Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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FredPeyer said:

And the master shows us again how it\'s done! Beautiful drawing too!
And I confirm: This is good!

September 7th, 2017 00:15

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myself and me said:

What are the birds doing? Are they counting syllables or are they trying to discuss about the poems?
Is this another invention?
Love the poems.

September 6th, 2017 17:52

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Mugsdaddy said:

I find this style of writing challenging. You like Santita make it look easy I\'ve made one attempt perhaps I\'ll take another shot. Excellent work nicely tied together.
M

September 6th, 2017 10:18

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WL Schuett said:

What a challenge to write like this good work Michael

September 6th, 2017 07:57

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Fay Slimm. said:

Just love the middle three liner here Michael - so so true is this short statement

September 6th, 2017 05:03

LIMERICK No 42
dusk arising said:

ha ha ha

i\'ve a trick with farts thats new
i save \'em for the check-out queue
for they\'re quiet, no medley
silent but deadly
and my glare blames them on you!

nice one sir!

September 6th, 2017 04:19

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ love No. 2 ~ love anything in GENES

She was BRAZILIAN
She wiggled and her big end
Justified the JEANS !

Pleas check my 822 ~ Thanks BRIAN

September 6th, 2017 02:24

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orchidee said:

Fine writes and pic M. I may do 2 or 3 at once, then have a backlog waiting to post them. Other days none at all. I don\'t plan how many per day. Just depends how things go.

September 6th, 2017 02:02

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good ones Michael, especially the second one.

September 6th, 2017 01:25

LIMERICK No 42
sue.evans said:

😂😂 great limerick!

September 5th, 2017 14:48

LIMERICK No 42
myself and me said:

Ha, ha, ha.
Not only it rose high level, but went far far away. I shall close all the opens now.
The draw is so creative.
By the way, finish the edone.

September 5th, 2017 14:45

LIMERICK No 42
WL Schuett said:

Funny and love the cartoon

September 5th, 2017 06:46

LIMERICK No 42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL
You\'ve mastered the art
Of the \"in a crowd\" FART

Thanks for sharing and thanks
for G & T on the FUSION ~ Please
check B & S Collaboration ~ COLORS

Some of my Best Friends are OSTRICHES !
Your as ever BRIAN

September 5th, 2017 04:28

LIMERICK No 42
FredPeyer said:

Yeah, Michael, hot air tends to go up!
Love your limericks, they make my day (or night as in this case).
And congratulations, you were first again!

September 5th, 2017 02:48

LIMERICK No 42
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Michael.

Clever cartoon.

September 5th, 2017 01:35

LIMERICK No 42
orchidee said:

Argh! Pity those still in the lift, not having reached their floor yet! A fine fun write and pic M.

September 5th, 2017 01:33

LIMERICK No 42
Mugsdaddy said:

That my friend is classic and the gift of laughter I gained from it... Truly genuine. Thank you

September 5th, 2017 00:54

LIMERICK No 42
MaddieJ said:

I laughed! This is whimsical and funny! right up my alley! great write!

September 5th, 2017 00:12

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FredPeyer said:

Michael, not only are you showing us how to count, you are also teaching us how to use the words right and how to cram an awful lot of meaning into a few lines!
Great!

September 4th, 2017 14:06

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myself and me said:

\"endure eternally\", how wonderful will that be. The poem takes my mind.
Are there two vases or two souls in the paint.


September 4th, 2017 14:04

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WL Schuett said:

Fun scribble & another fine poem

September 4th, 2017 07:35

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Doh! I thought it was a Sudoku, or whatever those number puzzles are called. I can\'t do them. They bore me!

September 4th, 2017 01:35

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love Sedokas better than TANKAS because the give an opportunity for a Double Entendre ! Eternal Love (uncommon these days !) but a great Message from the MUSE ! SANTITA and I have collaborated on another FUSION ~ DRINK ! My opening gambit was MILK (including Lait de Mere !) and SANTITA has reposted with Coffee laced with CAFFIENE ! (I knew she was on something !) What is your fave tipple ? Yours BRIAN Love the painting ~ reminded me of CIDER JARS ~ OK I am registered with AA along wit Steve the Sherry ! B.

Yes you should REGISTER EDONE it produce such a sklnny shape ! B.

September 4th, 2017 01:26

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Michael.

I believe that I have seen that brilliant scribble, or one in the same style, on a previous occasion, it is still very good.

September 4th, 2017 01:23

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Michael Edwards said:

Aw bless and thanks for saving it - I was going to post another edone but changed my mind at the last moment. Glad I did - common theme for the day.

September 4th, 2017 00:08

DAFFODILS
malubotelho said:

Like Fred said, it is fantastic how you guys can write and count at the same time. I can not. I can barely deposit my words there. Beautiful poem and form Michael.

September 3rd, 2017 22:34

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myself and me said:

Not only it is a beautiful poem, but also hard to write.
Today, I post the real etheree piece. Welcome to stop by.

September 3rd, 2017 09:16

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WL Schuett said:

This seems really hard to do , way to go good work

September 3rd, 2017 09:15

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Fay Slimm. said:

Oooh a challenge of a form methinks and you pen it so well Michael - daffodils throughout eh ? Yours must be an \"edone\" of a garden my friend.

September 3rd, 2017 05:10

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely EDONE (it should really be called ADD~ONE !) and a lovely TOPIC ~ Daffodils ~ National Flower of Wales and a real harbinger of Spring in England too ! love the shape very HOLLYHOCK ! As a Classical Poet I am so pleased that MPS is becoming A UNIVERSITY of VERSE and we are all learning from each other ~ Thanks Professor ~ Yours BRIAN

September 3rd, 2017 03:54



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