Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A SHELTERED NOOK
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I pop this little gem into my favourites - well done again Michael.
November 9th, 2017 14:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant form and given a painted location it sings its own invite as I pop this little gem into my favourites - well done again Michael.
November 9th, 2017 14:06
A SHELTERED NOOK
Louis Gibbs said:
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination. Clever writes, Michael!
November 9th, 2017 10:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination. Clever writes, Michael!
November 9th, 2017 10:42
A SHELTERED NOOK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IN A SHADY NOOK ~ BY A BABBLING BROOK .............. O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for a perfect symbiosis of Paint \'n Poem. A \"swap quatrain\" is a perfect structure for such a subject ! Yours BRIAN
November 9th, 2017 10:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IN A SHADY NOOK ~ BY A BABBLING BROOK .............. O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for a perfect symbiosis of Paint \'n Poem. A \"swap quatrain\" is a perfect structure for such a subject ! Yours BRIAN
November 9th, 2017 10:25
A SHELTERED NOOK
myself and me said:
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57
myself and me said:
So beautiful, both the paint and the poem.
November 9th, 2017 08:57
A SHELTERED NOOK
WL Schuett said:
Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem
November 9th, 2017 08:45
WL Schuett said:
Really good Michael the painting is perfect with the poem
November 9th, 2017 08:45
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Accidental Poet said:
Most fitting words to a most beautiful painting. Certainly a fav Michael.
November 9th, 2017 04:53
Accidental Poet said:
Most fitting words to a most beautiful painting. Certainly a fav Michael.
November 9th, 2017 04:53
A SHELTERED NOOK
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.
November 9th, 2017 03:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those nooks are special as is the poem and the painting Michael.
November 9th, 2017 03:31
A SHELTERED NOOK
FredPeyer said:
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!
November 9th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the painting too!
Wish we had some these nooks here!
November 9th, 2017 03:19
A SHELTERED NOOK
Michael Edwards said:
I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi
November 9th, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
I do remember him - never did get it - err the bear that is !! Cheers Orchi
November 9th, 2017 02:30
A SHELTERED NOOK
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.
November 9th, 2017 02:20
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I will go and sign there with them then. It looks remote enough, so no one else will hear me singing.
Ahh, a nook\'s all right, as long it\'s not nookie - I would swoon! lol. Remember that monstrous Nookie Bear?! Would scare off any child.
November 9th, 2017 02:20
ANOTHER CRUDY
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!
November 8th, 2017 10:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor early. Cute one, Michael!
November 8th, 2017 10:30
ANOTHER CRUDY
WL Schuett said:
Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art
November 8th, 2017 10:15
WL Schuett said:
Like the gate drawing a perfect match for your poem , good art
November 8th, 2017 10:15
ANOTHER CRUDY
myself and me said:
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.
November 8th, 2017 09:59
myself and me said:
Try to imagine what the paint will look like after you color it. A beautiful short with simple words yet tells a lot.
November 8th, 2017 09:59
ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.
November 8th, 2017 05:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Michael Morning ! Thanks for Crudy and the Pen & Ink study. Time has always fascinated me as a runner (a three hour Marathon is still my aim !) and as a Scientist \"Times\" relating to the Universe ~ Light years etc. I wanted to give a talk on the USA (50 States in 50 minutes) BUT the minimum time it took was 360 minutes ~ so I plumbed for KENTUCKY and call my talk \"What a State to be in\" It really is a crazy State and a TIME ZONE goes bang through the middle ! So on one side of the street you are a whole hour different ~ early or late ~ awesome ~ I also love GATES & DOORS ~ great visually and great subjects for Odd Odes. Thanks for stimulating ~ Brian 10:33 am (I\'m on my first Coffee Break Teaching again @ 11 am) Please send someone Flowers using my Flower Fusion ~ Thanks B.
November 8th, 2017 05:38
ANOTHER CRUDY
Accidental Poet said:
Perfectly timed Michael. And a really nice image, yours ofcourse.
November 8th, 2017 04:03
Accidental Poet said:
Perfectly timed Michael. And a really nice image, yours ofcourse.
November 8th, 2017 04:03
ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:
You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?
November 8th, 2017 02:39
orchidee said:
You coming or going there?! Good write and pic Michael. Is it half past Autumn now?
November 8th, 2017 02:39
ANOTHER CRUDY
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.
November 8th, 2017 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, we will all go through that gate eventually, pearly or otherwise.
November 8th, 2017 02:37
HER TAINTED HEART
Laura🌻 said:
Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 01:17
Laura🌻 said:
Loved the last stanza!
The watercolor is quite
effective! Excellent!
November 8th, 2017 01:17
ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!
November 8th, 2017 01:15
FredPeyer said:
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30 minutes late!
So let me think, if I am too early to be late and too late to be early...I must be right on time!
November 8th, 2017 01:15
HER TAINTED HEART
MendedFences27 said:
\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.
November 7th, 2017 19:54
MendedFences27 said:
\"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly suspicious I suppose. Loved the poem throughout, each stanza drawing a picture of love lost and a heart \"tainted.\" Phil A.
P.S. On the art- would like to have seen it completely colorized. Somehow it seems unfinished. Beautiful in its own right, though.
November 7th, 2017 19:54
HER TAINTED HEART
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.
November 7th, 2017 14:42
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow slows to a poignant finalé in this ballad of love ending - - good read again Michael and oh how I love the expert display of un-finishing in that picture.
November 7th, 2017 14:42
HER TAINTED HEART
myself and me said:
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.
November 7th, 2017 12:00
myself and me said:
May the raindrop clean \"her tainted heart\", free her suffered soul. Beautiful poem, fresh paint.
November 7th, 2017 12:00
HER TAINTED HEART
WL Schuett said:
A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael
November 7th, 2017 08:30
WL Schuett said:
A couple fine works of art , I really like the feel of this poem , well done Michael
November 7th, 2017 08:30
HER TAINTED HEART
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!
November 7th, 2017 08:25
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem--last stanza really great! Also great watercolor!
November 7th, 2017 08:25
HER TAINTED HEART
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent as always MICHAEL ~ A Flow Painting to embellish a Lowing Poem ! Yours BRIAN ~ \"Please Send Flowers\" in my new FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage with my AROMATHERAPY OK poem ! Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:07
HER TAINTED HEART
Accidental Poet said:
Finely crafted work here, the painting and poem. I think they\'re both perfect as they are, but that\'s just me. Very well done Michael.
November 7th, 2017 04:48
Accidental Poet said:
Finely crafted work here, the painting and poem. I think they\'re both perfect as they are, but that\'s just me. Very well done Michael.
November 7th, 2017 04:48
HER TAINTED HEART
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful poem Michael the wistfulness and sorrow wash over it like the rain on her tainted heart.
I like the artwork, it seems to be a slightly different style than than your usual ones.
November 7th, 2017 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful poem Michael the wistfulness and sorrow wash over it like the rain on her tainted heart.
I like the artwork, it seems to be a slightly different style than than your usual ones.
November 7th, 2017 02:04
HER TAINTED HEART
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.
November 7th, 2017 02:01
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!
I also like how the painting seems to be less and less finished as they eye moves to the left, a bit like moving from reality to dream.
November 7th, 2017 02:01
THE CLOWN
myself and me said:
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55
myself and me said:
A poem full of humor in a terrific form. Wonderful.
November 3rd, 2017 14:55
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