Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WHY?
Clara said:
Oh, I was not expecting this from the first line. I actually laughed out loud at my desk at work. Excellent!
October 1st, 2019 06:42
Clara said:
Oh, I was not expecting this from the first line. I actually laughed out loud at my desk at work. Excellent!
October 1st, 2019 06:42
WHY?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Sleeping NAKED on a JUMBO JET
Flying NUDO as nature intended
OK from the back (my buttocks are set)
But NOT THE FRONT ~ with my JOYSTICK extended !
Very DROLL Uncle Mike ~ Too much exposure on a Pubic Flight is a Dangerous Thing ! Youve been watching too many James Bond Films again ! Gives a MAN ideas beyond his destination ! Love the NAKED DAISIES !
BLESSINGS to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY !
October 1st, 2019 04:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Sleeping NAKED on a JUMBO JET
Flying NUDO as nature intended
OK from the back (my buttocks are set)
But NOT THE FRONT ~ with my JOYSTICK extended !
Very DROLL Uncle Mike ~ Too much exposure on a Pubic Flight is a Dangerous Thing ! Youve been watching too many James Bond Films again ! Gives a MAN ideas beyond his destination ! Love the NAKED DAISIES !
BLESSINGS to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY !
October 1st, 2019 04:51
WHY?
dusk arising said:
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and barge
for the strangest vision
his fuselage
October 1st, 2019 03:41
dusk arising said:
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and barge
for the strangest vision
his fuselage
October 1st, 2019 03:41
WHY?
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! How does Miss Berles sleep? And how would we know?!
October 1st, 2019 01:50
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! How does Miss Berles sleep? And how would we know?!
October 1st, 2019 01:50
DEFINITIONS
dusk arising said:
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll make an absolute..... erm, invention i guess.
September 30th, 2019 14:00
dusk arising said:
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll make an absolute..... erm, invention i guess.
September 30th, 2019 14:00
DEFINITIONS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ! As you know I try to use Accepted Descriptive Poetic Language when refering to my own *CLASSICAL POETRY* and I encourage ANGELA to do likewise ! You are older than both of us together so I have copied your POEM to make (doubly ) sure we are right in future ~ AMEN ! Love the IRIS !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check Angelas
MY OCTOBER BLUES !
PS For us any Poem with
14 lines is a SONNET ~ OK !
September 30th, 2019 09:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ! As you know I try to use Accepted Descriptive Poetic Language when refering to my own *CLASSICAL POETRY* and I encourage ANGELA to do likewise ! You are older than both of us together so I have copied your POEM to make (doubly ) sure we are right in future ~ AMEN ! Love the IRIS !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check Angelas
MY OCTOBER BLUES !
PS For us any Poem with
14 lines is a SONNET ~ OK !
September 30th, 2019 09:40
DEFINITIONS
orchidee said:
I dunno if I did find out exactly about them iambic pentameters. I may have been using them without knowing it!
A metre - 39 inches!
September 30th, 2019 01:43
orchidee said:
I dunno if I did find out exactly about them iambic pentameters. I may have been using them without knowing it!
A metre - 39 inches!
September 30th, 2019 01:43
THE END YEARS
marijoy said:
Oh that sweet and secure love that only maturity can bring us. A safe and divine place. Lovely words Michael.
September 26th, 2019 21:13
marijoy said:
Oh that sweet and secure love that only maturity can bring us. A safe and divine place. Lovely words Michael.
September 26th, 2019 21:13
THE END YEARS
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are multi-layered my friend.
September 26th, 2019 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are multi-layered my friend.
September 26th, 2019 15:33
THE END YEARS
FredPeyer said:
This beautiful poem spoke to me. You are preaching to a believer.
September 26th, 2019 12:47
FredPeyer said:
This beautiful poem spoke to me. You are preaching to a believer.
September 26th, 2019 12:47
THE END YEARS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10:30pm FRIDAY) BLUE flowers always speak to Me of nostalgia ! Im getting nostalgic for ESSEX (Ive polished me White Stilletos & Handbag !) Love your tribute to *A LIFE WELL LIVED & LOVED* which is true of many Seniors on MPS. We look forward to joining the Married Ranks in 2020 !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 26th, 2019 05:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10:30pm FRIDAY) BLUE flowers always speak to Me of nostalgia ! Im getting nostalgic for ESSEX (Ive polished me White Stilletos & Handbag !) Love your tribute to *A LIFE WELL LIVED & LOVED* which is true of many Seniors on MPS. We look forward to joining the Married Ranks in 2020 !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 26th, 2019 05:29
THE END YEARS
Neville said:
Both words and accompanying image are quite beautiful..... Yes indeed.
Neville
September 26th, 2019 04:49
Neville said:
Both words and accompanying image are quite beautiful..... Yes indeed.
Neville
September 26th, 2019 04:49
THE END YEARS
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never end Michael.
I like the painting.
September 26th, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never end Michael.
I like the painting.
September 26th, 2019 01:19
OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm WED in NZ) Hi Uncle Mike 11,500 miles away we are laffing our socks off at the DAILY CIRCUS with BOJO the Clown & JC the Lion Tamer ! The Mother of Parliaments on Laffing Gas ! I wish I could stay in NZ where sanity prevails but I am betrothed to BRIAN and I owe a lot to my Parents. I have asked the Hospital to keep my JOB open and the Applied Science Department @ the Uni have said they woud employ Brian as a Research Tecnician on *The Effects of Global Warming and Wind Farms on the NZ Environment !*
Boris J & Corbyn resolved to have a Battle
For Boris J said Corbyn had slandered him with Prattle
The faced across the PLAYPEN with a RED & BLUE RATTLE
What happened NEXT is in the TEXT
Writ large on the DAUB & WATTLE !
Thinking of you ALL in thes days of Political Gobble de Gook !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 25th, 2019 05:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm WED in NZ) Hi Uncle Mike 11,500 miles away we are laffing our socks off at the DAILY CIRCUS with BOJO the Clown & JC the Lion Tamer ! The Mother of Parliaments on Laffing Gas ! I wish I could stay in NZ where sanity prevails but I am betrothed to BRIAN and I owe a lot to my Parents. I have asked the Hospital to keep my JOB open and the Applied Science Department @ the Uni have said they woud employ Brian as a Research Tecnician on *The Effects of Global Warming and Wind Farms on the NZ Environment !*
Boris J & Corbyn resolved to have a Battle
For Boris J said Corbyn had slandered him with Prattle
The faced across the PLAYPEN with a RED & BLUE RATTLE
What happened NEXT is in the TEXT
Writ large on the DAUB & WATTLE !
Thinking of you ALL in thes days of Political Gobble de Gook !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 25th, 2019 05:03
OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS
orchidee said:
A good clerihew M. Does Miss Berles know Cleri Hughes?
September 25th, 2019 01:24
orchidee said:
A good clerihew M. Does Miss Berles know Cleri Hughes?
September 25th, 2019 01:24
OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS
dusk arising said:
And now the way forward
could become quite awkward
unless we get an erection
a general election
September 25th, 2019 00:38
dusk arising said:
And now the way forward
could become quite awkward
unless we get an erection
a general election
September 25th, 2019 00:38
REINCARNATION
Suresh said:
What a fantastic re-molecularization of that which is now you-
September 23rd, 2019 11:27
Suresh said:
What a fantastic re-molecularization of that which is now you-
September 23rd, 2019 11:27
LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael, never pass a loo!
September 22nd, 2019 13:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Michael, never pass a loo!
September 22nd, 2019 13:33
LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE very DROLL or should be DROOL ? My (BRIAN) Cousin who is a water-works Nurse tells me that the prostrate begins to disfunction (and break down) in ALL MEN over 70 having done its JOB. She tells me the Treatments (Radiotherapy etc) can play havoc wth the Water-works and reduce the holding time from 5 minutes to 5 seconds ! Something for me to look forward to in 1953 ~ OK ~ Life gets tedious dont it ! Thanks for warning ! We have houses like that in Essex for £1 million ! Love the Painting !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian 🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 21st, 2019 13:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE very DROLL or should be DROOL ? My (BRIAN) Cousin who is a water-works Nurse tells me that the prostrate begins to disfunction (and break down) in ALL MEN over 70 having done its JOB. She tells me the Treatments (Radiotherapy etc) can play havoc wth the Water-works and reduce the holding time from 5 minutes to 5 seconds ! Something for me to look forward to in 1953 ~ OK ~ Life gets tedious dont it ! Thanks for warning ! We have houses like that in Essex for £1 million ! Love the Painting !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian 🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 21st, 2019 13:47
LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2
dusk arising said:
When in the city
here\'s a thought
you\'ll lose eighty quid
if in a doorway your caught
Damn this prostate design fault... most of us guys get the pleasure of keeping an eye out for the nearest loo..... and when u get there, worst of all, not the stench nor the filth, no the worst by far.... it\'s occupied!
September 21st, 2019 02:37
dusk arising said:
When in the city
here\'s a thought
you\'ll lose eighty quid
if in a doorway your caught
Damn this prostate design fault... most of us guys get the pleasure of keeping an eye out for the nearest loo..... and when u get there, worst of all, not the stench nor the filth, no the worst by far.... it\'s occupied!
September 21st, 2019 02:37
LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2
orchidee said:
Oh, good write and pic M. If we miss some loos, we don\'t know when we may reach the next one. Can we \'hold on\'?! Oops.
September 21st, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
Oh, good write and pic M. If we miss some loos, we don\'t know when we may reach the next one. Can we \'hold on\'?! Oops.
September 21st, 2019 01:39
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