Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE RING
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, very interesting poem. You are a master at these mathematical formula poems!
November 14th, 2017 02:27
FredPeyer said:
Great painting, very interesting poem. You are a master at these mathematical formula poems!
November 14th, 2017 02:27
THE RING
Fay Slimm. said:
The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
November 13th, 2017 17:30
Fay Slimm. said:
The form is quite tricky and you make it exciting Michael. Great read.
November 13th, 2017 17:30
THE RING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT QUINZIANE MICHAEL ~ Not easy to pen a coherent (and intriguing) poem in just 15 syllables ~ BUT you just did ! An old proverb says ~ If the Veil fits wear it ~ BUT ~ if the Ring doesn\'t then run screaming from the Altar ! Your Q stirred such nuances ~ Thanks for caring ~ love the technological visual ! I am a Chemical Engineer and it reminded me of the inside of a Reaction Vessel ~ A very hallowed place ! Yours BRIAN. Please add a Bouquet of Flowers to my Fusion ~ for your lovely WIFE ! Thanks B.
November 13th, 2017 17:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT QUINZIANE MICHAEL ~ Not easy to pen a coherent (and intriguing) poem in just 15 syllables ~ BUT you just did ! An old proverb says ~ If the Veil fits wear it ~ BUT ~ if the Ring doesn\'t then run screaming from the Altar ! Your Q stirred such nuances ~ Thanks for caring ~ love the technological visual ! I am a Chemical Engineer and it reminded me of the inside of a Reaction Vessel ~ A very hallowed place ! Yours BRIAN. Please add a Bouquet of Flowers to my Fusion ~ for your lovely WIFE ! Thanks B.
November 13th, 2017 17:03
THE RING
orchidee said:
I quinze not improve on your witty comment! But why is \'seize\' (sez) 16 and not seize, to grab hold of?! And why is it not \'i before e, except after c\'?
And why do I lose sleep over these really important matters?! lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:10
orchidee said:
I quinze not improve on your witty comment! But why is \'seize\' (sez) 16 and not seize, to grab hold of?! And why is it not \'i before e, except after c\'?
And why do I lose sleep over these really important matters?! lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:10
THE RING
WL Schuett said:
Always learning something from you Micheal, not saying it’s something I need to know , still interesting... good work
November 13th, 2017 08:32
WL Schuett said:
Always learning something from you Micheal, not saying it’s something I need to know , still interesting... good work
November 13th, 2017 08:32
THE RING
Drewp said:
Never heard of a Quinze before. Sounds like a real challenge in those confines. Thanks for the education and the lovely poem .
November 13th, 2017 07:58
Drewp said:
Never heard of a Quinze before. Sounds like a real challenge in those confines. Thanks for the education and the lovely poem .
November 13th, 2017 07:58
THE RING
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and pretty painting. Love the quinzaine--never heard of it but it makes for a very nice short poem.
November 13th, 2017 07:50
Christina8 said:
Very interesting and pretty painting. Love the quinzaine--never heard of it but it makes for a very nice short poem.
November 13th, 2017 07:50
THE RING
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I quinze (can) appreciate this poem. These jokes get cornier. You quinze dump my jokes in the bin! lol.
November 13th, 2017 02:49
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I quinze (can) appreciate this poem. These jokes get cornier. You quinze dump my jokes in the bin! lol.
November 13th, 2017 02:49
THE RING
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
Like the painting as well, is its title \"Blocked Pathway\"?
November 13th, 2017 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
Like the painting as well, is its title \"Blocked Pathway\"?
November 13th, 2017 02:15
WITHOUT EXCUSE
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting for starters! I love your poem, I just wish I knew the words that she read. But really great!
November 12th, 2017 13:04
Christina8 said:
A beautiful painting for starters! I love your poem, I just wish I knew the words that she read. But really great!
November 12th, 2017 13:04
WITHOUT EXCUSE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My analysis of your picture MIKE shows an ELFLIKE FIGURE in a yellow cloak. Sharp nez ~ grining bouche and bright oreil (all IMPS are French !) I can only conclude que cet IMP is the cause of all the incongruity on your quartet of Odd Odes ! Thanks for scaring ~ ONCLE BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My analysis of your picture MIKE shows an ELFLIKE FIGURE in a yellow cloak. Sharp nez ~ grining bouche and bright oreil (all IMPS are French !) I can only conclude que cet IMP is the cause of all the incongruity on your quartet of Odd Odes ! Thanks for scaring ~ ONCLE BRIAN
November 12th, 2017 11:27
WITHOUT EXCUSE
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom here. She has feelings of guilt, and he has no words.
November 12th, 2017 03:38
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom here. She has feelings of guilt, and he has no words.
November 12th, 2017 03:38
WITHOUT EXCUSE
Goldfinch60 said:
I like these Michael, especially the third one.
Love the abstract, another painting that you could spend a lifetime in finding new things within.
November 12th, 2017 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I like these Michael, especially the third one.
Love the abstract, another painting that you could spend a lifetime in finding new things within.
November 12th, 2017 01:57
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
FredPeyer said:
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with it!
November 11th, 2017 16:58
FredPeyer said:
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with it!
November 11th, 2017 16:58
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHEAL ~ Love the fractal painting and the fractured poem ! BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 11:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHEAL ~ Love the fractal painting and the fractured poem ! BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 11:12
YET ANOTHER CRUDY
orchidee said:
Oh lo, good write M. Stand clear of that cow!
November 11th, 2017 02:58
orchidee said:
Oh lo, good write M. Stand clear of that cow!
November 11th, 2017 02:58
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
MendedFences27 said:
I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all the Mermaids sighs as they try to make small fry - and when they yell ? it\'s the oceans \"roar.\"
Just a theory.
Kidding aside a potent question, with no answer. Poetical minimalism as well as artistic minimalism , saving on ink? Loved the poem, got me to thinking, - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:45
MendedFences27 said:
I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all the Mermaids sighs as they try to make small fry - and when they yell ? it\'s the oceans \"roar.\"
Just a theory.
Kidding aside a potent question, with no answer. Poetical minimalism as well as artistic minimalism , saving on ink? Loved the poem, got me to thinking, - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:45
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
dusk arising said:
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our conscious reality. Fascinating subject this and quite timeless. I like what you\'ve done with it.
November 10th, 2017 13:05
dusk arising said:
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our conscious reality. Fascinating subject this and quite timeless. I like what you\'ve done with it.
November 10th, 2017 13:05
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL Love the Poem \'n Pic but in the drawing you missed the key anatomical feature the TAIL ~ An Apache Chief on being introduced to his first Naked Mermaid ~ raised his hand in greeting and said ~ HOW ? I have seen real Mermaids in WEEKI ~ WACHEEI Florida USA ~ and they are exactly as your poem describes them ! Another unforgettable experience ~ ONLY IN AMERICA ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 10th, 2017 12:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL Love the Poem \'n Pic but in the drawing you missed the key anatomical feature the TAIL ~ An Apache Chief on being introduced to his first Naked Mermaid ~ raised his hand in greeting and said ~ HOW ? I have seen real Mermaids in WEEKI ~ WACHEEI Florida USA ~ and they are exactly as your poem describes them ! Another unforgettable experience ~ ONLY IN AMERICA ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 10th, 2017 12:40
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The minimalistic drawing is stunning and provocative, Michael. A well written poem as well. Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 11:19
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The minimalistic drawing is stunning and provocative, Michael. A well written poem as well. Kudos!
November 10th, 2017 11:19
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
myself and me said:
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint with pretty poem.
November 10th, 2017 09:46
myself and me said:
The long sigh still echo in the wet air above the ocean. concise paint with pretty poem.
November 10th, 2017 09:46
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest west Cornwall dear Michael -- - -- and that mind-boggling line drawing is simply fan-blinkin\'-tastic .
November 10th, 2017 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
I could hear after reading that sigh of a mermaid from here in deepest west Cornwall dear Michael -- - -- and that mind-boggling line drawing is simply fan-blinkin\'-tastic .
November 10th, 2017 09:34
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Accidental Poet said:
Makes one wonder what could make a mermaid sigh. Great write and drawing Michael.
November 10th, 2017 05:17
Accidental Poet said:
Makes one wonder what could make a mermaid sigh. Great write and drawing Michael.
November 10th, 2017 05:17
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
FredPeyer said:
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the imagination by not showing a face. (She is a redhead, about 25 years old, extremely good looking!)
Ah, so sorry, am supposed to say something about the poem, but your drawing took my breath away.
Let\'s just say that this is the most beautiful sigh I ever read!
November 10th, 2017 05:13
FredPeyer said:
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the imagination by not showing a face. (She is a redhead, about 25 years old, extremely good looking!)
Ah, so sorry, am supposed to say something about the poem, but your drawing took my breath away.
Let\'s just say that this is the most beautiful sigh I ever read!
November 10th, 2017 05:13
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I can\'t see any fish tail on her! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I can\'t see any fish tail on her! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:59
THE MERMAIDS SIGH
Goldfinch60 said:
The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
A SHELTERED NOOK
lasergraph said:
A safe refuge in the storm. I could imagine the warmth inside. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:50
lasergraph said:
A safe refuge in the storm. I could imagine the warmth inside. Great write.
November 9th, 2017 16:50
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