Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HER TAINTED HEART
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.
November 7th, 2017 02:01
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.
November 7th, 2017 02:01
THE CLOWN
myself and me said:
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55
myself and me said:
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55
THE CLOWN
Louis Gibbs said:
Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I just invented a new word too?)
Cute poem, Michael!
November 3rd, 2017 08:58
Louis Gibbs said:
Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I just invented a new word too?)
Cute poem, Michael!
November 3rd, 2017 08:58
THE CLOWN
Christina8 said:
Great clown poem! And flipped at the end. Also wonderful graphite drawing!
November 3rd, 2017 06:57
Christina8 said:
Great clown poem! And flipped at the end. Also wonderful graphite drawing!
November 3rd, 2017 06:57
THE CLOWN
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the pencil work too.
November 3rd, 2017 03:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - fantastic form for the kind of humour you used . Love the pencil work too.
November 3rd, 2017 03:57
THE CLOWN
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael.
I do like the drawing, is it done with charcoal.
November 3rd, 2017 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael.
I do like the drawing, is it done with charcoal.
November 3rd, 2017 02:48
THE CLOWN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CLOWNS ~ sad old Men
Living a lie ~ a false smile
On their lips ~ sad old Men
Who once enjoyed life ~ But
Now they fall to amuse Kids
Slowly slipping to the grave !
Thanks for sharing MICHAEL
Some of my Friends are CLOWNS
They are all Miserable Old Men !
Your Harlequin Friend ~ BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CLOWNS ~ sad old Men
Living a lie ~ a false smile
On their lips ~ sad old Men
Who once enjoyed life ~ But
Now they fall to amuse Kids
Slowly slipping to the grave !
Thanks for sharing MICHAEL
Some of my Friends are CLOWNS
They are all Miserable Old Men !
Your Harlequin Friend ~ BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
THE CLOWN
orchidee said:
Don\'t tell me where it is up the clown. I will only swoon! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
orchidee said:
Don\'t tell me where it is up the clown. I will only swoon! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:42
THE CLOWN
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. We had a clown as a sort of office logo once. We changed it, as it was thought too baby-ish, as we expanded into other areas, to reach more age-groups. Yet they\'ve become more sinister and scary now. I hate the whole circus thing too, not just the clowns in it.
November 3rd, 2017 02:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. We had a clown as a sort of office logo once. We changed it, as it was thought too baby-ish, as we expanded into other areas, to reach more age-groups. Yet they\'ve become more sinister and scary now. I hate the whole circus thing too, not just the clowns in it.
November 3rd, 2017 02:41
THE CLOWN
FredPeyer said:
Ingenious, Michael. You do have an incredible mind!
November 3rd, 2017 00:30
FredPeyer said:
Ingenious, Michael. You do have an incredible mind!
November 3rd, 2017 00:30
THE BOOK
Mugsdaddy said:
WoW, Mr. E
Even the smallest thing like falling asleep reading a book, you turn into a masterpiece. You are a true artist. Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:29
Mugsdaddy said:
WoW, Mr. E
Even the smallest thing like falling asleep reading a book, you turn into a masterpiece. You are a true artist. Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:29
THE BOOK
FredPeyer said:
Right from my heart Michael! Whenever I see a second-hand store I just have to go in, and usually leave with at least one or two books! Great poem!
November 2nd, 2017 12:28
FredPeyer said:
Right from my heart Michael! Whenever I see a second-hand store I just have to go in, and usually leave with at least one or two books! Great poem!
November 2nd, 2017 12:28
THE BOOK
orchidee said:
You ever chucked the book, erm or Kindle, at anyone M?!
November 2nd, 2017 10:50
orchidee said:
You ever chucked the book, erm or Kindle, at anyone M?!
November 2nd, 2017 10:50
THE BOOK
Louis Gibbs said:
Gee, it looks just like my foyer!
Two more good writes here, Michael. You have certainly mastered this form.
November 2nd, 2017 10:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Gee, it looks just like my foyer!
Two more good writes here, Michael. You have certainly mastered this form.
November 2nd, 2017 10:05
THE BOOK
WL Schuett said:
Good poem that hits home with me as I too am an avid reader
November 2nd, 2017 06:46
WL Schuett said:
Good poem that hits home with me as I too am an avid reader
November 2nd, 2017 06:46
THE BOOK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ \"Of the writing and reading of BOOKS there is no ending ............. But every book (in it\'s own way) is precious ~ please recycle through Charity Shops ! Yours BRIAN. Please check my FUSION on Film ~ Thanks B.
November 2nd, 2017 05:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ \"Of the writing and reading of BOOKS there is no ending ............. But every book (in it\'s own way) is precious ~ please recycle through Charity Shops ! Yours BRIAN. Please check my FUSION on Film ~ Thanks B.
November 2nd, 2017 05:18
THE BOOK
orchidee said:
A bit of a poem:
In a rage, I was gonna throw the book at him
But in these modern days, I threw a Kindle at him instead!
heehee.
November 2nd, 2017 02:42
orchidee said:
A bit of a poem:
In a rage, I was gonna throw the book at him
But in these modern days, I threw a Kindle at him instead!
heehee.
November 2nd, 2017 02:42
THE BOOK
orchidee said:
A fine write M. That Hall looks like a palace. You\'ve gone up in the world!
November 2nd, 2017 02:37
orchidee said:
A fine write M. That Hall looks like a palace. You\'ve gone up in the world!
November 2nd, 2017 02:37
THE DECISION
lasergraph said:
Some decisions are most unexpected. Enjoyed the write.
November 1st, 2017 16:09
lasergraph said:
Some decisions are most unexpected. Enjoyed the write.
November 1st, 2017 16:09
THE DECISION
WL Schuett said:
I too had to read it twice , very good Michael a watercolor to follow I assume!
November 1st, 2017 12:27
WL Schuett said:
I too had to read it twice , very good Michael a watercolor to follow I assume!
November 1st, 2017 12:27
THE DECISION
myself and me said:
A perfect place for a perfect wedding with a surprise end.
November 1st, 2017 10:32
myself and me said:
A perfect place for a perfect wedding with a surprise end.
November 1st, 2017 10:32
THE DECISION
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow, the poor groom is in for a bad day! Well done formal poem, Michael. Quite creative!
November 1st, 2017 09:56
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow, the poor groom is in for a bad day! Well done formal poem, Michael. Quite creative!
November 1st, 2017 09:56
THE DECISION
Christina8 said:
What a gorgeous building! I loved your poem with a surprise ending. Loved it!
November 1st, 2017 06:23
Christina8 said:
What a gorgeous building! I loved your poem with a surprise ending. Loved it!
November 1st, 2017 06:23
THE DECISION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a \"Story of Everyday Life\" Some are blessed to live in Mansions ~ some live RUFF ~ Some are jilted at the altar ~ that\'s TUFF ~ Some are mown down on a Cycle Track in New York ~ when will we ever learn ~ when will we ever learn ? Thanks for sharing poem & pic ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a \"Story of Everyday Life\" Some are blessed to live in Mansions ~ some live RUFF ~ Some are jilted at the altar ~ that\'s TUFF ~ Some are mown down on a Cycle Track in New York ~ when will we ever learn ~ when will we ever learn ? Thanks for sharing poem & pic ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:23
THE DECISION
Fay Slimm. said:
Fine write again my friend - - An outstanding place of beauty may frighten a young bride into saying No methinks -- -the poem resounds with the feel of empty luxuriance Michael - love the grand picture and look forward to the following watercolour in due time. -
November 1st, 2017 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Fine write again my friend - - An outstanding place of beauty may frighten a young bride into saying No methinks -- -the poem resounds with the feel of empty luxuriance Michael - love the grand picture and look forward to the following watercolour in due time. -
November 1st, 2017 03:55
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