Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Being Ready.
MendedFences27 said:
I really liked Stanza 4. \"Hedgerows dancing to Spring\'s evocative music.\' - great image. Another great write Fay. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 6th, 2017 14:54
MendedFences27 said:
I really liked Stanza 4. \"Hedgerows dancing to Spring\'s evocative music.\' - great image. Another great write Fay. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 6th, 2017 14:54
Being Ready.
willyweed said:
I got my diggin\' tools out and at the ready wishing the spring would just get sprung. woo hoo ready set dig it! ww
March 6th, 2017 09:18
willyweed said:
I got my diggin\' tools out and at the ready wishing the spring would just get sprung. woo hoo ready set dig it! ww
March 6th, 2017 09:18
Being Ready.
Michael Edwards said:
Great joy - in your usual great use of the written word.
March 6th, 2017 08:52
Michael Edwards said:
Great joy - in your usual great use of the written word.
March 6th, 2017 08:52
Being Ready.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the structure of this poem FAY ~ Five balanced tercets ~ throbbing with rhythm as suits the subject. The whole poem symbolises Spring bursting into life all around us ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ beautiful ! Love the Spring flowers. Yours B
March 6th, 2017 08:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the structure of this poem FAY ~ Five balanced tercets ~ throbbing with rhythm as suits the subject. The whole poem symbolises Spring bursting into life all around us ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ beautiful ! Love the Spring flowers. Yours B
March 6th, 2017 08:48
Spring Knows.
Augustus said:
And you know nature. Nicely done. Interesting concept of duty assigned to a season.
March 5th, 2017 19:03
Augustus said:
And you know nature. Nicely done. Interesting concept of duty assigned to a season.
March 5th, 2017 19:03
Spring Knows.
MendedFences27 said:
Can\'t get here fast enough. The resilience of Nature is truly amazing. Beautifully described here in your poem, Those \"greening things\' are indomitable , and \"Spring\" is duty-bound. Loved it - Phil A.
March 5th, 2017 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
Can\'t get here fast enough. The resilience of Nature is truly amazing. Beautifully described here in your poem, Those \"greening things\' are indomitable , and \"Spring\" is duty-bound. Loved it - Phil A.
March 5th, 2017 18:18
Spring Knows.
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely work - spring appears to be with us - certainly here in middle England - about 10 different species of flower now in bloom in the garden - but beware - only about 16 weeks and the nights start drawing in.
March 5th, 2017 12:47
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely work - spring appears to be with us - certainly here in middle England - about 10 different species of flower now in bloom in the garden - but beware - only about 16 weeks and the nights start drawing in.
March 5th, 2017 12:47
Spring Knows.
willyweed said:
Spot on nature poem Fay wonder work you pen here! Bravo WW
March 5th, 2017 12:47
willyweed said:
Spot on nature poem Fay wonder work you pen here! Bravo WW
March 5th, 2017 12:47
Spring Knows.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely POEM heralding Spring ! All the daffs came out for St David\'s day and the crocuses are beginning to show. For a myriad of reasons Spring really is the loveliest Season of them all ! God has promised (at least for those in the UK !) Summer & Winter & Springtime & Harvest will NEVER cease ~ AMEN. Love the Poem ~ love Snowdrops ~ thanks for sharing ~ B
March 5th, 2017 12:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely POEM heralding Spring ! All the daffs came out for St David\'s day and the crocuses are beginning to show. For a myriad of reasons Spring really is the loveliest Season of them all ! God has promised (at least for those in the UK !) Summer & Winter & Springtime & Harvest will NEVER cease ~ AMEN. Love the Poem ~ love Snowdrops ~ thanks for sharing ~ B
March 5th, 2017 12:34
Spring Knows.
Solomon said:
Lovely write! Very descriptive and well thought out!
March 5th, 2017 11:38
Solomon said:
Lovely write! Very descriptive and well thought out!
March 5th, 2017 11:38
Spring Knows.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Must not talk ourselves out of it - Spring will probably be here about June. Oops!
March 5th, 2017 11:23
orchidee said:
A fine write. Must not talk ourselves out of it - Spring will probably be here about June. Oops!
March 5th, 2017 11:23
Spring Knows.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, spring us within touching distance.
March 5th, 2017 11:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, spring us within touching distance.
March 5th, 2017 11:18
Time\'s Needle.
MendedFences27 said:
The majesty of the morning Sun. Chasing the darkness and spreading light upon the earth. All cycles of life respond in unison to the birth of a new day. Words well chosen and a glorious topic make for great poetry. Well done. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:10
MendedFences27 said:
The majesty of the morning Sun. Chasing the darkness and spreading light upon the earth. All cycles of life respond in unison to the birth of a new day. Words well chosen and a glorious topic make for great poetry. Well done. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:10
Time\'s Needle.
Augustus said:
You awaken in the morning in a more gentile manner than I. This is just lovely.
March 4th, 2017 16:59
Augustus said:
You awaken in the morning in a more gentile manner than I. This is just lovely.
March 4th, 2017 16:59
Time\'s Needle.
willyweed said:
and as so as the dream keeper finishes up ...wide awake! very nice Fay. ww
March 4th, 2017 09:00
willyweed said:
and as so as the dream keeper finishes up ...wide awake! very nice Fay. ww
March 4th, 2017 09:00
Carrying On.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear friends for your perceptive comments on my sea-poem.
March 4th, 2017 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear friends for your perceptive comments on my sea-poem.
March 4th, 2017 03:47
Carrying On.
MendedFences27 said:
Man\'s struggles against the sea: Storms, huge tides, floods, tidal waves or tsunamis, shoreline damage, and men lost in boats/ships. Yet, life goes on and the challenge continues. Fay, you have a way with words, and I enjoyed this one immensely. _ Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:12
MendedFences27 said:
Man\'s struggles against the sea: Storms, huge tides, floods, tidal waves or tsunamis, shoreline damage, and men lost in boats/ships. Yet, life goes on and the challenge continues. Fay, you have a way with words, and I enjoyed this one immensely. _ Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:12
Carrying On.
Augustus said:
We are both about the sea today. You congered up some thoughts: why does not the water just drip off the sides of the world? Another- why do we go out in rough seas? The sea is telling us to stay home. Does it really welcome us treading its waters? Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 17:58
Augustus said:
We are both about the sea today. You congered up some thoughts: why does not the water just drip off the sides of the world? Another- why do we go out in rough seas? The sea is telling us to stay home. Does it really welcome us treading its waters? Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 17:58
Carrying On.
WriteBeLight said:
Almighty writing Fay. Love it. I love the ocean and respect its power :)
March 3rd, 2017 06:27
WriteBeLight said:
Almighty writing Fay. Love it. I love the ocean and respect its power :)
March 3rd, 2017 06:27
Love\'s Due.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love chooses wonderfully love and love becomes blind with many weaknesses. Shadows of love casts wonderful judgement. Tender harmony is deflected. Love composes wonderful song more than music. This is very meaningful and interesting poem shared here.
March 2nd, 2017 17:40
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love chooses wonderfully love and love becomes blind with many weaknesses. Shadows of love casts wonderful judgement. Tender harmony is deflected. Love composes wonderful song more than music. This is very meaningful and interesting poem shared here.
March 2nd, 2017 17:40
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