Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
myself and me said:

Love those shorts. Brief and full of meaning.

October 26th, 2017 08:11

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Laura🌻 said:

You’re welcome! It’s a happy memory for me and my hubby! The North Carolina trip was our 35th Anniversary gift from the family and the Biltmore Estate in Asheville was part of the trip! It has such rich history!

October 26th, 2017 08:10

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Laura🌻 said:

Love the title Michael!
Say all five, 5 or 7 times...
and you’ll have a tongue twister!
I like each one because
each one has its own message!
Your drawing reminds me
of the Biltmore Estate in
North Carolina!
A sight to behold!
~Laura~

October 26th, 2017 07:58

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
WL Schuett said:

I like the 3rd and is this a pen and ink drawing

October 26th, 2017 07:33

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Christina8 said:

I absolutely adore the first 5,7,5! I\'m a romantic at heart. But they are all very nice. Lovely drawing as well!

October 26th, 2017 06:48

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
FredPeyer said:

Michael, as far as I am concerned, the first one is absolutely tops! Love it, love it, love it! Next is number 3, then number 4 with 2 and 5 following closely. Actually, they are all good, but none as good as no. 1!


October 26th, 2017 04:00

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Of the making of 575s there is no end ~ but all served with sagacity ! Being a Train Buff my fave is No. 4 Please check my SPACESHIP MOON ~ Thanks BRIAN

October 26th, 2017 03:58

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
orchidee said:

Fine writes and pic again Michael.

October 26th, 2017 01:41

FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good set of \'michaelkus\'. I do like the third one, there is great meaning in that one.

Great drawing, where is that building?

October 26th, 2017 01:38

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
ron parrish aka wordman said:

you are right on beat

October 25th, 2017 21:20

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

No wonder the CHINESE are ruling the World Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas eetc are so concise and always awesome ! Loved 1. Cold outside Love 2. Hot inside Love 3. Love\'s Labour Lost Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN

October 25th, 2017 16:24

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Simple-Man87 said:

These were really well done. The second one adds a different tone, a sensual one. Thank you for sharing.

October 25th, 2017 14:01

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Fay Slimm. said:

That second stanza did it for me in this 5 7 5 posting of super quality - watercolour is first rate too.

October 25th, 2017 11:49

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
myself and me said:

Here we say, buy one get two free. Love the paint. so peaceful, an ideal place for vacation.

October 25th, 2017 10:39

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Christina8 said:

I like the 5-7-5\'s, I quite like all 3! Beautiful painting!

October 25th, 2017 09:11

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
WL Schuett said:

A very fine poem with another lovely painting , you are doing great work Michael

October 25th, 2017 07:31

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
This makes me think of cozily sitting by the fireplace on a snowy evening! Beautiful painting to illustrate poem. Very nostalgic! Thank you!
~Laura~


October 25th, 2017 03:54

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
orchidee said:

Fine thoughtful writes Michael. *gets out dictionary for cinerous*.

October 25th, 2017 01:47

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write(s) Michael.

October 25th, 2017 01:38

THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE
FredPeyer said:

Michael, for these three I would gladly have paid the full triple price!

October 25th, 2017 00:32

LIKE CORN IN WIND
FredPeyer said:

Love your poem, Michael, and love your answer to Martina\'s comment!
I do like your open ended poems exactly because they let the reader\'s imagination go wild.
Looked up \'corn in wind\' quotes and found this:
A light wind swept over the corn, and all nature laughed in the sunshine. Anne Bronte


October 24th, 2017 19:34

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Louis Gibbs said:

Desolate but calming picture! Excellent poem of wavering thoughts on expressing her mind. Both well done, Michael!

October 24th, 2017 09:24

LIKE CORN IN WIND
WL Schuett said:

All around right now the corn stalks are golden and they shimmer in the wind . Beautiful poem and painting , Michael

October 24th, 2017 07:37

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Christina8 said:

Wonderful write this morning! I think Goldfinch described it best! Wonderful painting, I\'m sure we\'ll be seeing snowy landscapes soon....

October 24th, 2017 06:54

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Fay Slimm. said:

Another good intro. to a sequel my friend - I love the intrigue of title and verse - - your pen and brushwork is as ever exquisite.

October 24th, 2017 03:44

LIKE CORN IN WIND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for an excellent Poem & Picture ! All Poetry is ephemeral ~ like \"Corn in the Wind\" ! On MPS they are only featured for ONE DAY ~ like \"Corn in the Wind\" ! Please taste my PUMPKIN SOUP ~ BRIAN !

October 24th, 2017 03:33

LIKE CORN IN WIND
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael. Some were enraged with me in 1066!

October 24th, 2017 01:49

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
I hope she’ll soon loosen and
remove that cap to pen her secret
that enraged her so!

Beautiful painting to illustrate
your well written poem !
~Laura~

October 24th, 2017 01:27

LIKE CORN IN WIND
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, that ink well cap couldn\'t have been that tight as the ink produced these great words.

October 24th, 2017 01:15

CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Laura🌻 said:

Great painting to illustrate your poem!
I’ve had a few fallow periods in my lifetime.
My favorite line from your poem
to have experienced...

“Laid bare and plucked of all but bone...”

October 24th, 2017 01:11



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