Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
MY PLACE
WriteBeLight said:
Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!
April 10th, 2017 09:51
WriteBeLight said:
Great looking digs Michael. I have my desk in the loft with large windows. Great to be in at any time. Your poem is right on!
April 10th, 2017 09:51
MY PLACE
willyweed said:
glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!
April 10th, 2017 07:12
willyweed said:
glad to hear that, I was thinking boy willy you are a slob, its all good Michael!
April 10th, 2017 07:12
MY PLACE
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.
April 10th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
WE all need places to be ourselves, yours looks ideal.
Yours is the world to create in words and art.
April 10th, 2017 00:49
SECLUSION
MendedFences27 said:
A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.
April 9th, 2017 19:10
MendedFences27 said:
A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want? A lovely garden and a lovely poem, perhaps the \"node\" where their \"paths\" cross? A terrific write. - Phil A.
April 9th, 2017 19:10
SECLUSION
willyweed said:
very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww
April 9th, 2017 08:13
willyweed said:
very nice I\'ll be over for tea!
and I\'ll read that fine poem again.ww
April 9th, 2017 08:13
SECLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.
April 9th, 2017 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those lonely spots can be beautiful.
April 9th, 2017 01:43
BINDING VOWS
MendedFences27 said:
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:34
MendedFences27 said:
Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting form. One I\'ll have to look up and play with. Thanks for all the above. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:34
BINDING VOWS
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
April 8th, 2017 06:40
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I have chills. What a beautiful picture and so kind of you to note me in your Author\'s comment. I am so jealous. I will try to do the same and take a picture of our garden, once we can get out there. Right now there is still some snow. Nice poem to accompany such a beautiful garden Michael. So, so green and lush!! Thanks!!!
April 8th, 2017 06:40
BINDING VOWS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
April 8th, 2017 05:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ lovely garden ~ lovely Month ! Love tHe poem with a \"Tale in the Sting !\" TYBURN FORM ~ You should explain the form ! Six line poem with a 222299 syllable pattern and rhyming pattern aaaa bb Lines 1 to 4 are VERBS and in lines 5 & 6 the 5th through 8th syllables use the words in lines 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 respectively. Yours is the Edwards variation ~ Poetic Licence Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN I will post a FOX variation next week ~ space this watch !
April 8th, 2017 05:37
BINDING VOWS
Garry said:
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
April 8th, 2017 02:35
Garry said:
Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace.
You reaped what you sowed, big time.
April 8th, 2017 02:35
BINDING VOWS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
April 8th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
Would you like to come and sort my garden out? I intend to go to battle today with my pyrocantha!!
April 8th, 2017 01:23
IS TODAY TODAY ?
MendedFences27 said:
Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will be better and yesterday was worse. Very cleverly put. - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:01
MendedFences27 said:
Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will be better and yesterday was worse. Very cleverly put. - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:01
IS TODAY TODAY ?
rrodriguez said:
I\'m think about today what I thought yesterday, but tomorrow is still ahead of me, so let me worry about today rather than tomorrow. Interesting writing that keeps of thinking about today, yesterday, and tomorrow.
April 7th, 2017 11:08
rrodriguez said:
I\'m think about today what I thought yesterday, but tomorrow is still ahead of me, so let me worry about today rather than tomorrow. Interesting writing that keeps of thinking about today, yesterday, and tomorrow.
April 7th, 2017 11:08
AUTUMN SUN
WriteBeLight said:
The words you chose here are so great Michael. And, they paint the perfect picture, as well as your work here.
April 7th, 2017 06:34
WriteBeLight said:
The words you chose here are so great Michael. And, they paint the perfect picture, as well as your work here.
April 7th, 2017 06:34
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Michael Edwards said:
Is next week the week after this week or the week before the week in two weeks time?
April 7th, 2017 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
Is next week the week after this week or the week before the week in two weeks time?
April 7th, 2017 06:13
IS TODAY TODAY ?
willyweed said:
wait till next week....oh boy! good fun Michael and the drawing is killer! ww
April 7th, 2017 06:10
willyweed said:
wait till next week....oh boy! good fun Michael and the drawing is killer! ww
April 7th, 2017 06:10
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Jooles said:
Haha love this....confused though.....going for a cup of tea 😅
April 7th, 2017 04:19
Jooles said:
Haha love this....confused though.....going for a cup of tea 😅
April 7th, 2017 04:19
IS TODAY TODAY ?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL TODAY or not TODAY ? That really is the question ! BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B Thanks for the line drawing of my Ancestral Home !
April 7th, 2017 03:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL TODAY or not TODAY ? That really is the question ! BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B Thanks for the line drawing of my Ancestral Home !
April 7th, 2017 03:46
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Garry said:
Brilliant poem. A light hearted view on issues around who and when we are.
I was thinking about this yesterday and will re-read your poem again tomorrow. 🤔
April 7th, 2017 02:48
Garry said:
Brilliant poem. A light hearted view on issues around who and when we are.
I was thinking about this yesterday and will re-read your poem again tomorrow. 🤔
April 7th, 2017 02:48
IS TODAY TODAY ?
orchidee said:
Good write. Also - does tomorrow never come? Because when it gets here, it\'s today!
April 7th, 2017 01:59
orchidee said:
Good write. Also - does tomorrow never come? Because when it gets here, it\'s today!
April 7th, 2017 01:59
IS TODAY TODAY ?
Goldfinch60 said:
As I often say today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday. Good write.
April 7th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
As I often say today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday. Good write.
April 7th, 2017 01:30
IS TODAY TODAY ?
LukeMorrison said:
Really like this idea :) I think you could write more on the same subject and really ponder the question you pose
April 7th, 2017 00:26
LukeMorrison said:
Really like this idea :) I think you could write more on the same subject and really ponder the question you pose
April 7th, 2017 00:26
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