Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Waiting Existence
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful image of love depicted it the ebb and flow of ocean tides. Its tumultous side as it crashes upon the shore, only to return to the ocean once again spent, in anticipation. You wield your pen as an artist on canvas.
February 2nd, 2023 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful image of love depicted it the ebb and flow of ocean tides. Its tumultous side as it crashes upon the shore, only to return to the ocean once again spent, in anticipation. You wield your pen as an artist on canvas.
February 2nd, 2023 13:40
Waiting Existence
orchidee said:
Good sea-type write Fay.
Me next poem will be on the turbulence in the duck pond, seeing I\'m not near the coast. lol.
February 2nd, 2023 09:43
orchidee said:
Good sea-type write Fay.
Me next poem will be on the turbulence in the duck pond, seeing I\'m not near the coast. lol.
February 2nd, 2023 09:43
Waiting Existence
Neville said:
This is so very very mistress Slimm one can not fail to be enthralled by the ink she has so perfectly spilt here .. x
February 2nd, 2023 06:31
Neville said:
This is so very very mistress Slimm one can not fail to be enthralled by the ink she has so perfectly spilt here .. x
February 2nd, 2023 06:31
Felt but Unheard
Neville said:
now don\'t that just say everything ... about love that is .. x
February 2nd, 2023 02:40
Neville said:
now don\'t that just say everything ... about love that is .. x
February 2nd, 2023 02:40
Felt but Unheard
orchidee said:
Yes, true write Fay.
When hitting the bottom of the barrel, the only way left is upwards - hopefully!
No, no, Fido, I didn\'t say hitting the bottom of the bottle. He\'s a one. He gets a bit confusedsh with my alliterationsh! Hic!
February 1st, 2023 14:30
orchidee said:
Yes, true write Fay.
When hitting the bottom of the barrel, the only way left is upwards - hopefully!
No, no, Fido, I didn\'t say hitting the bottom of the bottle. He\'s a one. He gets a bit confusedsh with my alliterationsh! Hic!
February 1st, 2023 14:30
Acceptance
Goldfinch60 said:
Accept all in your life and all will be well Fay.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Accept all in your life and all will be well Fay.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:58
Acceptance
Bella Shepard said:
It seems you have captured the stages of enlightenment in a brevity of words, which in itself is remarkable. I love the pic that you chose, it really punctuates this verse dear Fay. Great write, and a fav.
January 31st, 2023 15:15
Bella Shepard said:
It seems you have captured the stages of enlightenment in a brevity of words, which in itself is remarkable. I love the pic that you chose, it really punctuates this verse dear Fay. Great write, and a fav.
January 31st, 2023 15:15
Acceptance
Neville said:
~ surely
~~ there is
~~~ no other way
~~~~ what\'s shore next line anyway x
January 31st, 2023 08:50
Neville said:
~ surely
~~ there is
~~~ no other way
~~~~ what\'s shore next line anyway x
January 31st, 2023 08:50
Acceptance
arqios said:
Nice, superbly succint! I have of late been presented with such a situation wherein all three were wrapped up in the one - problem, challenge, and opportunity. What a progression, as is embodied in your latest post. Success carries with it a full and wholesome acceptance. Thanks Fay!
January 31st, 2023 04:41
arqios said:
Nice, superbly succint! I have of late been presented with such a situation wherein all three were wrapped up in the one - problem, challenge, and opportunity. What a progression, as is embodied in your latest post. Success carries with it a full and wholesome acceptance. Thanks Fay!
January 31st, 2023 04:41
Shore Song
Neville said:
I love the play on words here dear friend and poet .. and I sure can\'t fault it ................. x
January 30th, 2023 05:07
Neville said:
I love the play on words here dear friend and poet .. and I sure can\'t fault it ................. x
January 30th, 2023 05:07
Shore Song
L. B. Mek said:
thank you dear Fay
I really enjoyed the layout
line to line, I felt more immersed
in this depiction of a wave\'s arrival:
\'Ground shakes
Blast booms,
Waves break
Tidal sound
Water weight
Before long
tide turns round for another shore-song.\'
January 30th, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
thank you dear Fay
I really enjoyed the layout
line to line, I felt more immersed
in this depiction of a wave\'s arrival:
\'Ground shakes
Blast booms,
Waves break
Tidal sound
Water weight
Before long
tide turns round for another shore-song.\'
January 30th, 2023 03:52
Shore Song
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible pic for this oh so lovely poem dear Fay. While I\'m here in my land locked part of the midwest, I\'ve come to love the shore and all its splendor as I have traveled. Your vivid description of waves repeatedly breaking and retreating is as mesmerizing as actually being there, thank you.
January 29th, 2023 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible pic for this oh so lovely poem dear Fay. While I\'m here in my land locked part of the midwest, I\'ve come to love the shore and all its splendor as I have traveled. Your vivid description of waves repeatedly breaking and retreating is as mesmerizing as actually being there, thank you.
January 29th, 2023 15:58
Shore Song
Jane Frye said:
Very nice. Makes me feel like I am watching the tides.
January 29th, 2023 12:45
Jane Frye said:
Very nice. Makes me feel like I am watching the tides.
January 29th, 2023 12:45
Shore Song
Doggerel Dave said:
I can feel the sea\'s power in that, Fay. And it is the power I love to see from a safe distance - None safer than your poem.
January 29th, 2023 06:11
Doggerel Dave said:
I can feel the sea\'s power in that, Fay. And it is the power I love to see from a safe distance - None safer than your poem.
January 29th, 2023 06:11
Shore Song
arqios said:
That’s I song I shall never tire of hearing! Thanks Fay 🙏🏻
January 29th, 2023 05:15
arqios said:
That’s I song I shall never tire of hearing! Thanks Fay 🙏🏻
January 29th, 2023 05:15
Shore Song
orchidee said:
You had those shore-songs lately there?! Good write Fay.
I have to settle for the duck pond, not being near the coast. It don\'t whip up much of a storm there when it\'s windy.
January 29th, 2023 05:07
orchidee said:
You had those shore-songs lately there?! Good write Fay.
I have to settle for the duck pond, not being near the coast. It don\'t whip up much of a storm there when it\'s windy.
January 29th, 2023 05:07
Today.
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Fay,
Such a pleasure being able to read and enjoy your poetry again.
“Today I will reach heights above windy
ridges of mist”…
Reading these words make me feel like Spring has sprung and all is alive, and thriving.
Have a wonderful weekend.😊
Laura🌻
January 28th, 2023 13:57
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Fay,
Such a pleasure being able to read and enjoy your poetry again.
“Today I will reach heights above windy
ridges of mist”…
Reading these words make me feel like Spring has sprung and all is alive, and thriving.
Have a wonderful weekend.😊
Laura🌻
January 28th, 2023 13:57
Today.
Neville said:
There are no two ways about it, this whole page is one helluva splendid celebration Fay .. indeed a whole page dedicated to what might easily be my most favouritest English county .. x
January 28th, 2023 13:17
Neville said:
There are no two ways about it, this whole page is one helluva splendid celebration Fay .. indeed a whole page dedicated to what might easily be my most favouritest English county .. x
January 28th, 2023 13:17
Today.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay the picture you so vividly paint in words is just beautiful. We\'ve at least a couple of months to go here before spring is upon us. I\'m so glad that you are out and feeling the joy, the freedom that is being one with nature. Thank you for sharing the experience with this lovely verse.
January 28th, 2023 13:11
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay the picture you so vividly paint in words is just beautiful. We\'ve at least a couple of months to go here before spring is upon us. I\'m so glad that you are out and feeling the joy, the freedom that is being one with nature. Thank you for sharing the experience with this lovely verse.
January 28th, 2023 13:11
Today.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay on a beautiful time of the day. Enjoy.
Andy
January 28th, 2023 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay on a beautiful time of the day. Enjoy.
Andy
January 28th, 2023 02:46
Today.
Neil Higgins said:
\"I fall awake\" \"Still dozed\" \"Sand-hop\" \"cloud-shadows\" wow!! Another well thought out use of words for Springs approach Fay 😎👏
January 27th, 2023 17:59
Neil Higgins said:
\"I fall awake\" \"Still dozed\" \"Sand-hop\" \"cloud-shadows\" wow!! Another well thought out use of words for Springs approach Fay 😎👏
January 27th, 2023 17:59
Today.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Today, courting sweet Cornish morning
I choose to go breakfastless
and match Tessa my dog in chasing her
make-believe snacks
of tossed seaweed while bothering gulls
in beach-washed play.\'
a scenic postcard in words, just lovely
thank you! dear Fay
January 27th, 2023 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'Today, courting sweet Cornish morning
I choose to go breakfastless
and match Tessa my dog in chasing her
make-believe snacks
of tossed seaweed while bothering gulls
in beach-washed play.\'
a scenic postcard in words, just lovely
thank you! dear Fay
January 27th, 2023 07:08
Today.
orchidee said:
Ahh, mellower Spring-like days.
Fido did not budge, when we had freezing fog and frost - Brrr! Temperature about minus 500 degrees some mornings. Only yesterday it was a little misty, but not fog-bound.
January 27th, 2023 04:54
orchidee said:
Ahh, mellower Spring-like days.
Fido did not budge, when we had freezing fog and frost - Brrr! Temperature about minus 500 degrees some mornings. Only yesterday it was a little misty, but not fog-bound.
January 27th, 2023 04:54
Today.
orchidee said:
Today - every day - a fine poem Fay.
Flattery (?) will get me everywhere!
Here Tessa, good girl! lol
Pesky Fido won\'t leave the sofa for his daily walk. He will get up, pinch my armchair soon, and read the poems while in his carpet slippers and smoking his pipe (no tobacco in it!). lol.
January 27th, 2023 04:52
orchidee said:
Today - every day - a fine poem Fay.
Flattery (?) will get me everywhere!
Here Tessa, good girl! lol
Pesky Fido won\'t leave the sofa for his daily walk. He will get up, pinch my armchair soon, and read the poems while in his carpet slippers and smoking his pipe (no tobacco in it!). lol.
January 27th, 2023 04:52
Interdependence
Neville said:
they say no man is an island .. I guess that goes for spiders too ........... x
January 26th, 2023 13:33
Neville said:
they say no man is an island .. I guess that goes for spiders too ........... x
January 26th, 2023 13:33
Raining a Yesterday
Neville said:
how can I not just curl up in a ball and admit that I fell in love with these words .. the only reason is that duty call ........................ x
January 25th, 2023 05:15
Neville said:
how can I not just curl up in a ball and admit that I fell in love with these words .. the only reason is that duty call ........................ x
January 25th, 2023 05:15
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