Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Singing On.
Augustus said:
Love and loss captured in poetry as gentle as the foam of a retreating tide. Enjoyed.
March 12th, 2017 19:49
Augustus said:
Love and loss captured in poetry as gentle as the foam of a retreating tide. Enjoyed.
March 12th, 2017 19:49
Singing On.
Michael Edwards said:
You keep doing it Fay - another masterful write.
March 12th, 2017 12:09
Michael Edwards said:
You keep doing it Fay - another masterful write.
March 12th, 2017 12:09
Singing On.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful expression of hope and love. To reunite in spirit with our one true love is the wish of every loving being. We pray it is all true. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:36
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful expression of hope and love. To reunite in spirit with our one true love is the wish of every loving being. We pray it is all true. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:36
Singing On.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another gem from your elegant poetic jewel box ! \"You will see his lovely face ~ Some glad golden morning ~ When gloom has lifted and the shades have flown ~ No more night only light ~ You will see his face and in his arms ~ Once again embrace !\" Yours B
March 12th, 2017 10:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another gem from your elegant poetic jewel box ! \"You will see his lovely face ~ Some glad golden morning ~ When gloom has lifted and the shades have flown ~ No more night only light ~ You will see his face and in his arms ~ Once again embrace !\" Yours B
March 12th, 2017 10:58
Singing On.
willyweed said:
one fine day true love is rejoined, this is the fate of faith!
March 12th, 2017 09:12
willyweed said:
one fine day true love is rejoined, this is the fate of faith!
March 12th, 2017 09:12
Together.
MendedFences27 said:
Unity of spirit, so often dreamed of, so seldom realized. The world could so easily be a place of peace and harmony but for the greedy and the power seekers. Your poem calls upon all of us to speak out and to force the power mongers to release their huddled masses, to push the greedy from the thrones of power and to ensure that all men are equal. Great write. Got me all fired up. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:21
MendedFences27 said:
Unity of spirit, so often dreamed of, so seldom realized. The world could so easily be a place of peace and harmony but for the greedy and the power seekers. Your poem calls upon all of us to speak out and to force the power mongers to release their huddled masses, to push the greedy from the thrones of power and to ensure that all men are equal. Great write. Got me all fired up. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:21
Together.
orchidee said:
A fine write. The only ones who won\'t make any difference (did they ever?) are those in \'Neighbours\'. Well, apart from bore us to death! heehee.
March 11th, 2017 12:13
orchidee said:
A fine write. The only ones who won\'t make any difference (did they ever?) are those in \'Neighbours\'. Well, apart from bore us to death! heehee.
March 11th, 2017 12:13
Cutting Free.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Every starting we see with freshness although time moves remorseless. We form opportunities more in life. Distress creates apathy. Being skillful in competence we get successes. Cutting new paths again this exalts over former attempts. Amazing expression makes this poem special.
March 10th, 2017 22:10
Pintu Mahakul said:
Every starting we see with freshness although time moves remorseless. We form opportunities more in life. Distress creates apathy. Being skillful in competence we get successes. Cutting new paths again this exalts over former attempts. Amazing expression makes this poem special.
March 10th, 2017 22:10
Spring Knows.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Snow mottles cloud. Winter dazes with patches. Dream of times full of grapes ruby juices amazes mind with mesmerizing this. Great imagery drawn in this poem moves with certainty in this nature\'s mind. Beautifully crafted poem is shared here.
March 10th, 2017 22:05
Pintu Mahakul said:
Snow mottles cloud. Winter dazes with patches. Dream of times full of grapes ruby juices amazes mind with mesmerizing this. Great imagery drawn in this poem moves with certainty in this nature\'s mind. Beautifully crafted poem is shared here.
March 10th, 2017 22:05
Time\'s Needle.
Pintu Mahakul said:
A sun crouches to one more empty circle of dark\'s hollowed pouches . What an amazing expression this is really that scribbles mind of a reader. Glimmers on sightless horizon reveal light\'s celebration and this celebration pierces through mind\'s expression. This is very interesting poem and excellent with nice imagery.
March 10th, 2017 22:01
Pintu Mahakul said:
A sun crouches to one more empty circle of dark\'s hollowed pouches . What an amazing expression this is really that scribbles mind of a reader. Glimmers on sightless horizon reveal light\'s celebration and this celebration pierces through mind\'s expression. This is very interesting poem and excellent with nice imagery.
March 10th, 2017 22:01
Not Again.
Augustus said:
The heart, the sea, a knight, a flood, and flames all weaved into an exquisite lament. Hugs.
March 10th, 2017 14:24
Augustus said:
The heart, the sea, a knight, a flood, and flames all weaved into an exquisite lament. Hugs.
March 10th, 2017 14:24
Not Again.
willyweed said:
sorry for your lost I can only imagine your pain, and sorrow, I have been fortunate thus far! WW
March 10th, 2017 09:55
willyweed said:
sorry for your lost I can only imagine your pain, and sorrow, I have been fortunate thus far! WW
March 10th, 2017 09:55
Whisperings.
Hypothesis said:
You played with thoughts and conveyed a brilliant set of words. I like the setting you chose and felt it a warm climate with a whispering breeze.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 18:27
Hypothesis said:
You played with thoughts and conveyed a brilliant set of words. I like the setting you chose and felt it a warm climate with a whispering breeze.
Good read poet.
March 9th, 2017 18:27
Whisperings.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautifully written. How could he say no? A siren song for sure, luring enough to make an Argonaught lay anchor. A great poem. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2017 17:58
MendedFences27 said:
Beautifully written. How could he say no? A siren song for sure, luring enough to make an Argonaught lay anchor. A great poem. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2017 17:58
Whisperings.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ You sure struck a sensuous chord with this one ! It reads like a love song played on a harp ! Love every line but my favourite is \"Dive into loves\'s dulcet whispering while you experience bliss\" YES YES YES ! I also love the line about HONEY and the visual is perfectly selected ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours B
March 9th, 2017 08:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ You sure struck a sensuous chord with this one ! It reads like a love song played on a harp ! Love every line but my favourite is \"Dive into loves\'s dulcet whispering while you experience bliss\" YES YES YES ! I also love the line about HONEY and the visual is perfectly selected ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours B
March 9th, 2017 08:43
Whisperings.
Michael Edwards said:
Once again you\'ve words into something special - good on yer Fay.
March 9th, 2017 06:50
Michael Edwards said:
Once again you\'ve words into something special - good on yer Fay.
March 9th, 2017 06:50
Friendship\'s Love.
Tony36 said:
Nothing like a good friend, nothing like the love that comes with it. Great write
March 8th, 2017 15:17
Tony36 said:
Nothing like a good friend, nothing like the love that comes with it. Great write
March 8th, 2017 15:17
Friendship\'s Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautifully crafted poem with perfect complimentary picture. You inspire us all to \"write proper poetry\". Love the theme of Soulmates and the True Love that is engendered by True Friendship. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
March 8th, 2017 14:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautifully crafted poem with perfect complimentary picture. You inspire us all to \"write proper poetry\". Love the theme of Soulmates and the True Love that is engendered by True Friendship. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
March 8th, 2017 14:46
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