Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SOME MORE ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:

Really like all of them Michael, and I can see why that painting is hanging in your house!

August 26th, 2017 03:40

SOME MORE ONE LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

He met Her AUSGANG ~ She met Him INGANG ~ a Meeting of Fatal Love !

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Nothing like pithy ONE LINERS to kick start a SUNNY SATURDAY ! Love the ABSTRACT you saved for yourself ! \"Raining in my Parade !\" Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ Thanks BRIAN

August 26th, 2017 02:54

SOME MORE ONE LINERS
orchidee said:

Good writes and pic M. Ohh, I dunno if it\'s an aphor-wotsit or what it is. I wouldn\'t know in me haze of sherry-drinking! heehee.

August 26th, 2017 01:51

SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Goldfinch60 said:

These are very good one liners Michael. I especially like 3 and 6.

I like the painting as well.

August 26th, 2017 00:54

SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Adam Shirley said:

So beautiful it touched me, thank you for this. Well done Michael

August 26th, 2017 00:27

SOME MORE ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:

These one liners and aphorisms are brilliant! Love it! Do not know which is my fav. Great painting!

August 26th, 2017 00:11

PAST DREAMS
myself and me said:

What a coincidence. \"Short\" for Friday.
Far beyond perfect.

August 25th, 2017 11:36

PAST DREAMS
malubotelho said:

Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.

August 25th, 2017 10:29

PAST DREAMS
ShannonXx said:

Short and sweet! loved it

August 25th, 2017 10:25

PAST DREAMS
WL Schuett said:

Well done

August 25th, 2017 08:46

PAST DREAMS
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.

August 25th, 2017 01:52

PAST DREAMS
FredPeyer said:

The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)

August 25th, 2017 01:44

PAST DREAMS
Christina8 said:

Very well written Senryu! Enjoyed it!

August 25th, 2017 01:36

PAST DREAMS
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good Senryu Michael,.

Love the picture.

August 25th, 2017 01:21

THE LETTER
myself and me said:

Hi, Early bird,

What happened to her?
I really want to know what she will write? Please let me know tomorrow.

August 24th, 2017 14:32

THE LETTER
dusk arising said:

This feels like mindfulness. My imagination savoured each new item as you created them. I was left wondering the letters content. Truly excellent, enthralling and entertaining.

August 24th, 2017 11:07

THE LETTER
WL Schuett said:

High art well done

August 24th, 2017 10:14

THE LETTER
malubotelho said:

Wow! Michael, this is awesome. You surpassed yourself with this one. And the painting is so beautiful. I love it 😍

August 24th, 2017 08:40

THE LETTER
Louis Gibbs said:

An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more? This one nails it, Michael!

August 24th, 2017 08:07

THE LETTER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the 822 format ~ the cadence in the longer line (8) adds power & poignancy to abruptness of the 2 x 2 lines. Again this form underlines the importance of basing rhythm on syllabus count ! \"The moving hand doth write .......! \" is always an excellent theme for an excellent Poem. Love dendritic painting and (as your title suggests) it always branches out ! Yours BRIAN Please visit my Pyramid ~ Thanks B.

August 24th, 2017 04:39

THE LETTER
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic again M. Did it take her 14 minutes into the day to write the letter, then you wrote this poem?! heehee.

August 24th, 2017 01:34

THE LETTER
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautifully touching write Michael.

Great picture.

August 24th, 2017 00:59

THE LETTER
FredPeyer said:

Michael, you have the gift to bring a scene to life with only a few words. I can see that woman, I can see the room, and I can feel the hurt and the hope.

August 24th, 2017 00:26

FRESHLY COOKED
WL Schuett said:

Cool didn\'t know there were so many kinds of poems each day I seem to learn about a different form anyway I enjoyed it and the art !

August 23rd, 2017 13:32

FRESHLY COOKED
Tony36 said:

Tasty write

August 23rd, 2017 11:29

FRESHLY COOKED
myself and me said:

Hey, lucky soul. Freshly cooked lamb Asian way. Will try this recipe someday.
Did you paint the art with the sauce. Looks so spicy.
A true joy for eye and stomach.

August 23rd, 2017 10:42

JOURNEY\'S END
WL Schuett said:

Fine piece of writing enjoyed it very much ,
Painting is superb

August 23rd, 2017 09:23

FRESHLY COOKED
malubotelho said:

Delicious form and food. It is really like a pot of goodness. Luckily I\'m not hungry now. Just had breakfast. Awesome poem Michael.

August 23rd, 2017 08:47

FRESHLY COOKED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I admire the art both visually and in the form...
Bravo again

August 23rd, 2017 04:08

FRESHLY COOKED
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Whether it\'s oriander or coriander, or whatever hot spice it is, I can\'t have it. Aww! I see the \'c\'. lol.

August 23rd, 2017 01:46



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