Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Oh Word.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you FAY for this very profound Poem. It reminds us of the key role played by JESUS (The Word) in Creation. \"All things were made by HIM and without HIM nothing was made ! You mention the Flora and the Fauna and the 92 Natural Elements (Hydrogen to Uranium) and Man and Music etc. etc. An excellent tribute to the WORD ~ Glorious and replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN.
February 3rd, 2017 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you FAY for this very profound Poem. It reminds us of the key role played by JESUS (The Word) in Creation. \"All things were made by HIM and without HIM nothing was made ! You mention the Flora and the Fauna and the 92 Natural Elements (Hydrogen to Uranium) and Man and Music etc. etc. An excellent tribute to the WORD ~ Glorious and replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN.
February 3rd, 2017 16:18
Oh Word.
Michael Edwards said:
Always look forward to reading your postings - they never disappoint and this way up there.
February 3rd, 2017 07:00
Michael Edwards said:
Always look forward to reading your postings - they never disappoint and this way up there.
February 3rd, 2017 07:00
Making Richer.
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - there aren\'t many who can use the language to such effect but you are certainly one of them - always look forward to reading your work.
February 1st, 2017 11:23
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - there aren\'t many who can use the language to such effect but you are certainly one of them - always look forward to reading your work.
February 1st, 2017 11:23
Making Richer.
RAJ NANDY said:
The photograph and the poetic words blend beautifully to paint the picture of a dream like Dawn! -Raj, New Delhi.
February 1st, 2017 09:08
RAJ NANDY said:
The photograph and the poetic words blend beautifully to paint the picture of a dream like Dawn! -Raj, New Delhi.
February 1st, 2017 09:08
Early Bird.
Christina8 said:
I think this is an absolutely wonderful poem Fay!
January 31st, 2017 18:34
Christina8 said:
I think this is an absolutely wonderful poem Fay!
January 31st, 2017 18:34
Early Bird.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ In the CITY Morning Bird Songs often get drowned out by the TV (we must listen to the NEWS !) and noisy road traffic. BUT ~ in the Country and Quiet Towns ~ Morning Bird Songs do prevail and remind us that we are still part of Nature ~ and yes they do sooth us and bring us back down to Earth ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
January 31st, 2017 06:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ In the CITY Morning Bird Songs often get drowned out by the TV (we must listen to the NEWS !) and noisy road traffic. BUT ~ in the Country and Quiet Towns ~ Morning Bird Songs do prevail and remind us that we are still part of Nature ~ and yes they do sooth us and bring us back down to Earth ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
January 31st, 2017 06:42
Ready.
janetaylor said:
passion filled words with a wonderful question left lingering in the air.....your poetry is laced with wisdom and has the touch that only a true poet can create ~ the pondering left in the reader\'s mind.
January 30th, 2017 14:54
janetaylor said:
passion filled words with a wonderful question left lingering in the air.....your poetry is laced with wisdom and has the touch that only a true poet can create ~ the pondering left in the reader\'s mind.
January 30th, 2017 14:54
Ready.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear friends for your commendable comments - all truly encouraging.
January 30th, 2017 10:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear friends for your commendable comments - all truly encouraging.
January 30th, 2017 10:19
Ready.
Michael Edwards said:
Words are there to be played with - great exercise that\'s come off well.
January 30th, 2017 07:16
Michael Edwards said:
Words are there to be played with - great exercise that\'s come off well.
January 30th, 2017 07:16
In Transit.
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, your poetic metaphors and your unique style of composition, took me back to my student days a span of some 53 years, making me recall the poems of GM Hopkins, a devout Catholic & a Victorian poet; and his poems \'The Windhover\', & \'Pied Beauty\'. Your poem has reached that Classical stage I must admit! Thanks, - Raj, New Delhi.
January 29th, 2017 02:44
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, your poetic metaphors and your unique style of composition, took me back to my student days a span of some 53 years, making me recall the poems of GM Hopkins, a devout Catholic & a Victorian poet; and his poems \'The Windhover\', & \'Pied Beauty\'. Your poem has reached that Classical stage I must admit! Thanks, - Raj, New Delhi.
January 29th, 2017 02:44
In Transit.
rrodriguez said:
This is remarkably well written. The descriptive prowess of the words convey the beauty of the water drops. Beautiful!
January 28th, 2017 21:49
rrodriguez said:
This is remarkably well written. The descriptive prowess of the words convey the beauty of the water drops. Beautiful!
January 28th, 2017 21:49
In Transit.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love your poem because you highlight one of the many properties and beauties of water ~ its ability and propensity to form drops. The majority of liquids do not do this ~ petrol for instance. The reason water does is because of its molecular structure and surface tension ~ which also explains why we can blow bubbles ~ why sap rises in plants and why solid water (ice) floats in liquid water ! Water drops on a cobweb are so like jewels. Also because water drops act like prisms each one contains its own rainbow. A scientific understanding of the nature of water drops ~ for me ~ does not lessen the wonder but only increases it. Thanks for causing us all to think !
January 28th, 2017 18:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love your poem because you highlight one of the many properties and beauties of water ~ its ability and propensity to form drops. The majority of liquids do not do this ~ petrol for instance. The reason water does is because of its molecular structure and surface tension ~ which also explains why we can blow bubbles ~ why sap rises in plants and why solid water (ice) floats in liquid water ! Water drops on a cobweb are so like jewels. Also because water drops act like prisms each one contains its own rainbow. A scientific understanding of the nature of water drops ~ for me ~ does not lessen the wonder but only increases it. Thanks for causing us all to think !
January 28th, 2017 18:14
In Transit.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - many thanks dear Jane - your comment came so quickly after the posting..... so pleased you enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2017 11:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - many thanks dear Jane - your comment came so quickly after the posting..... so pleased you enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2017 11:18
In Transit.
janetaylor said:
those keen poetic eyes caught and captured it with elegance and artful grace. beautiful and magical write.
January 28th, 2017 11:16
janetaylor said:
those keen poetic eyes caught and captured it with elegance and artful grace. beautiful and magical write.
January 28th, 2017 11:16
That Tree.
rrodriguez said:
Fay, I loved its nostalgic tone. The memorable picture of a giant tree whose existence graced our landscape. Beautiful poem!
January 28th, 2017 08:20
rrodriguez said:
Fay, I loved its nostalgic tone. The memorable picture of a giant tree whose existence graced our landscape. Beautiful poem!
January 28th, 2017 08:20
Blackrock.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Time-blackened by relentless breakers. Granite was with rare take up. every tide shows its formidable jaws with this amazing imagery. This is very interesting poem shared here.
January 27th, 2017 23:47
Pintu Mahakul said:
Time-blackened by relentless breakers. Granite was with rare take up. every tide shows its formidable jaws with this amazing imagery. This is very interesting poem shared here.
January 27th, 2017 23:47
Effaced.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amen! Ancient stones with interesting history have come in wonderful imagery here. This is also very brilliant poem shared.
January 27th, 2017 23:45
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amen! Ancient stones with interesting history have come in wonderful imagery here. This is also very brilliant poem shared.
January 27th, 2017 23:45
Caught.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Fire is worthy for living and fire also destroys. Importance of fire is recognized. Sparks of high flame takes more precocious leaps. This is very brilliant poem shared here.
January 27th, 2017 23:42
Pintu Mahakul said:
Fire is worthy for living and fire also destroys. Importance of fire is recognized. Sparks of high flame takes more precocious leaps. This is very brilliant poem shared here.
January 27th, 2017 23:42
That Tree.
Pintu Mahakul said:
There was no tree like this. The height of tree sincerely reflects hopes and it is very memorable. This is Sagely magnificent. It is withstood for many decades here. It takes every seasonal gale. An amazing poem with nice image and imagery is shared here.
January 27th, 2017 23:40
Pintu Mahakul said:
There was no tree like this. The height of tree sincerely reflects hopes and it is very memorable. This is Sagely magnificent. It is withstood for many decades here. It takes every seasonal gale. An amazing poem with nice image and imagery is shared here.
January 27th, 2017 23:40
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