Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



REFLECTED EDONE
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Michael.

September 29th, 2017 01:38

REFLECTED EDONE
Wallace said:

Smart, well done Michael.

September 29th, 2017 00:34

REFLECTED EDONE
Louis Gibbs said:

Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks for furthering my poetry education.

September 29th, 2017 00:11

FUSIONS 3
dusk arising said:

i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt partway through a contrived piece about some unimportant issue.


September 28th, 2017 18:27

FUSIONS 3
malubotelho said:

Lovely smart write Michael.

September 28th, 2017 15:06

FUSIONS 3
WL Schuett said:

Had to ponder this poem a little , fun write !

September 28th, 2017 09:21

FUSIONS 3
FredPeyer said:

Must be an English thing!
Here, if I thunk you under the water you drown.
Great 4-liner, Michael.

September 28th, 2017 03:38

FUSIONS 3
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I THUNK when I\'m sober
But only PONDER
When I\'m DRUNK
THUNK brings me
Down to Earth
With an almighty CLUNK !

Thanks for sharing ~ love Poems
Written fanatically ~ BRAIN !

September 28th, 2017 03:33

FUSIONS 3
orchidee said:

I thunk it\'s a fine write M.

September 28th, 2017 01:49

FUSIONS 3
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.

September 28th, 2017 01:46

FUSIONS 2
Christina8 said:

Loved the poem, Michael! Not so much of a wine drinker but your poem is a wonderful rhyme nonetheless!

September 27th, 2017 21:03

FUSIONS 2
Louis Gibbs said:

Made my mouth water with this one, Michael. Kudos!

September 27th, 2017 14:03

FUSIONS 2
FredPeyer said:

Michael, as a European who grew up with wine on the table all the time (not at breakfast!) your poem speaks, no sings to me! Prefer red, but when it is hot, a cool white is heaven on earth!

September 27th, 2017 11:34

FUSIONS 2
WL Schuett said:

Fun Micheal I prefer white these days also , good poem

September 27th, 2017 09:06

FUSIONS 2
orchidee said:

Good write M. Red or white, or blue or whatever (if they had blue wine). I shall add water to it! heehee.

September 27th, 2017 01:40

FUSIONS 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OVERSLEPT AGAIN MICHAEL ~ I was up a good hour before you and even managed to snatch a minute with SANTI (Numero Uno) before she flopped into BED ! Love the STYLE and sentiment of your elegant box like FUSION ! Please check my FUSION on Ladies I have posted my painting of EVE (dorsal view only !) for your predilection. Yours BRIAN

September 27th, 2017 01:20

FUSIONS 2
Goldfinch60 said:

And what is wrong with another glass of red!

September 27th, 2017 01:14

FUSIONS 2
Fay Slimm. said:

Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming in this four liner.

September 27th, 2017 01:06

FROM FUSIONS 1
malubotelho said:

It is a great idea to post the fusion here because they get buried somewhere. Nice verse Michael.

September 26th, 2017 14:41

FROM FUSIONS 1
FredPeyer said:

Michael, if all your fusion poems are as good as this one, just keep on posting them!

September 26th, 2017 11:49

FROM FUSIONS 1
WL Schuett said:

I like this very much an autumn free verse kind of thing

September 26th, 2017 09:18

FROM FUSIONS 1
Pintu Mahakul said:

Wonderful image and brilliant imagery are expressed in this beautifully crafted poem. Like autumn colour this stumbles. Amazing poem is shared here. 10

September 26th, 2017 08:28

FROM FUSIONS 1
Louis Gibbs said:

A season-appropriate piece as Fall presents. Enjoyed it, Michael.

September 26th, 2017 08:07

FROM FUSIONS 1
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to use past work Michael as I for one did not get the chance of earlier reading.

September 26th, 2017 04:56

FROM FUSIONS 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Any ode of yours is much better than nothing at all ! Love all the BULL ! BRIAN ~ Please check my MUSIC ~ B.

September 26th, 2017 02:23

FROM FUSIONS 1
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. As I say, I don\'t always write my poems on the same day that I post them.

September 26th, 2017 02:01

FROM FUSIONS 1
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with great visualisation.

September 26th, 2017 01:25

IN DREAMS
dusk arising said:

Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.

September 25th, 2017 17:40

IN DREAMS
FredPeyer said:

Great poem and even greater (if I may say so) drawing, Michael.
And btw, how do you keep that oh so thin gold leaf from crumbling up when drawing on it?

September 25th, 2017 16:45

DORCAS
FredPeyer said:

Great fun story, Michael. And the best part is that it is not made up!
I grew up in a small farmer village outside Zuerich and believe me, sometimes it was hilarious.

September 25th, 2017 11:06



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