Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A GENTLE LAND
Louis Gibbs said:
Mathematic perfection this one. Michael. Very neatly presented.
October 8th, 2017 16:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Mathematic perfection this one. Michael. Very neatly presented.
October 8th, 2017 16:32
A GENTLE LAND
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds serene,a peaceful way of life
October 8th, 2017 12:20
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds serene,a peaceful way of life
October 8th, 2017 12:20
A GENTLE LAND
malubotelho said:
A beautiful poem and I would love to live in that land. Your poem flows adorable.
October 8th, 2017 10:19
malubotelho said:
A beautiful poem and I would love to live in that land. Your poem flows adorable.
October 8th, 2017 10:19
A GENTLE LAND
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live there.A great mastery of the format you chose, beautiful words to fill the lines, and a dreamy sense of peace and harmony. A great write Michael - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 10:14
MendedFences27 said:
Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live there.A great mastery of the format you chose, beautiful words to fill the lines, and a dreamy sense of peace and harmony. A great write Michael - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 10:14
A GENTLE LAND
Christina8 said:
A really good descriptive swap quatrain. Beautiful scenery! Lovely.
October 8th, 2017 08:35
Christina8 said:
A really good descriptive swap quatrain. Beautiful scenery! Lovely.
October 8th, 2017 08:35
A GENTLE LAND
DesertWords said:
An excellent example of form and a lovely portrait. Thank you.
October 8th, 2017 08:14
DesertWords said:
An excellent example of form and a lovely portrait. Thank you.
October 8th, 2017 08:14
A GENTLE LAND
FredPeyer said:
You really do make it look easy, Michael. \'And then fill in the two in the middle\'! You gotta have that imagination and brain of yours to do that!
October 8th, 2017 04:03
FredPeyer said:
You really do make it look easy, Michael. \'And then fill in the two in the middle\'! You gotta have that imagination and brain of yours to do that!
October 8th, 2017 04:03
A GENTLE LAND
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with good rhyme and flow. Loved this great swap quatrain Michael.
October 8th, 2017 02:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with good rhyme and flow. Loved this great swap quatrain Michael.
October 8th, 2017 02:42
A GENTLE LAND
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful place of peace in which to exist.
October 8th, 2017 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful place of peace in which to exist.
October 8th, 2017 01:36
A GENTLE LAND
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. If I tried something like this I doubt I would waffle on to 7 or 8 verses as I do sometimes. In some places any hymn over, say, 4 verses is too long!
October 8th, 2017 01:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. If I tried something like this I doubt I would waffle on to 7 or 8 verses as I do sometimes. In some places any hymn over, say, 4 verses is too long!
October 8th, 2017 01:21
KIPPERED
MendedFences27 said:
Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem on the other hand goes well with morning coffee. A chuckle and a smile to begin the day. Loved your little witty ditty of a flying fish squished for frying. Oh well, have a nice breakfast, in fact have lots of them. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 16:10
MendedFences27 said:
Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem on the other hand goes well with morning coffee. A chuckle and a smile to begin the day. Loved your little witty ditty of a flying fish squished for frying. Oh well, have a nice breakfast, in fact have lots of them. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 16:10
KIPPERED
Louis Gibbs said:
I guess the moral here is; Don\'t change your mind about flying in mid flight? Perhaps this one is too deep for me. Cute poem, Michael!
October 7th, 2017 11:45
Louis Gibbs said:
I guess the moral here is; Don\'t change your mind about flying in mid flight? Perhaps this one is too deep for me. Cute poem, Michael!
October 7th, 2017 11:45
KIPPERED
Fay Slimm. said:
B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love the wit in this little verse and of course the artwork to accent the wording. Great stuff Michael.
October 7th, 2017 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love the wit in this little verse and of course the artwork to accent the wording. Great stuff Michael.
October 7th, 2017 11:38
KIPPERED
malubotelho said:
I was going to say this was a cruel story but beggin to laugh when I read Dusk comment about he being hooked after being drunk. That was funny. Thanks for the laugh 😂 great write as always Michael
October 7th, 2017 10:10
malubotelho said:
I was going to say this was a cruel story but beggin to laugh when I read Dusk comment about he being hooked after being drunk. That was funny. Thanks for the laugh 😂 great write as always Michael
October 7th, 2017 10:10
KIPPERED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great fun poem MICHAEL ~ a dearth of these on MPS ~ too much gloom & doom et poemes noires ! Thanks BRIAN. I will be off line for a week so will miss your odd odes B.
October 7th, 2017 08:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great fun poem MICHAEL ~ a dearth of these on MPS ~ too much gloom & doom et poemes noires ! Thanks BRIAN. I will be off line for a week so will miss your odd odes B.
October 7th, 2017 08:34
KIPPERED
FredPeyer said:
While I love your poem, Michael, that fish thing for breakfast must be an English thing. But at least now I know what a kipper is!
October 7th, 2017 02:54
FredPeyer said:
While I love your poem, Michael, that fish thing for breakfast must be an English thing. But at least now I know what a kipper is!
October 7th, 2017 02:54
KIPPERED
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Michael. But last time I had kippers I felt woozy. Hardly had them since!
October 7th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Michael. But last time I had kippers I felt woozy. Hardly had them since!
October 7th, 2017 01:44
KIPPERED
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the finest meals for breakfast are kippers.
Mind you you can hardly get them fresh as they need to relax first while they smoke.
Good fun write Michael, thank you for the morning laugh, your day has been a success.
October 7th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the finest meals for breakfast are kippers.
Mind you you can hardly get them fresh as they need to relax first while they smoke.
Good fun write Michael, thank you for the morning laugh, your day has been a success.
October 7th, 2017 01:13
KIPPERED
dusk arising said:
Oh my... This reminds me of being picked up by a certain lady after a heavy night on the vino. I was definately flying that night, but ended up being fried.
October 7th, 2017 00:04
dusk arising said:
Oh my... This reminds me of being picked up by a certain lady after a heavy night on the vino. I was definately flying that night, but ended up being fried.
October 7th, 2017 00:04
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I do like version 2 better than version 1 based solely on gut feeling. There is no obvious reason for me why one should be better than the other one, so sometimes we just have to go with our instinct.
And you are a lucky man to have so many worthwile objects to paint right in your neighborhood. Sometimes I do miss the history aspect of Europe.
October 6th, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I do like version 2 better than version 1 based solely on gut feeling. There is no obvious reason for me why one should be better than the other one, so sometimes we just have to go with our instinct.
And you are a lucky man to have so many worthwile objects to paint right in your neighborhood. Sometimes I do miss the history aspect of Europe.
October 6th, 2017 11:24
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
malubotelho said:
Your poem is great but your paint is yummy. Love this. So soothing. Makes me want to paint. Never tried watercolor.
October 6th, 2017 10:35
malubotelho said:
Your poem is great but your paint is yummy. Love this. So soothing. Makes me want to paint. Never tried watercolor.
October 6th, 2017 10:35
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
lasergraph said:
I am having a hard time deciding on whether I like this one or the first one the best. Either way, great write.
October 6th, 2017 09:31
lasergraph said:
I am having a hard time deciding on whether I like this one or the first one the best. Either way, great write.
October 6th, 2017 09:31
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1)
lasergraph said:
Even my spirit has come alive after this read. Great write.
October 6th, 2017 09:30
lasergraph said:
Even my spirit has come alive after this read. Great write.
October 6th, 2017 09:30
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
Christina8 said:
This is a very good poem. Have a good break--may you become inspired! I love the watercolor!
October 6th, 2017 07:03
Christina8 said:
This is a very good poem. Have a good break--may you become inspired! I love the watercolor!
October 6th, 2017 07:03
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
WL Schuett said:
The variation is just as good , Have a good break I do not even try to put out a poem a day and don\'t know how you can day after day ....
October 6th, 2017 06:29
WL Schuett said:
The variation is just as good , Have a good break I do not even try to put out a poem a day and don\'t know how you can day after day ....
October 6th, 2017 06:29
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good write Michael, the clay may be moved by the Spirit.
October 6th, 2017 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good write Michael, the clay may be moved by the Spirit.
October 6th, 2017 02:11
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
I love to read this one aloud Michael - top drawer writing and - - oooooooh that watercolour makes my mouth water. Great talent.
October 6th, 2017 01:44
Fay Slimm. said:
I love to read this one aloud Michael - top drawer writing and - - oooooooh that watercolour makes my mouth water. Great talent.
October 6th, 2017 01:44
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
orchidee said:
They rising from the dead? Well, that\'s supernatural. I don\'t mean \'undead\' or zombies. My aim is to snuff out Halloween! heehee.
October 6th, 2017 01:37
orchidee said:
They rising from the dead? Well, that\'s supernatural. I don\'t mean \'undead\' or zombies. My aim is to snuff out Halloween! heehee.
October 6th, 2017 01:37
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1)
FredPeyer said:
I think you wrote a poem here that could take up pages upon pages of comments and comments on comments! A sure sign of an excellent poem! And as so many of the other readers, I do like the last two lines. Am looking forward to your version 2.
October 6th, 2017 00:16
FredPeyer said:
I think you wrote a poem here that could take up pages upon pages of comments and comments on comments! A sure sign of an excellent poem! And as so many of the other readers, I do like the last two lines. Am looking forward to your version 2.
October 6th, 2017 00:16
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2)
Louis Gibbs said:
The undead are stirring, marking the time of a new beginning. Sounds about right to me, this write. A thought provoking piece, Michael!
October 6th, 2017 00:13
Louis Gibbs said:
The undead are stirring, marking the time of a new beginning. Sounds about right to me, this write. A thought provoking piece, Michael!
October 6th, 2017 00:13
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