Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
We Deserve It.
P.H.Rose said:
I love this Fay
It\'s exactly how I
Feel we should all
Start the change
From within
To much is put
On the way we look
And not how we
Feel....
April 11th, 2017 05:14
P.H.Rose said:
I love this Fay
It\'s exactly how I
Feel we should all
Start the change
From within
To much is put
On the way we look
And not how we
Feel....
April 11th, 2017 05:14
Victorious.
MendedFences27 said:
Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against it, yet it is a rare thing, and it has many copy-cat variants not the true thing. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:44
MendedFences27 said:
Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against it, yet it is a rare thing, and it has many copy-cat variants not the true thing. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:44
Victorious.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Today FAY ~ I know you are speaking from experience and that it the intensity of LOVE ~ someone a lovely as you deserves. I have touched the \"Hem of Loves Garment\" and it contained all that you express it to be. Love never loses and so far (in my experience) LOVE NEVER FAILS ~ All I ask ~ of my Partner ~ is to LOVE and be LOVED in return. Thanks for sharing ~ such an encouragement for LOVE ! Yours B.
April 10th, 2017 16:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Today FAY ~ I know you are speaking from experience and that it the intensity of LOVE ~ someone a lovely as you deserves. I have touched the \"Hem of Loves Garment\" and it contained all that you express it to be. Love never loses and so far (in my experience) LOVE NEVER FAILS ~ All I ask ~ of my Partner ~ is to LOVE and be LOVED in return. Thanks for sharing ~ such an encouragement for LOVE ! Yours B.
April 10th, 2017 16:08
Victorious.
willyweed said:
yes Fay you are correct, love is just like that, wonderful write my dear.
April 10th, 2017 07:29
willyweed said:
yes Fay you are correct, love is just like that, wonderful write my dear.
April 10th, 2017 07:29
Victorious.
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem Fay
Love is the doctor
Of my heart
With its power
My life would
Start....
April 10th, 2017 07:09
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem Fay
Love is the doctor
Of my heart
With its power
My life would
Start....
April 10th, 2017 07:09
Victorious.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, so invidious, so powerful, so wonderful.
Good write.
April 10th, 2017 03:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, so invidious, so powerful, so wonderful.
Good write.
April 10th, 2017 03:37
Would We ?
willyweed said:
You ask a difficult question that requires a more difficult answer. ww
April 9th, 2017 12:36
willyweed said:
You ask a difficult question that requires a more difficult answer. ww
April 9th, 2017 12:36
Whale-Play.
WriteBeLight said:
Been whale watching and you have captured the awe and amazement I have felt😀
April 9th, 2017 10:25
WriteBeLight said:
Been whale watching and you have captured the awe and amazement I have felt😀
April 9th, 2017 10:25
Whale-Play.
Kurt Philip Behm said:
It\'s amazing how intelligent and relatable whales are, Fay. I\'ve had them come up right beside both my sailboat and seadoo explorer. The explorer (inflatable) is only 16 feet long. We were 5 miles off the beach in Cape May New Jersey and the blue whale (scary big) just lay beside us for almost 30 minutes. Unbelievable. Nice writing, you took me back!
April 8th, 2017 22:00
Kurt Philip Behm said:
It\'s amazing how intelligent and relatable whales are, Fay. I\'ve had them come up right beside both my sailboat and seadoo explorer. The explorer (inflatable) is only 16 feet long. We were 5 miles off the beach in Cape May New Jersey and the blue whale (scary big) just lay beside us for almost 30 minutes. Unbelievable. Nice writing, you took me back!
April 8th, 2017 22:00
Whale-Play.
MendedFences27 said:
And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a spectacular pastime. They are massive creatures and yet seem to be gentle. Their movements are elegant and yet powerful. A great tale or could I say a whale of a tale. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:25
MendedFences27 said:
And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a spectacular pastime. They are massive creatures and yet seem to be gentle. Their movements are elegant and yet powerful. A great tale or could I say a whale of a tale. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:25
Whale-Play.
Michael Edwards said:
I could be there - you\'ve painted a great picture Fay.
April 8th, 2017 14:50
Michael Edwards said:
I could be there - you\'ve painted a great picture Fay.
April 8th, 2017 14:50
Who I Am.
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you. Why not celebrate our own existence? Freedom is the most precious and precarious thing on Earth. Enjoy! - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:18
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you. Why not celebrate our own existence? Freedom is the most precious and precarious thing on Earth. Enjoy! - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:18
Who I Am.
Michael Edwards said:
Where do you keep finding this fabulous poetic language - super stuff Fay.
April 7th, 2017 15:33
Michael Edwards said:
Where do you keep finding this fabulous poetic language - super stuff Fay.
April 7th, 2017 15:33
Who I Am.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent advice and attitude FAY ~ thanks for caring ~ and sharing. In each of our lives (as we mature !) we all face losses and disappointments some minor and some life changing. So at some level we can all empathise with each other ~ that is a blessing of MPS. Your final verse is an example (and a challenge) to each of us FAY ! To pick ourselves up ~ dust ourselves down ~ and start all over again. You are inspirational both in you poetry and example ! Yours BRIAN
April 7th, 2017 10:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent advice and attitude FAY ~ thanks for caring ~ and sharing. In each of our lives (as we mature !) we all face losses and disappointments some minor and some life changing. So at some level we can all empathise with each other ~ that is a blessing of MPS. Your final verse is an example (and a challenge) to each of us FAY ! To pick ourselves up ~ dust ourselves down ~ and start all over again. You are inspirational both in you poetry and example ! Yours BRIAN
April 7th, 2017 10:45
Wonderment.
MendedFences27 said:
Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous presentation of a momentary indulgence by two lovers. What is there about the sea that inspires romance? Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 19:18
MendedFences27 said:
Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous presentation of a momentary indulgence by two lovers. What is there about the sea that inspires romance? Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 19:18
Wonderment.
P.H.Rose said:
This is really very good Fay
I could actually see what you
Were describing....
As in a film, one of those
Old black and white movies
April 6th, 2017 17:57
P.H.Rose said:
This is really very good Fay
I could actually see what you
Were describing....
As in a film, one of those
Old black and white movies
April 6th, 2017 17:57
Wonderment.
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - just read it again and it was worth returning to - great write.
April 6th, 2017 08:39
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - just read it again and it was worth returning to - great write.
April 6th, 2017 08:39
Wonderment.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and caring FAY ~ a little West Country dialect adds piquancy to a poem and (as in Rabbie Burns !) facilitates rhyme. Thanks for glossary ! One question ~ was it imagination or stirred sub~consciousness ? Yours B.
April 6th, 2017 05:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and caring FAY ~ a little West Country dialect adds piquancy to a poem and (as in Rabbie Burns !) facilitates rhyme. Thanks for glossary ! One question ~ was it imagination or stirred sub~consciousness ? Yours B.
April 6th, 2017 05:49
Wonderment.
orchidee said:
Oops when I \'translate\' this I feel a swoon coming on! heehee.
April 6th, 2017 03:27
orchidee said:
Oops when I \'translate\' this I feel a swoon coming on! heehee.
April 6th, 2017 03:27
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