Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Stirrings.
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting style, very \" to the point.\" A lot said in few words. We are often turned in on ourselves, become reclusive, despaired by life, only to, suddenly, be reawakened. It is usually a very small thing that triggers the resurgence. So, now a new life begins ? Hope so. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:29
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting style, very \" to the point.\" A lot said in few words. We are often turned in on ourselves, become reclusive, despaired by life, only to, suddenly, be reawakened. It is usually a very small thing that triggers the resurgence. So, now a new life begins ? Hope so. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:29
I Wonder.
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I just LOVE these lines Fay ...
\"we decided to prove, in
fate\'s twilight
love\'s maturing delights, \"
Kurt
March 21st, 2017 11:37
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I just LOVE these lines Fay ...
\"we decided to prove, in
fate\'s twilight
love\'s maturing delights, \"
Kurt
March 21st, 2017 11:37
Stirrings.
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m in despair also, if I have no pork pies. I wish I would shut up! lol.
March 21st, 2017 11:13
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m in despair also, if I have no pork pies. I wish I would shut up! lol.
March 21st, 2017 11:13
Hearts Wept.
MendedFences27 said:
Losing a friend is most difficult. A poet-friend leaves behind words that can be read and reread and thus renew the acquaintance. Nothing distills the loss as well as remembrance. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:27
MendedFences27 said:
Losing a friend is most difficult. A poet-friend leaves behind words that can be read and reread and thus renew the acquaintance. Nothing distills the loss as well as remembrance. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:27
Hearts Wept.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and touching tribute! Thanks for sharing.
March 20th, 2017 13:08
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and touching tribute! Thanks for sharing.
March 20th, 2017 13:08
Hearts Wept.
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry Fay, for your sadness. Very touching words.
March 20th, 2017 12:05
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry Fay, for your sadness. Very touching words.
March 20th, 2017 12:05
Hearts Wept.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb tribute, he will always be with you in his words and Spirit.
March 20th, 2017 09:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb tribute, he will always be with you in his words and Spirit.
March 20th, 2017 09:36
Hearts Wept.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great tribute in your wonderful linguistic style .
March 20th, 2017 08:54
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great tribute in your wonderful linguistic style .
March 20th, 2017 08:54
Hearts Wept.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnks FAY for a wonderful tribute to a dear departed poet. I have lost friends who were artists ~ poets ~ musicians etc. Although their art ~ poetry ~ music lives on their unique creativity is stilled forever. It is that \"death of creativity\" that I too find hard to bear. Thanks for caring and sharing such an elegant requiem ode coupled with an equally poignant art form. Yours B
March 20th, 2017 08:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnks FAY for a wonderful tribute to a dear departed poet. I have lost friends who were artists ~ poets ~ musicians etc. Although their art ~ poetry ~ music lives on their unique creativity is stilled forever. It is that \"death of creativity\" that I too find hard to bear. Thanks for caring and sharing such an elegant requiem ode coupled with an equally poignant art form. Yours B
March 20th, 2017 08:44
I Wonder.
Hopey_xx said:
I hope one day we can find the answers. Great poem, keep going.
March 19th, 2017 09:47
Hopey_xx said:
I hope one day we can find the answers. Great poem, keep going.
March 19th, 2017 09:47
I Wonder.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your \"pain of lost love\" in the context of such an elegant poem. Every sensual relationship we have makes ud better for it but worse ~ when it comes to an end. So at all stages in our lives we can empathise. In the case and DS & Yourself ~ where it the end of a long loving and happy marriage that must in essence be impossible to bear. When you share the agony of lost love in a Poem we do absorb with you some of the pain but the majority must always lie with you. There is no answer ~ The LORD gives and (for one partner) the LORD takes away. However if we do have Faith of a reunion in Glory with our loved ones who have gone before ~ it can (so I am told) make the inevitable period of bereavement more bearable. Thinking of you and praying for you (and DS as well !) Yours B.
March 19th, 2017 08:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your \"pain of lost love\" in the context of such an elegant poem. Every sensual relationship we have makes ud better for it but worse ~ when it comes to an end. So at all stages in our lives we can empathise. In the case and DS & Yourself ~ where it the end of a long loving and happy marriage that must in essence be impossible to bear. When you share the agony of lost love in a Poem we do absorb with you some of the pain but the majority must always lie with you. There is no answer ~ The LORD gives and (for one partner) the LORD takes away. However if we do have Faith of a reunion in Glory with our loved ones who have gone before ~ it can (so I am told) make the inevitable period of bereavement more bearable. Thinking of you and praying for you (and DS as well !) Yours B.
March 19th, 2017 08:31
An Omen.
MendedFences27 said:
Better the owl than the rats. I felt the crumbling walls reading this. It\'s a shame so many of the old castles are
deteriorating, fit only for the Hoot Owls. I guess time does conquer a. Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 18:46
MendedFences27 said:
Better the owl than the rats. I felt the crumbling walls reading this. It\'s a shame so many of the old castles are
deteriorating, fit only for the Hoot Owls. I guess time does conquer a. Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 18:46
An Omen.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great Fantasy poem FAY thanks for sharing ! I could see and scent the decay in the ruined Castle but also (through your words) envisage it in its former glory ~ and the silk-shod dancers in candelabra lit halls ! The OWL (as all Owls do !) takes advantage ~ in a soundless swoop ~ of and unwary rat. Many of the ruined Castles in the UK will never be restored but still remain as \"listed ruins\" to ever be the haunt of OWLS ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 18th, 2017 15:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great Fantasy poem FAY thanks for sharing ! I could see and scent the decay in the ruined Castle but also (through your words) envisage it in its former glory ~ and the silk-shod dancers in candelabra lit halls ! The OWL (as all Owls do !) takes advantage ~ in a soundless swoop ~ of and unwary rat. Many of the ruined Castles in the UK will never be restored but still remain as \"listed ruins\" to ever be the haunt of OWLS ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 18th, 2017 15:27
Found Absent.
WriteBeLight said:
Such great descriptions Fay. Appropriate photo reflecting a very tough life.
March 18th, 2017 07:32
WriteBeLight said:
Such great descriptions Fay. Appropriate photo reflecting a very tough life.
March 18th, 2017 07:32
Found Absent.
MendedFences27 said:
My God, how long ago was this ended, child labor laws and all. What horrible conditions and treatment of children. Ignorance can not excuse it. That is always the guilty cowards way out. A great poem on a very tough subject. You are brave to write about it. Great poem. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2017 21:09
MendedFences27 said:
My God, how long ago was this ended, child labor laws and all. What horrible conditions and treatment of children. Ignorance can not excuse it. That is always the guilty cowards way out. A great poem on a very tough subject. You are brave to write about it. Great poem. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2017 21:09
Found Absent.
Michael Edwards said:
Awful awful times in many ways and you have captured it so well in this superb verse.
March 17th, 2017 08:38
Michael Edwards said:
Awful awful times in many ways and you have captured it so well in this superb verse.
March 17th, 2017 08:38
Truth\'s Trust........
MendedFences27 said:
Trust is a necessary part of any relationship. You speak of it\'s absolute need in a marriage, which it certainly is. Without trust, based on truth, a marriage will fail. Well spoken.- Phil A.
March 16th, 2017 21:06
MendedFences27 said:
Trust is a necessary part of any relationship. You speak of it\'s absolute need in a marriage, which it certainly is. Without trust, based on truth, a marriage will fail. Well spoken.- Phil A.
March 16th, 2017 21:06
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