Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WITHOUT EXCUSE
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting for starters! I love your poem, I just wish I knew the words that she read. But really great!
November 12th, 2017 13:04
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting for starters! I love your poem, I just wish I knew the words that she read. But really great!
November 12th, 2017 13:04
WITHOUT EXCUSE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My analysis of your picture MIKE shows an ELFLIKE FIGURE in a yellow cloak. Sharp nez ~ grining bouche and bright oreil (all IMPS are French !) I can only conclude que cet IMP is the cause of all the incongruity on your quartet of Odd Odes ! Thanks for scaring ~ ONCLE BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My analysis of your picture MIKE shows an ELFLIKE FIGURE in a yellow cloak. Sharp nez ~ grining bouche and bright oreil (all IMPS are French !) I can only conclude que cet IMP is the cause of all the incongruity on your quartet of Odd Odes ! Thanks for scaring ~ ONCLE BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 11:27
WITHOUT EXCUSE
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom here. She has feelings of guilt, and he has no words.
November 12th, 2017 03:38
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom here. She has feelings of guilt, and he has no words.
November 12th, 2017 03:38
WITHOUT EXCUSE
Goldfinch60 said:
I like these Michael, especially the third one.
Love the abstract, another painting that you could spend a lifetime in finding new things within.
November 12th, 2017 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I like these Michael, especially the third one.
Love the abstract, another painting that you could spend a lifetime in finding new things within.
November 12th, 2017 01:57
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with it!
November 11th, 2017 16:58
FredPeyer said:
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with it!
November 11th, 2017 16:58
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHEAL ~ Love the fractal painting and the fractured poem ! BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 11:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHEAL ~ Love the fractal painting and the fractured poem ! BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 11:12
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:
Oh lo, good write M. Stand clear of that cow!
November 11th, 2017 02:58
orchidee said:
Oh lo, good write M. Stand clear of that cow!
November 11th, 2017 02:58
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
MendedFences27 said:
I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all the Mermaids sighs as they try to make small fry - and when they yell ? it\'s the oceans \"roar.\"
Just a theory.
Kidding aside a potent question, with no answer. Poetical minimalism as well as artistic minimalism , saving on ink? Loved the poem, got me to thinking, - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:45
MendedFences27 said:
I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all the Mermaids sighs as they try to make small fry - and when they yell ? it\'s the oceans \"roar.\"
Just a theory.
Kidding aside a potent question, with no answer. Poetical minimalism as well as artistic minimalism , saving on ink? Loved the poem, got me to thinking, - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:45
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
dusk arising said:
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our conscious reality. Fascinating subject this and quite timeless. I like what you\'ve done with it.
November 10th, 2017 13:05
dusk arising said:
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our conscious reality. Fascinating subject this and quite timeless. I like what you\'ve done with it.
November 10th, 2017 13:05
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL Love the Poem \'n Pic but in the drawing you missed the key anatomical feature the TAIL ~ An Apache Chief on being introduced to his first Naked Mermaid ~ raised his hand in greeting and said ~ HOW ? I have seen real Mermaids in WEEKI ~ WACHEEI Florida USA ~ and they are exactly as your poem describes them ! Another unforgettable experience ~ ONLY IN AMERICA ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 10th, 2017 12:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL Love the Poem \'n Pic but in the drawing you missed the key anatomical feature the TAIL ~ An Apache Chief on being introduced to his first Naked Mermaid ~ raised his hand in greeting and said ~ HOW ? I have seen real Mermaids in WEEKI ~ WACHEEI Florida USA ~ and they are exactly as your poem describes them ! Another unforgettable experience ~ ONLY IN AMERICA ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 10th, 2017 12:40
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The minimalistic drawing is stunning and provocative, Michael. A well written poem as well. Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 11:19
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The minimalistic drawing is stunning and provocative, Michael. A well written poem as well. Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 11:19
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
myself and me said:
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint with pretty poem.
November 10th, 2017 09:46
myself and me said:
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint with pretty poem.
November 10th, 2017 09:46
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest west Cornwall dear Michael -- - -- and that mind-boggling line drawing is simply fan-blinkin\'-tastic .
November 10th, 2017 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest west Cornwall dear Michael -- - -- and that mind-boggling line drawing is simply fan-blinkin\'-tastic .
November 10th, 2017 09:34
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Accidental Poet said:
Makes one wonder what could make a mermaid sigh. Great write and drawing Michael.
November 10th, 2017 05:17
Accidental Poet said:
Makes one wonder what could make a mermaid sigh. Great write and drawing Michael.
November 10th, 2017 05:17
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
FredPeyer said:
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the imagination by not showing a face. (She is a redhead, about 25 years old, extremely good looking!)
Ah, so sorry, am supposed to say something about the poem, but your drawing took my breath away.
Let\'s just say that this is the most beautiful sigh I ever read!
November 10th, 2017 05:13
FredPeyer said:
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the imagination by not showing a face. (She is a redhead, about 25 years old, extremely good looking!)
Ah, so sorry, am supposed to say something about the poem, but your drawing took my breath away.
Let\'s just say that this is the most beautiful sigh I ever read!
November 10th, 2017 05:13
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I can\'t see any fish tail on her! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I can\'t see any fish tail on her! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:59
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Goldfinch60 said:
The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
A SHELTERED NOOK
lasergraph said:
A safe refuge in the storm. I could imagine the warmth inside. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:50
lasergraph said:
A safe refuge in the storm. I could imagine the warmth inside. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:50
A SHELTERED NOOK
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I pop this little gem into my favourites - well done again Michael.
November 9th, 2017 14:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I pop this little gem into my favourites - well done again Michael.
November 9th, 2017 14:06
A SHELTERED NOOK
Louis Gibbs said:
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination. Clever writes, Michael!
November 9th, 2017 10:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination. Clever writes, Michael!
November 9th, 2017 10:42
A SHELTERED NOOK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IN A SHADY NOOK ~ BY A BABBLING BROOK .............. O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for a perfect symbiosis of Paint \'n Poem. A \"swap quatrain\" is a perfect structure for such a subject ! Yours BRIAN
November 9th, 2017 10:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IN A SHADY NOOK ~ BY A BABBLING BROOK .............. O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for a perfect symbiosis of Paint \'n Poem. A \"swap quatrain\" is a perfect structure for such a subject ! Yours BRIAN
November 9th, 2017 10:25
A SHELTERED NOOK
myself and me said:
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57
myself and me said:
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57
A SHELTERED NOOK
WL Schuett said:
Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem
November 9th, 2017 08:45
WL Schuett said:
Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem
November 9th, 2017 08:45
A SHELTERED NOOK
Accidental Poet said:
Most fitting words to a most beautiful painting. Certainly a fav Michael.
November 9th, 2017 04:53
Accidental Poet said:
Most fitting words to a most beautiful painting. Certainly a fav Michael.
November 9th, 2017 04:53
A SHELTERED NOOK
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.
November 9th, 2017 03:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.
November 9th, 2017 03:31
A SHELTERED NOOK
FredPeyer said:
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!
November 9th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!
November 9th, 2017 03:19
A SHELTERED NOOK
Michael Edwards said:
I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi
November 9th, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi
November 9th, 2017 02:30
A SHELTERED NOOK
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.
November 9th, 2017 02:20
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.
November 9th, 2017 02:20
ANOTHER CRUDY
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!
November 8th, 2017 10:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!
November 8th, 2017 10:30
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