Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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orchidee said:
Ooh, don\'t strike about the whole poem! lol. Cos I comes along to everyone\'s poems and strikes out anything remotely \'hot\'. It saves me many swoons! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 07:59
orchidee said:
Ooh, don\'t strike about the whole poem! lol. Cos I comes along to everyone\'s poems and strikes out anything remotely \'hot\'. It saves me many swoons! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 07:59
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Proverbs a Goldfield but also a Minefield ! Remind me of the Spaniards in Bilbao stuck in a revolving door !
\"Too many Basques in one Exit !\"
Yours are all very droll but English humour always confuses Americans ! Love DENDRITES my fave in Nature is Dendritic Elemental Copper from ZIMBABWE ! ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 04:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Proverbs a Goldfield but also a Minefield ! Remind me of the Spaniards in Bilbao stuck in a revolving door !
\"Too many Basques in one Exit !\"
Yours are all very droll but English humour always confuses Americans ! Love DENDRITES my fave in Nature is Dendritic Elemental Copper from ZIMBABWE ! ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 04:30
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FredPeyer said:
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many times, only I stroke out the whole thing!
Does the painting have anything to do with the Rorschach test?
August 22nd, 2017 04:00
FredPeyer said:
No way are you the first, Michael. I wrote strike-out couplets many, many times, only I stroke out the whole thing!
Does the painting have anything to do with the Rorschach test?
August 22nd, 2017 04:00
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sue.evans said:
Love playing with words and language - you can get lost in the practice as I feel you did when writing this.
August 22nd, 2017 03:02
sue.evans said:
Love playing with words and language - you can get lost in the practice as I feel you did when writing this.
August 22nd, 2017 03:02
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Frank Prem said:
As long as the heart of the poem is still beating M. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 02:52
Frank Prem said:
As long as the heart of the poem is still beating M. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 02:52
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I knew there must be some use for the Strike-out function. I couldn\'t understand it. We can\'t do professional reports, etc, with loads of bits crossed out!
August 22nd, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. I knew there must be some use for the Strike-out function. I couldn\'t understand it. We can\'t do professional reports, etc, with loads of bits crossed out!
August 22nd, 2017 01:52
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Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, you do realise that in the USA if you have two many strike outs you become out.
August 22nd, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, you do realise that in the USA if you have two many strike outs you become out.
August 22nd, 2017 01:28
JOURNEY\'S END
FredPeyer said:
Michael you are such an accomplished writer AND painter! Would not be surprised if you also play and write music, act, and dance!
August 21st, 2017 15:59
FredPeyer said:
Michael you are such an accomplished writer AND painter! Would not be surprised if you also play and write music, act, and dance!
August 21st, 2017 15:59
JOURNEY\'S END
myself and me said:
Hi, M.E., You are the No.1 again. No matter what kind of Journey he had, he knew, at the end of it, there is a sweet home waiting for him.
Isn\'t this is the journey we are all dreaming for.
Wonderful journey with a heart-warming end.
August 21st, 2017 15:22
myself and me said:
Hi, M.E., You are the No.1 again. No matter what kind of Journey he had, he knew, at the end of it, there is a sweet home waiting for him.
Isn\'t this is the journey we are all dreaming for.
Wonderful journey with a heart-warming end.
August 21st, 2017 15:22
ALONE
FredPeyer said:
That abstract and that poem are one of a kind. Print it onto the picture and you would have an incredible poster!
August 21st, 2017 15:13
FredPeyer said:
That abstract and that poem are one of a kind. Print it onto the picture and you would have an incredible poster!
August 21st, 2017 15:13
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burning-embers said:
LOved my journey through your words here sir. Excellent writing.
August 21st, 2017 11:25
burning-embers said:
LOved my journey through your words here sir. Excellent writing.
August 21st, 2017 11:25
JOURNEY\'S END
malubotelho said:
Beautiful images painted here with your words. So much inspiration coming from your heart. So lovely words you used that one get captured by your writing.
August 21st, 2017 09:09
malubotelho said:
Beautiful images painted here with your words. So much inspiration coming from your heart. So lovely words you used that one get captured by your writing.
August 21st, 2017 09:09
JOURNEY\'S END
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we get too many HYSTERICAL Poems on MPS nice to get a HISTORICAL one ! Blank Verse ~ Perfect Meter~ delicious to read and recite ! Loved the abstract ~ I discern the Cottage and the Horse ! Yours BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 08:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ we get too many HYSTERICAL Poems on MPS nice to get a HISTORICAL one ! Blank Verse ~ Perfect Meter~ delicious to read and recite ! Loved the abstract ~ I discern the Cottage and the Horse ! Yours BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 08:29
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Louis Gibbs said:
An intriguing picture you paint for us this morning, or two pictures I should say. I thoroughly enjoyed both, Michael!
August 21st, 2017 06:55
Louis Gibbs said:
An intriguing picture you paint for us this morning, or two pictures I should say. I thoroughly enjoyed both, Michael!
August 21st, 2017 06:55
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Fay Slimm. said:
Enjoyed both the tale of welcome homecoming and an abstract full of the same clever mystery.
August 21st, 2017 05:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Enjoyed both the tale of welcome homecoming and an abstract full of the same clever mystery.
August 21st, 2017 05:06
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Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write Michael, I was going across those cobbles.
Yet another good abstract.
August 21st, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write Michael, I was going across those cobbles.
Yet another good abstract.
August 21st, 2017 01:28
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. He\'s ending his journey as the (UK) day is starting! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 01:24
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. He\'s ending his journey as the (UK) day is starting! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 01:24
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Frank Prem said:
That\'s a very wild eyed accompanying picture that suits the gallop well, Michael.
August 21st, 2017 00:56
Frank Prem said:
That\'s a very wild eyed accompanying picture that suits the gallop well, Michael.
August 21st, 2017 00:56
ALONE
myself and me said:
Blue paint for the reclusions river, blue poem for the lonely soul.
What a blue piece, sink my heart.
August 20th, 2017 22:45
myself and me said:
Blue paint for the reclusions river, blue poem for the lonely soul.
What a blue piece, sink my heart.
August 20th, 2017 22:45
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There... is beauty in sadness Michael.
\\there it is.
August 20th, 2017 12:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
There... is beauty in sadness Michael.
\\there it is.
August 20th, 2017 12:50
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malubotelho said:
Sad but soft as this Sunday. I love your blue abstract. My favorite color.
August 20th, 2017 12:38
malubotelho said:
Sad but soft as this Sunday. I love your blue abstract. My favorite color.
August 20th, 2017 12:38
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Fay Slimm. said:
Even the colour of the abstract evokes pathos and the slow read of your words adds to the feel of deep aloneness - - sad but appealing.
August 20th, 2017 07:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Even the colour of the abstract evokes pathos and the slow read of your words adds to the feel of deep aloneness - - sad but appealing.
August 20th, 2017 07:12
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnaks MICHAEL ~ Food for thought ! Love the MELANCHOLY nature of the abstract: Blue ~ White ~ Black emphasised by the absence of YELLOW (Joy) and RED (Passion). The poem perfectly complements the ANGST in the Poem ~BRIAN Please check my \'Poem for Sunday\' Thanks B.
August 20th, 2017 03:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnaks MICHAEL ~ Food for thought ! Love the MELANCHOLY nature of the abstract: Blue ~ White ~ Black emphasised by the absence of YELLOW (Joy) and RED (Passion). The poem perfectly complements the ANGST in the Poem ~BRIAN Please check my \'Poem for Sunday\' Thanks B.
August 20th, 2017 03:39
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Michael. The words and the Abstract certainly complement each other.
August 20th, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Michael. The words and the Abstract certainly complement each other.
August 20th, 2017 00:54
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Frank Prem said:
Death of a child? Certainly a sadness-tinged piece, M.
August 20th, 2017 00:52
Frank Prem said:
Death of a child? Certainly a sadness-tinged piece, M.
August 20th, 2017 00:52
BENEATH A WANING MOON
myself and me said:
Did you create this format? Can\'t believe it, could never get it done. You have a brilliant way to put color together.
August 19th, 2017 19:19
myself and me said:
Did you create this format? Can\'t believe it, could never get it done. You have a brilliant way to put color together.
August 19th, 2017 19:19
BENEATH A WANING MOON
Nicholas Browning said:
I like the simplicity. The way you connect the dots is unique in a sense. Well done.
August 19th, 2017 12:07
Nicholas Browning said:
I like the simplicity. The way you connect the dots is unique in a sense. Well done.
August 19th, 2017 12:07
BENEATH A WANING MOON
malubotelho said:
Great explanatory writing Michael. Great poem too.
August 19th, 2017 07:57
malubotelho said:
Great explanatory writing Michael. Great poem too.
August 19th, 2017 07:57
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