Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FIRST LOVE
dusk arising said:
Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love stakes. I bet most of us men were too confused with our approaching adulthood and machismo to be sweetly romantic at such tender years. That stuff arrived later for me. I enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece.
September 23rd, 2017 07:55
dusk arising said:
Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love stakes. I bet most of us men were too confused with our approaching adulthood and machismo to be sweetly romantic at such tender years. That stuff arrived later for me. I enjoyed reading this beautifully written piece.
September 23rd, 2017 07:55
FIRST LOVE
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poem of innocence in that first kiss , becoming a man ....
September 23rd, 2017 06:40
WL Schuett said:
Wonderful poem of innocence in that first kiss , becoming a man ....
September 23rd, 2017 06:40
FIRST LOVE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
If you can claim
Her current bun
You too will
Be a MAN my SON !
Thanks for caring & sharing Michael lovely Poem
and a tantilising SILLY WET !
Please check \"Say it with Flowers\"
Yours BRIAN
September 23rd, 2017 05:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
If you can claim
Her current bun
You too will
Be a MAN my SON !
Thanks for caring & sharing Michael lovely Poem
and a tantilising SILLY WET !
Please check \"Say it with Flowers\"
Yours BRIAN
September 23rd, 2017 05:11
FIRST LOVE
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful account of coming of age.
Great write.
Mugsdaddy
September 23rd, 2017 04:52
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful account of coming of age.
Great write.
Mugsdaddy
September 23rd, 2017 04:52
FIRST LOVE
Fay Slimm. said:
Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - lovely read - we must think in tandem as I posted a piece of work yesterday on the same subject and with the same title. -- ha ha Great minds etc eh ?
September 23rd, 2017 02:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - lovely read - we must think in tandem as I posted a piece of work yesterday on the same subject and with the same title. -- ha ha Great minds etc eh ?
September 23rd, 2017 02:34
FIRST LOVE
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh that\'s me that is - me trembling hand, in me sheltered life. Was he a mouse before, and not a man?! heehee.
September 23rd, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh that\'s me that is - me trembling hand, in me sheltered life. Was he a mouse before, and not a man?! heehee.
September 23rd, 2017 01:44
RING RING
dusk arising said:
There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah a hole!
September 22nd, 2017 15:23
dusk arising said:
There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah a hole!
September 22nd, 2017 15:23
RING RING
Christina8 said:
Thanks for the giggle this morning! LOL No better writing material than true life! :-)
September 22nd, 2017 09:25
Christina8 said:
Thanks for the giggle this morning! LOL No better writing material than true life! :-)
September 22nd, 2017 09:25
RING RING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
KNOCK KNOCK ~ Who\'s There ?
RIGOR ~ RIGOR WHO ?
RIGOR MORTIS ~ May I set in !
Thanks for sharing ~ Alas there are an infinite number of RING RING & KNOCK KNOCK Jokes ~ you may have started a landslide ! BRIAN
Please check my OXYMORONS ~ Thanks B.
September 22nd, 2017 02:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
KNOCK KNOCK ~ Who\'s There ?
RIGOR ~ RIGOR WHO ?
RIGOR MORTIS ~ May I set in !
Thanks for sharing ~ Alas there are an infinite number of RING RING & KNOCK KNOCK Jokes ~ you may have started a landslide ! BRIAN
Please check my OXYMORONS ~ Thanks B.
September 22nd, 2017 02:39
RING RING
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life happening Michael - -great flow to the chosen metre - have read it twice already and laughed at the humour of that unexpected Ring .
September 22nd, 2017 02:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life happening Michael - -great flow to the chosen metre - have read it twice already and laughed at the humour of that unexpected Ring .
September 22nd, 2017 02:07
RING RING
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M. You laughing at your own jokes? Well, we have to, in case no one else does! heehee.
September 22nd, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write M. You laughing at your own jokes? Well, we have to, in case no one else does! heehee.
September 22nd, 2017 01:44
RING RING
FredPeyer said:
I just love unintentional funny stories and this one had me smiling all the way!
September 22nd, 2017 01:07
FredPeyer said:
I just love unintentional funny stories and this one had me smiling all the way!
September 22nd, 2017 01:07
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
myself and me said:
Love the way you describe politician. Deep to the root.
September 21st, 2017 15:03
myself and me said:
Love the way you describe politician. Deep to the root.
September 21st, 2017 15:03
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
malubotelho said:
I wish things would change in politics. The way it is now make me wants to turn off the tv. Or better. Retire it for good. Nice write Michael. A sore subject for sure.
September 21st, 2017 09:16
malubotelho said:
I wish things would change in politics. The way it is now make me wants to turn off the tv. Or better. Retire it for good. Nice write Michael. A sore subject for sure.
September 21st, 2017 09:16
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
WL Schuett said:
Nicely captured could be a politician nearly anywhere in any time....
September 21st, 2017 09:10
WL Schuett said:
Nicely captured could be a politician nearly anywhere in any time....
September 21st, 2017 09:10
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
Louis Gibbs said:
This poem brought back a memory from a time, late sixties I believe, when on a visit to Madrid I watched Francisco Franco address a large crowd from the steps of a building. They were cheering; \"Franco, Franco!\". He was a politician, indeed!
Your poem captures a politician\'s nature well, Michael.
September 21st, 2017 08:23
Louis Gibbs said:
This poem brought back a memory from a time, late sixties I believe, when on a visit to Madrid I watched Francisco Franco address a large crowd from the steps of a building. They were cheering; \"Franco, Franco!\". He was a politician, indeed!
Your poem captures a politician\'s nature well, Michael.
September 21st, 2017 08:23
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
Christina8 said:
A very fine write! I don\'t know much about the green party in the UK but I did see goldfinchs comment and agree! Seriously, well worded poem.
September 21st, 2017 06:24
Christina8 said:
A very fine write! I don\'t know much about the green party in the UK but I did see goldfinchs comment and agree! Seriously, well worded poem.
September 21st, 2017 06:24
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LONG LIVE THE GREEN PARTY ~ THE ONLY PARTY WORTH VOTING FOR ! My expriences with MPS has always been positive ~ they do work hard (building DUCK ISLANDS !) and always answer my letters and takle injustices ! I have dined at the HOP several times and watched OBAMA\'S Inaugurarion Speech in the Members TV Room with Tony Benn etc etc. In my book the majority are Honorable Gentlemen & Ladies and deserve our support in and out of the House. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check Venuus ~ Mars ~ Sun & Moon ~ Thanks ~ C & B
September 21st, 2017 04:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LONG LIVE THE GREEN PARTY ~ THE ONLY PARTY WORTH VOTING FOR ! My expriences with MPS has always been positive ~ they do work hard (building DUCK ISLANDS !) and always answer my letters and takle injustices ! I have dined at the HOP several times and watched OBAMA\'S Inaugurarion Speech in the Members TV Room with Tony Benn etc etc. In my book the majority are Honorable Gentlemen & Ladies and deserve our support in and out of the House. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check Venuus ~ Mars ~ Sun & Moon ~ Thanks ~ C & B
September 21st, 2017 04:46
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Michael, and I do like the subject matter, a subject that is not written about too often (maybe with the exception of Outback). He\'ll be a politician yet, and doesn\'t sound like a villain yet!
September 21st, 2017 02:55
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Michael, and I do like the subject matter, a subject that is not written about too often (maybe with the exception of Outback). He\'ll be a politician yet, and doesn\'t sound like a villain yet!
September 21st, 2017 02:55
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
orchidee said:
A fine write. I thought he may be in a pet show, with those rosettes that are awarded!
September 21st, 2017 01:26
orchidee said:
A fine write. I thought he may be in a pet show, with those rosettes that are awarded!
September 21st, 2017 01:26
HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET
Goldfinch60 said:
\"How do you know when a politician\'s lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
September 21st, 2017 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
\"How do you know when a politician\'s lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
September 21st, 2017 01:06
MORE MONOSTICHS
Louis Gibbs said:
What a great pick-up line that last one would make! Love it, Michael.
September 20th, 2017 14:43
Louis Gibbs said:
What a great pick-up line that last one would make! Love it, Michael.
September 20th, 2017 14:43
MORE MONOSTICHS
WL Schuett said:
This was a fun stop by got to read some poetry and learn about a way to make a print , good stuff
September 20th, 2017 13:25
WL Schuett said:
This was a fun stop by got to read some poetry and learn about a way to make a print , good stuff
September 20th, 2017 13:25
MORE MONOSTICHS
Christina8 said:
Oh I loved the last line! But they are all very good. I also read how you made the print 1 of 1. Very interesting! Always a joy to stop by your page!
September 20th, 2017 10:57
Christina8 said:
Oh I loved the last line! But they are all very good. I also read how you made the print 1 of 1. Very interesting! Always a joy to stop by your page!
September 20th, 2017 10:57
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