Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ETERNAL LINKS
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Michael.

I believe that I have seen that brilliant scribble, or one in the same style, on a previous occasion, it is still very good.

September 4th, 2017 01:23

ETERNAL LINKS
Michael Edwards said:

Aw bless and thanks for saving it - I was going to post another edone but changed my mind at the last moment. Glad I did - common theme for the day.

September 4th, 2017 00:08

DAFFODILS
malubotelho said:

Like Fred said, it is fantastic how you guys can write and count at the same time. I can not. I can barely deposit my words there. Beautiful poem and form Michael.

September 3rd, 2017 22:34

DAFFODILS
myself and me said:

Not only it is a beautiful poem, but also hard to write.
Today, I post the real etheree piece. Welcome to stop by.

September 3rd, 2017 09:16

DAFFODILS
WL Schuett said:

This seems really hard to do , way to go good work

September 3rd, 2017 09:15

DAFFODILS
Fay Slimm. said:

Oooh a challenge of a form methinks and you pen it so well Michael - daffodils throughout eh ? Yours must be an \"edone\" of a garden my friend.

September 3rd, 2017 05:10

DAFFODILS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely EDONE (it should really be called ADD~ONE !) and a lovely TOPIC ~ Daffodils ~ National Flower of Wales and a real harbinger of Spring in England too ! love the shape very HOLLYHOCK ! As a Classical Poet I am so pleased that MPS is becoming A UNIVERSITY of VERSE and we are all learning from each other ~ Thanks Professor ~ Yours BRIAN

September 3rd, 2017 03:54

DAFFODILS
FredPeyer said:

You guys are incredible with all these math oriented poems. Never like math that much, even though I now do engineering work. I have no idea how you do it, and how you do it so well!!!! I just cannot seem to think of words and numbers at the same time!
And, oh, Michael, see that Santita beat you this time! You just gotta get up earlier!

September 3rd, 2017 02:40

DAFFODILS
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Michael, I will have to give it a go.

September 3rd, 2017 01:26

DAFFODILS
dusk arising said:

Clever stuff, but it looks like a christmas tree.

September 3rd, 2017 01:22

DAFFODILS
orchidee said:

Then again, starting at 13 would be extremely difficult!

September 3rd, 2017 01:22

DAFFODILS
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Was you 56 minutes into the day, picking a bunch of those daffodils?
Ooh, I might do one. I could use \'incrementally\' if I got up to 13 letters! Long word, but very difficult to fit in to an edone. Have to work out 1 to 12 first! lol.

September 3rd, 2017 01:21

EBB AND FLOW
myself and me said:

The craft is so cute.
Such a lovely \"EBB AND FLOW\" of love.
Splendid.

September 2nd, 2017 14:04

EBB AND FLOW
FredPeyer said:

This is so beautiful, Michael! Wish I could write like this. Awesome!

September 2nd, 2017 12:40

EBB AND FLOW
Fay Slimm. said:

Words flow so gently in this sensuous poem -- a beautiful read and love the sculptured driftwood too.

September 2nd, 2017 09:49

EBB AND FLOW
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ In my limited experience LOVE does EBB & FLOW (DONNA E MOBILE !) BUT ~ when it does flow it always takes me with it ~ to the very edge of Paradise ! BRIAN

September 2nd, 2017 08:39

EBB AND FLOW
Louis Gibbs said:

A splendid saline salute to love for sure, Michael! I could almost feel the spray.

September 2nd, 2017 08:30

EBB AND FLOW
malubotelho said:

Beautiful sensual poem Michael. A pleasure to read first thing in the morning. It flows magically.

September 2nd, 2017 07:40

EBB AND FLOW
WL Schuett said:

Very lyrical with nice imagery, poem goes well with your sculpture, good work

September 2nd, 2017 06:21

EBB AND FLOW
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, that boat will sail forever.

September 2nd, 2017 04:14

EBB AND FLOW
dusk arising said:

Wow.... \'caressing melancholic shores, the waves sang out in harmony\'... evocative, deep sadness.

September 2nd, 2017 01:59

EBB AND FLOW
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Must I \'organise\' it with me metres and what-not?!

September 2nd, 2017 01:40

EBB AND FLOW
Christina8 said:

This is an amazing poem! A pleasure to read!

September 2nd, 2017 00:14

PYRAMID SELLING
dusk arising said:

It used to be popular u know amongst the nobility in Egypt. Nice one!

September 1st, 2017 19:37

PYRAMID SELLING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD ONE MICHAEL ~ It was lamentable while it lasted ~ lots of Middle Aged People lost a lot of MONEY ~ oddly enough in pursuit of it ! If you tweaked your Etheree it could form a Triangle ~ in Poetry as in other things ~ shape and size ~ DO MATTER ! Yours BRIAN.

September 1st, 2017 17:07

PYRAMID SELLING
sue.evans said:

Very clever!

September 1st, 2017 13:16

PYRAMID SELLING
myself and me said:

Cute duck.
A \"pyramid selling\" in a pyramid shape (sort of).
A nice etheree.

September 1st, 2017 11:04

PYRAMID SELLING
WL Schuett said:

Cool poem got the shape of the message ! Nice duck

September 1st, 2017 06:55

PYRAMID SELLING
Louis Gibbs said:

A lovely ode to a scam, Michael. Any topic is fair game to the poet!

September 1st, 2017 05:55

PYRAMID SELLING
orchidee said:

A fine writing and pic M. Did it take ya all of 9 minutes into the day?!

September 1st, 2017 02:05



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