WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
MendedFences27 said:

So my favorite couple in the house with the creaking stairs, which they took longer to climb than I do my stairs, had found the right key after all, and now share some physical bliss, but only until morning, when it will take them another week to go back down, unless they slide on the banister. A great joy shared by us all, thank you Michael. - Phil A.

March 30th, 2017 17:53

DAWN WAITS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so \"English Country Lane !\"

March 30th, 2017 08:19

DAWN WAITS
Fay Slimm. said:

Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.

March 30th, 2017 05:49

DAWN WAITS
Michael Edwards said:

thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.

March 30th, 2017 03:19

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Cool ending ! No Love story completes ~ until they couple between the sheets ! Strange but true ~ that we all end up there in the end ~ PARADISE ! Thanks BRIAN

March 29th, 2017 17:16

THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Garry said:

I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However i have tried to balance the books with a few recent efforts. Which are bit lighter and a couple more to come over the next few weeks. Mixed in with the darker stuff of course. Hope they cheer you up as much as this cheered me.

March 29th, 2017 12:56

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
willyweed said:

Brilliant piece of work in its entirety! Bravo Poet!

March 29th, 2017 06:57

WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Garry said:

Perfect ending. Good job.

March 29th, 2017 03:43

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
MendedFences27 said:

Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even bathroom? Where is Sherlock when you need him? Following with baited breathe. - Phil A.

March 28th, 2017 20:03

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
Tony36 said:

Awesome

March 28th, 2017 10:12

WAS IT LOVE (4)
willyweed said:

oh this is cool Michael!

March 28th, 2017 09:30

WAS IT LOVE ? (2)
willyweed said:

getting better all the time!

March 28th, 2017 09:26

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Creaking stairs & keys ~ Oh yes I remember it well ~ tomorrow will be the denouement (it was ever thus ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my HAIKU ~ Thank B

March 28th, 2017 05:47

WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope we will find out tomorrow.

March 28th, 2017 02:44

WAS IT LOVE (4)
MendedFences27 said:

Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really stairs? The intrigue mounts. I want you to install a >> key.Great write, holds everyone\'s attention. Keeps us mystified. Wanting more. - Phil A.

March 27th, 2017 15:10