Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



FUSIONS 2
Louis Gibbs said:

Made my mouth water with this one, Michael. Kudos!

September 27th, 2017 14:03

FUSIONS 2
FredPeyer said:

Michael, as a European who grew up with wine on the table all the time (not at breakfast!) your poem speaks, no sings to me! Prefer red, but when it is hot, a cool white is heaven on earth!

September 27th, 2017 11:34

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WL Schuett said:

Fun Micheal I prefer white these days also , good poem

September 27th, 2017 09:06

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orchidee said:

Good write M. Red or white, or blue or whatever (if they had blue wine). I shall add water to it! heehee.

September 27th, 2017 01:40

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OVERSLEPT AGAIN MICHAEL ~ I was up a good hour before you and even managed to snatch a minute with SANTI (Numero Uno) before she flopped into BED ! Love the STYLE and sentiment of your elegant box like FUSION ! Please check my FUSION on Ladies I have posted my painting of EVE (dorsal view only !) for your predilection. Yours BRIAN

September 27th, 2017 01:20

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Goldfinch60 said:

And what is wrong with another glass of red!

September 27th, 2017 01:14

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Fay Slimm. said:

Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming in this four liner.

September 27th, 2017 01:06

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malubotelho said:

It is a great idea to post the fusion here because they get buried somewhere. Nice verse Michael.

September 26th, 2017 14:41

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FredPeyer said:

Michael, if all your fusion poems are as good as this one, just keep on posting them!

September 26th, 2017 11:49

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WL Schuett said:

I like this very much an autumn free verse kind of thing

September 26th, 2017 09:18

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Pintu Mahakul said:

Wonderful image and brilliant imagery are expressed in this beautifully crafted poem. Like autumn colour this stumbles. Amazing poem is shared here. 10

September 26th, 2017 08:28

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Louis Gibbs said:

A season-appropriate piece as Fall presents. Enjoyed it, Michael.

September 26th, 2017 08:07

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Fay Slimm. said:

Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to use past work Michael as I for one did not get the chance of earlier reading.

September 26th, 2017 04:56

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Any ode of yours is much better than nothing at all ! Love all the BULL ! BRIAN ~ Please check my MUSIC ~ B.

September 26th, 2017 02:23

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. As I say, I don\'t always write my poems on the same day that I post them.

September 26th, 2017 02:01

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with great visualisation.

September 26th, 2017 01:25

IN DREAMS
dusk arising said:

Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.

September 25th, 2017 17:40

IN DREAMS
FredPeyer said:

Great poem and even greater (if I may say so) drawing, Michael.
And btw, how do you keep that oh so thin gold leaf from crumbling up when drawing on it?

September 25th, 2017 16:45

DORCAS
FredPeyer said:

Great fun story, Michael. And the best part is that it is not made up!
I grew up in a small farmer village outside Zuerich and believe me, sometimes it was hilarious.

September 25th, 2017 11:06

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malubotelho said:

Another beautiful so poetic piece. Love the form of this. Thanks Michael.

September 25th, 2017 10:35

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WL Schuett said:

Another intriguing poem Michael, again a structure I never heard of , well done

September 25th, 2017 07:51

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Christina8 said:

I loved your poem-so lovely- and that you have introduced us to the rictameter! I may have to try my hand at it! Faved!

September 25th, 2017 06:30

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Lovely RICTAMETRIC tribute to AUTUMN ~ my fave Season. Like other forms we have introduced and discussed it can produce an elegant shape, As a CLASSICAL POET (and LOVER !) I consider Shape & Size to be just as important as STRUCTURE & SUBJECT ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

September 25th, 2017 03:32

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orchidee said:

A fine write M. Was you 6 minutes making that coffee?!

September 25th, 2017 01:52

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Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Michael with very good words.

September 25th, 2017 00:51

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Louis Gibbs said:

\'Mathematics as poetry\' ... interesting construction, Michael! Your knowledge of poetry continues to amaze.

September 25th, 2017 00:35

DORCAS
malubotelho said:

I was trying to figure out myself what Dorcas means I thought in the beginning was another form for poetry. This was a good laugh Michael. Thank you.

September 24th, 2017 16:14

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WL Schuett said:

Lived my whole life in rural or small towns can\'t beat it couldn\'t pay me to live in a city
Fun poem

September 24th, 2017 11:30

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Christina8 said:

I thought the poem was hilarious! Great poem! Who would name a donkey Dorcas? LOL

September 24th, 2017 11:17

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Louis Gibbs said:

I, too, have had these moments as Brian describes like, \"visiting another planet\". Your poem captures it very well, Michael!

September 24th, 2017 10:29



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