Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FOG
orchidee said:
A fine write M.Never knew there was so much in fog! Maybe because I could not SEE anything in the fog! heehee.
You see me? *reaches to shelf for dictionary* And who is Chorus Kate? lol.
February 25th, 2018 02:54
orchidee said:
A fine write M.Never knew there was so much in fog! Maybe because I could not SEE anything in the fog! heehee.
You see me? *reaches to shelf for dictionary* And who is Chorus Kate? lol.
February 25th, 2018 02:54
RISING PAIN
dusk arising said:
How often we pick up the signals missed by those involved who may be blinded by their love and devotion. Hope i read this convoluted tale correctly. Very subtle.
February 24th, 2018 15:06
dusk arising said:
How often we pick up the signals missed by those involved who may be blinded by their love and devotion. Hope i read this convoluted tale correctly. Very subtle.
February 24th, 2018 15:06
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
FredPeyer said:
I keep on fighting for my breath and you keep on walking! Looks like we both had the same thing in mind, but you said it more beautifully and eloquently. Well penned, Michael!
February 24th, 2018 13:45
FredPeyer said:
I keep on fighting for my breath and you keep on walking! Looks like we both had the same thing in mind, but you said it more beautifully and eloquently. Well penned, Michael!
February 24th, 2018 13:45
RISING PAIN
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - I thought this would be about my singing. That\'s a rising pain (in the neck!) to people. heehee.
February 24th, 2018 07:14
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - I thought this would be about my singing. That\'s a rising pain (in the neck!) to people. heehee.
February 24th, 2018 07:14
RISING PAIN
Laura🌻 said:
Wow! That’s a powerful message, Michael, via words and visual! Has to be read more than once...for sure!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 05:17
Laura🌻 said:
Wow! That’s a powerful message, Michael, via words and visual! Has to be read more than once...for sure!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 05:17
RISING PAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
May that pain soon be eased
With truths that calm her soul
February 24th, 2018 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May that pain soon be eased
With truths that calm her soul
February 24th, 2018 01:39
TRUE HISTORY
FredPeyer said:
Oh, I agree so much with you here, Michael. If we look at documented history, we only see a very small slice of what happened, and since history is written by the winners, we cannot be sure it is not distorted. Maybe the history pieced together by archaeologists is the \'true\' history.
Well written and thought provoking poem!
February 23rd, 2018 16:50
FredPeyer said:
Oh, I agree so much with you here, Michael. If we look at documented history, we only see a very small slice of what happened, and since history is written by the winners, we cannot be sure it is not distorted. Maybe the history pieced together by archaeologists is the \'true\' history.
Well written and thought provoking poem!
February 23rd, 2018 16:50
LOVE IS...etcetera
Jamie said:
You deceived me, I was going in for a sad read about love, and I came out with the corners of my mouth wrapped around the top of my head!
February 23rd, 2018 11:38
Jamie said:
You deceived me, I was going in for a sad read about love, and I came out with the corners of my mouth wrapped around the top of my head!
February 23rd, 2018 11:38
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
Lorna said:
I love your use of colors in the pic but I adore you landscapes! Nighttime can go so many ways - scary or romantic or mystical...... it depends on how we crank our minds doesn\'t it!
February 23rd, 2018 07:28
Lorna said:
I love your use of colors in the pic but I adore you landscapes! Nighttime can go so many ways - scary or romantic or mystical...... it depends on how we crank our minds doesn\'t it!
February 23rd, 2018 07:28
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ I was born under a wandering star but have to settle as an \"Essex Boy\" for the next few years In essence all visual ART is abstract because it is \"absracted from reality\" Some of course is further removed from reality than other. I like CUBISM because you never completely lose sight of the \"subject\". Thanks for highlighting visual Art. Love the Poem ~ it provides thought for food ! Yours Abstractedly BRIAN
February 23rd, 2018 04:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ I was born under a wandering star but have to settle as an \"Essex Boy\" for the next few years In essence all visual ART is abstract because it is \"absracted from reality\" Some of course is further removed from reality than other. I like CUBISM because you never completely lose sight of the \"subject\". Thanks for highlighting visual Art. Love the Poem ~ it provides thought for food ! Yours Abstractedly BRIAN
February 23rd, 2018 04:14
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
Fay Slimm. said:
Great imagery and super write on what beliefs do to the psyche. The picture I put a question mark by - -I guess I love your water-colour villages too much.
February 23rd, 2018 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Great imagery and super write on what beliefs do to the psyche. The picture I put a question mark by - -I guess I love your water-colour villages too much.
February 23rd, 2018 03:35
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh I got no time for superstitions. I can\'t spend all me life avoiding walking in front of black cats; not stepping on lines on the pavement; not crossing on the stairs, etc! lol.
February 23rd, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh I got no time for superstitions. I can\'t spend all me life avoiding walking in front of black cats; not stepping on lines on the pavement; not crossing on the stairs, etc! lol.
February 23rd, 2018 02:45
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
Goldfinch60 said:
\"To approach the spiritual in art, one will make as little use as possible of reality, because reality is opposed to the spiritual.”
- Piet Mondrian
February 23rd, 2018 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
\"To approach the spiritual in art, one will make as little use as possible of reality, because reality is opposed to the spiritual.”
- Piet Mondrian
February 23rd, 2018 02:14
BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words forever flow
May your colours forever glow
May the stars shine always bright
May your journey never end
February 23rd, 2018 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
May your words forever flow
May your colours forever glow
May the stars shine always bright
May your journey never end
February 23rd, 2018 02:13
TRUE HISTORY
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed this one! I love the thought of ordinary lives making history. And beautiful drawing, by the way.
February 22nd, 2018 18:37
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed this one! I love the thought of ordinary lives making history. And beautiful drawing, by the way.
February 22nd, 2018 18:37
TRUE HISTORY
Lorna said:
I have this uneasy feeling about the \"great\" characters in history. One the one hand of course they are presented as what has made up the world......... and make terrific reading....but then if you examine, how many were not obsessed with themselves and giving little thought to the people they affected. The everyday people are the ones that had to make the most of what was done to them......
February 22nd, 2018 07:04
Lorna said:
I have this uneasy feeling about the \"great\" characters in history. One the one hand of course they are presented as what has made up the world......... and make terrific reading....but then if you examine, how many were not obsessed with themselves and giving little thought to the people they affected. The everyday people are the ones that had to make the most of what was done to them......
February 22nd, 2018 07:04
TRUE HISTORY
burning-embers said:
Ah the lies of history. In text books it truly lies, then lies on the lips of everyman. And history lies to the leity. Mostly history recounted lies for it is the history of the vanquishers choosing not the truth. History = a weapon of mass deception.
Very thought provoking piece ME
February 22nd, 2018 04:27
burning-embers said:
Ah the lies of history. In text books it truly lies, then lies on the lips of everyman. And history lies to the leity. Mostly history recounted lies for it is the history of the vanquishers choosing not the truth. History = a weapon of mass deception.
Very thought provoking piece ME
February 22nd, 2018 04:27
TRUE HISTORY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A thought provoking write with a poignant illustration! Personally, I have much to ponder upon...
Ordinary lives that were snuffed in three minutes! Their history has been decided!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 03:12
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A thought provoking write with a poignant illustration! Personally, I have much to ponder upon...
Ordinary lives that were snuffed in three minutes! Their history has been decided!
~Laura~
February 22nd, 2018 03:12
TRUE HISTORY
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but what we also need to realise is that history is written by the winners, what if the losers were right.
Love the drawing.
February 22nd, 2018 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true but what we also need to realise is that history is written by the winners, what if the losers were right.
Love the drawing.
February 22nd, 2018 02:36
TRUE HISTORY
orchidee said:
A fin and true write Michael. We\'re blessed with this country with the monarchy though, I feel, compared to some places.
February 22nd, 2018 02:30
orchidee said:
A fin and true write Michael. We\'re blessed with this country with the monarchy though, I feel, compared to some places.
February 22nd, 2018 02:30
NOVEMBER
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A beautful poem!
I remember November as a child - Gosh the skies were pitch black and how darkness and winter descended upon us!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:14
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A beautful poem!
I remember November as a child - Gosh the skies were pitch black and how darkness and winter descended upon us!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:14
THE PATH
Laura🌻 said:
Loved it, Michael!
INSPIRATION served you
well I see! She found her
path...and slowly, so am I!
Awesome last stanza!
Of course, your painting
is beautiful! It reminds me
of a lovely Bed&Breakfast
place by a lake that I\'ve
had the pleasure to stay at!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 04:26
Laura🌻 said:
Loved it, Michael!
INSPIRATION served you
well I see! She found her
path...and slowly, so am I!
Awesome last stanza!
Of course, your painting
is beautiful! It reminds me
of a lovely Bed&Breakfast
place by a lake that I\'ve
had the pleasure to stay at!
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 04:26
NOVEMBER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ November always stirs my MUSE ! Especially Bonfires & Fireworks and ~ If I\'m in the STATES ~ Thanksgiving ! Please check my DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ~ I copied your idea Thanks ! Love the NOVEMBERNESS of your POEM \'n PIC ! Yours as ever BRIAN
February 21st, 2018 03:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ November always stirs my MUSE ! Especially Bonfires & Fireworks and ~ If I\'m in the STATES ~ Thanksgiving ! Please check my DUBIOUS DEFINITIONS ~ I copied your idea Thanks ! Love the NOVEMBERNESS of your POEM \'n PIC ! Yours as ever BRIAN
February 21st, 2018 03:10
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