Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Seeing Through
Neville said:
some things you just can\'t get enough of .. that second stanza is one such thing .. x
December 28th, 2022 04:30
Neville said:
some things you just can\'t get enough of .. that second stanza is one such thing .. x
December 28th, 2022 04:30
Christmas Resilience
Neville said:
the title speaks volumes & the rest say\'s it all ................ x
December 26th, 2022 09:06
Neville said:
the title speaks volumes & the rest say\'s it all ................ x
December 26th, 2022 09:06
Christmas Resilience
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Happy Christmas fay )) good writing
December 25th, 2022 05:27
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Happy Christmas fay )) good writing
December 25th, 2022 05:27
Christmas Resilience
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Fay.
Happy Christmas.
Andy
December 25th, 2022 05:15
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Fay.
Happy Christmas.
Andy
December 25th, 2022 05:15
Christmas Resilience
orchidee said:
Yes, life going on, whatever some folk may need to face, or have to face. Good write Fay.
December 25th, 2022 04:35
orchidee said:
Yes, life going on, whatever some folk may need to face, or have to face. Good write Fay.
December 25th, 2022 04:35
It May Be
Bella Shepard said:
Such a fitting picture accompanies this beautiful poem, of love that waits and never wavers. A gentle breath exhaled as I read, thank you!
December 24th, 2022 16:11
Bella Shepard said:
Such a fitting picture accompanies this beautiful poem, of love that waits and never wavers. A gentle breath exhaled as I read, thank you!
December 24th, 2022 16:11
Much Read.
Bella Shepard said:
The poignancy of this bittersweet poem does bring a tear to the eye, and also hope to the heart. For love never dies but is dearly held in a secret place that is only for us. Your words capture this beautifully. It is indeed a fav.
December 23rd, 2022 12:54
Bella Shepard said:
The poignancy of this bittersweet poem does bring a tear to the eye, and also hope to the heart. For love never dies but is dearly held in a secret place that is only for us. Your words capture this beautifully. It is indeed a fav.
December 23rd, 2022 12:54
Much Read.
L. B. Mek said:
so potently beautiful! dear Fay
(we all have those pages and photos
don\'t we
and how they, spill
back in to our lives
at the most, unexpected
time
right when we think, we\'re over it
there those images and words appear
to take us back under and we\'re drowning
in remembrance\'s waves
once again..
crazy, how alike
our experiences of life
can seem)
December 23rd, 2022 09:49
L. B. Mek said:
so potently beautiful! dear Fay
(we all have those pages and photos
don\'t we
and how they, spill
back in to our lives
at the most, unexpected
time
right when we think, we\'re over it
there those images and words appear
to take us back under and we\'re drowning
in remembrance\'s waves
once again..
crazy, how alike
our experiences of life
can seem)
December 23rd, 2022 09:49
Much Read.
Neville said:
Uncanny ................. love letters eh\' & all wrapped perfectly in their very own poem .. x
December 23rd, 2022 08:07
Neville said:
Uncanny ................. love letters eh\' & all wrapped perfectly in their very own poem .. x
December 23rd, 2022 08:07
Much Read.
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
That\'s a nice piece, Fay.
Letters could be old enough but must still shed tears...
December 23rd, 2022 07:42
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
That\'s a nice piece, Fay.
Letters could be old enough but must still shed tears...
December 23rd, 2022 07:42
Sleep\'s Acres
L. B. Mek said:
by nature I\'m an early bird
but I still love both your wording
and playfulness in this ode
to dawn\'s duality of importance
in all our lives..
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
a great read!
December 23rd, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
by nature I\'m an early bird
but I still love both your wording
and playfulness in this ode
to dawn\'s duality of importance
in all our lives..
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
a great read!
December 23rd, 2022 05:45
Ageless
L. B. Mek said:
and that\'s why, I believe
after all is done, Love
will be that which insures
humanity\'s survival..
\'In love we entrust, all our hope\'
(simply beautiful, dear Fay
such a warm reminder
to why we\'re all striving
to make such festive seasons
a pocket of joy
for the people we cherish in our lives
a timely write, thank you!)
December 23rd, 2022 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
and that\'s why, I believe
after all is done, Love
will be that which insures
humanity\'s survival..
\'In love we entrust, all our hope\'
(simply beautiful, dear Fay
such a warm reminder
to why we\'re all striving
to make such festive seasons
a pocket of joy
for the people we cherish in our lives
a timely write, thank you!)
December 23rd, 2022 05:41
Stillness
L. B. Mek said:
\'the
un-vocal recall notes
of non-sonance
which compose balm
of core- healing\'
brilliantly distilled, dear Fay
(these poem\'s message
rings so true
for oft
it\'s only once we\'ve survived
to a time - beyond, aftermath
we gain the necessary, space
to realise, all that we\'ve gleaned
as during the chaos and noise
of life
we\'re too busy, surviving
to heed our lessons in the moment
so yes,
like pauses in a conversation
we must allow ourselves
brief respites of stillness
to organise
what we\'ve just received or learned
lest they go to waste)
December 23rd, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'the
un-vocal recall notes
of non-sonance
which compose balm
of core- healing\'
brilliantly distilled, dear Fay
(these poem\'s message
rings so true
for oft
it\'s only once we\'ve survived
to a time - beyond, aftermath
we gain the necessary, space
to realise, all that we\'ve gleaned
as during the chaos and noise
of life
we\'re too busy, surviving
to heed our lessons in the moment
so yes,
like pauses in a conversation
we must allow ourselves
brief respites of stillness
to organise
what we\'ve just received or learned
lest they go to waste)
December 23rd, 2022 05:36
Sleep\'s Acres
Goldfinch60 said:
I am always an early riser, if I am still in bed at six in the morning I have had a lay in.
Andy
December 23rd, 2022 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
I am always an early riser, if I am still in bed at six in the morning I have had a lay in.
Andy
December 23rd, 2022 02:32
Sleep\'s Acres
Bella Shepard said:
For some reason sleep, in the early morning hours always seems the sweetest. Dreams seem the sweetest at dawn. Beautifully written dear Fay, you capture it perfectly.
December 22nd, 2022 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
For some reason sleep, in the early morning hours always seems the sweetest. Dreams seem the sweetest at dawn. Beautifully written dear Fay, you capture it perfectly.
December 22nd, 2022 15:47
Sleep\'s Acres
Neville said:
made me chuckle .. because I know exactly what you mean chuck .. x
December 22nd, 2022 06:49
Neville said:
made me chuckle .. because I know exactly what you mean chuck .. x
December 22nd, 2022 06:49
Ageless
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, I know this is so true in my life.
Andy
December 22nd, 2022 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, I know this is so true in my life.
Andy
December 22nd, 2022 02:22
Ageless
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay, this poem is so very special for me. Having been married 52 years, it speaks to me of tending that fire with great care. Thank you for saying it so beautifully.
December 21st, 2022 14:42
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay, this poem is so very special for me. Having been married 52 years, it speaks to me of tending that fire with great care. Thank you for saying it so beautifully.
December 21st, 2022 14:42
Ageless
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I\'m gonna put Fido out the back garden and have some \'ardour\'!
I dunno what it\'s like. Fido never lets me find out. heehee.
December 21st, 2022 11:14
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I\'m gonna put Fido out the back garden and have some \'ardour\'!
I dunno what it\'s like. Fido never lets me find out. heehee.
December 21st, 2022 11:14
Ageless
Doggerel Dave said:
\"kept lively..... with regular minding\" is hard work but gloriously worthwhile,
Thanks for the succinct reminder there, Fay.
December 21st, 2022 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
\"kept lively..... with regular minding\" is hard work but gloriously worthwhile,
Thanks for the succinct reminder there, Fay.
December 21st, 2022 06:40
Ageless
Neville said:
what a little gem Fay
& just like a diamond, both timeless and ageless .. x
December 21st, 2022 05:33
Neville said:
what a little gem Fay
& just like a diamond, both timeless and ageless .. x
December 21st, 2022 05:33
Stillness
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, silence can take us into another world.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, silence can take us into another world.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:21
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