Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Super super. ...superb!!
December 6th, 2017 07:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Super super. ...superb!!
December 6th, 2017 07:24
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
Fay Slimm. said:
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on the original nursery rhymes - I love your sense of humour - - and another adorable picture to add to the pleasure of visiting your page.
December 6th, 2017 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
That middle rhyme had me in stitches Michael - another clever slant on the original nursery rhymes - I love your sense of humour - - and another adorable picture to add to the pleasure of visiting your page.
December 6th, 2017 05:37
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set me into giggle-fits - you are so clever at writing the slightly sensuous - - brilliantly presented watercolour too. Saved these little naughties to read again.
December 6th, 2017 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah a clever alternative to the nursery rhymes Michael and reading them set me into giggle-fits - you are so clever at writing the slightly sensuous - - brilliantly presented watercolour too. Saved these little naughties to read again.
December 6th, 2017 05:33
ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4)
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
myself and me said:
Beautiful paint. Can not help laughing while read the poem.
December 5th, 2017 18:13
myself and me said:
Beautiful paint. Can not help laughing while read the poem.
December 5th, 2017 18:13
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I loved these Adversary Rhymes.
Naughty and ever so funny.
Beautiful watercolour.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 15:33
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I loved these Adversary Rhymes.
Naughty and ever so funny.
Beautiful watercolour.
Keep writing
FineB
December 5th, 2017 15:33
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
FredPeyer said:
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound very \'British\' (sausages in a pie? For real?, pub, and the never-ending rain!) Hey, I am not knocking it, just observing! :-)
December 5th, 2017 03:39
FredPeyer said:
The watercolor is superb!
Love all three of them. To me they also sound very \'British\' (sausages in a pie? For real?, pub, and the never-ending rain!) Hey, I am not knocking it, just observing! :-)
December 5th, 2017 03:39
Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3)
orchidee said:
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this when I was young - and up to about age 18. lol.
December 5th, 2017 02:55
orchidee said:
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this when I was young - and up to about age 18. lol.
December 5th, 2017 02:55
GUILT
myself and me said:
lovely paint, could be a nice place to visit. By watching the paint, it could unload the burden of guilty.
December 4th, 2017 18:55
myself and me said:
lovely paint, could be a nice place to visit. By watching the paint, it could unload the burden of guilty.
December 4th, 2017 18:55
GUILT
Louis Gibbs said:
I fully appreciate the beautiful watercolor, Michael. I\'m a bit lost on the poem, however. Fred\'s comments helped a little, but it somehow doesn\'t register with me ... my shortcoming I\'m sure, and I apologize.
I will continue to ponder.
December 4th, 2017 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
I fully appreciate the beautiful watercolor, Michael. I\'m a bit lost on the poem, however. Fred\'s comments helped a little, but it somehow doesn\'t register with me ... my shortcoming I\'m sure, and I apologize.
I will continue to ponder.
December 4th, 2017 10:00
GUILT
Christina8 said:
A very deep write. Very good in so few words! Absolutely beautiful picture of the church scene!
December 4th, 2017 07:48
Christina8 said:
A very deep write. Very good in so few words! Absolutely beautiful picture of the church scene!
December 4th, 2017 07:48
THE CONFORMIST
FredPeyer said:
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience, where we look at ourselves and our lives from a different perspective, free of all constraints, limitations, and conventions.
Great poem, great rhyming too!
December 4th, 2017 04:13
FredPeyer said:
To me \'thinking outside of the box\' is like an out of body experience, where we look at ourselves and our lives from a different perspective, free of all constraints, limitations, and conventions.
Great poem, great rhyming too!
December 4th, 2017 04:13
GUILT
orchidee said:
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too much!
December 4th, 2017 03:30
orchidee said:
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too much!
December 4th, 2017 03:30
GUILT
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful painting, and a nice story too regarding the sale.
Now for the poem: Read it, made it a favorite immediately. Read it again, and again, am still contemplating it, and probably will for a while. Do I feel guilty because I was cruel in my dreams? Or do I have cruel dreams because I am guilty? You do pack a lot of meaning into only a few words. Love your shorties!
December 4th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful painting, and a nice story too regarding the sale.
Now for the poem: Read it, made it a favorite immediately. Read it again, and again, am still contemplating it, and probably will for a while. Do I feel guilty because I was cruel in my dreams? Or do I have cruel dreams because I am guilty? You do pack a lot of meaning into only a few words. Love your shorties!
December 4th, 2017 03:19
GUILT
orchidee said:
I wanted that pic for my KP wedding! Too late now! lol.
December 4th, 2017 02:48
orchidee said:
I wanted that pic for my KP wedding! Too late now! lol.
December 4th, 2017 02:48
GUILT
orchidee said:
Yes, and is the guilt real, or not? Which is worse - true or imagined guilt?
And why all this somewhat deep stuff from me this early of a morning. I will give myself a headache thinking!
A fine write and pic Michael.
December 4th, 2017 02:47
orchidee said:
Yes, and is the guilt real, or not? Which is worse - true or imagined guilt?
And why all this somewhat deep stuff from me this early of a morning. I will give myself a headache thinking!
A fine write and pic Michael.
December 4th, 2017 02:47
GUILT
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and true write.
Fabulous artwork - where is it. It must be wonderful to walk over that bridge to that building (Church?).
December 4th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and true write.
Fabulous artwork - where is it. It must be wonderful to walk over that bridge to that building (Church?).
December 4th, 2017 01:45
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO
FredPeyer said:
You are a master of couplets: the brush and the pen!
December 3rd, 2017 22:28
FredPeyer said:
You are a master of couplets: the brush and the pen!
December 3rd, 2017 22:28
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO
myself and me said:
Couplets times two and with a couple inside the paint. Enjoy the reading and the paint.
December 3rd, 2017 11:02
myself and me said:
Couplets times two and with a couple inside the paint. Enjoy the reading and the paint.
December 3rd, 2017 11:02
THE CONFORMIST
MendedFences27 said:
I always say, \"Think outside of the big picture, \" and people say, \"What?\"
Whatever kind of box it is, you\'ve put the lid on it and nailed it shut with your \"uniform, conform, orthodox, box \" rhyme. I find it conveys the thought perfectly. Well done Michael. Beautiful painting by the way. - Phil A.
December 2nd, 2017 21:01
MendedFences27 said:
I always say, \"Think outside of the big picture, \" and people say, \"What?\"
Whatever kind of box it is, you\'ve put the lid on it and nailed it shut with your \"uniform, conform, orthodox, box \" rhyme. I find it conveys the thought perfectly. Well done Michael. Beautiful painting by the way. - Phil A.
December 2nd, 2017 21:01
THE CONFORMIST
Louis Gibbs said:
The \"Box\", to me, is the programming we receive, teaching us \'what to think\' rather then \'how to think\'. Once ingrained, it is difficult to let our minds explore outside of it. The ones who let their minds escape \'the box\' are the ones who move the species forward.
This poem nails it, Michael! Excellent write.
December 2nd, 2017 10:23
Louis Gibbs said:
The \"Box\", to me, is the programming we receive, teaching us \'what to think\' rather then \'how to think\'. Once ingrained, it is difficult to let our minds explore outside of it. The ones who let their minds escape \'the box\' are the ones who move the species forward.
This poem nails it, Michael! Excellent write.
December 2nd, 2017 10:23
THE CONFORMIST
Fay Slimm. said:
The box of sheer conformity is something we need to think about escaping from and yes I agree we are surrounded by sayings such as this one Michael - - great work with the brush again.
December 2nd, 2017 06:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The box of sheer conformity is something we need to think about escaping from and yes I agree we are surrounded by sayings such as this one Michael - - great work with the brush again.
December 2nd, 2017 06:10
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