Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
Great Forces
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Love the painting. How is the open weekend going?
May 14th, 2017 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Love the painting. How is the open weekend going?
May 14th, 2017 01:43
LIMERICK 26
swingline said:
Maybe he could become a sailor
Aboard a south Pacific whaler
If they ever got stuck in the Doldrums
If the winds had no whinnie or became humdrum
Then he\'d swallow all and release his call
And the boat would scurvy away
May 13th, 2017 13:28
swingline said:
Maybe he could become a sailor
Aboard a south Pacific whaler
If they ever got stuck in the Doldrums
If the winds had no whinnie or became humdrum
Then he\'d swallow all and release his call
And the boat would scurvy away
May 13th, 2017 13:28
LIMERICK 26
orchidee said:
Was the man very old - millions of years old, like me and Goldie are?! (it\'s nutty! lol).
May 13th, 2017 12:08
orchidee said:
Was the man very old - millions of years old, like me and Goldie are?! (it\'s nutty! lol).
May 13th, 2017 12:08
LIMERICK 26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My friend IVOR the ORGAN is Welsh
Seine Frau ist auf Deutschland und Schmeltz
But when they get a whiff
Of the old Bara Brith
Zey BELLSCH und zey BELLSCH und zee BELLSCH
Thanks Michael ~ enjoyed it ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
May 13th, 2017 07:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My friend IVOR the ORGAN is Welsh
Seine Frau ist auf Deutschland und Schmeltz
But when they get a whiff
Of the old Bara Brith
Zey BELLSCH und zey BELLSCH und zee BELLSCH
Thanks Michael ~ enjoyed it ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
May 13th, 2017 07:21
LIMERICK 26
Fay Slimm. said:
I got the wind of that limerick Michael right from the very first line. - ha ha -
May 13th, 2017 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
I got the wind of that limerick Michael right from the very first line. - ha ha -
May 13th, 2017 04:58
PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED
WriteBeLight said:
Lovely Michael. I could visualize the glances. Great picture as well!
May 12th, 2017 11:48
WriteBeLight said:
Lovely Michael. I could visualize the glances. Great picture as well!
May 12th, 2017 11:48
PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED
P.X. Vexxus said:
Nice. You paint your own artwork and write poetry to go with it. Great job. :)
May 12th, 2017 03:44
P.X. Vexxus said:
Nice. You paint your own artwork and write poetry to go with it. Great job. :)
May 12th, 2017 03:44
PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic. yep, that\'s us two in your pic - Goldie and I. We\'re millions of years old! 1066 is one of our special events, cos we woz there in person! heehee.
May 12th, 2017 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic. yep, that\'s us two in your pic - Goldie and I. We\'re millions of years old! 1066 is one of our special events, cos we woz there in person! heehee.
May 12th, 2017 01:53
PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent words and that clever painting has much to say too. A wonderful duo and thanks for sharing them Michael.
May 12th, 2017 01:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent words and that clever painting has much to say too. A wonderful duo and thanks for sharing them Michael.
May 12th, 2017 01:49
PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael.
Lovely painting, those two talking in your picture are Orchi and I, we have been everywhere in our long, long lives.
May 12th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael.
Lovely painting, those two talking in your picture are Orchi and I, we have been everywhere in our long, long lives.
May 12th, 2017 01:29
LIMERICK 25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There was a young poet called Ted
Who made up Lim\'ricks in \'is \'ed
Some were quite good
Others less clear than mud
Some were better left unread.
Thanks for sharing Michael another good one ! BRIAN
May 11th, 2017 14:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There was a young poet called Ted
Who made up Lim\'ricks in \'is \'ed
Some were quite good
Others less clear than mud
Some were better left unread.
Thanks for sharing Michael another good one ! BRIAN
May 11th, 2017 14:52
LIMERICK 25
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Michael. The drawing is very cute. I do not have any gnomes. I do have a gargoyle that protects my home. He has been around for a long time and has made it through many, many winters.
May 11th, 2017 05:27
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Michael. The drawing is very cute. I do not have any gnomes. I do have a gargoyle that protects my home. He has been around for a long time and has made it through many, many winters.
May 11th, 2017 05:27
LIMERICK 25
swingline said:
I\'m falling out laughing . Lost more than the leath on tha tweeth . He sounds more bark than bite !
May 11th, 2017 00:35
swingline said:
I\'m falling out laughing . Lost more than the leath on tha tweeth . He sounds more bark than bite !
May 11th, 2017 00:35
NATURAL THREAT
WriteBeLight said:
Picture works here Michael. The aftermath in a way :)
May 10th, 2017 12:55
WriteBeLight said:
Picture works here Michael. The aftermath in a way :)
May 10th, 2017 12:55
NATURAL THREAT
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Dunno about that \'xylophagous\' stuff from EC. I might swoon if I knew what it meant! lol.
May 10th, 2017 08:46
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Dunno about that \'xylophagous\' stuff from EC. I might swoon if I knew what it meant! lol.
May 10th, 2017 08:46
NATURAL THREAT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the flow and shape of this form (2 4 6 8 2) it is very appropriate to the subject of the poem ! Love the painting ~ Trees are great \"role models\" and survive awful conditions ~ because they are rooted and grounded in LOVE (Earth) ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my Flower Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B.
May 10th, 2017 05:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ love the flow and shape of this form (2 4 6 8 2) it is very appropriate to the subject of the poem ! Love the painting ~ Trees are great \"role models\" and survive awful conditions ~ because they are rooted and grounded in LOVE (Earth) ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my Flower Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B.
May 10th, 2017 05:30
BUFFET FODDER
WriteBeLight said:
Great message in the poem Michael, but you should have accompanied it with one of your cartoons :) Pizza can be made in a very healthy way, but I agree with swingline. Chefs from all over the world have their own take on it. But, nonetheless, have a slice (small one) with some greens alongside, that is my thought. Although, I rarely eat Pizza, unless I make it at home with tomatoes from the garden. :)
May 9th, 2017 06:26
WriteBeLight said:
Great message in the poem Michael, but you should have accompanied it with one of your cartoons :) Pizza can be made in a very healthy way, but I agree with swingline. Chefs from all over the world have their own take on it. But, nonetheless, have a slice (small one) with some greens alongside, that is my thought. Although, I rarely eat Pizza, unless I make it at home with tomatoes from the garden. :)
May 9th, 2017 06:26
BUFFET FODDER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We are both writing on FOOD today and it\'s mot even MARDI GRAS ! I love itallian but it must be the works ! i ANTIPASTI Crusty bread dipped in olive oil & balsamic and five types of olives and proccutio PRIMO Pizza a quatro stagione SECONDO spaghetti a la carbonara DULCI ~ Tiramisu and a bottle or two of CHIANTI or a Glass or two of PERONI e fromaggio ! Viva La Comida Italiana ~ CAIO BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ I hope you are not a 5 7 5 Haiku purist ! Thanks B Adoro la Immagine Bella
May 9th, 2017 05:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ We are both writing on FOOD today and it\'s mot even MARDI GRAS ! I love itallian but it must be the works ! i ANTIPASTI Crusty bread dipped in olive oil & balsamic and five types of olives and proccutio PRIMO Pizza a quatro stagione SECONDO spaghetti a la carbonara DULCI ~ Tiramisu and a bottle or two of CHIANTI or a Glass or two of PERONI e fromaggio ! Viva La Comida Italiana ~ CAIO BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ I hope you are not a 5 7 5 Haiku purist ! Thanks B Adoro la Immagine Bella
May 9th, 2017 05:00
BUFFET FODDER
orchidee said:
Pork pie - oh yes! My obsession in me madder moments! Good write and pic. Porkie pies - morning, noon, and night, please! heehee.
May 9th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Pork pie - oh yes! My obsession in me madder moments! Good write and pic. Porkie pies - morning, noon, and night, please! heehee.
May 9th, 2017 01:48
BUFFET FODDER
Goldfinch60 said:
Pizzas are OK as you rightly say Michael as a snack or lunch but not as a main meal.
Good write and good painting.
May 9th, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Pizzas are OK as you rightly say Michael as a snack or lunch but not as a main meal.
Good write and good painting.
May 9th, 2017 01:24
BUFFET FODDER
swingline said:
Beautiful painting ! I used to love pizza . Now I don\'t . They used to use real cheese , great sauce and toppings that pleased . You would think you\'ve hit oil . So much grease , maybe you could get $5 a barrel .
No wonder you can get two large pizzas for $10 a pop . But before you do , just think about it and stop .
May 9th, 2017 00:46
swingline said:
Beautiful painting ! I used to love pizza . Now I don\'t . They used to use real cheese , great sauce and toppings that pleased . You would think you\'ve hit oil . So much grease , maybe you could get $5 a barrel .
No wonder you can get two large pizzas for $10 a pop . But before you do , just think about it and stop .
May 9th, 2017 00:46
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