Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



YACKY ZEBRAS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for stepping up to the plate MICHAEL ~ a great effort to produce an ABCD ZOO POEM and all the words are Oxford Dictionary Certified. Did you paint the picture after the poem or did the picture inspire the poem ? Looking at them symbiotically ~ in the picture from (L to R): I see a SICKLY TURTLE clutching his X-ray ~ next a HIPPO logging a jump followed by the head of a BEAR dining on \"Kikkerbillen\". YACKY ZEBRAS are luirking in the background. Then three NATTERJACKS striving in a RELAY (or should that be REPLAY ?). Thanks for sharing Poem & Picture ~ Yours BRIAN

March 18th, 2017 10:15

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
WriteBeLight said:

So cheery and bright Michael. Great painting!

March 18th, 2017 07:34

YACKY ZEBRAS
WriteBeLight said:

Quality job with both on display here Michael!

March 18th, 2017 07:13

YACKY ZEBRAS
Jooles said:

That was a hard challenge but thr end result made me smile

March 18th, 2017 04:07

YACKY ZEBRAS
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - -such a clever fun-write and very inventive.

March 18th, 2017 01:49

YACKY ZEBRAS
Frank Prem said:

Yes, very clever. Bravo.

Cheers,

Frank

March 18th, 2017 01:37

YACKY ZEBRAS
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write, love the yacky zebras.

Intriguing painting, would love to see it full size.

March 18th, 2017 01:32

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
MendedFences27 said:

Poor chap. I feel for him. Maybe we all get to where he\'s at from time to time, but constantly being considered a fool? No fun. I believe my wife called me a damn fool just yesterday. Thanks for the humor and the cartoon (funny, my life in a nutshell.) - Phil A.

March 17th, 2017 20:43

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
rrodriguez said:

Nicely done Michael... excellent rhyme structure. They painting is cute and revealing.

March 17th, 2017 15:17

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Seeker said:

Michael, this is a splendid poem which ends with a beautiful philosophy. I read somewhere, and you probably know where, that a prophet is without honor in his own country.

March 17th, 2017 13:29

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Christina8 said:

Loved this cute cartoon and the funny rhyming poem. They are great together!

March 17th, 2017 13:24

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Hi Michael ~ LOVE PENGUINS ~ LOVE CARTOONS ! Love the poem ~ we are all different ~ we all have eccentricities it is only when they are laid out ~ bare in a poem ~ that we actually begin to see oorsen as others see us ~ had but Nature the power gie us ! BRIAN

March 17th, 2017 09:20

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks Goldfinch.

March 17th, 2017 03:05

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write. Love the cartoon.

March 17th, 2017 02:48

THE DRESS
MendedFences27 said:

We can dream, but then we have to face reality. Well spoken, Michael.
And that is a well done etching. - Phil A.

March 16th, 2017 21:02

THE DRESS
P.H.Rose said:

Very good Michael
Well done sir..

March 16th, 2017 14:04

THE DRESS
Michael Edwards said:

You are so kind - will now go to the fusion.

March 16th, 2017 10:10

THE DRESS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Another excellent POEM & PAINTING ~ In my mind I can visualise the Dream ~ the Dress ~ the Damsel ~ at a Ball inside that lovely Manor House. Love the elegance and delicacy (of talk and topic) in the short but dulcet ode. Thanks for dreaming and sharing ~ yiou are sio so creative with water colours & words ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my latest poem and my TRUMP FUSION ! Thanks B.

March 16th, 2017 08:53

THE DRESS
Michael Edwards said:

Sorry Goldfinch - I used the word in a sort of metaphorical sense - it\'s a watercolour. Thanks for looking.

March 16th, 2017 03:49

THE DRESS
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

If your image is an etching I bow to your absolute skill.

March 16th, 2017 03:19

THE DRESS
Poems_ said:

Great write! Love it.

March 16th, 2017 00:57

LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39
MendedFences27 said:

\"Tide,\" the detergent to clean the \"old sailor\'s hide?\" Sorry, poor humor on my part. Funny limericks, I missed this morning, now reading them late at night. Still funny.
Is that wharf on the river or the sea? Nice painting. - Phil A.

March 15th, 2017 20:20

LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha Ha Ha.

March 15th, 2017 17:56

LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39
Tony36 said:

Put a smile on my face. Great write

March 15th, 2017 13:56

LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - just what my first read needed today Michael - Chuckling here at your clever fun-limericks and gasping in admiration at the fine watercolour.

March 15th, 2017 03:02

LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun limericks Michael. Like the picture as well.

March 15th, 2017 02:42

THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY
MendedFences27 said:

A shared moment embraced in the arms of he, with whom she chose to share her sorrow. Sometimes the gray skies and the tearful rain can bring on such a moment. It reflects the strength of the relationship and the depth of trust. Loved this one.- Phil A.

March 14th, 2017 14:47

THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY
Christina8 said:

Touching poem and the watercolor goes very well with it.

March 14th, 2017 12:06

THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

March 14th, 2017 08:17

THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful water colour to illustrate an equally beautiful aqueous metaphor. Thanks MICHAEL ~ BRIAN

March 14th, 2017 06:52



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