Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
IN ECSTASY
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poetic description of the afterglow of love-making. Well penned, Michael!
January 9th, 2018 11:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poetic description of the afterglow of love-making. Well penned, Michael!
January 9th, 2018 11:34
IN ECSTASY
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous piece - \"primal melody\" indeed Michael !! - - great painting too.
January 9th, 2018 08:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous piece - \"primal melody\" indeed Michael !! - - great painting too.
January 9th, 2018 08:54
IN ECSTASY
orchidee said:
Oh woe is me
I never gets to ecstasy
I only gets as far as a swoony!
heehee.
January 9th, 2018 08:43
orchidee said:
Oh woe is me
I never gets to ecstasy
I only gets as far as a swoony!
heehee.
January 9th, 2018 08:43
IN ECSTASY
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael, and a swoon from me! lol.
January 9th, 2018 02:49
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael, and a swoon from me! lol.
January 9th, 2018 02:49
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
dusk arising said:
His brow was moderately wrinkled
as he sat in the cold and he tinkled
for the prostate you know
will slacken the flow
so stay young and don\'t ever think-old
January 8th, 2018 21:41
dusk arising said:
His brow was moderately wrinkled
as he sat in the cold and he tinkled
for the prostate you know
will slacken the flow
so stay young and don\'t ever think-old
January 8th, 2018 21:41
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
These lines are genius! Great job! Also beautiful painting of the hall! You always do such great work.
January 8th, 2018 17:56
Christina8 said:
These lines are genius! Great job! Also beautiful painting of the hall! You always do such great work.
January 8th, 2018 17:56
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
I go along with all four of your one-liners, except the hip thing. With me it is more of a belly thing.
Love \'age and sin...\', but we can still dream, can we?
Love the painting. Am amazed at how well you do perspectives and details, especially in a watercolor. The windows are exquisitely done, not easy with watercolors where you don\'t paint white and cannot really overpaint as in acrylics. Guess your engineering background is showing through a little bit.
January 8th, 2018 11:40
FredPeyer said:
I go along with all four of your one-liners, except the hip thing. With me it is more of a belly thing.
Love \'age and sin...\', but we can still dream, can we?
Love the painting. Am amazed at how well you do perspectives and details, especially in a watercolor. The windows are exquisitely done, not easy with watercolors where you don\'t paint white and cannot really overpaint as in acrylics. Guess your engineering background is showing through a little bit.
January 8th, 2018 11:40
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
lasergraph said:
Growing old is always better than the alternative. The wear and tear on the outside is not an indication of wear on the inside. We seem to gain perspective after the experience of age. Sometimes even new ways to look at life. A toast to experience my friend.
January 8th, 2018 09:31
lasergraph said:
Growing old is always better than the alternative. The wear and tear on the outside is not an indication of wear on the inside. We seem to gain perspective after the experience of age. Sometimes even new ways to look at life. A toast to experience my friend.
January 8th, 2018 09:31
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
Great thought on the aging struggle Michael - love the painting too which will always have a special place in your home I would imagine - a wonderful space in which to exchange marriage vows - - -
January 8th, 2018 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Great thought on the aging struggle Michael - love the painting too which will always have a special place in your home I would imagine - a wonderful space in which to exchange marriage vows - - -
January 8th, 2018 05:38
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m having a real fight keeping the weight down - have a 20 minute routine every morning which gets me out of breath and eat sensibly but it\'s still a struggle. Cheers Andy.
January 8th, 2018 02:58
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m having a real fight keeping the weight down - have a 20 minute routine every morning which gets me out of breath and eat sensibly but it\'s still a struggle. Cheers Andy.
January 8th, 2018 02:58
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Goldfinch60 said:
My worries seem to have settled on my stomach, nowadays it is hard to try and convince others it is relaxed muscle.
January 8th, 2018 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
My worries seem to have settled on my stomach, nowadays it is hard to try and convince others it is relaxed muscle.
January 8th, 2018 02:50
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that first taste of love is something quite special and is always remembered.
January 8th, 2018 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that first taste of love is something quite special and is always remembered.
January 8th, 2018 01:17
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely balanced Poem \'n Pic. Thank heaven Love\'s First Taste leaves one wanting more and is never the last. At my age the taste of love ~ still has its freshness and anticipation ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 17:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely balanced Poem \'n Pic. Thank heaven Love\'s First Taste leaves one wanting more and is never the last. At my age the taste of love ~ still has its freshness and anticipation ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 17:21
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, beautifully written, and I agree with SL, that last stanza is something else, you may be smug for as long as you want! And for a five minute job, that painting is amazing!
January 7th, 2018 11:06
FredPeyer said:
Michael, beautifully written, and I agree with SL, that last stanza is something else, you may be smug for as long as you want! And for a five minute job, that painting is amazing!
January 7th, 2018 11:06
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
WL Schuett said:
Nice work Michael both poem and painting
January 7th, 2018 07:44
WL Schuett said:
Nice work Michael both poem and painting
January 7th, 2018 07:44
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
Accidental Poet said:
Love\'s first taste sometimes lasts a lifetime. Great write Michael.
January 7th, 2018 07:34
Accidental Poet said:
Love\'s first taste sometimes lasts a lifetime. Great write Michael.
January 7th, 2018 07:34
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Did she swoon when she tasted?! I did, of course! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 03:24
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Did she swoon when she tasted?! I did, of course! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 03:24
SATURDAY
Laura🌻 said:
Enjoyed reading your acrostic poem, Michael!
The Acrostic form is one of my favorites!
When one is retired, every day is SATURDAY! Enjoy to the fullest!
January 6th, 2018 18:05
Laura🌻 said:
Enjoyed reading your acrostic poem, Michael!
The Acrostic form is one of my favorites!
When one is retired, every day is SATURDAY! Enjoy to the fullest!
January 6th, 2018 18:05
SATURDAY
FredPeyer said:
Maybe I should be, but am not retired yet, Michael. Saturday for me is a day of chores, so I am not so sure I would want every day of the week to be like that. :-)
Like the poem, though!
January 6th, 2018 15:08
FredPeyer said:
Maybe I should be, but am not retired yet, Michael. Saturday for me is a day of chores, so I am not so sure I would want every day of the week to be like that. :-)
Like the poem, though!
January 6th, 2018 15:08
SATURDAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
SATURDAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
SATURDAY
Fay Slimm. said:
The business of being retired comes through so well in this Saturday acrostic Michael - like you I too shout hip hip hooray for a daily Saturday.
January 6th, 2018 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
The business of being retired comes through so well in this Saturday acrostic Michael - like you I too shout hip hip hooray for a daily Saturday.
January 6th, 2018 04:29
SATURDAY
orchidee said:
\'I should like to have the time for it\', as they say. Ahh, you have got the time for it, but are busy being retired - so much for you to do!
January 6th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
\'I should like to have the time for it\', as they say. Ahh, you have got the time for it, but are busy being retired - so much for you to do!
January 6th, 2018 02:44
SATURDAY
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the same for me Michael, so many Saturdays, so little time.
January 6th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the same for me Michael, so many Saturdays, so little time.
January 6th, 2018 01:43
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
FineB said:
A witty poem Michael. Thanks very much.
A sweet treat once a week such as a muffin is not too bad provided one exercises and eats sensibly the rest of the week.
Keep writing in 2018.
FineB
January 5th, 2018 08:10
FineB said:
A witty poem Michael. Thanks very much.
A sweet treat once a week such as a muffin is not too bad provided one exercises and eats sensibly the rest of the week.
Keep writing in 2018.
FineB
January 5th, 2018 08:10
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh MUCHAEL ~ Lovely lament ! \"Stuffin\' the MUFFIN and endin\' up in the CUFFIN ! We call them PICLETS ~Yummy toasted with cheese ! Please check my ROSE ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 5th, 2018 04:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh MUCHAEL ~ Lovely lament ! \"Stuffin\' the MUFFIN and endin\' up in the CUFFIN ! We call them PICLETS ~Yummy toasted with cheese ! Please check my ROSE ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 5th, 2018 04:18
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael. I have just looked up the nursery rhyme of the Muffin Man and it was first written down circa 1820.
January 5th, 2018 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael. I have just looked up the nursery rhyme of the Muffin Man and it was first written down circa 1820.
January 5th, 2018 01:48
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