Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A FEW LUNES
myself and me said:
Always love your color paint, so fresh and peaceful. Enjoy those lunes.
November 30th, 2017 08:19
myself and me said:
Always love your color paint, so fresh and peaceful. Enjoy those lunes.
November 30th, 2017 08:19
A FEW LUNES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ I am a LUNETIC and have used them in the past. As a tribute to you I may publish a \"Clutch of Lunes\" later today ! A single LUNE always strikes me as Poetic Minimalism ! I take you point about the niggling constraints of HAIKU ! I have been on other sites where they took HAIKU much more seriously and if one poste one that was NOT 575 or rhymed or not about Nature or Seasons etc then you where castigated ~ which is very painful ! I have always been interested in clouds and have lectured on them (CLOUD 7 !). Love the painting ~ very LUNE ! 5 Buildings ~ 3 Fields ~ 5 Trees ! Yours BRIAN
November 30th, 2017 03:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ I am a LUNETIC and have used them in the past. As a tribute to you I may publish a \"Clutch of Lunes\" later today ! A single LUNE always strikes me as Poetic Minimalism ! I take you point about the niggling constraints of HAIKU ! I have been on other sites where they took HAIKU much more seriously and if one poste one that was NOT 575 or rhymed or not about Nature or Seasons etc then you where castigated ~ which is very painful ! I have always been interested in clouds and have lectured on them (CLOUD 7 !). Love the painting ~ very LUNE ! 5 Buildings ~ 3 Fields ~ 5 Trees ! Yours BRIAN
November 30th, 2017 03:33
A FEW LUNES
orchidee said:
Good writes Michael. The only lune I knew, was lunacy! heehee.
November 30th, 2017 02:47
orchidee said:
Good writes Michael. The only lune I knew, was lunacy! heehee.
November 30th, 2017 02:47
A FEW LUNES
Goldfinch60 said:
Never heard of lunes but I have now and will have to try them, I write haiku and senryu but these obviously allow a bit more freedom.
The last one speaks to me and my love of music.
November 30th, 2017 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Never heard of lunes but I have now and will have to try them, I write haiku and senryu but these obviously allow a bit more freedom.
The last one speaks to me and my love of music.
November 30th, 2017 02:27
A FEW LUNES
FredPeyer said:
Michael, what can I say? You are a master at these \"technical\' poems! Like all of them, but the second one is my favorite!
November 30th, 2017 00:29
FredPeyer said:
Michael, what can I say? You are a master at these \"technical\' poems! Like all of them, but the second one is my favorite!
November 30th, 2017 00:29
SUMMER SOLSTICE
myself and me said:
Really love the paint, makes me feel warm in this cold season. Lovely poem too.
November 29th, 2017 21:29
myself and me said:
Really love the paint, makes me feel warm in this cold season. Lovely poem too.
November 29th, 2017 21:29
SUMMER SOLSTICE
Louis Gibbs said:
A proper painting and a proper poem. Both well expressed, Michael!
November 29th, 2017 14:49
Louis Gibbs said:
A proper painting and a proper poem. Both well expressed, Michael!
November 29th, 2017 14:49
SUMMER SOLSTICE
Jeremy Leach said:
I like the simple but powerful imagery. Certainly summers I can relate to especially that smell of wild garlic.
November 29th, 2017 14:04
Jeremy Leach said:
I like the simple but powerful imagery. Certainly summers I can relate to especially that smell of wild garlic.
November 29th, 2017 14:04
SUMMER SOLSTICE
WL Schuett said:
Fine painting and poem they go together perfectly!
November 29th, 2017 10:26
WL Schuett said:
Fine painting and poem they go together perfectly!
November 29th, 2017 10:26
SUMMER SOLSTICE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for another perfect FUSION of Poem & Pic ! Please check my latest FUSION about (guess what ?) CHRISTMAS ! Well it\'s the 1st of December on Friday ! When my American friends visit ~ they are in awe of our Villages (I always arrange a stay in Stowe) they are prettier than any Kincaid Painting ~ there are so many of them and they are so close together ! MEGHAN MARKLE has much to learn as Mrs Wales ! Also please check my QUICKIES ~ Your Friend Brian !
November 29th, 2017 10:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for another perfect FUSION of Poem & Pic ! Please check my latest FUSION about (guess what ?) CHRISTMAS ! Well it\'s the 1st of December on Friday ! When my American friends visit ~ they are in awe of our Villages (I always arrange a stay in Stowe) they are prettier than any Kincaid Painting ~ there are so many of them and they are so close together ! MEGHAN MARKLE has much to learn as Mrs Wales ! Also please check my QUICKIES ~ Your Friend Brian !
November 29th, 2017 10:14
SUMMER SOLSTICE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is incredible. This is exactly how we \'non-English\' picture the English country side. And the poem is not far behind the painting! Kudos!
November 29th, 2017 03:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is incredible. This is exactly how we \'non-English\' picture the English country side. And the poem is not far behind the painting! Kudos!
November 29th, 2017 03:59
BE MINE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if you could bottle this poem, I would love to buy one and then drink it slowly and think of you in beautiful Europe!
November 29th, 2017 03:09
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if you could bottle this poem, I would love to buy one and then drink it slowly and think of you in beautiful Europe!
November 29th, 2017 03:09
SUMMER SOLSTICE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow your wording is extraordinary, awesome!! Very poetic great in brevity. Kudos.
Like painting in words.!
So nice to read from your pen again,
Do pls review my latest too.
November 29th, 2017 02:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow your wording is extraordinary, awesome!! Very poetic great in brevity. Kudos.
Like painting in words.!
So nice to read from your pen again,
Do pls review my latest too.
November 29th, 2017 02:13
SUMMER SOLSTICE
Goldfinch60 said:
The imagery this conjurs up is great Michael I could see and smell nature.
I like the painting as well, that type of scene is duplicated in many towns and villages.
November 29th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
The imagery this conjurs up is great Michael I could see and smell nature.
I like the painting as well, that type of scene is duplicated in many towns and villages.
November 29th, 2017 01:40
BE MINE
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small coastal sculpture and the short-line romantic write Michael. Super posting.
November 28th, 2017 10:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small coastal sculpture and the short-line romantic write Michael. Super posting.
November 28th, 2017 10:43
BE MINE
myself and me said:
\"As grape is to wine, be mine.\"
Marvelous indeed. Without grape, there will be no wine; In wine, no grape could be observed.
Very creative craft.
November 28th, 2017 08:56
myself and me said:
\"As grape is to wine, be mine.\"
Marvelous indeed. Without grape, there will be no wine; In wine, no grape could be observed.
Very creative craft.
November 28th, 2017 08:56
BE MINE
FineB said:
Short, sweet and powerful. Superb write.
The coastal sculpture is beautiful.
Many thanks
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 06:15
FineB said:
Short, sweet and powerful. Superb write.
The coastal sculpture is beautiful.
Many thanks
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 06:15
CHICKS
Louis Gibbs said:
Made me feel warm and cozy, this one. Like the accompanying sketch, too!
November 27th, 2017 12:08
Louis Gibbs said:
Made me feel warm and cozy, this one. Like the accompanying sketch, too!
November 27th, 2017 12:08
CHICKS
Christina8 said:
Chicks are so cute--nice drawing and acrostic! Nice write.
November 27th, 2017 11:09
Christina8 said:
Chicks are so cute--nice drawing and acrostic! Nice write.
November 27th, 2017 11:09
CHICKS
FineB said:
Thanks Michael.
A delightfhl poem and so poignant.
Keep writing
FineB
November 27th, 2017 09:42
FineB said:
Thanks Michael.
A delightfhl poem and so poignant.
Keep writing
FineB
November 27th, 2017 09:42
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