Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
After Today
Neville said:
this is both exceptionally beautiful & sad ...... x
January 15th, 2023 05:11
Neville said:
this is both exceptionally beautiful & sad ...... x
January 15th, 2023 05:11
Seen
MendedFences27 said:
I like the visual structure of this poem,
how it relates to the words, \"fragments,\" \"seen,\" \"departure,\" \"wholly,\" and \"acceptance.\" The text speaks to the idea of self-awareness , but the visual implies the difficulty involved. Life and love are never easy. - Phil A.
January 13th, 2023 14:22
MendedFences27 said:
I like the visual structure of this poem,
how it relates to the words, \"fragments,\" \"seen,\" \"departure,\" \"wholly,\" and \"acceptance.\" The text speaks to the idea of self-awareness , but the visual implies the difficulty involved. Life and love are never easy. - Phil A.
January 13th, 2023 14:22
Seen
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay, you have succinctly and wonderfully captured the essence of self-awareness, packing into a neat little box with a golden bow. Thank you!
January 13th, 2023 12:21
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay, you have succinctly and wonderfully captured the essence of self-awareness, packing into a neat little box with a golden bow. Thank you!
January 13th, 2023 12:21
No Limits
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is Profound! dear Fay
another great read
January 13th, 2023 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
that last verse is Profound! dear Fay
another great read
January 13th, 2023 06:35
No Limits
MendedFences27 said:
\"Women write from and about the inside of a person, men write about only the outside\" - Something that came to me after reading your poem.
Thank you for provoking me to think. - Phil A.
January 12th, 2023 23:34
MendedFences27 said:
\"Women write from and about the inside of a person, men write about only the outside\" - Something that came to me after reading your poem.
Thank you for provoking me to think. - Phil A.
January 12th, 2023 23:34
No Limits
Neville said:
a gentleman neva dares & truly does one .. but merely wonders & then some ............ x
January 12th, 2023 07:31
Neville said:
a gentleman neva dares & truly does one .. but merely wonders & then some ............ x
January 12th, 2023 07:31
Stirrings
Neville said:
I can find no fault whatsoever with the image & message it conveys .. indeed both it and your ensuing poem read like a pair of universal truths .... x
January 12th, 2023 04:35
Neville said:
I can find no fault whatsoever with the image & message it conveys .. indeed both it and your ensuing poem read like a pair of universal truths .... x
January 12th, 2023 04:35
Stirrings
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Fay, we need to be aware of what is happening to each of us and have the wisdom to do the right thing for ourselves and others.
Andy
January 12th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Fay, we need to be aware of what is happening to each of us and have the wisdom to do the right thing for ourselves and others.
Andy
January 12th, 2023 01:54
Stirrings
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we come out on the other side a lot stronger and less vulnerable. A lovely poem depicting the strength gained after conquering the \"despair.\" _ Phil A.
January 11th, 2023 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we come out on the other side a lot stronger and less vulnerable. A lovely poem depicting the strength gained after conquering the \"despair.\" _ Phil A.
January 11th, 2023 16:06
Stirrings
Caring dove said:
It really can affect us , sometimes . I guess it depends . Good writing Fay .. nice read
January 11th, 2023 14:45
Caring dove said:
It really can affect us , sometimes . I guess it depends . Good writing Fay .. nice read
January 11th, 2023 14:45
Hold Me
Goldfinch60 said:
I sometime have nights like this but normally sleep overcomes me as soon as my head hits the pillow.
Andy
January 11th, 2023 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
I sometime have nights like this but normally sleep overcomes me as soon as my head hits the pillow.
Andy
January 11th, 2023 01:33
Hold Me
Neville said:
it is not hard to see or to understand where these words come from, nor to appreciate the beauty contained therein ........... x
January 10th, 2023 11:32
Neville said:
it is not hard to see or to understand where these words come from, nor to appreciate the beauty contained therein ........... x
January 10th, 2023 11:32
Hold Me
Caring dove said:
Life can be so difficult and sometimes sleep is that needed rest from thjngs that hurt us . A sad but beautiful and interesting writing , Fay ))
January 10th, 2023 05:22
Caring dove said:
Life can be so difficult and sometimes sleep is that needed rest from thjngs that hurt us . A sad but beautiful and interesting writing , Fay ))
January 10th, 2023 05:22
Treasured
Neville said:
to put it in simple terms, as far as poetry goes, this is nothing short of divine ... & truly .. x
January 9th, 2023 13:59
Neville said:
to put it in simple terms, as far as poetry goes, this is nothing short of divine ... & truly .. x
January 9th, 2023 13:59
Brightness
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a wonderful time of day Fay.
Andy
January 9th, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a wonderful time of day Fay.
Andy
January 9th, 2023 02:27
Brightness
orchidee said:
Let\'s spend that increasing minute or two of daylight each day wisely! lol.
The nights will be drawing in again after June 21st. I wish I would shut up being pessimistic. lol.
January 8th, 2023 11:27
orchidee said:
Let\'s spend that increasing minute or two of daylight each day wisely! lol.
The nights will be drawing in again after June 21st. I wish I would shut up being pessimistic. lol.
January 8th, 2023 11:27
Brightness
Bella Shepard said:
You grab my heart with this one dear Fay. The last stanza is so striking because it\'s what I feel each morning, starting out walking in the dark and experiencing that rising sun as you so beautifully put it \"first tremble of prelude to fire\". Thank you for this lovely reminder on this gray winter morning.
January 8th, 2023 10:46
Bella Shepard said:
You grab my heart with this one dear Fay. The last stanza is so striking because it\'s what I feel each morning, starting out walking in the dark and experiencing that rising sun as you so beautifully put it \"first tremble of prelude to fire\". Thank you for this lovely reminder on this gray winter morning.
January 8th, 2023 10:46
Brightness
rhmn_7 said:
The only suprise to show itself everyday, tirelessly.
January 8th, 2023 08:26
rhmn_7 said:
The only suprise to show itself everyday, tirelessly.
January 8th, 2023 08:26
Brightness
Neville said:
this is blindingly beautiful Fay .. like someone who knows exactly what they are doing with their colour wheel .. x
January 8th, 2023 06:43
Neville said:
this is blindingly beautiful Fay .. like someone who knows exactly what they are doing with their colour wheel .. x
January 8th, 2023 06:43
The Best
Neville said:
now that\'s what we around these here parts are delighted to call a love poem ........... x
January 7th, 2023 07:08
Neville said:
now that\'s what we around these here parts are delighted to call a love poem ........... x
January 7th, 2023 07:08
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