Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A COUPLE OF EDONES
rrodriguez said:
Interesting form for pithy reflections. They evoke reflection and pause. Nicely done!
September 13th, 2017 01:16
rrodriguez said:
Interesting form for pithy reflections. They evoke reflection and pause. Nicely done!
September 13th, 2017 01:16
A COUPLE OF EDONES
Frank Prem said:
No 1 is stronger for me, Michael. Enjoyed reading them both.
September 13th, 2017 01:12
Frank Prem said:
No 1 is stronger for me, Michael. Enjoyed reading them both.
September 13th, 2017 01:12
A COUPLE OF EDONES
FredPeyer said:
Like both of them. I also sleep very heavily, nothing can wake me. You could probably steal my wife from right beside me! But I usually do remember the last dream, or at least part of it, right after waking up. But not for very long.
September 13th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Like both of them. I also sleep very heavily, nothing can wake me. You could probably steal my wife from right beside me! But I usually do remember the last dream, or at least part of it, right after waking up. But not for very long.
September 13th, 2017 00:59
A COUPLE OF EDONES
Louis Gibbs said:
Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
September 13th, 2017 00:08
Louis Gibbs said:
Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
September 13th, 2017 00:08
THREE FROM FUSIONS
rrodriguez said:
Michael, this was fun to read and very cute. I liked the one about the poor beetle. Thanks buddy!
September 12th, 2017 15:55
rrodriguez said:
Michael, this was fun to read and very cute. I liked the one about the poor beetle. Thanks buddy!
September 12th, 2017 15:55
THREE FROM FUSIONS
myself and me said:
All the three are fresh to me. Love them, fun to read.
September 12th, 2017 10:52
myself and me said:
All the three are fresh to me. Love them, fun to read.
September 12th, 2017 10:52
THREE FROM FUSIONS
Louis Gibbs said:
All three worked for me! Fun stuff, Michael.
September 12th, 2017 08:06
Louis Gibbs said:
All three worked for me! Fun stuff, Michael.
September 12th, 2017 08:06
THREE FROM FUSIONS
dusk arising said:
Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that beetle one is my fav here.
September 12th, 2017 03:13
dusk arising said:
Great stuff... i do like to see light hearted fun stuff in here. Yes that beetle one is my fav here.
September 12th, 2017 03:13
THREE FROM FUSIONS
orchidee said:
A fine write M. It\'s shimilar for me, if I\'ve had sheveral sherries! What, this time of day Orchi?!
September 12th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write M. It\'s shimilar for me, if I\'ve had sheveral sherries! What, this time of day Orchi?!
September 12th, 2017 01:45
THREE FROM FUSIONS
Frank Prem said:
Great fun Michael. Enjoyed reading them.
September 12th, 2017 01:44
Frank Prem said:
Great fun Michael. Enjoyed reading them.
September 12th, 2017 01:44
THREE FROM FUSIONS
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
September 12th, 2017 00:39
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
September 12th, 2017 00:39
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
myself and me said:
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field, the bright color makes it stand out.
\"and though conceding to despair
she probed herself anew.\"
I sense the courage and strength in it.
A great piece. Love the simple line paint. Who ever got it have a good taste.
September 11th, 2017 18:30
myself and me said:
The red wild poppy is one of my favorite flower. It blooms in the field, the bright color makes it stand out.
\"and though conceding to despair
she probed herself anew.\"
I sense the courage and strength in it.
A great piece. Love the simple line paint. Who ever got it have a good taste.
September 11th, 2017 18:30
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are, compelling the reader to share her plight. Good write, Michael!
September 11th, 2017 10:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are, compelling the reader to share her plight. Good write, Michael!
September 11th, 2017 10:28
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful write! I really loved the first stanza! Great read!
September 11th, 2017 10:03
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful write! I really loved the first stanza! Great read!
September 11th, 2017 10:03
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poetry I really loved this , congrats on the drawing
September 11th, 2017 07:59
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poetry I really loved this , congrats on the drawing
September 11th, 2017 07:59
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I absolutely love that first stanza! Great poem.
September 11th, 2017 03:17
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I absolutely love that first stanza! Great poem.
September 11th, 2017 03:17
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In my experience MICHAEL ~ No Sin is too great or too grevious ~ for GOD to forgive AND forget. However we do have to still bear the consequences. If that is a BABY ~ They (there has to a DAD somewhere !) have to face the consequences and the decisions. Thousands WANT to adopt ~ so ABORTION should NEVER be one of them ! Thanks for sharing ~ i apolise for \"HIHORSING\" again ~ BRIAN
September 11th, 2017 02:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In my experience MICHAEL ~ No Sin is too great or too grevious ~ for GOD to forgive AND forget. However we do have to still bear the consequences. If that is a BABY ~ They (there has to a DAD somewhere !) have to face the consequences and the decisions. Thousands WANT to adopt ~ so ABORTION should NEVER be one of them ! Thanks for sharing ~ i apolise for \"HIHORSING\" again ~ BRIAN
September 11th, 2017 02:23
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
dusk arising said:
Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
September 11th, 2017 01:38
dusk arising said:
Anguish or what? Gripping reading, demands rereading.
September 11th, 2017 01:38
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Did it take you 1 hr 11 mins into the day to write it?!
September 11th, 2017 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Did it take you 1 hr 11 mins into the day to write it?!
September 11th, 2017 01:37
SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, her release is out there for her and she will soon find it.
September 11th, 2017 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, her release is out there for her and she will soon find it.
September 11th, 2017 01:33
LIMERICK No 44
Jooles said:
Haven\'t been on for a while and I come back to this....God your poems make me smile....said it before...I\'ll say it again....you make me think of Spike Milligan
September 10th, 2017 17:27
Jooles said:
Haven\'t been on for a while and I come back to this....God your poems make me smile....said it before...I\'ll say it again....you make me think of Spike Milligan
September 10th, 2017 17:27
LIMERICK No 44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My JEWISH friend OBADIAH
Borrowed 500 quid
From his friend JEREMIAH
When poor JERRY died
Everyone cried For the Debt
People were scoffin\'
But OBAD had the neck
Wrote a 500 pound cheque
And then threw it down
On the COFFIN !
Hope you like my LIM ~ thanks for yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My JEWISH friend OBADIAH
Borrowed 500 quid
From his friend JEREMIAH
When poor JERRY died
Everyone cried For the Debt
People were scoffin\'
But OBAD had the neck
Wrote a 500 pound cheque
And then threw it down
On the COFFIN !
Hope you like my LIM ~ thanks for yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 16:18
LIMERICK No 44
myself and me said:
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46
myself and me said:
A good fun Sunday reading. Thank you M.E.
September 10th, 2017 10:46
LIMERICK No 44
dusk arising said:
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his coffin
So beware who u tell
when your feeling unwell
Cos you might be the last one laughin
ha ha ha love a bit of fun.
September 10th, 2017 07:20
dusk arising said:
So they\'d told M.E. it was nothing
But they carried him off in his coffin
So beware who u tell
when your feeling unwell
Cos you might be the last one laughin
ha ha ha love a bit of fun.
September 10th, 2017 07:20
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