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MendedFences27 said:

The \"She\" in #4 is the girl for me. Lots of fun in your Monostichs, which \"Spellcheck,\" won\'t recognize as a word. Learning new stuff every day.
Art - Polar bears in as few lines as possible.
Loved both. -Phil A.

September 18th, 2017 18:45

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malubotelho said:

Nice ones. I like better the second and the third.

September 18th, 2017 12:25

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dusk arising said:

A plot in every one of them.... oh ye of multi talents.... only 24 hours in a day and a siteful of hungry poets to feed..... put those brushes down.

September 18th, 2017 06:55

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, the final one is my favourite.

September 18th, 2017 02:49

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orchidee said:

Some days I don\'t write any poems at all. Do I cheat? I may write 1, 2 or 3 on other days! I don\'t of it on purpose to keep up a backlog, it\'s just how things go with my inspiration.

September 18th, 2017 01:52

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Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve just about run out with about only three poems not yet posted - at the moment I\'m spending all my spare time preparing paintings for display and an art demonstration plus just a couple of commissions which will take a while so hanging in on MPS by my finger tips - perhaps I should have posted these one at a time. Thanks for your comments Santita - I think No3 is my favourite - it makes me smile whenever I read it.

September 18th, 2017 00:41

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myself and me said:

I always love your limerick. Full of humor, and always bring me smile. Thanks.

September 17th, 2017 13:17

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dusk arising said:

I used to visit the Gower every month of the year, a favourite area with best beaches by far.

My memory often stumbles
To peninsular past The Mumbles
where such outstanding beauty
often found me fruity
To revisit? - my heart grumbles

First area in UK to be designated \'Area of Outstanding Natural Beauty\'.

I love a limerick, would write them all day. Great to see you enjoy them too. Enjoyed yours here and obviously struck a chord in me.
Big thank you.



September 17th, 2017 11:28

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WL Schuett said:

Fun Michael a good way to start my Sunday

September 17th, 2017 09:09

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE I know the GOWER well and in my mind it rings a Bell ! Welsh Time is very volatile especially in rural Wales like LLANGEFNI on Anglesey ! I turned up to speak at a Church The ORGANIST (playing Cwm Rhonda) and the usher were there but no congregation ~ i thought that perhaps the word had got out that Brian the Saesneg (English) was speaking ! Th Usher said \"Don\'t fret FY ANNWYL\" they have cows to milk and pigs to feed they\'ll come when they\'re ready ! An hour after the scheduled stat time the Church was full ~ the service went well and the singing (all in Welsh) was \"The Language of Heaven\" as I left the Usher smiled and said WELSH TIME is When i\'m good and ready time\" Thanks BRIAN

September 17th, 2017 03:10

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good limerick. It is amazing how many times my watch stopped when I first started going out in the evenings from my home with mum and dad.

September 17th, 2017 00:45

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malubotelho said:

Sad. Left kind of a hole on my stomach. I guess I\'m very sensitive these days. Beautifuly written though.

September 16th, 2017 17:07

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MendedFences27 said:

A picture gone, someone is missed. a faded wall enhances the contrast. Night shades the episode in gloom, even Morning cannot remove the loneliness, and rain beats a pathetic tune. Such sorrow. Well done, loved the stanza flow. Felt the pain.
As for the picture, He chose his colors well, mostly colors of nature, blue (sky), brown (earth), green (vegetation), with a dab of sunshine mixed in on what appears to me as a stone bench. - Phil A.

September 16th, 2017 11:52

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FredPeyer said:

Michael, I really like the first stanza the best. It tells a whole story of a love gone wrong in three short lines!
Btw, did you use two glass panes to do the painting? I tried it once a long time ago as a test, but it looked nothing like yours. Mine was pretty bad, while yours is beautiful.

September 16th, 2017 04:17

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orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. Sometimes I wonder about my \'mix & match\' type hymn-poems, choosing out a Bible verse or two for each stanza. Yet they seem to be grouped in themes, e.g .1-5; 6-11; etc, so hopefully not disjointed in my poems.

September 16th, 2017 01:54