Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FIRST LOVE
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem Michael! So very well written! I just love the last stanza. Tender moments of a first love--you really described it well!
September 23rd, 2017 11:16
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem Michael! So very well written! I just love the last stanza. Tender moments of a first love--you really described it well!
September 23rd, 2017 11:16
FIRST LOVE
Accidental Poet said:
As they say, the first cut is the deepest. Very well written Michael, thanks for sharing. ; )
September 23rd, 2017 10:49
Accidental Poet said:
As they say, the first cut is the deepest. Very well written Michael, thanks for sharing. ; )
September 23rd, 2017 10:49
FIRST LOVE
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful expression of a male\'s first sexual experience, Michael ... a component of \'becoming a man\', but I would question it being the definition of achieving \'manhood\'. It depends on one\'s definition of what being a \'man\' entails, as opposed to being a grown-up boy. Don\'t mean to nit-pic ... I love the poem!
September 23rd, 2017 09:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful expression of a male\'s first sexual experience, Michael ... a component of \'becoming a man\', but I would question it being the definition of achieving \'manhood\'. It depends on one\'s definition of what being a \'man\' entails, as opposed to being a grown-up boy. Don\'t mean to nit-pic ... I love the poem!
September 23rd, 2017 09:19
FIRST LOVE
malubotelho said:
I love your poem Michael. Specially because it is written by a man. It is nice to see the male vision of first love. Or first sexual experience. We women, when young think that men always knows how to make love and it is not true. Men are not born with experience in sex. It must be hard in the beginning for a man to guide. Thanks for this.
September 23rd, 2017 08:35
malubotelho said:
I love your poem Michael. Specially because it is written by a man. It is nice to see the male vision of first love. Or first sexual experience. We women, when young think that men always knows how to make love and it is not true. Men are not born with experience in sex. It must be hard in the beginning for a man to guide. Thanks for this.
September 23rd, 2017 08:35
FIRST LOVE
dusk arising said:
Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love stakes. I bet most of us men were too confused with our approaching adulthood and machismo to be sweetly romantic at such tender years. That stuff arrived later for me. I enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece.
September 23rd, 2017 07:55
dusk arising said:
Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love stakes. I bet most of us men were too confused with our approaching adulthood and machismo to be sweetly romantic at such tender years. That stuff arrived later for me. I enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece.
September 23rd, 2017 07:55
FIRST LOVE
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poem of innocence in that first kiss , becoming a man ....
September 23rd, 2017 06:40
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poem of innocence in that first kiss , becoming a man ....
September 23rd, 2017 06:40
FIRST LOVE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
If you can claim
Her current bun
You too will
Be a MAN my SON !
Thanks for caring & sharing Michael lovely Poem
and a tantilising SILLY WET !
Please check \"Say it with Flowers\"
Yours BRIAN
September 23rd, 2017 05:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
If you can claim
Her current bun
You too will
Be a MAN my SON !
Thanks for caring & sharing Michael lovely Poem
and a tantilising SILLY WET !
Please check \"Say it with Flowers\"
Yours BRIAN
September 23rd, 2017 05:11
FIRST LOVE
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful account of coming of age.
Great write.
Mugsdaddy
September 23rd, 2017 04:52
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful account of coming of age.
Great write.
Mugsdaddy
September 23rd, 2017 04:52
FIRST LOVE
Fay Slimm. said:
Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - lovely read - we must think in tandem as I posted a piece of work yesterday on the same subject and with the same title. -- ha ha Great minds etc eh ?
September 23rd, 2017 02:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - lovely read - we must think in tandem as I posted a piece of work yesterday on the same subject and with the same title. -- ha ha Great minds etc eh ?
September 23rd, 2017 02:34
FIRST LOVE
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh that\'s me that is - me trembling hand, in me sheltered life. Was he a mouse before, and not a man?! heehee.
September 23rd, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh that\'s me that is - me trembling hand, in me sheltered life. Was he a mouse before, and not a man?! heehee.
September 23rd, 2017 01:44
RING RING
dusk arising said:
There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah a hole!
September 22nd, 2017 15:23
dusk arising said:
There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah a hole!
September 22nd, 2017 15:23
RING RING
Christina8 said:
Thanks for the giggle this morning! LOL No better writing material than true life! :-)
September 22nd, 2017 09:25
Christina8 said:
Thanks for the giggle this morning! LOL No better writing material than true life! :-)
September 22nd, 2017 09:25
RING RING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
KNOCK KNOCK ~ Who\'s There ?
RIGOR ~ RIGOR WHO ?
RIGOR MORTIS ~ May I set in !
Thanks for sharing ~ Alas there are an infinite number of RING RING & KNOCK KNOCK Jokes ~ you may have started a landslide ! BRIAN
Please check my OXYMORONS ~ Thanks B.
September 22nd, 2017 02:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
KNOCK KNOCK ~ Who\'s There ?
RIGOR ~ RIGOR WHO ?
RIGOR MORTIS ~ May I set in !
Thanks for sharing ~ Alas there are an infinite number of RING RING & KNOCK KNOCK Jokes ~ you may have started a landslide ! BRIAN
Please check my OXYMORONS ~ Thanks B.
September 22nd, 2017 02:39
RING RING
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life happening Michael - -great flow to the chosen metre - have read it twice already and laughed at the humour of that unexpected Ring .
September 22nd, 2017 02:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life happening Michael - -great flow to the chosen metre - have read it twice already and laughed at the humour of that unexpected Ring .
September 22nd, 2017 02:07
RING RING
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M. You laughing at your own jokes? Well, we have to, in case no one else does! heehee.
September 22nd, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M. You laughing at your own jokes? Well, we have to, in case no one else does! heehee.
September 22nd, 2017 01:44
RING RING
FredPeyer said:
I just love unintentional funny stories and this one had me smiling all the way!
September 22nd, 2017 01:07
FredPeyer said:
I just love unintentional funny stories and this one had me smiling all the way!
September 22nd, 2017 01:07
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
myself and me said:
Love the way you describe politician. Deep to the root.
September 21st, 2017 15:03
myself and me said:
Love the way you describe politician. Deep to the root.
September 21st, 2017 15:03
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
malubotelho said:
I wish things would change in politics. The way it is now make me wants to turn off the tv. Or better. Retire it for good. Nice write Michael. A sore subject for sure.
September 21st, 2017 09:16
malubotelho said:
I wish things would change in politics. The way it is now make me wants to turn off the tv. Or better. Retire it for good. Nice write Michael. A sore subject for sure.
September 21st, 2017 09:16
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
WL Schuett said:
Nicely captured could be a politician nearly anywhere in any time....
September 21st, 2017 09:10
WL Schuett said:
Nicely captured could be a politician nearly anywhere in any time....
September 21st, 2017 09:10
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
Louis Gibbs said:
This poem brought back a memory from a time, late sixties I believe, when on a visit to Madrid I watched Francisco Franco address a large crowd from the steps of a building. They were cheering; \"Franco, Franco!\". He was a politician, indeed!
Your poem captures a politician\'s nature well, Michael.
September 21st, 2017 08:23
Louis Gibbs said:
This poem brought back a memory from a time, late sixties I believe, when on a visit to Madrid I watched Francisco Franco address a large crowd from the steps of a building. They were cheering; \"Franco, Franco!\". He was a politician, indeed!
Your poem captures a politician\'s nature well, Michael.
September 21st, 2017 08:23
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
Christina8 said:
A very fine write! I don\'t know much about the green party in the UK but I did see goldfinchs comment and agree! Seriously, well worded poem.
September 21st, 2017 06:24
Christina8 said:
A very fine write! I don\'t know much about the green party in the UK but I did see goldfinchs comment and agree! Seriously, well worded poem.
September 21st, 2017 06:24
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LONG LIVE THE GREEN PARTY ~ THE ONLY PARTY WORTH VOTING FOR ! My expriences with MPS has always been positive ~ they do work hard (building DUCK ISLANDS !) and always answer my letters and takle injustices ! I have dined at the HOP several times and watched OBAMA\'S Inaugurarion Speech in the Members TV Room with Tony Benn etc etc. In my book the majority are Honorable Gentlemen & Ladies and deserve our support in and out of the House. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check Venuus ~ Mars ~ Sun & Moon ~ Thanks ~ C & B
September 21st, 2017 04:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LONG LIVE THE GREEN PARTY ~ THE ONLY PARTY WORTH VOTING FOR ! My expriences with MPS has always been positive ~ they do work hard (building DUCK ISLANDS !) and always answer my letters and takle injustices ! I have dined at the HOP several times and watched OBAMA\'S Inaugurarion Speech in the Members TV Room with Tony Benn etc etc. In my book the majority are Honorable Gentlemen & Ladies and deserve our support in and out of the House. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check Venuus ~ Mars ~ Sun & Moon ~ Thanks ~ C & B
September 21st, 2017 04:46
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Michael, and I do like the subject matter, a subject that is not written about too often (maybe with the exception of Outback). He\'ll be a politician yet, and doesn\'t sound like a villain yet!
September 21st, 2017 02:55
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Michael, and I do like the subject matter, a subject that is not written about too often (maybe with the exception of Outback). He\'ll be a politician yet, and doesn\'t sound like a villain yet!
September 21st, 2017 02:55
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
orchidee said:
A fine write. I thought he may be in a pet show, with those rosettes that are awarded!
September 21st, 2017 01:26
orchidee said:
A fine write. I thought he may be in a pet show, with those rosettes that are awarded!
September 21st, 2017 01:26
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