Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No 44
Jooles said:
Haven\'t been on for a while and I come back to this....God your poems make me smile....said it before...I\'ll say it again....you make me think of Spike Milligan
September 10th, 2017 17:27
Jooles said:
Haven\'t been on for a while and I come back to this....God your poems make me smile....said it before...I\'ll say it again....you make me think of Spike Milligan
September 10th, 2017 17:27
LIMERICK No 44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My JEWISH friend OBADIAH
Borrowed 500 quid
From his friend JEREMIAH
When poor JERRY died
Everyone cried For the Debt
People were scoffin\'
But OBAD had the neck
Wrote a 500 pound cheque
And then threw it down
On the COFFIN !
Hope you like my LIM ~ thanks for yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My JEWISH friend OBADIAH
Borrowed 500 quid
From his friend JEREMIAH
When poor JERRY died
Everyone cried For the Debt
People were scoffin\'
But OBAD had the neck
Wrote a 500 pound cheque
And then threw it down
On the COFFIN !
Hope you like my LIM ~ thanks for yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 16:18
LIMERICK No 44
myself and me said:
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46
myself and me said:
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46
LIMERICK No 44
dusk arising said:
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his coffin
So beware who u tell
when your feeling unwell
Cos you might be the last one laughin
ha ha ha love a bit of fun.
September 10th, 2017 07:20
dusk arising said:
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his coffin
So beware who u tell
when your feeling unwell
Cos you might be the last one laughin
ha ha ha love a bit of fun.
September 10th, 2017 07:20
LIMERICK No 44
Goldfinch60 said:
Presumably your ghost wrote this fun write Michael.
September 10th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Presumably your ghost wrote this fun write Michael.
September 10th, 2017 01:29
LIMERICK No 44
orchidee said:
A fine write an pic M. A similar thing happened to me. Someone said: Try holding your breath for 24 hours, to save some air for a whole day. I tried it - now I\'m dead. Erm, strange that, can\'t understand it! lol
September 10th, 2017 01:18
orchidee said:
A fine write an pic M. A similar thing happened to me. Someone said: Try holding your breath for 24 hours, to save some air for a whole day. I tried it - now I\'m dead. Erm, strange that, can\'t understand it! lol
September 10th, 2017 01:18
A THOUSAND WRECKS
myself and me said:
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04
myself and me said:
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, the firm is very good.
September 9th, 2017 11:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, the firm is very good.
September 9th, 2017 11:16
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well done, Michael!
September 9th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well done, Michael!
September 9th, 2017 08:33
A THOUSAND WRECKS
WL Schuett said:
Very interesting and what to me would be a very difficult poem to write , well done Michael
September 9th, 2017 06:47
WL Schuett said:
Very interesting and what to me would be a very difficult poem to write , well done Michael
September 9th, 2017 06:47
A THOUSAND WRECKS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL we all have Free Will and Poetic Licence is one expression of it ! I am a Classic Poetic Form FREAK ~ BUT ~ I feel too rigid a joining of Form & Function restricts the MUSE ! I get accused of calling ALL FOURTEEN LINE poems SONNETS ! But I an almost Middle Aged (34 !) so i don\'t really care any more ! Like SANTITA & others I am a FREE SPIRIT on MPS ! Love the Meter & Message of Your Poem ~ I always live as close to the Coast as I can ~ my blood is 3.5% NaCl ! Love the Abstract \"The Ghost of the Coast\" AMEN ~ BRIAN Please check \"Some Enchanted Evening\" My Sentimental (not Environmental) SIDE ~ Thanks B.
September 9th, 2017 03:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL we all have Free Will and Poetic Licence is one expression of it ! I am a Classic Poetic Form FREAK ~ BUT ~ I feel too rigid a joining of Form & Function restricts the MUSE ! I get accused of calling ALL FOURTEEN LINE poems SONNETS ! But I an almost Middle Aged (34 !) so i don\'t really care any more ! Like SANTITA & others I am a FREE SPIRIT on MPS ! Love the Meter & Message of Your Poem ~ I always live as close to the Coast as I can ~ my blood is 3.5% NaCl ! Love the Abstract \"The Ghost of the Coast\" AMEN ~ BRIAN Please check \"Some Enchanted Evening\" My Sentimental (not Environmental) SIDE ~ Thanks B.
September 9th, 2017 03:08
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new to me and so well composed - a delightful read Michael.
September 9th, 2017 02:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new to me and so well composed - a delightful read Michael.
September 9th, 2017 02:02
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
myself and me said:
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
September 8th, 2017 19:41
myself and me said:
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
September 8th, 2017 19:41
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
September 8th, 2017 06:46
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
September 8th, 2017 06:46
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
September 8th, 2017 04:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
September 8th, 2017 04:13
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of a nude is sensational too.
September 8th, 2017 02:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of a nude is sensational too.
September 8th, 2017 02:10
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Frank Prem said:
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
September 8th, 2017 01:47
Frank Prem said:
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
September 8th, 2017 01:47
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
orchidee said:
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
September 8th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
September 8th, 2017 01:41
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
dusk arising said:
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38
dusk arising said:
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
September 8th, 2017 00:58
FredPeyer said:
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
September 8th, 2017 00:58
SHE CONFIRMS
Fay Slimm. said:
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An engaging piece of work Michael.
September 7th, 2017 13:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An engaging piece of work Michael.
September 7th, 2017 13:24
SHE CONFIRMS
WL Schuett said:
Well done Micheal conjures up a vivid picture...and a lovely line drawing
September 7th, 2017 09:20
WL Schuett said:
Well done Micheal conjures up a vivid picture...and a lovely line drawing
September 7th, 2017 09:20
SHE CONFIRMS
orchidee said:
Ohhh the melodrama of it all! *Gets out pen and paper for a mad burst of inspiration*.
September 7th, 2017 08:03
orchidee said:
Ohhh the melodrama of it all! *Gets out pen and paper for a mad burst of inspiration*.
September 7th, 2017 08:03
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