Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
DAWN WAITS
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Brian - yes it\'s my lane although I live behind the cottages to the left. Must agree about the last line - I often have one in mind even before I start scribing.
March 30th, 2017 09:58
Michael Edwards said:
Cheers Brian - yes it\'s my lane although I live behind the cottages to the left. Must agree about the last line - I often have one in mind even before I start scribing.
March 30th, 2017 09:58
DAWN WAITS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so \"English Country Lane !\"
March 30th, 2017 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT EXPECTATIONS MICHAEL ~ In my experience the last lines of verses in any poem are always the BEST. You have just proved it ! BRIAN ~ Love the picture so \"English Country Lane !\"
March 30th, 2017 08:19
DAWN WAITS
Fay Slimm. said:
Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.
March 30th, 2017 05:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours are wonderful.
March 30th, 2017 05:49
DAWN WAITS
Michael Edwards said:
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.
March 30th, 2017 03:19
Michael Edwards said:
thanks goldfinch and yes its wheels are on the path - the road is quite narrow. Interestingly this is my road in the village and my property is set back behind the cottages - it is private in front of my property and there is also a paved section which belongs to me. However when they had a bit of a clampdown on pavement parking a few years back I had a note on my windscreen saying I was illegally parked and I had great pleasure in telling the authorities (armed wit h a copy of the deeds) that it was they who had acted illegally be entering into a private cul-de-sac.
March 30th, 2017 03:19
DAWN WAITS
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful ending.
Good art as well. Does the car have its wheels on the path?
March 30th, 2017 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful ending.
Good art as well. Does the car have its wheels on the path?
March 30th, 2017 02:20
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Cool ending ! No Love story completes ~ until they couple between the sheets ! Strange but true ~ that we all end up there in the end ~ PARADISE ! Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2017 17:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Cool ending ! No Love story completes ~ until they couple between the sheets ! Strange but true ~ that we all end up there in the end ~ PARADISE ! Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2017 17:16
THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Michael Edwards said:
I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter stuff to balance the books is always welcome - look forward to seeing your future postings Garry.
March 29th, 2017 13:07
Michael Edwards said:
I do my share of gloom as well which is fine but a little bit of lighter stuff to balance the books is always welcome - look forward to seeing your future postings Garry.
March 29th, 2017 13:07
THE MAN NEXT DOOR
Garry said:
I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However i have tried to balance the books with a few recent efforts. Which are bit lighter and a couple more to come over the next few weeks. Mixed in with the darker stuff of course. Hope they cheer you up as much as this cheered me.
March 29th, 2017 12:56
Garry said:
I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However i have tried to balance the books with a few recent efforts. Which are bit lighter and a couple more to come over the next few weeks. Mixed in with the darker stuff of course. Hope they cheer you up as much as this cheered me.
March 29th, 2017 12:56
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Tony36 said:
Awesome conclusion to an awesome write
March 29th, 2017 10:09
Tony36 said:
Awesome conclusion to an awesome write
March 29th, 2017 10:09
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
willyweed said:
Brilliant piece of work in its entirety! Bravo Poet!
March 29th, 2017 06:57
willyweed said:
Brilliant piece of work in its entirety! Bravo Poet!
March 29th, 2017 06:57
WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'key\' obviously fitted. The whole work is very good and each stanza would work on there own.
Mine\'s a pint of bitter please in that well painted pub.
March 29th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'key\' obviously fitted. The whole work is very good and each stanza would work on there own.
Mine\'s a pint of bitter please in that well painted pub.
March 29th, 2017 01:13
WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
MendedFences27 said:
Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even bathroom? Where is Sherlock when you need him? Following with baited breathe. - Phil A.
March 28th, 2017 20:03
MendedFences27 said:
Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even bathroom? Where is Sherlock when you need him? Following with baited breathe. - Phil A.
March 28th, 2017 20:03
WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
WriteBeLight said:
Oh for crying out loud! Ha Ha. Great picture. Does it have something to do with that? That is, your story?
March 28th, 2017 18:43
WriteBeLight said:
Oh for crying out loud! Ha Ha. Great picture. Does it have something to do with that? That is, your story?
March 28th, 2017 18:43
WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Creaking stairs & keys ~ Oh yes I remember it well ~ tomorrow will be the denouement (it was ever thus ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my HAIKU ~ Thank B
March 28th, 2017 05:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Creaking stairs & keys ~ Oh yes I remember it well ~ tomorrow will be the denouement (it was ever thus ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my HAIKU ~ Thank B
March 28th, 2017 05:47
WAS IT LOVE ? (5)
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the continuation of this romantic story - - good idea Michael - your words have indeed aroused curiosity
March 28th, 2017 04:15
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the continuation of this romantic story - - good idea Michael - your words have indeed aroused curiosity
March 28th, 2017 04:15
WAS IT LOVE (4)
rrodriguez said:
Keep the intrigue and the love flowing... great job with both, the poem and the painting.
March 27th, 2017 19:13
rrodriguez said:
Keep the intrigue and the love flowing... great job with both, the poem and the painting.
March 27th, 2017 19:13
WAS IT LOVE (4)
MendedFences27 said:
Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really stairs? The intrigue mounts. I want you to install a >> key.Great write, holds everyone\'s attention. Keeps us mystified. Wanting more. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2017 15:10
MendedFences27 said:
Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really stairs? The intrigue mounts. I want you to install a >> key.Great write, holds everyone\'s attention. Keeps us mystified. Wanting more. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2017 15:10
WAS IT LOVE (4)
Tony36 said:
Been loving the whole set. Can\'t wait for the rest. Great write
March 27th, 2017 08:01
Tony36 said:
Been loving the whole set. Can\'t wait for the rest. Great write
March 27th, 2017 08:01
WAS IT LOVE (4)
WriteBeLight said:
Is everybody lit? A line from one of my favorite movies. Humm... trying to visualize where this is going.
March 27th, 2017 01:58
WriteBeLight said:
Is everybody lit? A line from one of my favorite movies. Humm... trying to visualize where this is going.
March 27th, 2017 01:58
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