Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Crescented Magic.
Michael Edwards said:
Always admire your choice of words to create a vision - so imaginative Fay.
February 24th, 2017 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
Always admire your choice of words to create a vision - so imaginative Fay.
February 24th, 2017 05:55
Three Faces.
Augustus said:
It does not make you two faced as your canvases are full of your likeness, and therein lies beauty.
February 22nd, 2017 16:02
Augustus said:
It does not make you two faced as your canvases are full of your likeness, and therein lies beauty.
February 22nd, 2017 16:02
Three Faces.
MendedFences27 said:
What to do with the blank page? Fill it with meaningful musings such as these. She is an elusive child this Muse, always too early or too late, or off playing in someone else\'s field. I guess the only answer is persistence. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:16
MendedFences27 said:
What to do with the blank page? Fill it with meaningful musings such as these. She is an elusive child this Muse, always too early or too late, or off playing in someone else\'s field. I guess the only answer is persistence. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:16
Three Faces.
Michael Edwards said:
I always I\'m in for a treat when I click on to your work and this is exception - just great!
February 22nd, 2017 06:56
Michael Edwards said:
I always I\'m in for a treat when I click on to your work and this is exception - just great!
February 22nd, 2017 06:56
Being Fickle.
Michael Edwards said:
So expertly crafted but then so is all your work - another piece for the top table.
February 21st, 2017 11:48
Michael Edwards said:
So expertly crafted but then so is all your work - another piece for the top table.
February 21st, 2017 11:48
Being Fickle.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for your beautiful \"Ode to Spring\". Love the way you express it as Nature\'s love affair with the Earth and the Spring Flowers ~ very poetic ! Love the visual ! We are all noticing how early Spring has sprung this year and nowhere more noticeable (in the UK) than in your beloved Cornwall ! Thank B.
February 21st, 2017 10:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for your beautiful \"Ode to Spring\". Love the way you express it as Nature\'s love affair with the Earth and the Spring Flowers ~ very poetic ! Love the visual ! We are all noticing how early Spring has sprung this year and nowhere more noticeable (in the UK) than in your beloved Cornwall ! Thank B.
February 21st, 2017 10:19
Being Fickle.
MendedFences27 said:
Lovely. It\'s such a refreshing time of year, and you\'ve captured that sense in your poem. Love the personification of Spring, the plants, the flowers. We always seem to get that \"cold snap\" brief return of winter just as things start emerging from the ground. Loved your poem - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 09:51
MendedFences27 said:
Lovely. It\'s such a refreshing time of year, and you\'ve captured that sense in your poem. Love the personification of Spring, the plants, the flowers. We always seem to get that \"cold snap\" brief return of winter just as things start emerging from the ground. Loved your poem - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 09:51
Becoming Other.
Augustus said:
The understanding, appreciation and respect for \"other\" has never been so well said.
February 19th, 2017 13:51
Augustus said:
The understanding, appreciation and respect for \"other\" has never been so well said.
February 19th, 2017 13:51
Becoming Other.
MendedFences27 said:
Nature, in all its glory, can and does inspire. We become a bee, a fox, a tree for that matter, and it flows from pen to paper. Nature drags us to the realization of our place on this Earth. Egos are drained and \"I\" seems irrelevant. Could we stand on a mountaintop and proclaim our own importance? Very insightful, very well drawn images, beautiful poem. - Phil A.
February 19th, 2017 12:21
MendedFences27 said:
Nature, in all its glory, can and does inspire. We become a bee, a fox, a tree for that matter, and it flows from pen to paper. Nature drags us to the realization of our place on this Earth. Egos are drained and \"I\" seems irrelevant. Could we stand on a mountaintop and proclaim our own importance? Very insightful, very well drawn images, beautiful poem. - Phil A.
February 19th, 2017 12:21
Becoming Other.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
FAY ~ Consider the Lilies of the field how they grow ~ they sow not neither do they reap ~ but I say unto you that even SOLOMON in all his glory was not arrayed like one of these ! ~ The closer to nature we get ~ the more we can learn about ourselves and the Wonderful World we are privileged to inhabit ! Great thoughts for Sunday FAY ~ thanks for caring and sharing ~ B
February 19th, 2017 12:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
FAY ~ Consider the Lilies of the field how they grow ~ they sow not neither do they reap ~ but I say unto you that even SOLOMON in all his glory was not arrayed like one of these ! ~ The closer to nature we get ~ the more we can learn about ourselves and the Wonderful World we are privileged to inhabit ! Great thoughts for Sunday FAY ~ thanks for caring and sharing ~ B
February 19th, 2017 12:05
Outside of Time.
Augustus said:
Never too late for romance. To risk that chance. Nicely done.
February 18th, 2017 14:43
Augustus said:
Never too late for romance. To risk that chance. Nicely done.
February 18th, 2017 14:43
Changeling.
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, the wind can dance and twirl like a ballerina, and roar like a lion. It can whip the snow, the leaves, the dust, or it can leave us all in sweltering heat hoping for its return. Loved you poem. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 17:19
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, the wind can dance and twirl like a ballerina, and roar like a lion. It can whip the snow, the leaves, the dust, or it can leave us all in sweltering heat hoping for its return. Loved you poem. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 17:19
Difference.
MendedFences27 said:
Color in nature serves a multitude of purposes, attraction, defense, mimicry, and temperature regulation to name a few. To us they add beauty to what otherwise would be a dull landscape. Think this way- Antarctica is pretty dull, until the Penguins show up.
Your poem paints a colorful canvas of some of natures finest models. Your words are splashes of pigment that explain our appreciation of nature\'s abundance.
Loved it. - Phil A.
February 16th, 2017 20:29
MendedFences27 said:
Color in nature serves a multitude of purposes, attraction, defense, mimicry, and temperature regulation to name a few. To us they add beauty to what otherwise would be a dull landscape. Think this way- Antarctica is pretty dull, until the Penguins show up.
Your poem paints a colorful canvas of some of natures finest models. Your words are splashes of pigment that explain our appreciation of nature\'s abundance.
Loved it. - Phil A.
February 16th, 2017 20:29
Difference.
Tony36 said:
Diversity is the spice of life. Everyone adds their spice that is the soup pot of life. Great write
February 16th, 2017 08:58
Tony36 said:
Diversity is the spice of life. Everyone adds their spice that is the soup pot of life. Great write
February 16th, 2017 08:58
Difference.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the visual FAY it is a great compliment to your Poem. When God created the Natural World He was lavish with his paint brush ! This is why we have such excellent colour vision and when we visit Ireland we can distinguish even more than \"50 Shades of Green !\" W also have a responsibility to preserve the beauty of Earth\'s flora & fauna. Thanks for sharing and caring.
February 16th, 2017 08:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the visual FAY it is a great compliment to your Poem. When God created the Natural World He was lavish with his paint brush ! This is why we have such excellent colour vision and when we visit Ireland we can distinguish even more than \"50 Shades of Green !\" W also have a responsibility to preserve the beauty of Earth\'s flora & fauna. Thanks for sharing and caring.
February 16th, 2017 08:46
No Time.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful images, of the sea and the shore causing reflection of things passed. The ocean is symbolic of many things in life, the past, present, and future, love. faith, strength, weakness etc. Maybe because it encompasses 70% of the planet, it weighs heavily in our souls and our minds. You enlighten us with the manifest draw the sea brings to past recollections. We live near the ocean and are constantly drawn to walk its shores and to watch its forces at play. Great write. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 16:04
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful images, of the sea and the shore causing reflection of things passed. The ocean is symbolic of many things in life, the past, present, and future, love. faith, strength, weakness etc. Maybe because it encompasses 70% of the planet, it weighs heavily in our souls and our minds. You enlighten us with the manifest draw the sea brings to past recollections. We live near the ocean and are constantly drawn to walk its shores and to watch its forces at play. Great write. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 16:04
No Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the visual ~ very evocative. The sadness in your poem reminds us all that we should always seize the opportunities ~ each day ~ to ensure that when the Day of Parting comes there ar no regrets. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ B.
February 15th, 2017 12:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the visual ~ very evocative. The sadness in your poem reminds us all that we should always seize the opportunities ~ each day ~ to ensure that when the Day of Parting comes there ar no regrets. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ B.
February 15th, 2017 12:31
Was It He ?
Cheeky Missy said:
In the irresistible loss of my mother I\'ve talked with those closest to me, to find they confess meeting in their dreams whom they\'ve loved and since lost, where I recoiled from such a thing, yet once or twice have found it. This is, as wont, in your characteristically seductive style which draws the reader into the folds of that visionary wold (as Mrs. Barrett Browning referenced) where we lose ourselves to a moment to find..,.how crushing Death thievery forever is, yet granted a touch of solace in beyond, is that? Thanks for sharing. Love you! Oh, and kiss Princess Tessa for me.
February 13th, 2017 20:53
Cheeky Missy said:
In the irresistible loss of my mother I\'ve talked with those closest to me, to find they confess meeting in their dreams whom they\'ve loved and since lost, where I recoiled from such a thing, yet once or twice have found it. This is, as wont, in your characteristically seductive style which draws the reader into the folds of that visionary wold (as Mrs. Barrett Browning referenced) where we lose ourselves to a moment to find..,.how crushing Death thievery forever is, yet granted a touch of solace in beyond, is that? Thanks for sharing. Love you! Oh, and kiss Princess Tessa for me.
February 13th, 2017 20:53
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
