Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Bubble Magic.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
on the mind of your inner girl,,great write fay,loved the image
March 27th, 2017 10:06
ron parrish aka wordman said:
on the mind of your inner girl,,great write fay,loved the image
March 27th, 2017 10:06
Difference.
MendedFences27 said:
Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two humans the same. the breadth of colors and shapes in Nature that stimulate the eye, and Man\'s multitude of creations that we call art, all add to and give reason for living. A lovely poem, Fay, that captures and expounds on that glory of \"Difference.\" - Phil A.
March 26th, 2017 19:25
MendedFences27 said:
Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two humans the same. the breadth of colors and shapes in Nature that stimulate the eye, and Man\'s multitude of creations that we call art, all add to and give reason for living. A lovely poem, Fay, that captures and expounds on that glory of \"Difference.\" - Phil A.
March 26th, 2017 19:25
Difference.
Augustus said:
We are so blessed to have such a retinal display. Great!
March 26th, 2017 15:36
Augustus said:
We are so blessed to have such a retinal display. Great!
March 26th, 2017 15:36
Difference.
Philip said:
A lovely colourful poem Fay. The spring light adds colour to everything. Phil.G
March 26th, 2017 03:58
Philip said:
A lovely colourful poem Fay. The spring light adds colour to everything. Phil.G
March 26th, 2017 03:58
Difference.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes Fay - loved this and just off to the studio to get out my paints...can\'t say more.
March 26th, 2017 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes Fay - loved this and just off to the studio to get out my paints...can\'t say more.
March 26th, 2017 03:09
Beyond Ahead.
Christina8 said:
Really great poem. I enjoyed reading! What the future holds only God knows, but you did a fine job in writing about it!
March 25th, 2017 13:10
Christina8 said:
Really great poem. I enjoyed reading! What the future holds only God knows, but you did a fine job in writing about it!
March 25th, 2017 13:10
Beyond Ahead.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ None of really knows what the future hold ! HOWEVER I do know who holds the future and I happily leave it in GOD\'s hands ~ AMEN ~ Yours B
March 25th, 2017 10:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ None of really knows what the future hold ! HOWEVER I do know who holds the future and I happily leave it in GOD\'s hands ~ AMEN ~ Yours B
March 25th, 2017 10:24
Survival.
Garry said:
The urge to survive is strong within everything. One of the founders of modern couselling, Carl Rogers, had a lot to say about this. He would have apprecited the sentiments of the poem and also the quality of the writing that expressed them. I certainly did.
March 23rd, 2017 17:43
Garry said:
The urge to survive is strong within everything. One of the founders of modern couselling, Carl Rogers, had a lot to say about this. He would have apprecited the sentiments of the poem and also the quality of the writing that expressed them. I certainly did.
March 23rd, 2017 17:43
Survival.
MendedFences27 said:
The spirit of trees is amazing. I have a tree that started growing out from a rocky ledge. Growing in a rock. Now, 45 years later, it\'s still there, still growing, a lovely Maple. Withstood blizzards, huge amounts of snow and ice, high winds, and occasional droughts. There must be something we can learn from them. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 23rd, 2017 16:46
MendedFences27 said:
The spirit of trees is amazing. I have a tree that started growing out from a rocky ledge. Growing in a rock. Now, 45 years later, it\'s still there, still growing, a lovely Maple. Withstood blizzards, huge amounts of snow and ice, high winds, and occasional droughts. There must be something we can learn from them. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 23rd, 2017 16:46
Catch-Trap.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Cobweb when becomes old and dusty still spider keeps a position in it. Fine precision-knifed filaments are well observed here. Tensile wires are cleverly glued. Repairing this next preparation is well made. Brilliant imagery is drawn in this poem.
March 23rd, 2017 15:29
Pintu Mahakul said:
Cobweb when becomes old and dusty still spider keeps a position in it. Fine precision-knifed filaments are well observed here. Tensile wires are cleverly glued. Repairing this next preparation is well made. Brilliant imagery is drawn in this poem.
March 23rd, 2017 15:29
Survival.
WriteBeLight said:
I think that garden weeds can take such a beating, but still thrive to take over if you let them. Great point of view Fay!
March 23rd, 2017 11:55
WriteBeLight said:
I think that garden weeds can take such a beating, but still thrive to take over if you let them. Great point of view Fay!
March 23rd, 2017 11:55
Survival.
Michael Edwards said:
You paint such a great scene with such well chosen language.
March 23rd, 2017 09:00
Michael Edwards said:
You paint such a great scene with such well chosen language.
March 23rd, 2017 09:00
In Transit.
MendedFences27 said:
Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline orbs, how many forms can water take? To the poetic eye, whatever the mind can imagine. A wonderful concept brought to fruition in a dramatic manner. I never sensed rain, only gems and colors galore. Wonderful. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:01
MendedFences27 said:
Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline orbs, how many forms can water take? To the poetic eye, whatever the mind can imagine. A wonderful concept brought to fruition in a dramatic manner. I never sensed rain, only gems and colors galore. Wonderful. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:01
In Transit.
willyweed said:
there is beauty everywhere if we care to look , beautiful poetry my Lady!
March 22nd, 2017 15:09
willyweed said:
there is beauty everywhere if we care to look , beautiful poetry my Lady!
March 22nd, 2017 15:09
In Transit.
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.
March 22nd, 2017 10:59
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.
March 22nd, 2017 10:59
In Transit.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WATER FAY is a far from simple substance ! Just H2O but because it has a positive (HYDROGEN) and negative (OXYGEN) ends ( H~O~H ) it sticks to itself and forms the alluring drops you mention. They can bejewel a Spider\'s Web or trace patterns on windows. each glittering orb is a PRISM and can split sunlight into a spectrum R-O-Y-G-B-I-V ! Which is how rainbows form. AND (as you say) rain drops really do stir the muse ! A true poet sees not only a rainbow ~ but also an ODE ~ in a humble raindrop. Love all you poems & pictures FAY ~ Yours B
March 22nd, 2017 06:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WATER FAY is a far from simple substance ! Just H2O but because it has a positive (HYDROGEN) and negative (OXYGEN) ends ( H~O~H ) it sticks to itself and forms the alluring drops you mention. They can bejewel a Spider\'s Web or trace patterns on windows. each glittering orb is a PRISM and can split sunlight into a spectrum R-O-Y-G-B-I-V ! Which is how rainbows form. AND (as you say) rain drops really do stir the muse ! A true poet sees not only a rainbow ~ but also an ODE ~ in a humble raindrop. Love all you poems & pictures FAY ~ Yours B
March 22nd, 2017 06:51
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