Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The minimalistic drawing is stunning and provocative, Michael. A well written poem as well. Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 11:19
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The minimalistic drawing is stunning and provocative, Michael. A well written poem as well. Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 11:19
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
myself and me said:
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint with pretty poem.
November 10th, 2017 09:46
myself and me said:
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint with pretty poem.
November 10th, 2017 09:46
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest west Cornwall dear Michael -- - -- and that mind-boggling line drawing is simply fan-blinkin\'-tastic .
November 10th, 2017 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest west Cornwall dear Michael -- - -- and that mind-boggling line drawing is simply fan-blinkin\'-tastic .
November 10th, 2017 09:34
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
FredPeyer said:
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the imagination by not showing a face. (She is a redhead, about 25 years old, extremely good looking!)
Ah, so sorry, am supposed to say something about the poem, but your drawing took my breath away.
Let\'s just say that this is the most beautiful sigh I ever read!
November 10th, 2017 05:13
FredPeyer said:
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the imagination by not showing a face. (She is a redhead, about 25 years old, extremely good looking!)
Ah, so sorry, am supposed to say something about the poem, but your drawing took my breath away.
Let\'s just say that this is the most beautiful sigh I ever read!
November 10th, 2017 05:13
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I can\'t see any fish tail on her! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I can\'t see any fish tail on her! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:59
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Goldfinch60 said:
The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
A SHELTERED NOOK
lasergraph said:
A safe refuge in the storm. I could imagine the warmth inside. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:50
lasergraph said:
A safe refuge in the storm. I could imagine the warmth inside. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:50
A SHELTERED NOOK
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I pop this little gem into my favourites - well done again Michael.
November 9th, 2017 14:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I pop this little gem into my favourites - well done again Michael.
November 9th, 2017 14:06
A SHELTERED NOOK
Louis Gibbs said:
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination. Clever writes, Michael!
November 9th, 2017 10:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination. Clever writes, Michael!
November 9th, 2017 10:42
A SHELTERED NOOK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IN A SHADY NOOK ~ BY A BABBLING BROOK .............. O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for a perfect symbiosis of Paint \'n Poem. A \"swap quatrain\" is a perfect structure for such a subject ! Yours BRIAN
November 9th, 2017 10:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IN A SHADY NOOK ~ BY A BABBLING BROOK .............. O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for a perfect symbiosis of Paint \'n Poem. A \"swap quatrain\" is a perfect structure for such a subject ! Yours BRIAN
November 9th, 2017 10:25
A SHELTERED NOOK
myself and me said:
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57
myself and me said:
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57
A SHELTERED NOOK
WL Schuett said:
Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem
November 9th, 2017 08:45
WL Schuett said:
Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem
November 9th, 2017 08:45
A SHELTERED NOOK
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.
November 9th, 2017 03:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.
November 9th, 2017 03:31
A SHELTERED NOOK
FredPeyer said:
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!
November 9th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!
November 9th, 2017 03:19
A SHELTERED NOOK
Michael Edwards said:
I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi
November 9th, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi
November 9th, 2017 02:30
A SHELTERED NOOK
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.
November 9th, 2017 02:20
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.
November 9th, 2017 02:20
ANOTHER CRUDY
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!
November 8th, 2017 10:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!
November 8th, 2017 10:30
ANOTHER CRUDY
WL Schuett said:
Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art
November 8th, 2017 10:15
WL Schuett said:
Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art
November 8th, 2017 10:15
ANOTHER CRUDY
myself and me said:
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.
November 8th, 2017 09:59
myself and me said:
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.
November 8th, 2017 09:59
ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.
November 8th, 2017 05:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.
November 8th, 2017 05:38
ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:
You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?
November 8th, 2017 02:39
orchidee said:
You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?
November 8th, 2017 02:39
ANOTHER CRUDY
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.
November 8th, 2017 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.
November 8th, 2017 02:37
HER TAINTED HEART
Laura🌻 said:
Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 01:17
Laura🌻 said:
Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 01:17
ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!
November 8th, 2017 01:15
FredPeyer said:
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!
November 8th, 2017 01:15
HER TAINTED HEART
MendedFences27 said:
\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.
November 7th, 2017 19:54
MendedFences27 said:
\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.
November 7th, 2017 19:54
HER TAINTED HEART
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.
November 7th, 2017 14:42
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.
November 7th, 2017 14:42
HER TAINTED HEART
myself and me said:
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.
November 7th, 2017 12:00
myself and me said:
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.
November 7th, 2017 12:00
HER TAINTED HEART
WL Schuett said:
A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael
November 7th, 2017 08:30
WL Schuett said:
A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael
November 7th, 2017 08:30
HER TAINTED HEART
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!
November 7th, 2017 08:25
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!
November 7th, 2017 08:25
HER TAINTED HEART
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:07
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