Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE HOUSE
MendedFences27 said:
A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what happens next? It seems the structure lends itself to a one-sentence format quite nicely. So, now we have two in contrast, and that\'s what peaks the interest and leaves us wanting more. It\'s almost as though you asked an unanswered question. Lovely bit of intrigue brought out to leave us pondering, \"Where does she go next?\" Loved it. More, please? - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:37
MendedFences27 said:
A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what happens next? It seems the structure lends itself to a one-sentence format quite nicely. So, now we have two in contrast, and that\'s what peaks the interest and leaves us wanting more. It\'s almost as though you asked an unanswered question. Lovely bit of intrigue brought out to leave us pondering, \"Where does she go next?\" Loved it. More, please? - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:37
THE HOUSE
Fay Slimm. said:
Super artwork and love the form used
- it reads like the beginning of a novel and left me wanting more -- so good to see you back posting again Michael.
October 20th, 2017 11:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Super artwork and love the form used
- it reads like the beginning of a novel and left me wanting more -- so good to see you back posting again Michael.
October 20th, 2017 11:53
THE HOUSE
Louis Gibbs said:
I had no idea there were so many specific forms of poetry, Michael. The painting is quite inviting and warm! Well done!
October 20th, 2017 09:16
Louis Gibbs said:
I had no idea there were so many specific forms of poetry, Michael. The painting is quite inviting and warm! Well done!
October 20th, 2017 09:16
THE HOUSE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL welcome back ! Love the SEDOKA ~ sound like my Grandma\'s House ! Love the English Village picture ~ very evocative ! BRIAN ~ Please check my TEDDY BEAR ~ Thanks B.
October 20th, 2017 01:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL welcome back ! Love the SEDOKA ~ sound like my Grandma\'s House ! Love the English Village picture ~ very evocative ! BRIAN ~ Please check my TEDDY BEAR ~ Thanks B.
October 20th, 2017 01:58
THE HOUSE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Short and packed with a meaningful message!
Open the doors, and let the sun shine in!
Beautiful painting to illustrate your Sedoka!
October 20th, 2017 00:47
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Short and packed with a meaningful message!
Open the doors, and let the sun shine in!
Beautiful painting to illustrate your Sedoka!
October 20th, 2017 00:47
THE HOUSE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Good to see you back.
I like the artwork, have you previously put up a picture of the same scene but with people in it?
October 20th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Good to see you back.
I like the artwork, have you previously put up a picture of the same scene but with people in it?
October 20th, 2017 00:47
A GENTLE LAND
squeakyfluff said:
A very enchanting poem. thankyou for this lovely read! :)
October 10th, 2017 14:17
squeakyfluff said:
A very enchanting poem. thankyou for this lovely read! :)
October 10th, 2017 14:17
A GENTLE LAND
Louis Gibbs said:
Mathematic perfection this one. Michael. Very neatly presented.
October 8th, 2017 16:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Mathematic perfection this one. Michael. Very neatly presented.
October 8th, 2017 16:32
A GENTLE LAND
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds serene,a peaceful way of life
October 8th, 2017 12:20
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds serene,a peaceful way of life
October 8th, 2017 12:20
A GENTLE LAND
malubotelho said:
A beautiful poem and I would love to live in that land. Your poem flows adorable.
October 8th, 2017 10:19
malubotelho said:
A beautiful poem and I would love to live in that land. Your poem flows adorable.
October 8th, 2017 10:19
A GENTLE LAND
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live there.A great mastery of the format you chose, beautiful words to fill the lines, and a dreamy sense of peace and harmony. A great write Michael - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 10:14
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live there.A great mastery of the format you chose, beautiful words to fill the lines, and a dreamy sense of peace and harmony. A great write Michael - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 10:14
A GENTLE LAND
Christina8 said:
A really good descriptive swap quatrain. Beautiful scenery! Lovely.
October 8th, 2017 08:35
Christina8 said:
A really good descriptive swap quatrain. Beautiful scenery! Lovely.
October 8th, 2017 08:35
A GENTLE LAND
DesertWords said:
An excellent example of form and a lovely portrait. Thank you.
October 8th, 2017 08:14
DesertWords said:
An excellent example of form and a lovely portrait. Thank you.
October 8th, 2017 08:14
A GENTLE LAND
FredPeyer said:
You really do make it look easy, Michael. \'And then fill in the two in the middle\'! You gotta have that imagination and brain of yours to do that!
October 8th, 2017 04:03
FredPeyer said:
You really do make it look easy, Michael. \'And then fill in the two in the middle\'! You gotta have that imagination and brain of yours to do that!
October 8th, 2017 04:03
A GENTLE LAND
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with good rhyme and flow. Loved this great swap quatrain Michael.
October 8th, 2017 02:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with good rhyme and flow. Loved this great swap quatrain Michael.
October 8th, 2017 02:42
A GENTLE LAND
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful place of peace in which to exist.
October 8th, 2017 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful place of peace in which to exist.
October 8th, 2017 01:36
A GENTLE LAND
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. If I tried something like this I doubt I would waffle on to 7 or 8 verses as I do sometimes. In some places any hymn over, say, 4 verses is too long!
October 8th, 2017 01:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. If I tried something like this I doubt I would waffle on to 7 or 8 verses as I do sometimes. In some places any hymn over, say, 4 verses is too long!
October 8th, 2017 01:21
KIPPERED
MendedFences27 said:
Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem on the other hand goes well with morning coffee. A chuckle and a smile to begin the day. Loved your little witty ditty of a flying fish squished for frying. Oh well, have a nice breakfast, in fact have lots of them. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 16:10
MendedFences27 said:
Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem on the other hand goes well with morning coffee. A chuckle and a smile to begin the day. Loved your little witty ditty of a flying fish squished for frying. Oh well, have a nice breakfast, in fact have lots of them. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 16:10
KIPPERED
Louis Gibbs said:
I guess the moral here is; Don\'t change your mind about flying in mid flight? Perhaps this one is too deep for me. Cute poem, Michael!
October 7th, 2017 11:45
Louis Gibbs said:
I guess the moral here is; Don\'t change your mind about flying in mid flight? Perhaps this one is too deep for me. Cute poem, Michael!
October 7th, 2017 11:45
KIPPERED
Fay Slimm. said:
B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love the wit in this little verse and of course the artwork to accent the wording. Great stuff Michael.
October 7th, 2017 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love the wit in this little verse and of course the artwork to accent the wording. Great stuff Michael.
October 7th, 2017 11:38
KIPPERED
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write Michael, but I\'ll take the waffles and pancakes with maple syrup please. ; )
October 7th, 2017 10:11
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write Michael, but I\'ll take the waffles and pancakes with maple syrup please. ; )
October 7th, 2017 10:11
KIPPERED
malubotelho said:
I was going to say this was a cruel story but beggin to laugh when I read Dusk comment about he being hooked after being drunk. That was funny. Thanks for the laugh 😂 great write as always Michael
October 7th, 2017 10:10
malubotelho said:
I was going to say this was a cruel story but beggin to laugh when I read Dusk comment about he being hooked after being drunk. That was funny. Thanks for the laugh 😂 great write as always Michael
October 7th, 2017 10:10
KIPPERED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great fun poem MICHAEL ~ a dearth of these on MPS ~ too much gloom & doom et poemes noires ! Thanks BRIAN. I will be off line for a week so will miss your odd odes B.
October 7th, 2017 08:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great fun poem MICHAEL ~ a dearth of these on MPS ~ too much gloom & doom et poemes noires ! Thanks BRIAN. I will be off line for a week so will miss your odd odes B.
October 7th, 2017 08:34
KIPPERED
FredPeyer said:
While I love your poem, Michael, that fish thing for breakfast must be an English thing. But at least now I know what a kipper is!
October 7th, 2017 02:54
FredPeyer said:
While I love your poem, Michael, that fish thing for breakfast must be an English thing. But at least now I know what a kipper is!
October 7th, 2017 02:54
KIPPERED
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Michael. But last time I had kippers I felt woozy. Hardly had them since!
October 7th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Michael. But last time I had kippers I felt woozy. Hardly had them since!
October 7th, 2017 01:44
KIPPERED
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the finest meals for breakfast are kippers.
Mind you you can hardly get them fresh as they need to relax first while they smoke.
Good fun write Michael, thank you for the morning laugh, your day has been a success.
October 7th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the finest meals for breakfast are kippers.
Mind you you can hardly get them fresh as they need to relax first while they smoke.
Good fun write Michael, thank you for the morning laugh, your day has been a success.
October 7th, 2017 01:13
KIPPERED
dusk arising said:
Oh my... This reminds me of being picked up by a certain lady after a heavy night on the vino. I was definately flying that night, but ended up being fried.
October 7th, 2017 00:04
dusk arising said:
Oh my... This reminds me of being picked up by a certain lady after a heavy night on the vino. I was definately flying that night, but ended up being fried.
October 7th, 2017 00:04
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