Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FULL CIRCLE
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thanks for a great write!
Life does indeed come full circle in your poem the bleakness of it at times.
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:38
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Thanks for a great write!
Life does indeed come full circle in your poem the bleakness of it at times.
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:38
DROLL COUPLETS (6)
Neville said:
ethyl alcohol & ya conscience.... a brilliant one we got here sir.. well penned me friend....
August 14th, 2019 03:53
Neville said:
ethyl alcohol & ya conscience.... a brilliant one we got here sir.. well penned me friend....
August 14th, 2019 03:53
DROLL COUPLETS (6)
Fay Slimm. said:
Taking control they debate your condition methinks........... moot point made in this lighthearted question my friend.
August 14th, 2019 02:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Taking control they debate your condition methinks........... moot point made in this lighthearted question my friend.
August 14th, 2019 02:36
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh they d exists Michael
But it\'s just you... on a good day!
August 14th, 2019 02:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh they d exists Michael
But it\'s just you... on a good day!
August 14th, 2019 02:27
DROLL COUPLETS (6)
orchidee said:
Oops! Bit swoony poem. It\'s the booze \'talking\', makes us say mad things. It\'s OK - I\'m on hand to add water to it!
August 14th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Oops! Bit swoony poem. It\'s the booze \'talking\', makes us say mad things. It\'s OK - I\'m on hand to add water to it!
August 14th, 2019 01:44
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Goldfinch60 said:
As long as they don\'t speak out loud and you are the only one who can hear them it is OK.
August 14th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
As long as they don\'t speak out loud and you are the only one who can hear them it is OK.
August 14th, 2019 01:42
DROLL COUPLETS (5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA BACK ! Missed your droll comments ! Like all Men : I suspect you didnt read the instructions !A couple of couplets to help you remember !
BUM FODDER (Toilet Paper) is Fo\' de BUM
TOILET BRUSH is Fo\' de BOWL not de BOWEL : OK !
Love & Peace to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 13th, 2019 15:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA BACK ! Missed your droll comments ! Like all Men : I suspect you didnt read the instructions !A couple of couplets to help you remember !
BUM FODDER (Toilet Paper) is Fo\' de BUM
TOILET BRUSH is Fo\' de BOWL not de BOWEL : OK !
Love & Peace to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 13th, 2019 15:51
DROLL COUPLETS (5)
Christina8 said:
I love your humorous writes!! Ha ha And reading your replies and answers is a hoot too!
August 13th, 2019 12:51
Christina8 said:
I love your humorous writes!! Ha ha And reading your replies and answers is a hoot too!
August 13th, 2019 12:51
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dusk arising said:
But so useful for dislodging pieces of nut stuck between the molars.
August 13th, 2019 04:34
dusk arising said:
But so useful for dislodging pieces of nut stuck between the molars.
August 13th, 2019 04:34
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent! Oooh I\'m with Andy OUCH!
I do not own a handkerchief
Snot should be binned, is my belief
August 13th, 2019 03:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent! Oooh I\'m with Andy OUCH!
I do not own a handkerchief
Snot should be binned, is my belief
August 13th, 2019 03:47
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Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - from where in your talented mind go these droll couplets appear is my question dear Michael .... you are a such a unique word-smith - thanks for another chuckle this read has given my day.
August 13th, 2019 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - from where in your talented mind go these droll couplets appear is my question dear Michael .... you are a such a unique word-smith - thanks for another chuckle this read has given my day.
August 13th, 2019 03:14
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orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write and pic M.
I saw \'Dragons Den\'. An invention of a small loo brush placed inside the actual loo, for, erm, convenience (what else?!). It didn\'t get any funding though. Aww.
You seen Lou Berles?
August 13th, 2019 01:41
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write and pic M.
I saw \'Dragons Den\'. An invention of a small loo brush placed inside the actual loo, for, erm, convenience (what else?!). It didn\'t get any funding though. Aww.
You seen Lou Berles?
August 13th, 2019 01:41
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Suresh said:
People die, debts don\'t
So poor people suffer while they are living and it doesn\'t stop there either.
I don\'t understand the purpose of occupying land after death!
Good piece and no, I don\'t want to start another war!!!!!
August 12th, 2019 10:03
Suresh said:
People die, debts don\'t
So poor people suffer while they are living and it doesn\'t stop there either.
I don\'t understand the purpose of occupying land after death!
Good piece and no, I don\'t want to start another war!!!!!
August 12th, 2019 10:03
DROLL COUPLETS (4)
orchidee said:
Yes, got an old tea chest ready? Is it the Co-op Funeral Service for you? Do Poundland do them for £1?!
August 12th, 2019 01:30
orchidee said:
Yes, got an old tea chest ready? Is it the Co-op Funeral Service for you? Do Poundland do them for £1?!
August 12th, 2019 01:30
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Michael Edwards said:
It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him off in
August 12th, 2019 00:26
Michael Edwards said:
It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him off in
August 12th, 2019 00:26
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Christina8 said:
I\'m so young I haven\'t made enough money to die yet!! DA\'s comments were hilarious!! Very good couplet Michael, always a conversation starter!
August 12th, 2019 00:21
Christina8 said:
I\'m so young I haven\'t made enough money to die yet!! DA\'s comments were hilarious!! Very good couplet Michael, always a conversation starter!
August 12th, 2019 00:21
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Goldfinch60 said:
The costs are increasing all the time,
I am wondering if I can afford to die!
(Not my problem though, the kids can just chuck me in My River).
August 12th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The costs are increasing all the time,
I am wondering if I can afford to die!
(Not my problem though, the kids can just chuck me in My River).
August 12th, 2019 00:18
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dusk arising said:
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha spend no money to see me off
told ya what would kill me
was this tickling cough
Why does it have to be so expensive to die? I honestly want a cardboard box or similar and a hole if i can (nutrients back to mother earth) or burn me if its cheaper.
You hit the nail for us older fogies today.
August 12th, 2019 00:16
dusk arising said:
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha spend no money to see me off
told ya what would kill me
was this tickling cough
Why does it have to be so expensive to die? I honestly want a cardboard box or similar and a hole if i can (nutrients back to mother earth) or burn me if its cheaper.
You hit the nail for us older fogies today.
August 12th, 2019 00:16
FULL CIRCLE
Suresh said:
A scene straight out of a thousand movies, but your pen paints a real scene
August 11th, 2019 11:55
Suresh said:
A scene straight out of a thousand movies, but your pen paints a real scene
August 11th, 2019 11:55
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Suresh said:
No matter how passionate but ...
- when one first awakes
- after a smoke
- a garlic or whatever
and so many more
I gotta go hygienic
..but passion is passion, it makes us all sub-human
Really enjoyed the reality
August 11th, 2019 11:50
Suresh said:
No matter how passionate but ...
- when one first awakes
- after a smoke
- a garlic or whatever
and so many more
I gotta go hygienic
..but passion is passion, it makes us all sub-human
Really enjoyed the reality
August 11th, 2019 11:50
FULL CIRCLE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The true circular economy very well expressed Michael.
The backbone of this wonderful country of ours... gone but NOT forgotten
August 11th, 2019 08:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The true circular economy very well expressed Michael.
The backbone of this wonderful country of ours... gone but NOT forgotten
August 11th, 2019 08:50
FULL CIRCLE
dusk arising said:
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like it uused tu neevah!
Took me back to living in the mining community of Nottinghamshire..... pit head baths/showers saved the tin bath regeime but the houses were there with smokey chimneys and stained brick.
Well written compact story within a poem taking many a reader straight along memory lane.
August 11th, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like it uused tu neevah!
Took me back to living in the mining community of Nottinghamshire..... pit head baths/showers saved the tin bath regeime but the houses were there with smokey chimneys and stained brick.
Well written compact story within a poem taking many a reader straight along memory lane.
August 11th, 2019 05:06
FULL CIRCLE
Fay Slimm. said:
Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and is no ending to the rigid requirements of living with miners.
August 11th, 2019 03:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and is no ending to the rigid requirements of living with miners.
August 11th, 2019 03:11
FULL CIRCLE
Neville said:
fine words painted on the page and as well as being beautiful, Lowery sprang to mind.... Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:09
Neville said:
fine words painted on the page and as well as being beautiful, Lowery sprang to mind.... Neville
August 11th, 2019 02:09
FULL CIRCLE
Goldfinch60 said:
I was taken right into that place and that time Michael.
August 11th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
I was taken right into that place and that time Michael.
August 11th, 2019 01:17
FULL CIRCLE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is Miss Berles going round in circles?!
August 11th, 2019 01:17
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Is Miss Berles going round in circles?!
August 11th, 2019 01:17
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A lovely write.
Good stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:23
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A lovely write.
Good stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:23
THE DREAM - THE REALITY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I guess now you’re having lunch...
and from what I read,
PASSION fruit is on your menu!
Enjoy!
I certainly enjoyed reading your penned words...
with a smile! 😊
The colorful flowers in your garden are amazing!
Have a wonderful weekend!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:36
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I guess now you’re having lunch...
and from what I read,
PASSION fruit is on your menu!
Enjoy!
I certainly enjoyed reading your penned words...
with a smile! 😊
The colorful flowers in your garden are amazing!
Have a wonderful weekend!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:36
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