Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
lasergraph said:
I want to keep this in mind to chase away the snow I know that\'s coming first.
November 14th, 2017 13:11
lasergraph said:
I want to keep this in mind to chase away the snow I know that\'s coming first.
November 14th, 2017 13:11
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
Laura🌻 said:
Just came back from a
Spring drenched land.
Unfortunately, not for a
happy occasion!
Nonetheless, I enjoyed
your seasonal poem and
the painting! You are
amazing with your artistic
talents! Here’s to you
Michael Edwards!🍷
~Laura~
November 14th, 2017 10:24
Laura🌻 said:
Just came back from a
Spring drenched land.
Unfortunately, not for a
happy occasion!
Nonetheless, I enjoyed
your seasonal poem and
the painting! You are
amazing with your artistic
talents! Here’s to you
Michael Edwards!🍷
~Laura~
November 14th, 2017 10:24
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
Louis Gibbs said:
Can\'t look forward to Spring just yet ... I\'m enjoying Fall too much, my favorite season. Nice tribute to my next favorite season, Michael!
November 14th, 2017 08:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Can\'t look forward to Spring just yet ... I\'m enjoying Fall too much, my favorite season. Nice tribute to my next favorite season, Michael!
November 14th, 2017 08:39
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
Christina8 said:
Great poem--wish it were spring! Love the rhyme too! And I love the colorful painting of a springtime scene! Delightful!
November 14th, 2017 08:02
Christina8 said:
Great poem--wish it were spring! Love the rhyme too! And I love the colorful painting of a springtime scene! Delightful!
November 14th, 2017 08:02
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Angela & I ~ A loaf of bread ~ a glass of Rioja Tinto and the first warmth of Spring ~ Love Al fresco ! I love WINTER ~ Christmas & New Year celebrations ~ compensate for the cold ~ BUT ~ in Winter I got SPRING on my MIND ~ thanks for fast forwarding ~ Love the Poem & Pic combo ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
November 14th, 2017 05:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Angela & I ~ A loaf of bread ~ a glass of Rioja Tinto and the first warmth of Spring ~ Love Al fresco ! I love WINTER ~ Christmas & New Year celebrations ~ compensate for the cold ~ BUT ~ in Winter I got SPRING on my MIND ~ thanks for fast forwarding ~ Love the Poem & Pic combo ! Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
November 14th, 2017 05:34
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
kevin browne said:
well penned, Michael Edwards, and it\'s left me feeling well seasoned too.
November 14th, 2017 04:10
kevin browne said:
well penned, Michael Edwards, and it\'s left me feeling well seasoned too.
November 14th, 2017 04:10
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I dunno what day - or season - it is. I\'m sure it\'s Easter next week! heehee.
November 14th, 2017 03:12
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I dunno what day - or season - it is. I\'m sure it\'s Easter next week! heehee.
November 14th, 2017 03:12
ARRIVAL OF SPRING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but we have the joy of winter to come first.
I do hope that that is a glass of fine Rioja on the table.
November 14th, 2017 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but we have the joy of winter to come first.
I do hope that that is a glass of fine Rioja on the table.
November 14th, 2017 02:33
THE RING
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, very interesting poem. You are a master at these mathematical formula poems!
November 14th, 2017 02:27
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, very interesting poem. You are a master at these mathematical formula poems!
November 14th, 2017 02:27
THE RING
Fay Slimm. said:
The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
November 13th, 2017 17:30
Fay Slimm. said:
The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
November 13th, 2017 17:30
THE RING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT QUINZIANE MICHAEL ~ Not easy to pen a coherent (and intriguing) poem in just 15 syllables ~ BUT you just did ! An old proverb says ~ If the Veil fits wear it ~ BUT ~ if the Ring doesn\'t then run screaming from the Altar ! Your Q stirred such nuances ~ Thanks for caring ~ love the technological visual ! I am a Chemical Engineer and it reminded me of the inside of a Reaction Vessel ~ A very hallowed place ! Yours BRIAN. Please add a Bouquet of Flowers to my Fusion ~ for your lovely WIFE ! Thanks B.
November 13th, 2017 17:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT QUINZIANE MICHAEL ~ Not easy to pen a coherent (and intriguing) poem in just 15 syllables ~ BUT you just did ! An old proverb says ~ If the Veil fits wear it ~ BUT ~ if the Ring doesn\'t then run screaming from the Altar ! Your Q stirred such nuances ~ Thanks for caring ~ love the technological visual ! I am a Chemical Engineer and it reminded me of the inside of a Reaction Vessel ~ A very hallowed place ! Yours BRIAN. Please add a Bouquet of Flowers to my Fusion ~ for your lovely WIFE ! Thanks B.
November 13th, 2017 17:03
THE RING
orchidee said:
I quinze not improve on your witty comment! But why is \'seize\' (sez) 16 and not seize, to grab hold of?! And why is it not \'i before e, except after c\'?
And why do I lose sleep over these really important matters?! lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:10
orchidee said:
I quinze not improve on your witty comment! But why is \'seize\' (sez) 16 and not seize, to grab hold of?! And why is it not \'i before e, except after c\'?
And why do I lose sleep over these really important matters?! lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:10
THE RING
WL Schuett said:
Always learning something from you Micheal, not saying it’s something I need to know , still interesting... good work
November 13th, 2017 08:32
WL Schuett said:
Always learning something from you Micheal, not saying it’s something I need to know , still interesting... good work
November 13th, 2017 08:32
THE RING
Drewp said:
Never heard of a Quinze before. Sounds like a real challenge in those confines. Thanks for the education and the lovely poem .
November 13th, 2017 07:58
Drewp said:
Never heard of a Quinze before. Sounds like a real challenge in those confines. Thanks for the education and the lovely poem .
November 13th, 2017 07:58
THE RING
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and pretty painting. Love the quinzaine--never heard of it but it makes for a very nice short poem.
November 13th, 2017 07:50
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and pretty painting. Love the quinzaine--never heard of it but it makes for a very nice short poem.
November 13th, 2017 07:50
THE RING
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I quinze (can) appreciate this poem. These jokes get cornier. You quinze dump my jokes in the bin! lol.
November 13th, 2017 02:49
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I quinze (can) appreciate this poem. These jokes get cornier. You quinze dump my jokes in the bin! lol.
November 13th, 2017 02:49
THE RING
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
Like the painting as well, is its title \"Blocked Pathway\"?
November 13th, 2017 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
Like the painting as well, is its title \"Blocked Pathway\"?
November 13th, 2017 02:15
WITHOUT EXCUSE
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting for starters! I love your poem, I just wish I knew the words that she read. But really great!
November 12th, 2017 13:04
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting for starters! I love your poem, I just wish I knew the words that she read. But really great!
November 12th, 2017 13:04
WITHOUT EXCUSE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My analysis of your picture MIKE shows an ELFLIKE FIGURE in a yellow cloak. Sharp nez ~ grining bouche and bright oreil (all IMPS are French !) I can only conclude que cet IMP is the cause of all the incongruity on your quartet of Odd Odes ! Thanks for scaring ~ ONCLE BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My analysis of your picture MIKE shows an ELFLIKE FIGURE in a yellow cloak. Sharp nez ~ grining bouche and bright oreil (all IMPS are French !) I can only conclude que cet IMP is the cause of all the incongruity on your quartet of Odd Odes ! Thanks for scaring ~ ONCLE BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 11:27
WITHOUT EXCUSE
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom here. She has feelings of guilt, and he has no words.
November 12th, 2017 03:38
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom here. She has feelings of guilt, and he has no words.
November 12th, 2017 03:38
WITHOUT EXCUSE
Goldfinch60 said:
I like these Michael, especially the third one.
Love the abstract, another painting that you could spend a lifetime in finding new things within.
November 12th, 2017 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I like these Michael, especially the third one.
Love the abstract, another painting that you could spend a lifetime in finding new things within.
November 12th, 2017 01:57
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with it!
November 11th, 2017 16:58
FredPeyer said:
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with it!
November 11th, 2017 16:58
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHEAL ~ Love the fractal painting and the fractured poem ! BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 11:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHEAL ~ Love the fractal painting and the fractured poem ! BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 11:12
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:
Oh lo, good write M. Stand clear of that cow!
November 11th, 2017 02:58
orchidee said:
Oh lo, good write M. Stand clear of that cow!
November 11th, 2017 02:58
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
MendedFences27 said:
I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all the Mermaids sighs as they try to make small fry - and when they yell ? it\'s the oceans \"roar.\"
Just a theory.
Kidding aside a potent question, with no answer. Poetical minimalism as well as artistic minimalism , saving on ink? Loved the poem, got me to thinking, - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:45
MendedFences27 said:
I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all the Mermaids sighs as they try to make small fry - and when they yell ? it\'s the oceans \"roar.\"
Just a theory.
Kidding aside a potent question, with no answer. Poetical minimalism as well as artistic minimalism , saving on ink? Loved the poem, got me to thinking, - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:45
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
dusk arising said:
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our conscious reality. Fascinating subject this and quite timeless. I like what you\'ve done with it.
November 10th, 2017 13:05
dusk arising said:
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our conscious reality. Fascinating subject this and quite timeless. I like what you\'ve done with it.
November 10th, 2017 13:05
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL Love the Poem \'n Pic but in the drawing you missed the key anatomical feature the TAIL ~ An Apache Chief on being introduced to his first Naked Mermaid ~ raised his hand in greeting and said ~ HOW ? I have seen real Mermaids in WEEKI ~ WACHEEI Florida USA ~ and they are exactly as your poem describes them ! Another unforgettable experience ~ ONLY IN AMERICA ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 10th, 2017 12:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL Love the Poem \'n Pic but in the drawing you missed the key anatomical feature the TAIL ~ An Apache Chief on being introduced to his first Naked Mermaid ~ raised his hand in greeting and said ~ HOW ? I have seen real Mermaids in WEEKI ~ WACHEEI Florida USA ~ and they are exactly as your poem describes them ! Another unforgettable experience ~ ONLY IN AMERICA ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 10th, 2017 12:40
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