Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No 44
Goldfinch60 said:
Presumably your ghost wrote this fun write Michael.
September 10th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Presumably your ghost wrote this fun write Michael.
September 10th, 2017 01:29
LIMERICK No 44
orchidee said:
A fine write an pic M. A similar thing happened to me. Someone said: Try holding your breath for 24 hours, to save some air for a whole day. I tried it - now I\'m dead. Erm, strange that, can\'t understand it! lol
September 10th, 2017 01:18
orchidee said:
A fine write an pic M. A similar thing happened to me. Someone said: Try holding your breath for 24 hours, to save some air for a whole day. I tried it - now I\'m dead. Erm, strange that, can\'t understand it! lol
September 10th, 2017 01:18
A THOUSAND WRECKS
myself and me said:
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04
myself and me said:
One more challenge done beautifully.
Love the paint too.
September 9th, 2017 14:04
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, the firm is very good.
September 9th, 2017 11:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael, the firm is very good.
September 9th, 2017 11:16
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well done, Michael!
September 9th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well done, Michael!
September 9th, 2017 08:33
A THOUSAND WRECKS
WL Schuett said:
Very interesting and what to me would be a very difficult poem to write , well done Michael
September 9th, 2017 06:47
WL Schuett said:
Very interesting and what to me would be a very difficult poem to write , well done Michael
September 9th, 2017 06:47
A THOUSAND WRECKS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL we all have Free Will and Poetic Licence is one expression of it ! I am a Classic Poetic Form FREAK ~ BUT ~ I feel too rigid a joining of Form & Function restricts the MUSE ! I get accused of calling ALL FOURTEEN LINE poems SONNETS ! But I an almost Middle Aged (34 !) so i don\'t really care any more ! Like SANTITA & others I am a FREE SPIRIT on MPS ! Love the Meter & Message of Your Poem ~ I always live as close to the Coast as I can ~ my blood is 3.5% NaCl ! Love the Abstract \"The Ghost of the Coast\" AMEN ~ BRIAN Please check \"Some Enchanted Evening\" My Sentimental (not Environmental) SIDE ~ Thanks B.
September 9th, 2017 03:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL we all have Free Will and Poetic Licence is one expression of it ! I am a Classic Poetic Form FREAK ~ BUT ~ I feel too rigid a joining of Form & Function restricts the MUSE ! I get accused of calling ALL FOURTEEN LINE poems SONNETS ! But I an almost Middle Aged (34 !) so i don\'t really care any more ! Like SANTITA & others I am a FREE SPIRIT on MPS ! Love the Meter & Message of Your Poem ~ I always live as close to the Coast as I can ~ my blood is 3.5% NaCl ! Love the Abstract \"The Ghost of the Coast\" AMEN ~ BRIAN Please check \"Some Enchanted Evening\" My Sentimental (not Environmental) SIDE ~ Thanks B.
September 9th, 2017 03:08
A THOUSAND WRECKS
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new to me and so well composed - a delightful read Michael.
September 9th, 2017 02:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new to me and so well composed - a delightful read Michael.
September 9th, 2017 02:02
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
myself and me said:
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
September 8th, 2017 19:41
myself and me said:
Dreams of an artist are full of imagination and deep thoughts.
Simple and great one liners.
September 8th, 2017 19:41
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
September 8th, 2017 06:46
Christina8 said:
I really enjoyed all your one liners! Great job on these!
September 8th, 2017 06:46
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
September 8th, 2017 04:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We live to dream & dream to live ! Love No. 3 we can follow our dreams ~ BUT ~ I prefer tofollow the Yellow Brick Road ~ It got me to LEGO LAND (Denmark) and OZ (Sydney). Love the SILLYWET ~ so few lines ~ so many memories ! Have a Nice Day ! BRIAN ~ Birthday Boy !
September 8th, 2017 04:13
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of a nude is sensational too.
September 8th, 2017 02:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of a nude is sensational too.
September 8th, 2017 02:10
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
Frank Prem said:
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
September 8th, 2017 01:47
Frank Prem said:
Excellent starters Michael. Now to just flesh them out ,,,
September 8th, 2017 01:47
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
orchidee said:
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
September 8th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write and bit swoony pic M.
September 8th, 2017 01:41
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
dusk arising said:
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38
dusk arising said:
For me number one has the drama and is a story waiting to be told.
September 8th, 2017 01:38
DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
September 8th, 2017 00:58
FredPeyer said:
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But they are all good!
September 8th, 2017 00:58
SHE CONFIRMS
Fay Slimm. said:
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An engaging piece of work Michael.
September 7th, 2017 13:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An engaging piece of work Michael.
September 7th, 2017 13:24
SHE CONFIRMS
WL Schuett said:
Well done Micheal conjures up a vivid picture...and a lovely line drawing
September 7th, 2017 09:20
WL Schuett said:
Well done Micheal conjures up a vivid picture...and a lovely line drawing
September 7th, 2017 09:20
SHE CONFIRMS
orchidee said:
Ohhh the melodrama of it all! *Gets out pen and paper for a mad burst of inspiration*.
September 7th, 2017 08:03
orchidee said:
Ohhh the melodrama of it all! *Gets out pen and paper for a mad burst of inspiration*.
September 7th, 2017 08:03
SHE CONFIRMS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you MICHAEL for another perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC. The TRINET and the SILHOUETTE ! I can empathise with the sentiments in each verse. Word count is good and the shape ~ each one an Angel of the North ! Yours BRIAN
Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks S & B.
September 7th, 2017 08:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you MICHAEL for another perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC. The TRINET and the SILHOUETTE ! I can empathise with the sentiments in each verse. Word count is good and the shape ~ each one an Angel of the North ! Yours BRIAN
Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks S & B.
September 7th, 2017 08:02
SHE CONFIRMS
myself and me said:
\"Still night, all quiet, slow walk, together in harmony hand in hand\"
What a peaceful, romantic night.
Love the line drawing. White line on dark background, fit the poem perfect.
September 7th, 2017 07:59
myself and me said:
\"Still night, all quiet, slow walk, together in harmony hand in hand\"
What a peaceful, romantic night.
Love the line drawing. White line on dark background, fit the poem perfect.
September 7th, 2017 07:59
SHE CONFIRMS
dusk arising said:
And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense created here. Compelling read. I was mindful not to slip on that wet wooden pier.
September 7th, 2017 03:51
dusk arising said:
And the black sullen swell of the sea held its breath at the suspense created here. Compelling read. I was mindful not to slip on that wet wooden pier.
September 7th, 2017 03:51
SHE CONFIRMS
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You must spend more time then I do in preparation, to polish up poems. I tend to be more free-flow. Not that I get some mad frenzy of the muse and write it all instantly. Gosh, that\'s melodramatic!
September 7th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You must spend more time then I do in preparation, to polish up poems. I tend to be more free-flow. Not that I get some mad frenzy of the muse and write it all instantly. Gosh, that\'s melodramatic!
September 7th, 2017 01:55
SHE CONFIRMS
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good write in a form I had not seen before Michael.
September 7th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good write in a form I had not seen before Michael.
September 7th, 2017 00:47
SHE CONFIRMS
Mugsdaddy said:
Very deliberate picture drawn in the minds eye. Very nearly perfect.
September 7th, 2017 00:42
Mugsdaddy said:
Very deliberate picture drawn in the minds eye. Very nearly perfect.
September 7th, 2017 00:42
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