Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Cutting Free.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Every starting we see with freshness although time moves remorseless. We form opportunities more in life. Distress creates apathy. Being skillful in competence we get successes. Cutting new paths again this exalts over former attempts. Amazing expression makes this poem special.
March 10th, 2017 22:10
Pintu Mahakul said:
Every starting we see with freshness although time moves remorseless. We form opportunities more in life. Distress creates apathy. Being skillful in competence we get successes. Cutting new paths again this exalts over former attempts. Amazing expression makes this poem special.
March 10th, 2017 22:10
Spring Knows.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Snow mottles cloud. Winter dazes with patches. Dream of times full of grapes ruby juices amazes mind with mesmerizing this. Great imagery drawn in this poem moves with certainty in this nature\'s mind. Beautifully crafted poem is shared here.
March 10th, 2017 22:05
Pintu Mahakul said:
Snow mottles cloud. Winter dazes with patches. Dream of times full of grapes ruby juices amazes mind with mesmerizing this. Great imagery drawn in this poem moves with certainty in this nature\'s mind. Beautifully crafted poem is shared here.
March 10th, 2017 22:05
Time\'s Needle.
Pintu Mahakul said:
A sun crouches to one more empty circle of dark\'s hollowed pouches . What an amazing expression this is really that scribbles mind of a reader. Glimmers on sightless horizon reveal light\'s celebration and this celebration pierces through mind\'s expression. This is very interesting poem and excellent with nice imagery.
March 10th, 2017 22:01
Pintu Mahakul said:
A sun crouches to one more empty circle of dark\'s hollowed pouches . What an amazing expression this is really that scribbles mind of a reader. Glimmers on sightless horizon reveal light\'s celebration and this celebration pierces through mind\'s expression. This is very interesting poem and excellent with nice imagery.
March 10th, 2017 22:01
Not Again.
Augustus said:
The heart, the sea, a knight, a flood, and flames all weaved into an exquisite lament. Hugs.
March 10th, 2017 14:24
Augustus said:
The heart, the sea, a knight, a flood, and flames all weaved into an exquisite lament. Hugs.
March 10th, 2017 14:24
Not Again.
willyweed said:
sorry for your lost I can only imagine your pain, and sorrow, I have been fortunate thus far! WW
March 10th, 2017 09:55
willyweed said:
sorry for your lost I can only imagine your pain, and sorrow, I have been fortunate thus far! WW
March 10th, 2017 09:55
Whisperings.
Hypothesis said:
You played with thoughts and conveyed a brilliant set of words. I like the setting you chose and felt it a warm climate with a whispering breeze.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 18:27
Hypothesis said:
You played with thoughts and conveyed a brilliant set of words. I like the setting you chose and felt it a warm climate with a whispering breeze.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 18:27
Whisperings.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautifully written. How could he say no? A siren song for sure, luring enough to make an Argonaught lay anchor. A great poem. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2017 17:58
MendedFences27 said:
Beautifully written. How could he say no? A siren song for sure, luring enough to make an Argonaught lay anchor. A great poem. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2017 17:58
Whisperings.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ You sure struck a sensuous chord with this one ! It reads like a love song played on a harp ! Love every line but my favourite is \"Dive into loves\'s dulcet whispering while you experience bliss\" YES YES YES ! I also love the line about HONEY and the visual is perfectly selected ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours B
March 9th, 2017 08:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ You sure struck a sensuous chord with this one ! It reads like a love song played on a harp ! Love every line but my favourite is \"Dive into loves\'s dulcet whispering while you experience bliss\" YES YES YES ! I also love the line about HONEY and the visual is perfectly selected ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours B
March 9th, 2017 08:43
Whisperings.
Michael Edwards said:
Once again you\'ve words into something special - good on yer Fay.
March 9th, 2017 06:50
Michael Edwards said:
Once again you\'ve words into something special - good on yer Fay.
March 9th, 2017 06:50
Friendship\'s Love.
Tony36 said:
Nothing like a good friend, nothing like the love that comes with it. Great write
March 8th, 2017 15:17
Tony36 said:
Nothing like a good friend, nothing like the love that comes with it. Great write
March 8th, 2017 15:17
Friendship\'s Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautifully crafted poem with perfect complimentary picture. You inspire us all to \"write proper poetry\". Love the theme of Soulmates and the True Love that is engendered by True Friendship. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
March 8th, 2017 14:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautifully crafted poem with perfect complimentary picture. You inspire us all to \"write proper poetry\". Love the theme of Soulmates and the True Love that is engendered by True Friendship. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
March 8th, 2017 14:46
Friendship\'s Love.
MendedFences27 said:
Well spoken verse on friendship. We are lucky if we have one true friend in life. Sometimes it requires an inordinate amount of acceptance. Great write. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2017 13:13
MendedFences27 said:
Well spoken verse on friendship. We are lucky if we have one true friend in life. Sometimes it requires an inordinate amount of acceptance. Great write. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2017 13:13
Friendship\'s Love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, friendship is so special.
March 8th, 2017 08:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, friendship is so special.
March 8th, 2017 08:49
Friendship\'s Love.
willyweed said:
I agree Fay friendships love is different and special ! great point to this gem. WW
March 8th, 2017 07:53
willyweed said:
I agree Fay friendships love is different and special ! great point to this gem. WW
March 8th, 2017 07:53
Cutting Free.
Augustus said:
Your poem is full of hope for the future in the face of failure. Nicely done. \"From parched discord.\" Wow!
March 7th, 2017 17:25
Augustus said:
Your poem is full of hope for the future in the face of failure. Nicely done. \"From parched discord.\" Wow!
March 7th, 2017 17:25
Cutting Free.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Cutting free\" means leaving behind the baggage of the past, finding a new way, a new path, and using the education of experience to guide us to the right way. Well done Fay. Now if we all can just follow your advice. Try, try, try. good one. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 17:22
MendedFences27 said:
\"Cutting free\" means leaving behind the baggage of the past, finding a new way, a new path, and using the education of experience to guide us to the right way. Well done Fay. Now if we all can just follow your advice. Try, try, try. good one. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 17:22
Cutting Free.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ As you say \"nil desperandum\" ~ Opportunity is always just around the corner ~ and sometimes it hides ! BUT we must seek opportunity and act on it ! Love th expensiveness of the visual a perfect compliment to a challenging poem ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 7th, 2017 14:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ As you say \"nil desperandum\" ~ Opportunity is always just around the corner ~ and sometimes it hides ! BUT we must seek opportunity and act on it ! Love th expensiveness of the visual a perfect compliment to a challenging poem ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 7th, 2017 14:30
Cutting Free.
willyweed said:
learn from mistakes move forward ever into the future finding better and better each time we dare look! nice work Fay!
March 7th, 2017 11:28
willyweed said:
learn from mistakes move forward ever into the future finding better and better each time we dare look! nice work Fay!
March 7th, 2017 11:28
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