Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



A SHEDFUL OF 575s (4)
FineB said:

Hi Michael,

Good write.

Sometimes life itself with its challenges can be a bit futile.

Keep writing FineB

July 18th, 2019 04:16

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FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Great write. Poignant.

Keep writing
FineB

July 18th, 2019 04:15

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orchidee said:

A good write and pic M. Is there a Poppy Berles?

July 18th, 2019 01:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

\"We will remember them.\"

July 18th, 2019 01:12

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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Maybe if I read all parts I would comprehend this better? Anyway this is an awesome poem in brevity, great word choice. Kudos.

It\'s always nice to delve in to your muse on my reading tours.

Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?

July 17th, 2019 15:21

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE for pic \'n poem. My study of PHYSICS informs me that what goes UP must (eventually) come down ! The DEPRAVITY of GRAVITY !

Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 17th, 2019 14:45

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dusk arising said:

Reads like me staring at my screen when my muse has done a runner.

July 17th, 2019 12:59

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

An interesting write...
I sincerely hope your new commission is not the ‘Sisyphean task’ referred to in today’s 575! 😉

I love the painting!

~Laura~

July 17th, 2019 09:41

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Is this Sisyphus Berles?!

July 17th, 2019 01:48

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Goldfinch60 said:

Proverbial pain,
As the rock goes up,
Only to roll down.

July 17th, 2019 01:28

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MICHAEL ~ love the PINKS Natures pallette is awesome shade-wise ! Thank GOD Children are not colour blind and are politically neutral. Being fresh out from God they have a non~fanatical view of things Spiritual 1 JESUS said except you become as LITTLE CHILDREN you cannot see (perceive) Gods Kingdom ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 15th, 2019 09:11

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Suresh said:

Am little better at these

July 15th, 2019 08:40

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Neville said:

Truth hurts people, even poets so I\'m told.... wise words indeed.. yours sir, not mine........

July 15th, 2019 02:23

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. One rather upper-class church found a new Vicar rather futile and tiresome. They\'re getting better now, but the Vicar still has his pony-tail hair. Some previous vicars there were grouches, so take your pick!

July 15th, 2019 01:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wise words Michael. Children are so innocent.

July 15th, 2019 01:49

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

UN BEL DIPINTO!

A beautiful watercolour!
I know exactly where that is! It’s not too far from where I lived for a few years!
We can sit at one of those tables and enjoy il VINO, le OLIVE, and il FORMAGGIO! If my dad were with us, he would also like some PANE RUSTICO!

The poem is delightful!
The simplicity of yesteryear!

~Laura~




July 14th, 2019 15:46

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I will leave an aired bottle of Barolo on the table on the right
Beauty of an image there Michael
BRAVO

July 14th, 2019 13:53

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Suresh said:

Open doors = open invitation
Straw mattress = simplicity
Room with open door, keep nothing out, and thus your world is wherever you are.

I have not really understood Haiku, and maybe you can enlighten me.

July 14th, 2019 09:52

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BUON GIORNO UNCLE MICHAEL : ANGELA here (9:30 pm Another day of Rest & Religion safely passed !) BRIAN & I love ITALY and you have captured her perfect Geometry and Angularity !
When I read your HAIKU my first impression was that it was a truncated tribute to the 50th Anniversay of the greatest leap in the History of Mankind ! The manned landing on the Moon by the forever HEROS Aldrin - Armstrong - Collins. Think about it !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 14th, 2019 03:44

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Christina8 said:

Marvelous picture and poem Michael!

July 14th, 2019 01:56

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Neville said:

you have penned a little masterpiece here Michael, tho brief, I think this is now one of my favorite\'s of yours... a smashing watercolour too... Neville

July 14th, 2019 01:48

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

July 14th, 2019 01:42

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Fay Slimm. said:

P.S. - - Michael the intriguing penning is engaging too.......... I sort of forgot to mention that as my eyes were caught by the glorious watercolour ................

July 14th, 2019 01:13

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Goldfinch60 said:

That painting is sublime - it is amazing what wonders can be conceived from a small room.

July 14th, 2019 01:13

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Fay Slimm. said:

The painting of Italy\'s wonderful street deserves to be hung and will be welcomed I\'m sure - your talent shows no bounds my friend.

July 14th, 2019 01:10

FIRST SIGHTING
Goldfinch60 said:

Those sights are so rare.

No cuckoos heard this year - yet.

July 14th, 2019 00:32

FIRST SIGHTING
Suresh said:

When riding a bike, the only gas required - the one produced by cyclist.
Enjoyable read

July 14th, 2019 00:13

FIRST SIGHTING
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING MIKE ~ Brian here burning the Midnight Oil trying to read ~ perchance to comment ~ on todays MPS Poetry ! I wrote a while ago about ALIGATORS ! But Ive never seen a Poem by your Goodself saying you had seen Your first ALIGATOR of the season in a Cotswold Pond ! AND WHY ? Because its not ALIGATOR COUNTRY and one might go 100 years or more and not see ONE ! The same is true of VELOCOPEDES ! You are not in BICYCLE COUNTRY ! Im not too far from CAMBRIDGE and in May I went to visit some Friends at the University and during the course of the day I saw hundreds of BIKES some static and chained to railings and some actually being PEDDALED by both M & F of the species. Mainly YOUNG (Students) but some Grey & White haired ! The % of Poeple who cycle (at last once per month) in CAMBRIDGE (58) ~ OXFORD (33) NORTHAMPTON (17) LONDON (16 !) LIVERPOOL (11) IN the UK in 2013 there were 3.3 million bicycles sold (mainly for children) and only 2.2 million cars ! Bicycles rule OK !

Seek UNCLE MIKE and YOU will FIND
Homo Bicyclo Locomotus Cantab !
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours as always BRIAN (Green Cyclist !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 13th, 2019 17:31

FIRST SIGHTING
Fay Slimm. said:

Point taken Mike on the cyclist and sighting of Spring......... super read.

July 13th, 2019 03:20

FIRST SIGHTING
Neville said:

Yes sir a fine write indeed & guess what... I am listening to a cuckoo as I type... that and a cockerel seem to be competing..... N.

July 13th, 2019 02:43



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