Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
CLOSE OF DAY
myself and me said:
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01
myself and me said:
It takes me back to the small village I was born, so peaceful.
August 13th, 2017 21:01
CLOSE OF DAY
malubotelho said:
Thanks for the lesson about writing it. I have a lot to learn and am up to it. Beautiful writing.
August 13th, 2017 19:49
malubotelho said:
Thanks for the lesson about writing it. I have a lot to learn and am up to it. Beautiful writing.
August 13th, 2017 19:49
CLOSE OF DAY
Jooles said:
Brilliant and another lesson on poems learned. ..love it 😊
August 13th, 2017 13:20
Jooles said:
Brilliant and another lesson on poems learned. ..love it 😊
August 13th, 2017 13:20
CLOSE OF DAY
rrodriguez said:
Excellent image... I do like the smell of burning wood in the mountains of Puerto Rico. Loved it. Let me take a whack at it.
August 13th, 2017 11:18
rrodriguez said:
Excellent image... I do like the smell of burning wood in the mountains of Puerto Rico. Loved it. Let me take a whack at it.
August 13th, 2017 11:18
CLOSE OF DAY
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Mike, I AM impressed. Short, yet sweet and directly to the point! I like that. It doesn\'t have to be this long, drawn out type of poem. I like your style, sense of awareness and, nicely done!!!
August 13th, 2017 04:55
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Mike, I AM impressed. Short, yet sweet and directly to the point! I like that. It doesn\'t have to be this long, drawn out type of poem. I like your style, sense of awareness and, nicely done!!!
August 13th, 2017 04:55
CLOSE OF DAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Have you smelt wood smoke at twilight
Who hath heard the birch log burning
Who is quick to read the noises of the night ?
Let him follow with the ohers
Where the Young Mens feet are turning
To the Camps of known desire
And proved delight !
More Arizona ~ than rural Leicestershire Thanks for sharing
Great SEPTOLETIC structure ~ Love classical forms !
Yours BRIAN
August 13th, 2017 04:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Have you smelt wood smoke at twilight
Who hath heard the birch log burning
Who is quick to read the noises of the night ?
Let him follow with the ohers
Where the Young Mens feet are turning
To the Camps of known desire
And proved delight !
More Arizona ~ than rural Leicestershire Thanks for sharing
Great SEPTOLETIC structure ~ Love classical forms !
Yours BRIAN
August 13th, 2017 04:14
CLOSE OF DAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13
CLOSE OF DAY
orchidee said:
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at the START of the day!
August 13th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at the START of the day!
August 13th, 2017 01:45
CLOSE OF DAY
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget, that 0.00 time is 7pm Saturday here in Hawaii.
Great septolet! Love how you wrote about the smoke in the air!
August 13th, 2017 00:44
FredPeyer said:
Michael, I just posted mine. Figured I let you be first. Don\'t forget, that 0.00 time is 7pm Saturday here in Hawaii.
Great septolet! Love how you wrote about the smoke in the air!
August 13th, 2017 00:44
LANTURNE 2
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
August 12th, 2017 17:35
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem and illustration tintillate the senses...Well done!
August 12th, 2017 17:35
LANTURNE 2
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this brings back lots of memories! And this time the lantern shape looks great!
August 12th, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful Lanterne, Michael. Grew up in a small farm village, and this brings back lots of memories! And this time the lantern shape looks great!
August 12th, 2017 11:31
LANTURNE 2
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10
LANTURNE 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ Oh YES I remember it well ! The smell if the HAY and the scent of HAY~LEY the Farmer\'s Nubile Daughter !
She was only the Farmers Daughter
Doin\' what she didn\'t oughter
In the Hay @ half past three
Doin\' what comes naturally !
Love the Cotswolds Pen \'n Ink
Yours BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 02:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ Oh YES I remember it well ! The smell if the HAY and the scent of HAY~LEY the Farmer\'s Nubile Daughter !
She was only the Farmers Daughter
Doin\' what she didn\'t oughter
In the Hay @ half past three
Doin\' what comes naturally !
Love the Cotswolds Pen \'n Ink
Yours BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 02:05
A LANTURNE
malubotelho said:
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
August 11th, 2017 17:07
malubotelho said:
This is awesome. Very nice writing. Enjoy reading.
August 11th, 2017 17:07
A LANTURNE
FredPeyer said:
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
August 11th, 2017 11:49
FredPeyer said:
You got the syllables right, it does look like a lantern (kind of), and I love the words!
August 11th, 2017 11:49
A LANTURNE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MICHAEL only Numero Due today ~ oversleep ? Nice pen & ink ~ Itallia ? All good poetry is governed by rhythm (syllabic) not rhyme and 12341 has a nice crisp lilt to it and 11 syllables are easy to assimilate (understand even) @ 7 in the morning ! Love the cycle of the poem ~ Thanks for PENNING ~ please sample my City Girls clothed invitingly in SENRYU SARONGS ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:11
A LANTURNE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that\'s late! lol.
August 11th, 2017 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh, that\'s late! lol.
August 11th, 2017 01:59
A LANTURNE
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very close to a FIBS poem where the syllables go 1,1,2,3,5,8,13. Good write.
August 11th, 2017 00:36
EMERGING
WriteBeLight said:
Brings up a lot of images of a beautiful time. Thanks Michael.
August 10th, 2017 12:10
WriteBeLight said:
Brings up a lot of images of a beautiful time. Thanks Michael.
August 10th, 2017 12:10
EMERGING
malubotelho said:
Another lovely written scene that left a trace on my heart. So beautiful. Do you have a painting with the couple coming out from the trees? I would love to see it.
August 10th, 2017 09:42
malubotelho said:
Another lovely written scene that left a trace on my heart. So beautiful. Do you have a painting with the couple coming out from the trees? I would love to see it.
August 10th, 2017 09:42
EMERGING
orchidee said:
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02
EMERGING
Frank Prem said:
Lovely little piece and a fine sketch, Michael. Enjoyed.
August 10th, 2017 02:27
Frank Prem said:
Lovely little piece and a fine sketch, Michael. Enjoyed.
August 10th, 2017 02:27
EMERGING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael, was it the path less travelled that you followed.
August 10th, 2017 02:21
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