Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



BE MINE
FredPeyer said:

Michael, if you could bottle this poem, I would love to buy one and then drink it slowly and think of you in beautiful Europe!

November 29th, 2017 03:09

SUMMER SOLSTICE
orchidee said:

A good Summery write and pic Michael.

November 29th, 2017 02:58

SUMMER SOLSTICE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow your wording is extraordinary, awesome!! Very poetic great in brevity. Kudos.
Like painting in words.!


So nice to read from your pen again,
Do pls review my latest too.

November 29th, 2017 02:13

SUMMER SOLSTICE
Goldfinch60 said:

The imagery this conjurs up is great Michael I could see and smell nature.

I like the painting as well, that type of scene is duplicated in many towns and villages.

November 29th, 2017 01:40

BE MINE
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Good write!

November 28th, 2017 13:03

BE MINE
Fay Slimm. said:

Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small coastal sculpture and the short-line romantic write Michael. Super posting.

November 28th, 2017 10:43

BE MINE
myself and me said:

\"As grape is to wine, be mine.\"
Marvelous indeed. Without grape, there will be no wine; In wine, no grape could be observed.
Very creative craft.

November 28th, 2017 08:56

BE MINE
FineB said:

Short, sweet and powerful. Superb write.

The coastal sculpture is beautiful.

Many thanks
Keep writing
FineB


November 28th, 2017 06:15

BE MINE
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael.

November 28th, 2017 02:45

CHICKS
FredPeyer said:

Nicely done, Michael!

November 27th, 2017 21:20

MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
myself and me said:

You constructed this poem perfectly.

November 27th, 2017 19:57

CHICKS
myself and me said:

Really want to hole them in hand.

November 27th, 2017 19:35

CHICKS
Louis Gibbs said:

Made me feel warm and cozy, this one. Like the accompanying sketch, too!

November 27th, 2017 12:08

CHICKS
Christina8 said:

Chicks are so cute--nice drawing and acrostic! Nice write.

November 27th, 2017 11:09

CHICKS
FineB said:

Thanks Michael.

A delightfhl poem and so poignant.

Keep writing
FineB


November 27th, 2017 09:42

CHICKS
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the line drawing and adore fluffy chicks - I know though that the duo were not one and the same - - an appealing acrostic Michael.

November 27th, 2017 04:01

CHICKS
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Small but excellency is there!

November 27th, 2017 02:55

CHICKS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Erm, are they swans in the pic?!
I got to have a lie down to recover. I\'ve read too many long words this early in some poems, in the morning already!

November 27th, 2017 02:55

CHICKS
Goldfinch60 said:

Chicks are wondrous to behold. Good write.

November 27th, 2017 02:49

LIMERICKS 8 30 & 34
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - that final one had me in stitches and then I felt guilty bout somebody dying - - oh let me now wipe my eyes and behave like a lady - -nuf said........... \'cept this was a great read.

November 26th, 2017 10:53

LIMERICKS 8 30 & 34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

VERY DROLL MICHAEL ~ There is a Plaice for everything ~ and a time for every Limerick under Heaven.

There was a Young Poet called MIKE
Who was GREEN so he went
To work on his BIKE !
One day he fell off ~ straight into a troff
Now he don\'t BIKE ~ He HIKE !

Thanks for a laff on a Sunny Sunday ~ Yours BRIAN.

November 26th, 2017 04:23

LIMERICKS 8 30 & 34
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good writes Michael. I wrote literally one or two poems around 1992, then not much until about 2010 onwards, except special occasions.

November 26th, 2017 03:12

DEPARTURE
Christina8 said:

There is something about this painting that really draws me to it.! A beautiful write to compliment the painting! Stellar job!

November 25th, 2017 19:12

MAN\'S CONSTRUCT
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
Love the painting! I truly admire your artwork! Also, a great poem! It reminds me of a place where I Once lived! I too have learned about the Octelle form from you! You are a master teacher for certain!
Thank you!

November 25th, 2017 17:27

DEPARTURE
FineB said:

A lovely poem Michael.

I love the picture that accompanies it too.

Keep writing
FineB

November 25th, 2017 15:44

DEPARTURE
orchidee said:

Ohh it\'s all too much for me! I\'m swooning at words like \'importunate\'. Only cos I dunno what it means! Swooning at anything over, oh about 3 syllables long.

November 25th, 2017 10:40

DEPARTURE
orchidee said:

Ooh I dunno Michael. Brian has explained \'enigma\'. *Dashes off to look up idiosympathetic*. 7 syllables there. That could take up a whole line of one of my poems!

November 25th, 2017 09:32

DEPARTURE
WL Schuett said:

I liked this very much , nice poem and art !

November 25th, 2017 08:41

DEPARTURE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love the visual the visual MIKE ~ The White Horse of the Apocalypse ~ coming soon ! An ENIGMA \"Something very puzzling ~ which you can\'t explain ~ but nevertheless (useful word !) you experience and enjoy\" ALL your poetry falls roughly into this category ~ so no need to apologise we love it ALL !Especially when you are denied Pole Position be the delectable CHRISTINA ! In your honour I have posted an OCTELLE today ~ Yours as ever BRIAN

November 25th, 2017 05:03

DEPARTURE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Enigmatic? Oh, I won\'t spot the meaning then, if too much \'thinking\' is involved! heehee.

November 25th, 2017 02:59



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