Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ANOTHER CRUDY
WL Schuett said:
Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art
November 8th, 2017 10:15
WL Schuett said:
Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art
November 8th, 2017 10:15
ANOTHER CRUDY
myself and me said:
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.
November 8th, 2017 09:59
myself and me said:
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.
November 8th, 2017 09:59
ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.
November 8th, 2017 05:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.
November 8th, 2017 05:38
ANOTHER CRUDY
Accidental Poet said:
Perfectly timed Michael. And a really nice image, yours ofcourse.
November 8th, 2017 04:03
Accidental Poet said:
Perfectly timed Michael. And a really nice image, yours ofcourse.
November 8th, 2017 04:03
ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:
You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?
November 8th, 2017 02:39
orchidee said:
You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?
November 8th, 2017 02:39
ANOTHER CRUDY
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.
November 8th, 2017 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.
November 8th, 2017 02:37
HER TAINTED HEART
Laura🌻 said:
Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 01:17
Laura🌻 said:
Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 01:17
ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!
November 8th, 2017 01:15
FredPeyer said:
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!
November 8th, 2017 01:15
HER TAINTED HEART
MendedFences27 said:
\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.
November 7th, 2017 19:54
MendedFences27 said:
\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.
November 7th, 2017 19:54
HER TAINTED HEART
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.
November 7th, 2017 14:42
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.
November 7th, 2017 14:42
HER TAINTED HEART
myself and me said:
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.
November 7th, 2017 12:00
myself and me said:
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.
November 7th, 2017 12:00
HER TAINTED HEART
WL Schuett said:
A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael
November 7th, 2017 08:30
WL Schuett said:
A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael
November 7th, 2017 08:30
HER TAINTED HEART
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!
November 7th, 2017 08:25
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!
November 7th, 2017 08:25
HER TAINTED HEART
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:07
HER TAINTED HEART
Accidental Poet said:
Finely crafted work here, the painting and poem. I think they\'re both perfect as they are, but that\'s just me. Very well done Michael.
November 7th, 2017 04:48
Accidental Poet said:
Finely crafted work here, the painting and poem. I think they\'re both perfect as they are, but that\'s just me. Very well done Michael.
November 7th, 2017 04:48
HER TAINTED HEART
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful poem Michael the wistfulness and sorrow wash over it like the rain on her tainted heart.
I like the artwork, it seems to be a slightly different style than than your usual ones.
November 7th, 2017 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful poem Michael the wistfulness and sorrow wash over it like the rain on her tainted heart.
I like the artwork, it seems to be a slightly different style than than your usual ones.
November 7th, 2017 02:04
HER TAINTED HEART
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.
November 7th, 2017 02:01
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.
November 7th, 2017 02:01
THE CLOWN
myself and me said:
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55
myself and me said:
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55
THE CLOWN
Louis Gibbs said:
Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I just invented a new word too?)
Cute poem, Michael!
November 3rd, 2017 08:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I just invented a new word too?)
Cute poem, Michael!
November 3rd, 2017 08:58
THE CLOWN
Christina8 said:
Great clown poem! And flipped at the end. Also wonderful graphite drawing!
November 3rd, 2017 06:57
Christina8 said:
Great clown poem! And flipped at the end. Also wonderful graphite drawing!
November 3rd, 2017 06:57
THE CLOWN
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the pencil work too.
November 3rd, 2017 03:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the pencil work too.
November 3rd, 2017 03:57
THE CLOWN
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael.
I do like the drawing, is it done with charcoal.
November 3rd, 2017 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael.
I do like the drawing, is it done with charcoal.
November 3rd, 2017 02:48
THE CLOWN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CLOWNS ~ sad old Men
Living a lie ~ a false smile
On their lips ~ sad old Men
Who once enjoyed life ~ But
Now they fall to amuse Kids
Slowly slipping to the grave !
Thanks for sharing MICHAEL
Some of my Friends are CLOWNS
They are all Miserable Old Men !
Your Harlequin Friend ~ BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CLOWNS ~ sad old Men
Living a lie ~ a false smile
On their lips ~ sad old Men
Who once enjoyed life ~ But
Now they fall to amuse Kids
Slowly slipping to the grave !
Thanks for sharing MICHAEL
Some of my Friends are CLOWNS
They are all Miserable Old Men !
Your Harlequin Friend ~ BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
THE CLOWN
orchidee said:
Don\'t tell me where it is up the clown. I will only swoon! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
orchidee said:
Don\'t tell me where it is up the clown. I will only swoon! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
THE CLOWN
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. We had a clown as a sort of office logo once. We changed it, as it was thought too baby-ish, as we expanded into other areas, to reach more age-groups. Yet they\'ve become more sinister and scary now. I hate the whole circus thing too, not just the clowns in it.
November 3rd, 2017 02:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. We had a clown as a sort of office logo once. We changed it, as it was thought too baby-ish, as we expanded into other areas, to reach more age-groups. Yet they\'ve become more sinister and scary now. I hate the whole circus thing too, not just the clowns in it.
November 3rd, 2017 02:41
THE CLOWN
FredPeyer said:
Ingenious, Michael. You do have an incredible mind!
November 3rd, 2017 00:30
FredPeyer said:
Ingenious, Michael. You do have an incredible mind!
November 3rd, 2017 00:30
THE BOOK
Mugsdaddy said:
WoW, Mr. E
Even the smallest thing like falling asleep reading a book, you turn into a masterpiece. You are a true artist. Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:29
Mugsdaddy said:
WoW, Mr. E
Even the smallest thing like falling asleep reading a book, you turn into a masterpiece. You are a true artist. Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:29
THE BOOK
FredPeyer said:
Right from my heart Michael! Whenever I see a second-hand store I just have to go in, and usually leave with at least one or two books! Great poem!
November 2nd, 2017 12:28
FredPeyer said:
Right from my heart Michael! Whenever I see a second-hand store I just have to go in, and usually leave with at least one or two books! Great poem!
November 2nd, 2017 12:28
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