Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Littleness.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

This is a very special poem I think Fay. \'Grass blades creak\' (why didn\'t I think of that?) A must for one of my Fayves if I may.

Thank you
Ex animo, Alan

December 20th, 2019 12:43

Littleness.
orchidee said:

A fine meditation Fay.

December 20th, 2019 12:03

Shore-Song.
Goldfinch60 said:

Another wonderful sea poem Fay, thank you.

December 20th, 2019 01:21

Shore-Song.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Can hear the music Fay. The timpani highlights the crashing waves.

Ex animo, Alan

December 19th, 2019 15:01

Shore-Song.
orchidee said:

A lovely write Fay.

December 19th, 2019 08:51

Shore-Song.
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful Fay - a fine write.

December 19th, 2019 06:25

Shore-Song.
FineB said:

Hello Fay,

An atmospheric and evocative poem.

Waves are a force in themselves.

Keep writing FineB

December 19th, 2019 06:15

Regeneration.
SerenWise said:

A gorgeous write... I can almost feel the calm of nature settling on my mind.

December 17th, 2019 21:02

Regeneration.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful calm laden write Fay.
Into favourites it goes.

December 17th, 2019 01:45

Regeneration.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for another perfect POEM ! A beautiful reminder that while we lie awake ~ fretting about BREXIT ~ NATURE rest peacefully and then awakens each Morning for our enjoyment ! Soundless - Healing - Wonder - Stillness - Contentment - Redemption & Regeneration. When we were YOUNG (in our respective Spheres) we both enjoyed CAMPING and that 5am feeling (when one left the confines of the Tent for a call of nature !) can really never again be recaptured ~ BUT your Poem does perfectly ! Your Poem stirred subconscious memories for both of us ~ AMEN ! We msut all learn to commune with Mother Nature to bring us back down from HI-TECH living to Mother Earth _ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing !

Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š

December 16th, 2019 19:07

Regeneration.
Michael Edwards said:

Tis indeed another mistress class of a wrote - super write Fay.

December 16th, 2019 11:14

Regeneration.
Unsub said:

Fay,

quite simply the best nature masterclass poem on MPS.

Nothing else needs be said about this perfect poem.

Unsub.

December 16th, 2019 04:46

Regeneration.
orchidee said:

A lovely write Fay.

December 16th, 2019 03:54

Foremost.
Suresh said:

Love is the strength of the weak -
- and the weakness of the strong.



December 14th, 2019 22:00

Foremost.
dusk arising said:

You have encapsulated many of love\'s wonders here but i feel there\'s one big quality of love which is missing - \"love hurts\".

Yes, love in all it\'s guises is the foremost power just as you state. I wish we could prescribe buckets full of it for those who have evil intent in their hearts.

December 9th, 2019 18:31

Foremost.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Fay, love conquers all.

December 9th, 2019 16:23

Foremost.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING FAY ~ The greatest Human Passion is LOVE ! We were created to LOVE& be LOVED !
V1. LOVE is supreme and acts unreservedly ~ it is eternal and is its own reward !
V2. LOVE is consistent & unflappable ~ Love is eternal & embraces Strangers ! Love sure is CATHARTIC ! All these descripters of Love are very important ~ day-by-day ~ in our RELATIONSHIP ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE Angela & Brian
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿงก

December 9th, 2019 15:09

Foremost.
Joker Green said:

I feel it!

December 9th, 2019 04:59

Foremost.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

December 9th, 2019 04:51

Catchtrap.
Goldfinch60 said:

The engineering capability of spiders is eloquently displayed in your words Fay, wonderful write. I don\'t mind spiders.
One of my work colleagues had very severe arachnophobia, she told me that once she was in her sitting room and a spider appeared, she raced out of the room, put pillows and blankets at the foot of the door and \'phoned her husband at work and got him to come home to deal with it\".
I of course then found a computer screen saver that had spiders on it - I think I still have the bruises!

December 6th, 2019 02:19

Catchtrap.
dusk arising said:

The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end reading this. What is it about the spider which puts us on edge so?
They\'re magnificent creatures and i respect them but i can\'t bring myself to like/love them as i do most other creatures.

If you find them as creepy as i do then you\'re a brave lass to write this splendid piece.

P.S. I was taught that they didnt kill their victims but paralyzed them so that they could eat them alive at their leisure. Not a very cuddly attribute.

December 5th, 2019 04:43

Catchtrap.
orchidee said:

An eloquent tale Fay. I was off to rescue a spider from the bath. It was too big to go down the plug hole anyway. Or was it? How do they suddenly appear in the bath?!

December 5th, 2019 04:37

Treasured.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay, those days are always so very special.

December 3rd, 2019 01:54

Treasured.
Michael Edwards said:

A perfect write Fay - can\'t say more.

December 2nd, 2019 13:17

Treasured.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Another wonderful voicing Fay, thank you.

Ex animo, Alan

December 2nd, 2019 11:32

Treasured.
sarahlynne said:

Such a thought provoking write, how simple, yet complicated as we know humans can be. Beauty in every thought if one stops and feels the words.... splendid work

December 2nd, 2019 11:10

Treasured.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

December 2nd, 2019 07:59

Treasured.
Unsub said:

Fay,

Not just visually stunning but emotionally sublime.

You have interwoven a whole experience into a short delightful piece.

A poetry master class for all MPS poets.

Unsub.

Ps. I quite enjoyed it! Lol!

December 2nd, 2019 06:25

Trust.
Goldfinch60 said:

Trust is so important in any relationship.

November 29th, 2019 01:42

Trust.
benevolentbluebabe said:

Trust, the foundation of love and intimacy; beautifully written!

November 28th, 2019 12:49



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