Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
MULTITASKING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Michael ~ but as a DEFENDER of All My Sisters ~ I have to defer. In my experience both at WORK & PLAY ~ GOD gave Eve and all her SISTERS multitaskability ~ NOT ~ because All Men are STUPID & LAZY (only 51% are !) but because while Men daydream of Nigella Lawson in the Kitchen and Paris Hilton in the Boudoir (Rich & Beautiful !) and England winning the World Cup ! The LADIES ~ GET ON WITH THE JOB ! That is why the UK has a QUEEN and THERESA MAN steering the HMS GREAT BRITAIN through troubled waters ! ADAM was a DRAFT ~ EVE is the REAL THING ~ AMEN. Thanks for scaring ~ the MPS LADIES are too gentile to castigate you Mike ~ so I\'m doing it on their behalf ~ BRIAN
September 30th, 2017 02:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Michael ~ but as a DEFENDER of All My Sisters ~ I have to defer. In my experience both at WORK & PLAY ~ GOD gave Eve and all her SISTERS multitaskability ~ NOT ~ because All Men are STUPID & LAZY (only 51% are !) but because while Men daydream of Nigella Lawson in the Kitchen and Paris Hilton in the Boudoir (Rich & Beautiful !) and England winning the World Cup ! The LADIES ~ GET ON WITH THE JOB ! That is why the UK has a QUEEN and THERESA MAN steering the HMS GREAT BRITAIN through troubled waters ! ADAM was a DRAFT ~ EVE is the REAL THING ~ AMEN. Thanks for scaring ~ the MPS LADIES are too gentile to castigate you Mike ~ so I\'m doing it on their behalf ~ BRIAN
September 30th, 2017 02:48
MULTITASKING
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females are different my friend. Gave me a wry smile to see your addition and now with you I wait to see what take ladies will make on your fun supposition. dear Michael.
September 30th, 2017 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females are different my friend. Gave me a wry smile to see your addition and now with you I wait to see what take ladies will make on your fun supposition. dear Michael.
September 30th, 2017 02:26
MULTITASKING
Goldfinch60 said:
Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have said before, don\'t think, it is dangerous.
September 30th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have said before, don\'t think, it is dangerous.
September 30th, 2017 01:24
REFLECTED EDONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ THESE ARE TRUE PALINDROMES ! But almost impossible to do a whole Poem like that ! Then the are the one liners like Napoleon\'s lament ~
ABLE WAS I ERE I SAW ELBA etc.
My limit and forte are Poems which make sense when read forwards or backwards ~ Which I call MIRROR POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
September 29th, 2017 17:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ THESE ARE TRUE PALINDROMES ! But almost impossible to do a whole Poem like that ! Then the are the one liners like Napoleon\'s lament ~
ABLE WAS I ERE I SAW ELBA etc.
My limit and forte are Poems which make sense when read forwards or backwards ~ Which I call MIRROR POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
September 29th, 2017 17:24
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rrodriguez said:
Well, that\'s how poetry works. You break out of customary way of using words to define experience. Your edones do express a poetry motif, but in a subtle way. Well done, albeit, difficult. I may take a crack at for the mental exercise and the creative process.
September 29th, 2017 09:36
rrodriguez said:
Well, that\'s how poetry works. You break out of customary way of using words to define experience. Your edones do express a poetry motif, but in a subtle way. Well done, albeit, difficult. I may take a crack at for the mental exercise and the creative process.
September 29th, 2017 09:36
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WL Schuett said:
Always something with you always thinking ...good stuff
September 29th, 2017 09:31
WL Schuett said:
Always something with you always thinking ...good stuff
September 29th, 2017 09:31
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malubotelho said:
I really don\'t know how one can find poetry with this kind of poem. I find fun though. Just because it is at least attention to create it. Congrats Michael. I think you before being a poet you are a mathematician.
September 29th, 2017 09:02
malubotelho said:
I really don\'t know how one can find poetry with this kind of poem. I find fun though. Just because it is at least attention to create it. Congrats Michael. I think you before being a poet you are a mathematician.
September 29th, 2017 09:02
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Christina8 said:
Appears very difficult--well done Michael!
September 29th, 2017 05:16
Christina8 said:
Appears very difficult--well done Michael!
September 29th, 2017 05:16
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FredPeyer said:
I can\'t count and write at the same time, so I leave these kind of mathematical poems up to you masters! Enjoy reading them though.
September 29th, 2017 02:50
FredPeyer said:
I can\'t count and write at the same time, so I leave these kind of mathematical poems up to you masters! Enjoy reading them though.
September 29th, 2017 02:50
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orchidee said:
A tricky write M. Here\'s the start of one from me. It don\'t make any sense, mind you!
Pork pie - Eip Krop.
Also - sherry - yrrehs. That\'s how I say it after I\'ve had one or three!
September 29th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
A tricky write M. Here\'s the start of one from me. It don\'t make any sense, mind you!
Pork pie - Eip Krop.
Also - sherry - yrrehs. That\'s how I say it after I\'ve had one or three!
September 29th, 2017 01:49
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Louis Gibbs said:
Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks for furthering my poetry education.
September 29th, 2017 00:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks for furthering my poetry education.
September 29th, 2017 00:11
FUSIONS 3
dusk arising said:
i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt partway through a contrived piece about some unimportant issue.
September 28th, 2017 18:27
dusk arising said:
i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt partway through a contrived piece about some unimportant issue.
September 28th, 2017 18:27
FUSIONS 3
FredPeyer said:
Must be an English thing!
Here, if I thunk you under the water you drown.
Great 4-liner, Michael.
September 28th, 2017 03:38
FredPeyer said:
Must be an English thing!
Here, if I thunk you under the water you drown.
Great 4-liner, Michael.
September 28th, 2017 03:38
FUSIONS 3
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I THUNK when I\'m sober
But only PONDER
When I\'m DRUNK
THUNK brings me
Down to Earth
With an almighty CLUNK !
Thanks for sharing ~ love Poems
Written fanatically ~ BRAIN !
September 28th, 2017 03:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I THUNK when I\'m sober
But only PONDER
When I\'m DRUNK
THUNK brings me
Down to Earth
With an almighty CLUNK !
Thanks for sharing ~ love Poems
Written fanatically ~ BRAIN !
September 28th, 2017 03:33
FUSIONS 3
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.
September 28th, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.
September 28th, 2017 01:46
FUSIONS 2
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem, Michael! Not so much of a wine drinker but your poem is a wonderful rhyme nonetheless!
September 27th, 2017 21:03
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem, Michael! Not so much of a wine drinker but your poem is a wonderful rhyme nonetheless!
September 27th, 2017 21:03
FUSIONS 2
Louis Gibbs said:
Made my mouth water with this one, Michael. Kudos!
September 27th, 2017 14:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Made my mouth water with this one, Michael. Kudos!
September 27th, 2017 14:03
FUSIONS 2
FredPeyer said:
Michael, as a European who grew up with wine on the table all the time (not at breakfast!) your poem speaks, no sings to me! Prefer red, but when it is hot, a cool white is heaven on earth!
September 27th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
Michael, as a European who grew up with wine on the table all the time (not at breakfast!) your poem speaks, no sings to me! Prefer red, but when it is hot, a cool white is heaven on earth!
September 27th, 2017 11:34
FUSIONS 2
WL Schuett said:
Fun Micheal I prefer white these days also , good poem
September 27th, 2017 09:06
WL Schuett said:
Fun Micheal I prefer white these days also , good poem
September 27th, 2017 09:06
FUSIONS 2
orchidee said:
Good write M. Red or white, or blue or whatever (if they had blue wine). I shall add water to it! heehee.
September 27th, 2017 01:40
orchidee said:
Good write M. Red or white, or blue or whatever (if they had blue wine). I shall add water to it! heehee.
September 27th, 2017 01:40
FUSIONS 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OVERSLEPT AGAIN MICHAEL ~ I was up a good hour before you and even managed to snatch a minute with SANTI (Numero Uno) before she flopped into BED ! Love the STYLE and sentiment of your elegant box like FUSION ! Please check my FUSION on Ladies I have posted my painting of EVE (dorsal view only !) for your predilection. Yours BRIAN
September 27th, 2017 01:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OVERSLEPT AGAIN MICHAEL ~ I was up a good hour before you and even managed to snatch a minute with SANTI (Numero Uno) before she flopped into BED ! Love the STYLE and sentiment of your elegant box like FUSION ! Please check my FUSION on Ladies I have posted my painting of EVE (dorsal view only !) for your predilection. Yours BRIAN
September 27th, 2017 01:20
FUSIONS 2
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming in this four liner.
September 27th, 2017 01:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming in this four liner.
September 27th, 2017 01:06
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