Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Magical Hush.
Augustus said:
Combining nature and love in an elegant way. Magical!
January 21st, 2017 11:35
Augustus said:
Combining nature and love in an elegant way. Magical!
January 21st, 2017 11:35
Lovescape.
Pintu Mahakul said:
In thine hands I am soft-sift. Moments of intimate fancy do magic in mind. Very amazingly I am drawn to this Lovescape. I am sealed by thy fervour. I am tasting the certain bliss here. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 20:30
Pintu Mahakul said:
In thine hands I am soft-sift. Moments of intimate fancy do magic in mind. Very amazingly I am drawn to this Lovescape. I am sealed by thy fervour. I am tasting the certain bliss here. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 20:30
Lovescape.
Michael Edwards said:
Just love your use of the language Fay - superb.
January 20th, 2017 16:22
Michael Edwards said:
Just love your use of the language Fay - superb.
January 20th, 2017 16:22
Lovescape.
Fay Slimm. said:
So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your supportive comments - am glad too that the visual was welcomed - I rather like adding an image to my verses.
January 20th, 2017 14:21
Fay Slimm. said:
So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your supportive comments - am glad too that the visual was welcomed - I rather like adding an image to my verses.
January 20th, 2017 14:21
Lovescape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ This poem is elegant in both it structure and language. Its demure message is a tribute to the love of a Shy Lady to the expectations of her lover. Your poetry has raised the bar for MPS and encouraged us all to write better ! Thanks for adding a Perfect visual !
January 20th, 2017 12:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ This poem is elegant in both it structure and language. Its demure message is a tribute to the love of a Shy Lady to the expectations of her lover. Your poetry has raised the bar for MPS and encouraged us all to write better ! Thanks for adding a Perfect visual !
January 20th, 2017 12:35
Never Again.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Air of sharp crystalline will not again invade this exact skyline. Time\'s impact is wonderfully reflected in this poem. Every day comes with its originality. Nature\'s speech is very amazing. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 03:45
Pintu Mahakul said:
Air of sharp crystalline will not again invade this exact skyline. Time\'s impact is wonderfully reflected in this poem. Every day comes with its originality. Nature\'s speech is very amazing. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 03:45
Never Again.
Tony36 said:
Great write, living on a farm I have learned to cherish each day
January 19th, 2017 14:26
Tony36 said:
Great write, living on a farm I have learned to cherish each day
January 19th, 2017 14:26
Never Again.
Augustus said:
The Perfect Moment. Had to be there. Very, very nice.
January 19th, 2017 11:33
Augustus said:
The Perfect Moment. Had to be there. Very, very nice.
January 19th, 2017 11:33
Never Again.
Michael Edwards said:
One of my top favourites on the site - I hall read it again and again - believe me.
January 19th, 2017 07:51
Michael Edwards said:
One of my top favourites on the site - I hall read it again and again - believe me.
January 19th, 2017 07:51
Never Again.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you Brian - nature gives us so much material for poetry and I constantly go back for more. So pleased you enjoyed this one.
January 19th, 2017 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you Brian - nature gives us so much material for poetry and I constantly go back for more. So pleased you enjoyed this one.
January 19th, 2017 05:46
Never Again.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ for reminding us that each DAY is unique and precious. Not only sensuously but also opportunitywise ! A really beautiful poem ~ and visual ~ in form and function.
January 19th, 2017 05:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ for reminding us that each DAY is unique and precious. Not only sensuously but also opportunitywise ! A really beautiful poem ~ and visual ~ in form and function.
January 19th, 2017 05:18
Tasting The Wine.
janetaylor said:
heathered summits ~ wow how do you do it Fay? i love it!
January 18th, 2017 12:04
janetaylor said:
heathered summits ~ wow how do you do it Fay? i love it!
January 18th, 2017 12:04
Friend or Fiend ?
Michael Edwards said:
My wife suffers badly from sleep disorder but me - I could sleep on a flagpole. Just loved this piece so well crafted.
January 18th, 2017 11:05
Michael Edwards said:
My wife suffers badly from sleep disorder but me - I could sleep on a flagpole. Just loved this piece so well crafted.
January 18th, 2017 11:05
Friend or Fiend ?
ron parrish aka wordman said:
not bad till you lose count and have to start over
January 18th, 2017 09:01
ron parrish aka wordman said:
not bad till you lose count and have to start over
January 18th, 2017 09:01
Friend or Fiend ?
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha. Been there and have done that! Nice!
January 18th, 2017 06:51
WriteBeLight said:
Ha Ha. Been there and have done that! Nice!
January 18th, 2017 06:51
Asking.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Knot of love is tightened and emotion has flown from true heart. Proving this in twilight above sky is mesmerizing. Very beautifully penned love poem this is and this is interesting one.
January 17th, 2017 19:19
Pintu Mahakul said:
Knot of love is tightened and emotion has flown from true heart. Proving this in twilight above sky is mesmerizing. Very beautifully penned love poem this is and this is interesting one.
January 17th, 2017 19:19
Asking.
Augustus said:
Beautifully done. Elegant style. Sorry for your loss. Hugs.
January 17th, 2017 16:15
Augustus said:
Beautifully done. Elegant style. Sorry for your loss. Hugs.
January 17th, 2017 16:15
Asking.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! So sad to lose a love or friend and then to be left asking why. Great job!-Christina
January 17th, 2017 12:14
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! So sad to lose a love or friend and then to be left asking why. Great job!-Christina
January 17th, 2017 12:14
Asking.
WriteBeLight said:
Very sweet remembrance and poignant question. I am sorry these kinds of questions ever have to be asked. Nicely done Fay.
January 17th, 2017 10:38
WriteBeLight said:
Very sweet remembrance and poignant question. I am sorry these kinds of questions ever have to be asked. Nicely done Fay.
January 17th, 2017 10:38
Asking.
Sefrin said:
What a beautiful read. These words can truly touch any heart.
January 17th, 2017 07:40
Sefrin said:
What a beautiful read. These words can truly touch any heart.
January 17th, 2017 07:40
Asking.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Elegant structure ~ but such a sad Subject. There is no answer to the question why one person ~ in a loving relationship is taken and the other left. Talking to the bereaved ~ those most able to cope say their strength (to go on) is in their Happy Memories and No Regrets. I figure that that is how it is with you ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN
January 17th, 2017 07:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Elegant structure ~ but such a sad Subject. There is no answer to the question why one person ~ in a loving relationship is taken and the other left. Talking to the bereaved ~ those most able to cope say their strength (to go on) is in their Happy Memories and No Regrets. I figure that that is how it is with you ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN
January 17th, 2017 07:38
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