Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Storm-Demons
Samer Amin said:
These lines are so pictorial and can throw the reader immediately amid this merciless storm, while still able to feel, hear or even smell the gale and the furious sea.
It is a beautiful words-painting of furious nature, in spite of the tragic situation of the people who got involved in it.
January 9th, 2021 11:09
Samer Amin said:
These lines are so pictorial and can throw the reader immediately amid this merciless storm, while still able to feel, hear or even smell the gale and the furious sea.
It is a beautiful words-painting of furious nature, in spite of the tragic situation of the people who got involved in it.
January 9th, 2021 11:09
Storm-Demons
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, if we look too closely, we\'ll see that cyclical fight for prominence within nature: we identify-with so easily...
as in those shoreline\'s of nature\'s - battle lines, where Sea - inches ever closer, to exert its insatiable need for dominance,
and we, simply wait to count destiny\'s cost:
\'the almighty worst of yet another gale
will rage then blow out
to reveal no tragic cost to coastal folk\'
a beautifully measured write dear Fay, how well you\'ve captured the \'lashing\' tide at full \'swing\' in your picture
January 8th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, if we look too closely, we\'ll see that cyclical fight for prominence within nature: we identify-with so easily...
as in those shoreline\'s of nature\'s - battle lines, where Sea - inches ever closer, to exert its insatiable need for dominance,
and we, simply wait to count destiny\'s cost:
\'the almighty worst of yet another gale
will rage then blow out
to reveal no tragic cost to coastal folk\'
a beautifully measured write dear Fay, how well you\'ve captured the \'lashing\' tide at full \'swing\' in your picture
January 8th, 2021 06:05
Storm-Demons
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, I could see the violence of the sea in your words.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, I could see the violence of the sea in your words.
Andy
January 8th, 2021 01:26
Storm-Demons
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a graphic picture - great piece Fay.
January 7th, 2021 16:32
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a graphic picture - great piece Fay.
January 7th, 2021 16:32
Winnow the Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Loves flame is always there and will always light our way.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Loves flame is always there and will always light our way.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:23
Winnow the Wind
Amon said:
Sweet as the droplets that dew the rose.
UMMM
Stay safe madam Fay, I need you to live through to next year and many more coming, that we keep enjoying such soothing words of yours again and again, keep sharing.
January 5th, 2021 07:58
Amon said:
Sweet as the droplets that dew the rose.
UMMM
Stay safe madam Fay, I need you to live through to next year and many more coming, that we keep enjoying such soothing words of yours again and again, keep sharing.
January 5th, 2021 07:58
Winnow the Wind
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed, so true and timely
as ever, beautifully penned!
Happy New Year dear Fay!
January 5th, 2021 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed, so true and timely
as ever, beautifully penned!
Happy New Year dear Fay!
January 5th, 2021 06:03
Winnow the Wind
Suresh said:
True love is oblivious to harsh realities, for it embraces even a sliver of hope and positively thrives when one \'winnow the wind\' as so romanticized by your words
January 5th, 2021 04:35
Suresh said:
True love is oblivious to harsh realities, for it embraces even a sliver of hope and positively thrives when one \'winnow the wind\' as so romanticized by your words
January 5th, 2021 04:35
White Stuff
Amon said:
I think nature is your best friend, you tell of him so frequently and vividly like you know him pretty well
YOU PEN IT SO GOOD MADAM F.S.
January 2nd, 2021 03:40
Amon said:
I think nature is your best friend, you tell of him so frequently and vividly like you know him pretty well
YOU PEN IT SO GOOD MADAM F.S.
January 2nd, 2021 03:40
White Stuff
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Fay, the time by the fire is much more rewarding.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Fay, the time by the fire is much more rewarding.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 02:03
White Stuff
Neville said:
You could have penned these words for my very own four legged friend Fay ........... she aint called Fay, by the way, she\'s called Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip ....
January 1st, 2021 13:03
Neville said:
You could have penned these words for my very own four legged friend Fay ........... she aint called Fay, by the way, she\'s called Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip ....
January 1st, 2021 13:03
White Stuff
dusk arising said:
Did i ever tell you i\'m a dog? Laying down in front of a fire and my paws going all floppy whilst I dream of snowmen.... mmmmm bliss.
Yep, your poetry has a profound effect, or am i going mad cos they wont let me out. We\'re on tier three, he he he.... can you tell it\'s driving me nuts.
January 1st, 2021 10:28
dusk arising said:
Did i ever tell you i\'m a dog? Laying down in front of a fire and my paws going all floppy whilst I dream of snowmen.... mmmmm bliss.
Yep, your poetry has a profound effect, or am i going mad cos they wont let me out. We\'re on tier three, he he he.... can you tell it\'s driving me nuts.
January 1st, 2021 10:28
White Stuff
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic first read of the year! And a happy cold one to you and the hound, I must admit the tips of my fingers really don\'t enjoy the beauty my eyes do...
Thank you again for starting me off with all of natures wonder, including the magical way you put thoses words together!
Felt warm and cozy by the end!
January 1st, 2021 08:04
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic first read of the year! And a happy cold one to you and the hound, I must admit the tips of my fingers really don\'t enjoy the beauty my eyes do...
Thank you again for starting me off with all of natures wonder, including the magical way you put thoses words together!
Felt warm and cozy by the end!
January 1st, 2021 08:04
Contact
Jerry Reynolds said:
My word Fay- that is good. Happy New Year. You five hours sooner than I but it is comming.
December 31st, 2020 15:10
Jerry Reynolds said:
My word Fay- that is good. Happy New Year. You five hours sooner than I but it is comming.
December 31st, 2020 15:10
Contact
dusk arising said:
Blimey fay your grammatical dexterity knows no boundaries.
December 31st, 2020 07:54
dusk arising said:
Blimey fay your grammatical dexterity knows no boundaries.
December 31st, 2020 07:54
Contact
L. B. Mek said:
\'May 2021 from
first to last month embrace lettered
efforts as success
bursts through floodgates
and poets shape lovely nectar from
sculpted alphabet. \'
Amen!
Happy New Year dear Fay, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'May 2021 from
first to last month embrace lettered
efforts as success
bursts through floodgates
and poets shape lovely nectar from
sculpted alphabet. \'
Amen!
Happy New Year dear Fay, stay safe
December 31st, 2020 06:41
Enforcement
L. B. Mek said:
\'Year\'s unruly winds change
on whim to precocious abuse-bolts showing
poor human enforcement
to vagary\'s climate. \'
how well you\'ve tapped into that intuitive connection with nature the rest of us ignore so brazenly, our dear conscientious Fay,
a measured and timely plea
for us to never forget
the cruelty of our wilful neglect
when remembering our debt to Mother Nature...
Absolutely brilliant!
December 31st, 2020 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'Year\'s unruly winds change
on whim to precocious abuse-bolts showing
poor human enforcement
to vagary\'s climate. \'
how well you\'ve tapped into that intuitive connection with nature the rest of us ignore so brazenly, our dear conscientious Fay,
a measured and timely plea
for us to never forget
the cruelty of our wilful neglect
when remembering our debt to Mother Nature...
Absolutely brilliant!
December 31st, 2020 04:52
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