Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE TEMPTRESS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Nothing like a TRIOLET to start another Perfect Day ~ Yours BRIAN.
October 1st, 2017 02:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Nothing like a TRIOLET to start another Perfect Day ~ Yours BRIAN.
October 1st, 2017 02:32
THE TEMPTRESS
orchidee said:
A fine write, if a bit swoony for me! Someone found too many \'Alleluias\' in a hymn a bit tiresome. Mind you, with the repetitions there were 35 of them in the hymn altogether!
October 1st, 2017 01:18
orchidee said:
A fine write, if a bit swoony for me! Someone found too many \'Alleluias\' in a hymn a bit tiresome. Mind you, with the repetitions there were 35 of them in the hymn altogether!
October 1st, 2017 01:18
THE TEMPTRESS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, repetitions always work well in poetry.
October 1st, 2017 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, repetitions always work well in poetry.
October 1st, 2017 01:11
MULTITASKING
Louis Gibbs said:
They are amazing creatures, indeed ... put us men to shame.
September 30th, 2017 10:22
Louis Gibbs said:
They are amazing creatures, indeed ... put us men to shame.
September 30th, 2017 10:22
MULTITASKING
Christina8 said:
OH lol!! That was funny! Thanks for my first smile of the day! Great job!
September 30th, 2017 08:02
Christina8 said:
OH lol!! That was funny! Thanks for my first smile of the day! Great job!
September 30th, 2017 08:02
MULTITASKING
FredPeyer said:
OK, Michael, it IS gender related and here is why:
Imagine the brain as being a cupboard with many little drawers. Each drawer stands for something, i.e. husband, kids, car, house, love, mother, father, etc.
When men talk they open ONE drawer. They talk about cars, the only drawer that is open is the car drawer. For kids it is the kids drawer, etc.
Women on the other hand, open all drawers at the same time.
That is why they can do a lot of different things at once, and why we men will never understand them. But if we love them, we don\'t need to understand them.
September 30th, 2017 03:40
FredPeyer said:
OK, Michael, it IS gender related and here is why:
Imagine the brain as being a cupboard with many little drawers. Each drawer stands for something, i.e. husband, kids, car, house, love, mother, father, etc.
When men talk they open ONE drawer. They talk about cars, the only drawer that is open is the car drawer. For kids it is the kids drawer, etc.
Women on the other hand, open all drawers at the same time.
That is why they can do a lot of different things at once, and why we men will never understand them. But if we love them, we don\'t need to understand them.
September 30th, 2017 03:40
MULTITASKING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Michael ~ but as a DEFENDER of All My Sisters ~ I have to defer. In my experience both at WORK & PLAY ~ GOD gave Eve and all her SISTERS multitaskability ~ NOT ~ because All Men are STUPID & LAZY (only 51% are !) but because while Men daydream of Nigella Lawson in the Kitchen and Paris Hilton in the Boudoir (Rich & Beautiful !) and England winning the World Cup ! The LADIES ~ GET ON WITH THE JOB ! That is why the UK has a QUEEN and THERESA MAN steering the HMS GREAT BRITAIN through troubled waters ! ADAM was a DRAFT ~ EVE is the REAL THING ~ AMEN. Thanks for scaring ~ the MPS LADIES are too gentile to castigate you Mike ~ so I\'m doing it on their behalf ~ BRIAN
September 30th, 2017 02:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Michael ~ but as a DEFENDER of All My Sisters ~ I have to defer. In my experience both at WORK & PLAY ~ GOD gave Eve and all her SISTERS multitaskability ~ NOT ~ because All Men are STUPID & LAZY (only 51% are !) but because while Men daydream of Nigella Lawson in the Kitchen and Paris Hilton in the Boudoir (Rich & Beautiful !) and England winning the World Cup ! The LADIES ~ GET ON WITH THE JOB ! That is why the UK has a QUEEN and THERESA MAN steering the HMS GREAT BRITAIN through troubled waters ! ADAM was a DRAFT ~ EVE is the REAL THING ~ AMEN. Thanks for scaring ~ the MPS LADIES are too gentile to castigate you Mike ~ so I\'m doing it on their behalf ~ BRIAN
September 30th, 2017 02:48
MULTITASKING
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females are different my friend. Gave me a wry smile to see your addition and now with you I wait to see what take ladies will make on your fun supposition. dear Michael.
September 30th, 2017 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females are different my friend. Gave me a wry smile to see your addition and now with you I wait to see what take ladies will make on your fun supposition. dear Michael.
September 30th, 2017 02:26
MULTITASKING
Goldfinch60 said:
Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have said before, don\'t think, it is dangerous.
September 30th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have said before, don\'t think, it is dangerous.
September 30th, 2017 01:24
REFLECTED EDONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ THESE ARE TRUE PALINDROMES ! But almost impossible to do a whole Poem like that ! Then the are the one liners like Napoleon\'s lament ~
ABLE WAS I ERE I SAW ELBA etc.
My limit and forte are Poems which make sense when read forwards or backwards ~ Which I call MIRROR POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
September 29th, 2017 17:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ THESE ARE TRUE PALINDROMES ! But almost impossible to do a whole Poem like that ! Then the are the one liners like Napoleon\'s lament ~
ABLE WAS I ERE I SAW ELBA etc.
My limit and forte are Poems which make sense when read forwards or backwards ~ Which I call MIRROR POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN
September 29th, 2017 17:24
REFLECTED EDONE
rrodriguez said:
Well, that\'s how poetry works. You break out of customary way of using words to define experience. Your edones do express a poetry motif, but in a subtle way. Well done, albeit, difficult. I may take a crack at for the mental exercise and the creative process.
September 29th, 2017 09:36
rrodriguez said:
Well, that\'s how poetry works. You break out of customary way of using words to define experience. Your edones do express a poetry motif, but in a subtle way. Well done, albeit, difficult. I may take a crack at for the mental exercise and the creative process.
September 29th, 2017 09:36
REFLECTED EDONE
WL Schuett said:
Always something with you always thinking ...good stuff
September 29th, 2017 09:31
WL Schuett said:
Always something with you always thinking ...good stuff
September 29th, 2017 09:31
REFLECTED EDONE
malubotelho said:
I really don\'t know how one can find poetry with this kind of poem. I find fun though. Just because it is at least attention to create it. Congrats Michael. I think you before being a poet you are a mathematician.
September 29th, 2017 09:02
malubotelho said:
I really don\'t know how one can find poetry with this kind of poem. I find fun though. Just because it is at least attention to create it. Congrats Michael. I think you before being a poet you are a mathematician.
September 29th, 2017 09:02
REFLECTED EDONE
Christina8 said:
Appears very difficult--well done Michael!
September 29th, 2017 05:16
Christina8 said:
Appears very difficult--well done Michael!
September 29th, 2017 05:16
REFLECTED EDONE
FredPeyer said:
I can\'t count and write at the same time, so I leave these kind of mathematical poems up to you masters! Enjoy reading them though.
September 29th, 2017 02:50
FredPeyer said:
I can\'t count and write at the same time, so I leave these kind of mathematical poems up to you masters! Enjoy reading them though.
September 29th, 2017 02:50
REFLECTED EDONE
orchidee said:
A tricky write M. Here\'s the start of one from me. It don\'t make any sense, mind you!
Pork pie - Eip Krop.
Also - sherry - yrrehs. That\'s how I say it after I\'ve had one or three!
September 29th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
A tricky write M. Here\'s the start of one from me. It don\'t make any sense, mind you!
Pork pie - Eip Krop.
Also - sherry - yrrehs. That\'s how I say it after I\'ve had one or three!
September 29th, 2017 01:49
REFLECTED EDONE
Louis Gibbs said:
Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks for furthering my poetry education.
September 29th, 2017 00:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks for furthering my poetry education.
September 29th, 2017 00:11
FUSIONS 3
dusk arising said:
i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt partway through a contrived piece about some unimportant issue.
September 28th, 2017 18:27
dusk arising said:
i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt partway through a contrived piece about some unimportant issue.
September 28th, 2017 18:27
FUSIONS 3
FredPeyer said:
Must be an English thing!
Here, if I thunk you under the water you drown.
Great 4-liner, Michael.
September 28th, 2017 03:38
FredPeyer said:
Must be an English thing!
Here, if I thunk you under the water you drown.
Great 4-liner, Michael.
September 28th, 2017 03:38
FUSIONS 3
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I THUNK when I\'m sober
But only PONDER
When I\'m DRUNK
THUNK brings me
Down to Earth
With an almighty CLUNK !
Thanks for sharing ~ love Poems
Written fanatically ~ BRAIN !
September 28th, 2017 03:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I THUNK when I\'m sober
But only PONDER
When I\'m DRUNK
THUNK brings me
Down to Earth
With an almighty CLUNK !
Thanks for sharing ~ love Poems
Written fanatically ~ BRAIN !
September 28th, 2017 03:33
FUSIONS 3
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.
September 28th, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.
September 28th, 2017 01:46
FUSIONS 2
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem, Michael! Not so much of a wine drinker but your poem is a wonderful rhyme nonetheless!
September 27th, 2017 21:03
Christina8 said:
Loved the poem, Michael! Not so much of a wine drinker but your poem is a wonderful rhyme nonetheless!
September 27th, 2017 21:03
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