Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Truth\'s Trust........
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust - so easily lost but almost impossible to regain. Good write.
March 16th, 2017 13:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust - so easily lost but almost impossible to regain. Good write.
March 16th, 2017 13:42
Truth\'s Trust........
Michael Edwards said:
Trust is a necessary part of a good relationship - my marriage is a testimony to that - super write Fay.
March 16th, 2017 11:53
Michael Edwards said:
Trust is a necessary part of a good relationship - my marriage is a testimony to that - super write Fay.
March 16th, 2017 11:53
Catch-Trap.
Hypothesis said:
This one here was very cleverly executed Fay. I loved the metaphors you\'ve managed to string together as the Charlottes web would interpret. It felt like reading a children\'s book, yet with a PG-13 inscription.
Well done poet!
March 15th, 2017 05:18
Hypothesis said:
This one here was very cleverly executed Fay. I loved the metaphors you\'ve managed to string together as the Charlottes web would interpret. It felt like reading a children\'s book, yet with a PG-13 inscription.
Well done poet!
March 15th, 2017 05:18
Tribute To Vincent.
MendedFences27 said:
Great tribute. Obviously you are a fan of the man. A painter ahead of his times. - Phil A.
March 14th, 2017 14:51
MendedFences27 said:
Great tribute. Obviously you are a fan of the man. A painter ahead of his times. - Phil A.
March 14th, 2017 14:51
Tribute To Vincent.
Michael Edwards said:
Super tribute and if I could only wield a brush the way he did. But at least I still have two ears.
March 14th, 2017 12:44
Michael Edwards said:
Super tribute and if I could only wield a brush the way he did. But at least I still have two ears.
March 14th, 2017 12:44
Tribute To Vincent.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Canvas had kept broad oily strokes. Lines moved across landscape. Beautiful paintings still remained in mind more. Vincent remained in memory of all. This poem is definitely a nice and brilliant tribute poem for Vincent.
March 14th, 2017 06:28
Pintu Mahakul said:
Canvas had kept broad oily strokes. Lines moved across landscape. Beautiful paintings still remained in mind more. Vincent remained in memory of all. This poem is definitely a nice and brilliant tribute poem for Vincent.
March 14th, 2017 06:28
Tribute To Vincent.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY just what a unique Painter Van Goch was ~ liquid gold indeed ! One of his many SUNFLOWER paintings adorns my Fusion on Painters ~ there is a verse for Vincent ! Love the VG landscape you have chosen ~ the sky really is awesome ! Yours B
March 14th, 2017 06:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY just what a unique Painter Van Goch was ~ liquid gold indeed ! One of his many SUNFLOWER paintings adorns my Fusion on Painters ~ there is a verse for Vincent ! Love the VG landscape you have chosen ~ the sky really is awesome ! Yours B
March 14th, 2017 06:25
White Nectar.
MendedFences27 said:
The old time milk maid\'s work was long and hard. Today\'s modern facilities make the work lighter, but are the cows any happier.
A great write on a very unique subject. Makes us all appreciate our morning glass of white nectar all the more. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 13th, 2017 18:34
MendedFences27 said:
The old time milk maid\'s work was long and hard. Today\'s modern facilities make the work lighter, but are the cows any happier.
A great write on a very unique subject. Makes us all appreciate our morning glass of white nectar all the more. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 13th, 2017 18:34
White Nectar.
Augustus said:
Sounds like you have milked a cow or two. Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:17
Augustus said:
Sounds like you have milked a cow or two. Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:17
White Nectar.
willyweed said:
Moo- ving piece fay loved it till the cows come home. ww
March 13th, 2017 09:45
willyweed said:
Moo- ving piece fay loved it till the cows come home. ww
March 13th, 2017 09:45
White Nectar.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and always grateful that we have milk.
March 13th, 2017 09:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and always grateful that we have milk.
March 13th, 2017 09:03
Singing On.
Augustus said:
Love and loss captured in poetry as gentle as the foam of a retreating tide. Enjoyed.
March 12th, 2017 19:49
Augustus said:
Love and loss captured in poetry as gentle as the foam of a retreating tide. Enjoyed.
March 12th, 2017 19:49
Singing On.
Michael Edwards said:
You keep doing it Fay - another masterful write.
March 12th, 2017 12:09
Michael Edwards said:
You keep doing it Fay - another masterful write.
March 12th, 2017 12:09
Singing On.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful expression of hope and love. To reunite in spirit with our one true love is the wish of every loving being. We pray it is all true. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:36
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful expression of hope and love. To reunite in spirit with our one true love is the wish of every loving being. We pray it is all true. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:36
Singing On.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another gem from your elegant poetic jewel box ! \"You will see his lovely face ~ Some glad golden morning ~ When gloom has lifted and the shades have flown ~ No more night only light ~ You will see his face and in his arms ~ Once again embrace !\" Yours B
March 12th, 2017 10:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another gem from your elegant poetic jewel box ! \"You will see his lovely face ~ Some glad golden morning ~ When gloom has lifted and the shades have flown ~ No more night only light ~ You will see his face and in his arms ~ Once again embrace !\" Yours B
March 12th, 2017 10:58
Singing On.
willyweed said:
one fine day true love is rejoined, this is the fate of faith!
March 12th, 2017 09:12
willyweed said:
one fine day true love is rejoined, this is the fate of faith!
March 12th, 2017 09:12
Together.
MendedFences27 said:
Unity of spirit, so often dreamed of, so seldom realized. The world could so easily be a place of peace and harmony but for the greedy and the power seekers. Your poem calls upon all of us to speak out and to force the power mongers to release their huddled masses, to push the greedy from the thrones of power and to ensure that all men are equal. Great write. Got me all fired up. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:21
MendedFences27 said:
Unity of spirit, so often dreamed of, so seldom realized. The world could so easily be a place of peace and harmony but for the greedy and the power seekers. Your poem calls upon all of us to speak out and to force the power mongers to release their huddled masses, to push the greedy from the thrones of power and to ensure that all men are equal. Great write. Got me all fired up. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:21
Together.
orchidee said:
A fine write. The only ones who won\'t make any difference (did they ever?) are those in \'Neighbours\'. Well, apart from bore us to death! heehee.
March 11th, 2017 12:13
orchidee said:
A fine write. The only ones who won\'t make any difference (did they ever?) are those in \'Neighbours\'. Well, apart from bore us to death! heehee.
March 11th, 2017 12:13
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