Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

No wonder the CHINESE are ruling the World Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas eetc are so concise and always awesome ! Loved 1. Cold outside Love 2. Hot inside Love 3. Love\'s Labour Lost Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN

October 25th, 2017 16:24

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Simple-Man87 said:

These were really well done. The second one adds a different tone, a sensual one. Thank you for sharing.

October 25th, 2017 14:01

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Fay Slimm. said:

That second stanza did it for me in this 5 7 5 posting of super quality - watercolour is first rate too.

October 25th, 2017 11:49

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
myself and me said:

Here we say, buy one get two free. Love the paint. so peaceful, an ideal place for vacation.

October 25th, 2017 10:39

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Christina8 said:

I like the 5-7-5\'s, I quite like all 3! Beautiful painting!

October 25th, 2017 09:11

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
WL Schuett said:

A very fine poem with another lovely painting , you are doing great work Michael

October 25th, 2017 07:31

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
This makes me think of cozily sitting by the fireplace on a snowy evening! Beautiful painting to illustrate poem. Very nostalgic! Thank you!
~Laura~


October 25th, 2017 03:54

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
orchidee said:

Fine thoughtful writes Michael. *gets out dictionary for cinerous*.

October 25th, 2017 01:47

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write(s) Michael.

October 25th, 2017 01:38

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
FredPeyer said:

Michael, for these three I would gladly have paid the full triple price!

October 25th, 2017 00:32

LIKE CORN IN WIND
FredPeyer said:

Love your poem, Michael, and love your answer to Martina\'s comment!
I do like your open ended poems exactly because they let the reader\'s imagination go wild.
Looked up \'corn in wind\' quotes and found this:
A light wind swept over the corn, and all nature laughed in the sunshine. Anne Bronte


October 24th, 2017 19:34

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Louis Gibbs said:

Desolate but calming picture! Excellent poem of wavering thoughts on expressing her mind. Both well done, Michael!

October 24th, 2017 09:24

LIKE CORN IN WIND
WL Schuett said:

All around right now the corn stalks are golden and they shimmer in the wind . Beautiful poem and painting , Michael

October 24th, 2017 07:37

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Christina8 said:

Wonderful write this morning! I think Goldfinch described it best! Wonderful painting, I\'m sure we\'ll be seeing snowy landscapes soon....

October 24th, 2017 06:54

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Fay Slimm. said:

Another good intro. to a sequel my friend - I love the intrigue of title and verse - - your pen and brushwork is as ever exquisite.

October 24th, 2017 03:44

LIKE CORN IN WIND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for an excellent Poem & Picture ! All Poetry is ephemeral ~ like \"Corn in the Wind\" ! On MPS they are only featured for ONE DAY ~ like \"Corn in the Wind\" ! Please taste my PUMPKIN SOUP ~ BRIAN !

October 24th, 2017 03:33

LIKE CORN IN WIND
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael. Some were enraged with me in 1066!

October 24th, 2017 01:49

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
I hope she’ll soon loosen and
remove that cap to pen her secret
that enraged her so!

Beautiful painting to illustrate
your well written poem !
~Laura~

October 24th, 2017 01:27

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, that ink well cap couldn\'t have been that tight as the ink produced these great words.

October 24th, 2017 01:15

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Laura🌻 said:

Great painting to illustrate your poem!
I’ve had a few fallow periods in my lifetime.
My favorite line from your poem
to have experienced...

“Laid bare and plucked of all but bone...”

October 24th, 2017 01:11

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for two excellent pieces of work Michael - a delightful visit to your talented page.

October 23rd, 2017 10:54

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
WL Schuett said:

Painting and poem meld really well together, fine art ...

October 23rd, 2017 07:41

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Tanks for sharing MICHAELT ~ Great painting and thought provoking poem ! We all have fallow periods in our lives ~ but in my (limited) experience they soo become fruitful again ! Yours BRIAN

October 23rd, 2017 07:28

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Louis Gibbs said:

\"With futures curtain still undrawn\"... some beautiful thoughts well expressed in this one, Michael! Kudos on a fine one. And I find the picture quite \'satisfying\'.

October 23rd, 2017 07:16

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. I read it as \'cats\' first. But couldn\'t see any cats in the field pic! doh!

October 23rd, 2017 01:45

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael.

October 23rd, 2017 00:59

IN UMBRIA
HChristian74 said:

You are a wordsmith my friend; and an inspiration to an aspiring writer.

~HC

October 22nd, 2017 12:18

A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Christina8 said:

I do like your dotted painting. Always love your artwork. And two fine couplets. The second one is so silly!

October 22nd, 2017 09:26

A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love the ABSTRACT ~ Pointillism meets Jackson Pollock |~ awesome ! Love the lack of meaning in your doublets ~ I trust your HOSE is better ~ it\'s now the watering season ! Now I\'m sounding as MAD as your are ! Yours BRIAN \'

October 22nd, 2017 04:00

A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:

A pixillated offering if ever I saw one dear Michael and such patience in brushwork to get that result. A gorgeous picture and couplets to ponder for the weekend. The second one raised a relating smile for I do the same.

October 22nd, 2017 03:35



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