Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIKE CORN IN WIND
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I hope she’ll soon loosen and
remove that cap to pen her secret
that enraged her so!
Beautiful painting to illustrate
your well written poem !
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:27
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I hope she’ll soon loosen and
remove that cap to pen her secret
that enraged her so!
Beautiful painting to illustrate
your well written poem !
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:27
LIKE CORN IN WIND
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, that ink well cap couldn\'t have been that tight as the ink produced these great words.
October 24th, 2017 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, that ink well cap couldn\'t have been that tight as the ink produced these great words.
October 24th, 2017 01:15
CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Laura🌻 said:
Great painting to illustrate your poem!
I’ve had a few fallow periods in my lifetime.
My favorite line from your poem
to have experienced...
“Laid bare and plucked of all but bone...”
October 24th, 2017 01:11
Laura🌻 said:
Great painting to illustrate your poem!
I’ve had a few fallow periods in my lifetime.
My favorite line from your poem
to have experienced...
“Laid bare and plucked of all but bone...”
October 24th, 2017 01:11
CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for two excellent pieces of work Michael - a delightful visit to your talented page.
October 23rd, 2017 10:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for two excellent pieces of work Michael - a delightful visit to your talented page.
October 23rd, 2017 10:54
CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
WL Schuett said:
Painting and poem meld really well together, fine art ...
October 23rd, 2017 07:41
WL Schuett said:
Painting and poem meld really well together, fine art ...
October 23rd, 2017 07:41
CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Tanks for sharing MICHAELT ~ Great painting and thought provoking poem ! We all have fallow periods in our lives ~ but in my (limited) experience they soo become fruitful again ! Yours BRIAN
October 23rd, 2017 07:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Tanks for sharing MICHAELT ~ Great painting and thought provoking poem ! We all have fallow periods in our lives ~ but in my (limited) experience they soo become fruitful again ! Yours BRIAN
October 23rd, 2017 07:28
CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
Louis Gibbs said:
\"With futures curtain still undrawn\"... some beautiful thoughts well expressed in this one, Michael! Kudos on a fine one. And I find the picture quite \'satisfying\'.
October 23rd, 2017 07:16
Louis Gibbs said:
\"With futures curtain still undrawn\"... some beautiful thoughts well expressed in this one, Michael! Kudos on a fine one. And I find the picture quite \'satisfying\'.
October 23rd, 2017 07:16
CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I read it as \'cats\' first. But couldn\'t see any cats in the field pic! doh!
October 23rd, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I read it as \'cats\' first. But couldn\'t see any cats in the field pic! doh!
October 23rd, 2017 01:45
IN UMBRIA
HChristian74 said:
You are a wordsmith my friend; and an inspiration to an aspiring writer.
~HC
October 22nd, 2017 12:18
HChristian74 said:
You are a wordsmith my friend; and an inspiration to an aspiring writer.
~HC
October 22nd, 2017 12:18
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Christina8 said:
I do like your dotted painting. Always love your artwork. And two fine couplets. The second one is so silly!
October 22nd, 2017 09:26
Christina8 said:
I do like your dotted painting. Always love your artwork. And two fine couplets. The second one is so silly!
October 22nd, 2017 09:26
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the ABSTRACT ~ Pointillism meets Jackson Pollock |~ awesome ! Love the lack of meaning in your doublets ~ I trust your HOSE is better ~ it\'s now the watering season ! Now I\'m sounding as MAD as your are ! Yours BRIAN \'
October 22nd, 2017 04:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the ABSTRACT ~ Pointillism meets Jackson Pollock |~ awesome ! Love the lack of meaning in your doublets ~ I trust your HOSE is better ~ it\'s now the watering season ! Now I\'m sounding as MAD as your are ! Yours BRIAN \'
October 22nd, 2017 04:00
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
A pixillated offering if ever I saw one dear Michael and such patience in brushwork to get that result. A gorgeous picture and couplets to ponder for the weekend. The second one raised a relating smile for I do the same.
October 22nd, 2017 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A pixillated offering if ever I saw one dear Michael and such patience in brushwork to get that result. A gorgeous picture and couplets to ponder for the weekend. The second one raised a relating smile for I do the same.
October 22nd, 2017 03:35
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
orchidee said:
A fine couple and pic Michael. It\'s like one of those \'hidden pics\' where you can find a face in it, or a number, as in those colour-blind tests.
October 22nd, 2017 01:23
orchidee said:
A fine couple and pic Michael. It\'s like one of those \'hidden pics\' where you can find a face in it, or a number, as in those colour-blind tests.
October 22nd, 2017 01:23
A COUPLE OF COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
The second one is so true Michael, I can really relate to that one.
I do like the painting, so many different forms can be seen in it and they change all the time, it could require a lifetime of studying and even then not all would be seen.
October 22nd, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
The second one is so true Michael, I can really relate to that one.
I do like the painting, so many different forms can be seen in it and they change all the time, it could require a lifetime of studying and even then not all would be seen.
October 22nd, 2017 00:49
THE MARTYRS CROWN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael ~ Lovely Painting and a nostalgic Poem. Historically I love the 1930\'s and your Poem reminded me of the tragic love~struck figure of KING EDWARD VIII ~ However I think the Country got a much better deal with King George VI & Queen Elizabeth which also gave us Queen Elizabeth II . Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
October 21st, 2017 14:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael ~ Lovely Painting and a nostalgic Poem. Historically I love the 1930\'s and your Poem reminded me of the tragic love~struck figure of KING EDWARD VIII ~ However I think the Country got a much better deal with King George VI & Queen Elizabeth which also gave us Queen Elizabeth II . Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
October 21st, 2017 14:05
THE MARTYRS CROWN
Christina8 said:
Love the watercolor! And a great write to go with it!
October 21st, 2017 11:09
Christina8 said:
Love the watercolor! And a great write to go with it!
October 21st, 2017 11:09
THE MARTYRS CROWN
Louis Gibbs said:
I read in this one a dethroned monarch, brilliantly portrayed. Well done poem and watercolor both, Michael!
October 21st, 2017 10:40
Louis Gibbs said:
I read in this one a dethroned monarch, brilliantly portrayed. Well done poem and watercolor both, Michael!
October 21st, 2017 10:40
THE MARTYRS CROWN
Fay Slimm. said:
A super-good read from your poetic pen Michael plus an exquisitely brushed waterr-colour - another great posting.
October 21st, 2017 09:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A super-good read from your poetic pen Michael plus an exquisitely brushed waterr-colour - another great posting.
October 21st, 2017 09:02
THE MARTYRS CROWN
WL Schuett said:
Very strong watercolor Michael , the martyr poem was cool 😎 also
October 21st, 2017 08:52
WL Schuett said:
Very strong watercolor Michael , the martyr poem was cool 😎 also
October 21st, 2017 08:52
THE HOUSE
MendedFences27 said:
A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what happens next? It seems the structure lends itself to a one-sentence format quite nicely. So, now we have two in contrast, and that\'s what peaks the interest and leaves us wanting more. It\'s almost as though you asked an unanswered question. Lovely bit of intrigue brought out to leave us pondering, \"Where does she go next?\" Loved it. More, please? - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:37
MendedFences27 said:
A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what happens next? It seems the structure lends itself to a one-sentence format quite nicely. So, now we have two in contrast, and that\'s what peaks the interest and leaves us wanting more. It\'s almost as though you asked an unanswered question. Lovely bit of intrigue brought out to leave us pondering, \"Where does she go next?\" Loved it. More, please? - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:37
THE HOUSE
Fay Slimm. said:
Super artwork and love the form used
- it reads like the beginning of a novel and left me wanting more -- so good to see you back posting again Michael.
October 20th, 2017 11:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Super artwork and love the form used
- it reads like the beginning of a novel and left me wanting more -- so good to see you back posting again Michael.
October 20th, 2017 11:53
THE HOUSE
Louis Gibbs said:
I had no idea there were so many specific forms of poetry, Michael. The painting is quite inviting and warm! Well done!
October 20th, 2017 09:16
Louis Gibbs said:
I had no idea there were so many specific forms of poetry, Michael. The painting is quite inviting and warm! Well done!
October 20th, 2017 09:16
THE HOUSE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL welcome back ! Love the SEDOKA ~ sound like my Grandma\'s House ! Love the English Village picture ~ very evocative ! BRIAN ~ Please check my TEDDY BEAR ~ Thanks B.
October 20th, 2017 01:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL welcome back ! Love the SEDOKA ~ sound like my Grandma\'s House ! Love the English Village picture ~ very evocative ! BRIAN ~ Please check my TEDDY BEAR ~ Thanks B.
October 20th, 2017 01:58
THE HOUSE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Short and packed with a meaningful message!
Open the doors, and let the sun shine in!
Beautiful painting to illustrate your Sedoka!
October 20th, 2017 00:47
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great poem! Short and packed with a meaningful message!
Open the doors, and let the sun shine in!
Beautiful painting to illustrate your Sedoka!
October 20th, 2017 00:47
THE HOUSE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Good to see you back.
I like the artwork, have you previously put up a picture of the same scene but with people in it?
October 20th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Good to see you back.
I like the artwork, have you previously put up a picture of the same scene but with people in it?
October 20th, 2017 00:47
A GENTLE LAND
squeakyfluff said:
A very enchanting poem. thankyou for this lovely read! :)
October 10th, 2017 14:17
squeakyfluff said:
A very enchanting poem. thankyou for this lovely read! :)
October 10th, 2017 14:17
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