Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Heart-Breakers..
Maxine Smith said:

A fab read Fay.

January 3rd, 2020 06:59

Heart-Breakers..
FineB said:

Hello Fay,

A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.

Keep writing FineB


January 3rd, 2020 06:05

Heart-Breakers..
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 3rd, 2020 05:01

Heart-Breakers..
Michael Edwards said:

Great format - great write.

January 3rd, 2020 04:53

Winter\'s Low Sun.
Maxine Smith said:

Superb write Fay, starting the year with a few poetic bangs.
Love this.

January 2nd, 2020 17:18

Winter\'s Low Sun.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.

Ex animo, Alan

January 2nd, 2020 15:55

Winter\'s Low Sun.
Michael Edwards said:

So atmospheric - great write.

January 2nd, 2020 14:31

Winter\'s Low Sun.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.

January 2nd, 2020 12:30

New Leaves.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.

January 2nd, 2020 01:37

New Leaves.
dusk arising said:

From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.

January 1st, 2020 14:13

New Leaves.
LAWLESS said:

Haven’t seen a Shape Poem in a while, very nice.

January 1st, 2020 10:56

New Leaves.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).

HNY
Ex animo, Alan

January 1st, 2020 08:39

New Leaves.
Michael Edwards said:

Woew - some write - and a happy new year to you Fay - here\'s to another poetry laden 12 months.

January 1st, 2020 06:05

New Leaves.
Maxine Smith said:

Happy New Year Fay, a poem so wonderful and fresh, love this very much.

January 1st, 2020 05:57

New Leaves.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Happy 2020 Fay - Im honoured to be the first to comment on this very elegant ODE ! It is perfect in Rhyme - Rhythm & exact Topiary ! Also love the Message of OLD LEAVES being replaced by NEW ! This is very TRUE for BRIAN & I - New relationship HUSBAND & WIFE - New Home (some news to share later !) - & God Willing - the start of a NEW FAMILY - everything NEW ! Our thoughts and Prayers are with ANDY today as he bravely faces a NEW LIFE PHASE Today ! Nature has its purpose in the timing ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 1st, 2020 05:50

Sparkle.
Goldfinch60 said:

May your New Year be filled with the light of glory and wonder Fay.

Andy.

January 1st, 2020 02:21

Sparkle.
Suresh said:

May each sparkle shine like a bright thought, a selfless deed, and a warm welcoming heart.

December 31st, 2019 21:38

Sparkle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA here - Good evening FAY - Im just catching up on MPS before the party starts @ 10pm in Brians Flat to welcome in 2020 - AMEN. 2019 has been dramatic for us because - not only were we together after 15 months 11,500 miles apart(why is NZ so so far away from the UK ? !) but also we know that we will be together for ever AMEN ! So 2020 will be a very special Year for US ! A real NEW BEGINNING ! We were shocked & saddened to read ANDYS News - though we had been forwarned - It seemed so final & so sudden ! We have promised Him our suport & our Prayers 24/7.

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

December 31st, 2019 16:39

Sparkle.
Maxine Smith said:

Wonderful and refreshing, hope you celebrate the new year with a bang, happy new year.

December 31st, 2019 16:31

Sparkle.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Or if upper-class: \'Hurrah! Tally-ho!\' and all that posh rubbish! lol.

December 31st, 2019 12:13

Sparkle.
Nicholas Browning said:

Lovely message to accompany your unique and refreshing style. Another enjoyable read, Fay.

December 31st, 2019 10:10

Sparkle.
dusk arising said:

Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation of a good years gifts ahead and the delight of a sky lit up with fireworks.
Yes, a good fireworks display is indeed an exciting, thrilling show.
Your words have lit my touch paper already.... an air of expectation is buzzing.

December 31st, 2019 09:40

Sparkle.
Nemo said:

Well written πŸ‘Œ
I hope this year we can all be a better version of our selfs, and spread love and happiness. 🌹

December 31st, 2019 09:21

Littleness.
Maxine Smith said:

The beauty of nature and writing, my ideal serenity.
Stunning write Fay

December 26th, 2019 20:08

Littleness.
Suresh said:

Nature is awesome inspiring indeed, whether the giant sequoias or in a miniature form.

Merry Christmas

December 25th, 2019 20:12

Littleness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening Fay - Angela here (just enjoying my Horlics at MAMAS) - Its good to be home for a while after sharing a FLAT with RUTH and then 15 months in NZ ~ with Ruth. Little things mean a LOT! Great MANTRA and a Great Poem structure & subjectwise ! I love all the highlighted - little words - you use to amplify LITTLENESS !

Below - slowly - growing - flowing - whole - its own - blow
coats - my nose - burrows - unfolds - poem - soul !

Thnaks for sharing - Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘


December 22nd, 2019 17:26

Littleness.
Nicholas Browning said:

The little things, indeed. Still appreciate the way you weave words.

December 21st, 2019 15:05

Littleness.
Goldfinch60 said:

Another beautiful poem Fay, nature is so wonderful and so inspiring.

December 21st, 2019 01:21

Littleness.
LAWLESS said:

Matters of true significance. I just returned from a glorious bicycle ride out in nature with my son. We watched the sunset at an overlook, and talked about flying.

Your poem is wonderfully written. We all need to step outside more.

December 20th, 2019 19:29

Littleness.
Michael Edwards said:

Super work Fay

December 20th, 2019 14:47



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