Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FROM FUSIONS 1
malubotelho said:
It is a great idea to post the fusion here because they get buried somewhere. Nice verse Michael.
September 26th, 2017 14:41
malubotelho said:
It is a great idea to post the fusion here because they get buried somewhere. Nice verse Michael.
September 26th, 2017 14:41
FROM FUSIONS 1
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if all your fusion poems are as good as this one, just keep on posting them!
September 26th, 2017 11:49
FredPeyer said:
Michael, if all your fusion poems are as good as this one, just keep on posting them!
September 26th, 2017 11:49
FROM FUSIONS 1
WL Schuett said:
I like this very much an autumn free verse kind of thing
September 26th, 2017 09:18
WL Schuett said:
I like this very much an autumn free verse kind of thing
September 26th, 2017 09:18
FROM FUSIONS 1
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wonderful image and brilliant imagery are expressed in this beautifully crafted poem. Like autumn colour this stumbles. Amazing poem is shared here. 10
September 26th, 2017 08:28
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wonderful image and brilliant imagery are expressed in this beautifully crafted poem. Like autumn colour this stumbles. Amazing poem is shared here. 10
September 26th, 2017 08:28
FROM FUSIONS 1
Louis Gibbs said:
A season-appropriate piece as Fall presents. Enjoyed it, Michael.
September 26th, 2017 08:07
Louis Gibbs said:
A season-appropriate piece as Fall presents. Enjoyed it, Michael.
September 26th, 2017 08:07
FROM FUSIONS 1
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to use past work Michael as I for one did not get the chance of earlier reading.
September 26th, 2017 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to use past work Michael as I for one did not get the chance of earlier reading.
September 26th, 2017 04:56
FROM FUSIONS 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Any ode of yours is much better than nothing at all ! Love all the BULL ! BRIAN ~ Please check my MUSIC ~ B.
September 26th, 2017 02:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Any ode of yours is much better than nothing at all ! Love all the BULL ! BRIAN ~ Please check my MUSIC ~ B.
September 26th, 2017 02:23
FROM FUSIONS 1
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. As I say, I don\'t always write my poems on the same day that I post them.
September 26th, 2017 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. As I say, I don\'t always write my poems on the same day that I post them.
September 26th, 2017 02:01
IN DREAMS
dusk arising said:
Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.
September 25th, 2017 17:40
dusk arising said:
Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.
September 25th, 2017 17:40
IN DREAMS
FredPeyer said:
Great poem and even greater (if I may say so) drawing, Michael.
And btw, how do you keep that oh so thin gold leaf from crumbling up when drawing on it?
September 25th, 2017 16:45
FredPeyer said:
Great poem and even greater (if I may say so) drawing, Michael.
And btw, how do you keep that oh so thin gold leaf from crumbling up when drawing on it?
September 25th, 2017 16:45
DORCAS
FredPeyer said:
Great fun story, Michael. And the best part is that it is not made up!
I grew up in a small farmer village outside Zuerich and believe me, sometimes it was hilarious.
September 25th, 2017 11:06
FredPeyer said:
Great fun story, Michael. And the best part is that it is not made up!
I grew up in a small farmer village outside Zuerich and believe me, sometimes it was hilarious.
September 25th, 2017 11:06
IN DREAMS
malubotelho said:
Another beautiful so poetic piece. Love the form of this. Thanks Michael.
September 25th, 2017 10:35
malubotelho said:
Another beautiful so poetic piece. Love the form of this. Thanks Michael.
September 25th, 2017 10:35
IN DREAMS
WL Schuett said:
Another intriguing poem Michael, again a structure I never heard of , well done
September 25th, 2017 07:51
WL Schuett said:
Another intriguing poem Michael, again a structure I never heard of , well done
September 25th, 2017 07:51
IN DREAMS
Christina8 said:
I loved your poem-so lovely- and that you have introduced us to the rictameter! I may have to try my hand at it! Faved!
September 25th, 2017 06:30
Christina8 said:
I loved your poem-so lovely- and that you have introduced us to the rictameter! I may have to try my hand at it! Faved!
September 25th, 2017 06:30
IN DREAMS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Lovely RICTAMETRIC tribute to AUTUMN ~ my fave Season. Like other forms we have introduced and discussed it can produce an elegant shape, As a CLASSICAL POET (and LOVER !) I consider Shape & Size to be just as important as STRUCTURE & SUBJECT ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
September 25th, 2017 03:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Lovely RICTAMETRIC tribute to AUTUMN ~ my fave Season. Like other forms we have introduced and discussed it can produce an elegant shape, As a CLASSICAL POET (and LOVER !) I consider Shape & Size to be just as important as STRUCTURE & SUBJECT ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
September 25th, 2017 03:32
IN DREAMS
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Was you 6 minutes making that coffee?!
September 25th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Was you 6 minutes making that coffee?!
September 25th, 2017 01:52
IN DREAMS
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Mathematics as poetry\' ... interesting construction, Michael! Your knowledge of poetry continues to amaze.
September 25th, 2017 00:35
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Mathematics as poetry\' ... interesting construction, Michael! Your knowledge of poetry continues to amaze.
September 25th, 2017 00:35
DORCAS
malubotelho said:
I was trying to figure out myself what Dorcas means I thought in the beginning was another form for poetry. This was a good laugh Michael. Thank you.
September 24th, 2017 16:14
malubotelho said:
I was trying to figure out myself what Dorcas means I thought in the beginning was another form for poetry. This was a good laugh Michael. Thank you.
September 24th, 2017 16:14
DORCAS
WL Schuett said:
Lived my whole life in rural or small towns can\'t beat it couldn\'t pay me to live in a city
Fun poem
September 24th, 2017 11:30
WL Schuett said:
Lived my whole life in rural or small towns can\'t beat it couldn\'t pay me to live in a city
Fun poem
September 24th, 2017 11:30
DORCAS
Christina8 said:
I thought the poem was hilarious! Great poem! Who would name a donkey Dorcas? LOL
September 24th, 2017 11:17
Christina8 said:
I thought the poem was hilarious! Great poem! Who would name a donkey Dorcas? LOL
September 24th, 2017 11:17
DORCAS
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, have had these moments as Brian describes like, \"visiting another planet\". Your poem captures it very well, Michael!
September 24th, 2017 10:29
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, have had these moments as Brian describes like, \"visiting another planet\". Your poem captures it very well, Michael!
September 24th, 2017 10:29
DORCAS
Accidental Poet said:
Love the little villages where everyone knows everyone. Great poem Michael. ; )
September 24th, 2017 08:39
Accidental Poet said:
Love the little villages where everyone knows everyone. Great poem Michael. ; )
September 24th, 2017 08:39
DORCAS
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile every few lines in reading this tale of a donkey called Dorcas - great read Michael - your village meetings are similar to Dibley methinks.
September 24th, 2017 05:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile every few lines in reading this tale of a donkey called Dorcas - great read Michael - your village meetings are similar to Dibley methinks.
September 24th, 2017 05:49
DORCAS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MICHAEL ~ Those whom the GODS would destroy ~ They would first make MAD !
I was born and bred in the greatest City in the World and home of GENII Like KEN DODD & JOHN LENNON ~ I have always lived in Cities or Large Towns ~ Nottingham ~ Leeds etc. I do visit English Villages and I love Village Fetes with their Morris Dancers ~ Strange Dialects and local Cheese and Beer ~ it\'s like visiting another Planet and they are all slightly MAD ! Your poem confirms this ~ THANKS for scaring BRIAN ~ Town Mouse ! Please check my IVORY PALACES ~ Thanks B.
September 24th, 2017 03:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MICHAEL ~ Those whom the GODS would destroy ~ They would first make MAD !
I was born and bred in the greatest City in the World and home of GENII Like KEN DODD & JOHN LENNON ~ I have always lived in Cities or Large Towns ~ Nottingham ~ Leeds etc. I do visit English Villages and I love Village Fetes with their Morris Dancers ~ Strange Dialects and local Cheese and Beer ~ it\'s like visiting another Planet and they are all slightly MAD ! Your poem confirms this ~ THANKS for scaring BRIAN ~ Town Mouse ! Please check my IVORY PALACES ~ Thanks B.
September 24th, 2017 03:17
DORCAS
dusk arising said:
Village life has so much to offer if you join in rather than just live to commute. Dorcas has made an Ass of you all. This was great to read and wonderfully entertaining fun. Thank you.
September 24th, 2017 03:00
dusk arising said:
Village life has so much to offer if you join in rather than just live to commute. Dorcas has made an Ass of you all. This was great to read and wonderfully entertaining fun. Thank you.
September 24th, 2017 03:00
DORCAS
Goldfinch60 said:
Was this one of those meetings where you take minutes and waste hours?
Was Dorcas dead?
September 24th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Was this one of those meetings where you take minutes and waste hours?
Was Dorcas dead?
September 24th, 2017 00:55
FIRST LOVE
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written poem, Michael. Made me remember my first time!
September 23rd, 2017 17:33
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written poem, Michael. Made me remember my first time!
September 23rd, 2017 17:33
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