Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
That Tree.
janetaylor said:
gorgeous words woven with insight and grace. i love trees!
January 27th, 2017 16:30
janetaylor said:
gorgeous words woven with insight and grace. i love trees!
January 27th, 2017 16:30
That Tree.
Augustus said:
Metaphor for many things. But for me with love I trees I\'ll suffice with the oak. Here in Louisiana we have a saying, it takes a hundred years for them to grow and another hundred to die. Near our coast we have lost many due erosion and saltwater intrusion. Love the poem.
January 27th, 2017 12:56
Augustus said:
Metaphor for many things. But for me with love I trees I\'ll suffice with the oak. Here in Louisiana we have a saying, it takes a hundred years for them to grow and another hundred to die. Near our coast we have lost many due erosion and saltwater intrusion. Love the poem.
January 27th, 2017 12:56
That Tree.
Tony36 said:
Awesome write, living on a farm I am surrounded by trees, of every shape and size. I love them all
January 27th, 2017 09:31
Tony36 said:
Awesome write, living on a farm I am surrounded by trees, of every shape and size. I love them all
January 27th, 2017 09:31
That Tree.
Meggie Gultiano said:
you wrote this with sadness, but it is beautifully written with a heart. I can feel each word.Love it
January 27th, 2017 09:18
Meggie Gultiano said:
you wrote this with sadness, but it is beautifully written with a heart. I can feel each word.Love it
January 27th, 2017 09:18
That Tree.
Michael Edwards said:
Just lovely Fay - some great lines - I have about a tree somewhere - must dig it out and post it.
January 27th, 2017 05:16
Michael Edwards said:
Just lovely Fay - some great lines - I have about a tree somewhere - must dig it out and post it.
January 27th, 2017 05:16
Caught.
Michael Edwards said:
I found myself gathering speed as I read it - a sure sign of a great write.
January 26th, 2017 10:05
Michael Edwards said:
I found myself gathering speed as I read it - a sure sign of a great write.
January 26th, 2017 10:05
Blackrock.
Augustus said:
\"Granite takes no answering back\". Love that line. Like the blackness of the rock and the darkness of the message make the poem cohesive.
January 25th, 2017 18:47
Augustus said:
\"Granite takes no answering back\". Love that line. Like the blackness of the rock and the darkness of the message make the poem cohesive.
January 25th, 2017 18:47
Asking.
janetaylor said:
fay you have truly touched my heart ~ the ending stuns and leaves one pondering why. lovely, beautiful words .
January 25th, 2017 16:46
janetaylor said:
fay you have truly touched my heart ~ the ending stuns and leaves one pondering why. lovely, beautiful words .
January 25th, 2017 16:46
Blackrock.
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, you have painted a beautiful canvas here with the power of your poetic words! - Raj, New Delhi
January 25th, 2017 12:18
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, you have painted a beautiful canvas here with the power of your poetic words! - Raj, New Delhi
January 25th, 2017 12:18
Blackrock.
Michael Edwards said:
I think I\'ve said it before, but I do love your use of the language - especially so in this elegant poem
January 25th, 2017 06:04
Michael Edwards said:
I think I\'ve said it before, but I do love your use of the language - especially so in this elegant poem
January 25th, 2017 06:04
Blackrock.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing an elegant poem with a warning message. There are many rocky (and iceberg) dangers in the Sea often hidden but always sinister ! It\'s the same with LIFE there are many hidden rocks and pitfalls ~ which we should all avoid !
January 25th, 2017 05:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing an elegant poem with a warning message. There are many rocky (and iceberg) dangers in the Sea often hidden but always sinister ! It\'s the same with LIFE there are many hidden rocks and pitfalls ~ which we should all avoid !
January 25th, 2017 05:59
Asking.
RAJ NANDY said:
A great reflective poem Fay! You had been the leading poet of that disbanded Swedish poetry site - \'Poetfreak.com\' for the last 6 years now! Though I had met you earlier in \'Poemhunter.com\' initially. This site will benefit from your postings no doubt! God bless! - Raj, New Delhi, 24th Jan 2017
January 25th, 2017 02:33
RAJ NANDY said:
A great reflective poem Fay! You had been the leading poet of that disbanded Swedish poetry site - \'Poetfreak.com\' for the last 6 years now! Though I had met you earlier in \'Poemhunter.com\' initially. This site will benefit from your postings no doubt! God bless! - Raj, New Delhi, 24th Jan 2017
January 25th, 2017 02:33
Effaced.
Augustus said:
Yes, the title and the last line. Lots of wear on this old rock as well.
January 24th, 2017 22:48
Augustus said:
Yes, the title and the last line. Lots of wear on this old rock as well.
January 24th, 2017 22:48
Effaced.
janetaylor said:
a bold a mighty pen has written a masterpiece again! fabulous fay! i love the depth and meaning of this piece ~ and i adore that it has a masculine flair.
January 24th, 2017 18:14
janetaylor said:
a bold a mighty pen has written a masterpiece again! fabulous fay! i love the depth and meaning of this piece ~ and i adore that it has a masculine flair.
January 24th, 2017 18:14
Effaced.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay - you\'ve done it again - thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
January 24th, 2017 16:07
Michael Edwards said:
Fay - you\'ve done it again - thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
January 24th, 2017 16:07
It Maybe.
Augustus said:
Women along the costal waters can relate. Well done.
January 23rd, 2017 17:31
Augustus said:
Women along the costal waters can relate. Well done.
January 23rd, 2017 17:31
It Maybe.
Michael Edwards said:
Another corker Fay - some great word associations.
January 23rd, 2017 11:13
Michael Edwards said:
Another corker Fay - some great word associations.
January 23rd, 2017 11:13
It Maybe.
janetaylor said:
this is magnificent fay. i love it when you write with thee and thy. it is absolutely elegant. your words flow beautifully with the feelings of waiting for love\'s return.
January 23rd, 2017 11:04
janetaylor said:
this is magnificent fay. i love it when you write with thee and thy. it is absolutely elegant. your words flow beautifully with the feelings of waiting for love\'s return.
January 23rd, 2017 11:04
Magical Hush.
tadpole said:
Hello FAY, made it at last and glad I did too or else I would have missed your magic poem.
January 22nd, 2017 10:56
tadpole said:
Hello FAY, made it at last and glad I did too or else I would have missed your magic poem.
January 22nd, 2017 10:56
Magical Hush.
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem that I enjoyed reading. Goes with image well. Awesome!
January 21st, 2017 19:36
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem that I enjoyed reading. Goes with image well. Awesome!
January 21st, 2017 19:36
Magical Hush.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
two beautiful images,the poem and the photo
January 21st, 2017 16:18
ron parrish aka wordman said:
two beautiful images,the poem and the photo
January 21st, 2017 16:18
Magical Hush.
Jarid said:
This is such a beautiful poem and the imagery to match. Well done.
January 21st, 2017 15:51
Jarid said:
This is such a beautiful poem and the imagery to match. Well done.
January 21st, 2017 15:51
Magical Hush.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Damp grayish pearls forest air hangs here. Mysterious peace makes mourning relent. Love makes life cheerful and regeneration shows us destiny. Very interesting poem is shared here.
January 21st, 2017 14:51
Pintu Mahakul said:
Damp grayish pearls forest air hangs here. Mysterious peace makes mourning relent. Love makes life cheerful and regeneration shows us destiny. Very interesting poem is shared here.
January 21st, 2017 14:51
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