
February 2nd, 2018 18:15
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure nonsense\', this is humor 1st class and the result of a great fertile mind!!!
February 2nd, 2018 14:26
FredPeyer said:
You just made my morning, Michael. And please don\'t call this \'pure nonsense\', this is humor 1st class and the result of a great fertile mind!!!
February 2nd, 2018 14:26
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor bird\'s neck has grown to get away from the wind\'s double- odour !!! A great nonsense rhyme Michael along with the clever sketch.
February 2nd, 2018 07:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh both cabbage and sprouts all in one go - no wonder that poor bird\'s neck has grown to get away from the wind\'s double- odour !!! A great nonsense rhyme Michael along with the clever sketch.
February 2nd, 2018 07:49
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write M. A bit of a windy world - cabbage and sprouts.
February 2nd, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write M. A bit of a windy world - cabbage and sprouts.
February 2nd, 2018 02:37
IF ALL THE WORLD...(2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Where is the roast beef and potatoes? as hopefully the gravy is onion gravy.
Good fun write Michael.
February 2nd, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Where is the roast beef and potatoes? as hopefully the gravy is onion gravy.
Good fun write Michael.
February 2nd, 2018 02:07
RESERVED WITHIN
FredPeyer said:
While very well written, what I like most about both the drawing and the poem is that you left it wide open for the reader to put his/her own story and thoughts right into it.
February 1st, 2018 13:07
FredPeyer said:
While very well written, what I like most about both the drawing and the poem is that you left it wide open for the reader to put his/her own story and thoughts right into it.
February 1st, 2018 13:07
RESERVED WITHIN
Fay Slimm. said:
A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing what counts with a maiden - - great duo the pic and the poem Michael.
February 1st, 2018 09:26
Fay Slimm. said:
A romance in the making were these mysterious lines bent on describing what counts with a maiden - - great duo the pic and the poem Michael.
February 1st, 2018 09:26
RESERVED WITHIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an elegant symbiosis of Poem \'n Pic ! An apt depiction in Line & Lament ~ Parting is such sweet sorrow ! Yours BRIAN
February 1st, 2018 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for an elegant symbiosis of Poem \'n Pic ! An apt depiction in Line & Lament ~ Parting is such sweet sorrow ! Yours BRIAN
February 1st, 2018 05:07
RESERVED WITHIN
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Could a song from me break through her armour? Or would it cause her to put another layer of armour on? More ear-plugs anyway! heehee.
February 1st, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Could a song from me break through her armour? Or would it cause her to put another layer of armour on? More ear-plugs anyway! heehee.
February 1st, 2018 02:43
RESERVED WITHIN
Goldfinch60 said:
The armour of sorrow surrounds her. Very good emotive write Micael.
February 1st, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
The armour of sorrow surrounds her. Very good emotive write Micael.
February 1st, 2018 02:12
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you mastered the form perfectly! And to top it off, all five quinzanes make sense!
But why are there only three geese to go with five quinzanes? :-)
January 31st, 2018 12:31
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you mastered the form perfectly! And to top it off, all five quinzanes make sense!
But why are there only three geese to go with five quinzanes? :-)
January 31st, 2018 12:31
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
Fay Slimm. said:
Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps between statements and questions.
January 31st, 2018 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Quizanes eh ? A most interesting form Michael - - love those jumps between statements and questions.
January 31st, 2018 04:49
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
FineB said:
Thanks Michael a superb write.
Poignant and beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:19
FineB said:
Thanks Michael a superb write.
Poignant and beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:19
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
orchidee said:
Good quin-wotsits Michael. Second one - Erm, yes, the lights are on in the house, but is anyone home? Could apply to house, or to the \'house\' of people themselves! lol
January 31st, 2018 02:47
orchidee said:
Good quin-wotsits Michael. Second one - Erm, yes, the lights are on in the house, but is anyone home? Could apply to house, or to the \'house\' of people themselves! lol
January 31st, 2018 02:47
A QUORUM OF QUINZANES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and profound questions Michael.
January 31st, 2018 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and profound questions Michael.
January 31st, 2018 02:44
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and I like how you captured the trees
January 30th, 2018 13:56
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and I like how you captured the trees
January 30th, 2018 13:56
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery which classical writers knew possessed power -- great stuff your recent postings my friend.
January 30th, 2018 12:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read Michael --the title is stunning and I love the imagery which classical writers knew possessed power -- great stuff your recent postings my friend.
January 30th, 2018 12:40
THE FILM I VIEWED LAST NIGHT
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes!
I love it when poets who can see beauty in puddle sometimes tell us how it is...
Bet you didn\'t put that on canvass?
January 30th, 2018 09:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes!
I love it when poets who can see beauty in puddle sometimes tell us how it is...
Bet you didn\'t put that on canvass?
January 30th, 2018 09:54
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Again... a poem from Michael lifts my day and returns me back to Symmetry
Such wonderful flow from an artist may I say
January 30th, 2018 09:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Again... a poem from Michael lifts my day and returns me back to Symmetry
Such wonderful flow from an artist may I say
January 30th, 2018 09:43
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
dusk arising said:
For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today shown us that you are indeed a great poet.
Re reading this piece i could \'feel\' the peaceful joy of awaking to the welcome of a new bright morning in harmony with our natural surround.
Truly a pleasure to read. Into my favs.
January 30th, 2018 06:55
dusk arising said:
For one who often loves to show his sense of humour on here you have today shown us that you are indeed a great poet.
Re reading this piece i could \'feel\' the peaceful joy of awaking to the welcome of a new bright morning in harmony with our natural surround.
Truly a pleasure to read. Into my favs.
January 30th, 2018 06:55
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a morning repast of Poem & Painting ! Love the tree silhouettes reminds me of when I was in he Cubs & Scouts ~ Tree recognition in all SEASONS ! Loved the wording of the poem ! You will enjoy my CATS today ! Yours BRIAN
January 30th, 2018 05:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a morning repast of Poem & Painting ! Love the tree silhouettes reminds me of when I was in he Cubs & Scouts ~ Tree recognition in all SEASONS ! Loved the wording of the poem ! You will enjoy my CATS today ! Yours BRIAN
January 30th, 2018 05:55
SPILLED INK SHADOWS
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful imagery in both drawings a words once more Michael.
January 30th, 2018 03:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful imagery in both drawings a words once more Michael.
January 30th, 2018 03:08
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