Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Trust.
FredPeyer said:

What can I say, Fay, you\'ve got it!

November 28th, 2019 12:25

Trust.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - We have missed you in the last few Days -welcome back MPS seems to be back in equilibrium !This is an elegant LOVE POEM in both Form & Function ! It reminds us both of some of the important qualities of TRUE LOVE !
Constancy - Tenderness - Trust & Temperance - These are four of the many qualities in OUR RELATIONSHIP !

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 28th, 2019 09:55

Trust.
orchidee said:

Yes, as Alan says - but why do I use about a million words (sometimes) when five might do?! heehee.

November 28th, 2019 08:11

Trust.
Poetic Dan said:

Like the man above said! You never fail to give wonder & amazement with your unique flow.

Always a pleasure!

November 28th, 2019 07:59

Trust.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Out of a million words you always know which ones to select Fay. Excellence again....

Ex animo, Alan

November 28th, 2019 06:56

Crying Wolf.
orchidee said:

An old joke - I used to be a werewolf (don\'t ya know!) but I\'m all right noo-ooo-ooo-www! *permission given to groan at corny jokes of mine!* lol.

November 25th, 2019 06:08

Stirrings.
Zuzanna Musial said:

Excellent and a positive feeling in this poem. It is an excellent poem with a great advice. I too love the photo with such truth...Thank you for being my friend, Dear Lady Fay Slimm...Peace & Blessings. Zuzanna

November 23rd, 2019 20:32

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Zuzanna Musial said:

Dear Fay Slimm, your poem is filled with the visual beauty of the surroundings. The Nature provides poetry in motion to all. Just looking at the Four Seasons it creates a colorful poem itself...Beautiful poem. The second poem has a deeper meaning yet! I am into it with my whole heart. \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\"~ LOVE is around us, Dear poetess, I see it with my eyes. Great metaphors in your written verse...Fascinating read...Thank you...Zuzanna Musial

November 23rd, 2019 15:20

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Goldfinch60 said:

Two for the price of one and both priceless Fay.

November 23rd, 2019 00:57

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
FredPeyer said:

Two great poems, Fay! And Unsub is right, it is a great final stanza!

November 22nd, 2019 21:52

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING FAY ~ Love the Picture and *INTAKE* ! In NATURE nothing is ever static. Dawn to dusk ~ Autumn to Winter ~ Egg to Chicken to Hen. Always changing and you capture the dynamic of change in this excellent Poem !
WINGING IT ! We all have to thank UNSUB for suggesting an *MPS FUNDAY* to lift the melancholy following the removal of OUTBACK from MPS. Your witty contribution sure is *MILE HIGH* ~ Nudge nudge ~ Elbow elbow ~ SAY NO MORE ! Thanks for engaging !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 22nd, 2019 18:00

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Unsub said:

Fay,

really got into the first poem with such impressive word-play.

Then your bonus poem! Great final stanza!! LOL!

Unsub.

November 22nd, 2019 15:17

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Two for the price of one Fay. Always good but Doubly Bubbly good this day.

Ex animo, Alan

November 22nd, 2019 10:39

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
orchidee said:

Ahem, yes - Fido and I will swoon, and keep our feet firmly on the ground, not go a mile high! heehee.

November 22nd, 2019 10:13

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Michael Edwards said:

Ah - double bill Friday plus the bit of fun - super as always dear Fay.

November 22nd, 2019 08:54

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
Fay Slimm said:

Oooh - - sorry I didn\'t know anything about a Fun Friday not a chance now of altering my posting but may add a bit of fun at the end.......... will see later what comes into my mind........

November 22nd, 2019 07:42

Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday)
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

November 22nd, 2019 06:39

No Chance
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful emotion laden write Fay.
Those farewells will be hellos in time.

Andy

November 22nd, 2019 01:57

No Chance
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good evening FAY ~ sorry to be late with our reply ! We loved the Rhyme Pattern & Metre in this Poem very elegant ! When we are faced with the EMPTINESS in our lives occasioned by the death of a Loved One (V1.) echoes in our memories of past embraces ! V2. extends the grief occasioned by a sudden departure and this is expressed by the final doublet !

I confront the regret
That we had no chance for farewells !

Our experience is the Death of Grandparents and the premature & sudden demise .of Friends & Relations ~ However reading the context if yt is the Death of Partner ~ the pain is magnified a thousand fold ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN

Blessings & Love & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 21st, 2019 19:59

No Chance
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

This is a credit to yourself and MPS. Some words when cocktailed with wisdom and shaken (not stirred) are very special indeed.

Hope you will allow it me as a Fay\'ve (Any chance?).

Ex animo, Alan

November 21st, 2019 06:33

No Chance
orchidee said:

A nice write Fay.

November 21st, 2019 05:20

Stirrings.
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a meaningful write Fay. In conversation help is always there to help others.

November 21st, 2019 01:40

Stirrings.
orchidee said:

A fine poem Fay, yes.

November 20th, 2019 07:45

Stirrings.
Neville said:

A fine poem for a rainy day, or for that matter any day of the week....

Tho not a victim myself in the strictest sense, my adult life has been spent trying to help others less fortunate and certainly, those who experience the oft seriously debilitating effects of depression and the major affective disorders.... I so hope this does the trick.....

November 20th, 2019 04:03

Who I Am.
Goldfinch60 said:

Each of us is unique and once we find ourselves and our own lives (as I have again recently) freedom is ours to do what WE want to do - no longer shackled.

November 20th, 2019 01:27

Who I Am.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

November 19th, 2019 08:39

Who I Am.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY ! Self awareness *WHO WE ARE* is very very important ! That is the thing that matters - NOT what others think we are ! BRIAN & I both value our SELF AWARENESS & SELF VALUE and always act to try to preserve it ~ AMEM Thanks for the challenge !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก


November 19th, 2019 07:32

Who I Am.
Neville said:

Although thoroughly enjoyed dear Fay I must confess, for the first time ever, I may not have guessed , twas you that penned \'Who I Am\'....... Looks like you but in my head , I struggle.... I think tho that is your gift... you can not and should not be caged or forced into any corner, or poetic genre....... I know what I mean.. I hope you do too...... N

November 19th, 2019 07:13

Unmatched.
Neville said:

Nowt unclear here dear Fay.. every line thought through precisely

and serving to impress this lover of words and devout disciple of poetry.... N

November 19th, 2019 04:57

Crying Wolf.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening FAY ~ BRIAN here ! WOLVES denzims of the Night ~ always given a bad name in Nursery Rhymes and especially Stories for Children which is unfortunate ! Excellent structure ~ four balanced Quatrains and a consistent Rhyme Pattern xaxa xbxb etc. Every verse exemplifies the typical vulpine qualities which makes us both admire & fear them ! Thanks for sharing !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™


November 18th, 2019 16:39

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