Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
A Given Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Rosie had it absolutely right Fay and you words convey her feelings to the T.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Rosie had it absolutely right Fay and you words convey her feelings to the T.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:44
A Given Day
Bella Shepard said:
A Given Day, heaven on earth I would say. The venerable Rosie certainly knew her stuff. Sure would love to have known her. This is just lovely dear Fay
January 6th, 2023 13:22
Bella Shepard said:
A Given Day, heaven on earth I would say. The venerable Rosie certainly knew her stuff. Sure would love to have known her. This is just lovely dear Fay
January 6th, 2023 13:22
A Given Day
orchidee said:
Good write Fay and a fine Cornish day.
Neville beaten that egg yet?! lol.
January 6th, 2023 13:11
orchidee said:
Good write Fay and a fine Cornish day.
Neville beaten that egg yet?! lol.
January 6th, 2023 13:11
A Given Day
Neville said:
this is the golden side of glorious Fay .. and with a delightfully lingering aftertaste of Daphne Du Maurier about it ..
you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a decent mackerel sky now can ya .............. x
January 6th, 2023 12:57
Neville said:
this is the golden side of glorious Fay .. and with a delightfully lingering aftertaste of Daphne Du Maurier about it ..
you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a decent mackerel sky now can ya .............. x
January 6th, 2023 12:57
Love\'s Mind
L. B. Mek said:
\' time casts its image
on forgiveness unused.\'
\'We, what we are, write
discord in peace-tunes\'
Brilliant!
so deep, so very wise dear Fay
thank you and Happy New year!
January 6th, 2023 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\' time casts its image
on forgiveness unused.\'
\'We, what we are, write
discord in peace-tunes\'
Brilliant!
so deep, so very wise dear Fay
thank you and Happy New year!
January 6th, 2023 05:25
Love\'s Mind
Bella Shepard said:
Loves mind may compose beautiful music without dissonance. That is, until the poor musician attempts to play it. Such a good write dear Fay.
January 5th, 2023 13:58
Bella Shepard said:
Loves mind may compose beautiful music without dissonance. That is, until the poor musician attempts to play it. Such a good write dear Fay.
January 5th, 2023 13:58
Love\'s Mind
SureshG said:
Loves mind resides in the cockles of the heart where dissent rarely inhibits,
Your words poetically brings this to our awareness
January 5th, 2023 07:39
SureshG said:
Loves mind resides in the cockles of the heart where dissent rarely inhibits,
Your words poetically brings this to our awareness
January 5th, 2023 07:39
Love\'s Mind
Neville said:
its not all in the mind tho\' is it .. wouldn\'t it be just perfect, if it were everywhere .......... x
January 4th, 2023 15:00
Neville said:
its not all in the mind tho\' is it .. wouldn\'t it be just perfect, if it were everywhere .......... x
January 4th, 2023 15:00
Lovescape
Neville said:
Forsooth, God\'s teeth & by Saint George .. I need the post code if I am to be by thy side afore sundown and hightide .. x
January 3rd, 2023 05:46
Neville said:
Forsooth, God\'s teeth & by Saint George .. I need the post code if I am to be by thy side afore sundown and hightide .. x
January 3rd, 2023 05:46
Lovescape
Bella Shepard said:
This beautiful picture which
bespeaks the fair lady\'s ardor, as she awaits her valiant knight is perfect. Romance at its best, taking me off to a different time and place. Thank you dear Fay, it keeps the heart young.
January 2nd, 2023 15:22
Bella Shepard said:
This beautiful picture which
bespeaks the fair lady\'s ardor, as she awaits her valiant knight is perfect. Romance at its best, taking me off to a different time and place. Thank you dear Fay, it keeps the heart young.
January 2nd, 2023 15:22
Lovescape
orchidee said:
Now Fido won\'t let me have any \'lovescape\' and I won\'t get any \'ardour\' this year either! lol.
January 2nd, 2023 06:17
orchidee said:
Now Fido won\'t let me have any \'lovescape\' and I won\'t get any \'ardour\' this year either! lol.
January 2nd, 2023 06:17
Fartherness.
Goldfinch60 said:
May the future bring you happiness, love and peace Fay.
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May the future bring you happiness, love and peace Fay.
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:48
Fartherness.
Neville said:
just like one o Mr. Kipling\'s apple n blackcurrant pies, this is exceedingly good m\'lady ....... x
January 1st, 2023 12:27
Neville said:
just like one o Mr. Kipling\'s apple n blackcurrant pies, this is exceedingly good m\'lady ....... x
January 1st, 2023 12:27
Fartherness.
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to that which is farther ahead. Well I know now. lol.
January 1st, 2023 08:16
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to that which is farther ahead. Well I know now. lol.
January 1st, 2023 08:16
Emphasis
Bella Shepard said:
Fay, I am always enthralled with your beautifully crafted poems, but I have to say as I read this one and got to the end I couldn\'t stop laughing. This is priceless and so perfect for the end of a year where everyone seems over the top with emphasis. Not only are you the first lady of beautiful verse, but a wit extraordinare.
December 31st, 2022 15:38
Bella Shepard said:
Fay, I am always enthralled with your beautifully crafted poems, but I have to say as I read this one and got to the end I couldn\'t stop laughing. This is priceless and so perfect for the end of a year where everyone seems over the top with emphasis. Not only are you the first lady of beautiful verse, but a wit extraordinare.
December 31st, 2022 15:38
Emphasis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay. At least your did not put the empharsis on the wrong syllarble!
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay. At least your did not put the empharsis on the wrong syllarble!
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:48
Emphasis
Neville said:
not only is this bloomin fantastic and incredibly well thought out .. it emphasises a point that has long been a source of great personal consternation .. and I aint kidding ..x
December 31st, 2022 00:50
Neville said:
not only is this bloomin fantastic and incredibly well thought out .. it emphasises a point that has long been a source of great personal consternation .. and I aint kidding ..x
December 31st, 2022 00:50
Into Forever
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem with sublime muse wow! Kudos for this one!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:31
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem with sublime muse wow! Kudos for this one!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:31
Into Forever
Neville said:
if I had favourites Fay, this would be write up there, nestled high gainst a backdrop of cloud .. because not a lot else can climb that high .. x
December 29th, 2022 12:14
Neville said:
if I had favourites Fay, this would be write up there, nestled high gainst a backdrop of cloud .. because not a lot else can climb that high .. x
December 29th, 2022 12:14
Lessons
Neville said:
depending on which way one looks at this, it can be read as two separate but co-joint posts .. both delightful .. and an interesting format that prompted my first comment .......... x
December 29th, 2022 04:20
Neville said:
depending on which way one looks at this, it can be read as two separate but co-joint posts .. both delightful .. and an interesting format that prompted my first comment .......... x
December 29th, 2022 04:20
Lessons
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay ))
December 28th, 2022 12:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay ))
December 28th, 2022 12:49
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