Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Time\'s Needle.
willyweed said:
and as so as the dream keeper finishes up ...wide awake! very nice Fay. ww
March 4th, 2017 09:00
willyweed said:
and as so as the dream keeper finishes up ...wide awake! very nice Fay. ww
March 4th, 2017 09:00
Carrying On.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear friends for your perceptive comments on my sea-poem.
March 4th, 2017 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear friends for your perceptive comments on my sea-poem.
March 4th, 2017 03:47
Carrying On.
MendedFences27 said:
Man\'s struggles against the sea: Storms, huge tides, floods, tidal waves or tsunamis, shoreline damage, and men lost in boats/ships. Yet, life goes on and the challenge continues. Fay, you have a way with words, and I enjoyed this one immensely. _ Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:12
MendedFences27 said:
Man\'s struggles against the sea: Storms, huge tides, floods, tidal waves or tsunamis, shoreline damage, and men lost in boats/ships. Yet, life goes on and the challenge continues. Fay, you have a way with words, and I enjoyed this one immensely. _ Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 21:12
Carrying On.
Augustus said:
We are both about the sea today. You congered up some thoughts: why does not the water just drip off the sides of the world? Another- why do we go out in rough seas? The sea is telling us to stay home. Does it really welcome us treading its waters? Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 17:58
Augustus said:
We are both about the sea today. You congered up some thoughts: why does not the water just drip off the sides of the world? Another- why do we go out in rough seas? The sea is telling us to stay home. Does it really welcome us treading its waters? Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 17:58
Carrying On.
WriteBeLight said:
Almighty writing Fay. Love it. I love the ocean and respect its power :)
March 3rd, 2017 06:27
WriteBeLight said:
Almighty writing Fay. Love it. I love the ocean and respect its power :)
March 3rd, 2017 06:27
Love\'s Due.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love chooses wonderfully love and love becomes blind with many weaknesses. Shadows of love casts wonderful judgement. Tender harmony is deflected. Love composes wonderful song more than music. This is very meaningful and interesting poem shared here.
March 2nd, 2017 17:40
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love chooses wonderfully love and love becomes blind with many weaknesses. Shadows of love casts wonderful judgement. Tender harmony is deflected. Love composes wonderful song more than music. This is very meaningful and interesting poem shared here.
March 2nd, 2017 17:40
Forsaken.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Poverty provokes thought and brings sorrow in mind and spirit. We fear for their future and think much more in worries. When will this cruel insane world yield to the needs of these forsaken children ? Question asked in last stanza fills mind of a reader in deep thought. No fearless pages to painless future we witness in such condition. Poverty takes these children in to tragic path. This is brought up wonderfully and people across this world should get awareness to save children and their futures with proper knowledge. An Amazing poem this is.
March 2nd, 2017 17:33
Pintu Mahakul said:
Poverty provokes thought and brings sorrow in mind and spirit. We fear for their future and think much more in worries. When will this cruel insane world yield to the needs of these forsaken children ? Question asked in last stanza fills mind of a reader in deep thought. No fearless pages to painless future we witness in such condition. Poverty takes these children in to tragic path. This is brought up wonderfully and people across this world should get awareness to save children and their futures with proper knowledge. An Amazing poem this is.
March 2nd, 2017 17:33
Coveted.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Clutching large seeds of glimmery gold they have brought half of this world in to alive condition by working hard to the hot comfort of flame keeping away winter\'s cold. Their possession is wonderful really. This poem is a beautiful tribute poem.
March 2nd, 2017 17:25
Pintu Mahakul said:
Clutching large seeds of glimmery gold they have brought half of this world in to alive condition by working hard to the hot comfort of flame keeping away winter\'s cold. Their possession is wonderful really. This poem is a beautiful tribute poem.
March 2nd, 2017 17:25
Live Silver.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Primitive gulls are riding very high with waves of life. There is storm on the horizon and this is just along with fishing. To fasten the entrances to the lower part of a ship using wooden boards. to prepare for a difficult situation is wonderfully managed here for protective life. Knives are flashing at harbour\'s side. Earning their crust from wild sea is amazing and this mesmerizes mind and this is meant for togetherness. They are brave like ocean. May God bless them all! A brilliant poem this is. This reflects life very well.
March 2nd, 2017 17:09
Pintu Mahakul said:
Primitive gulls are riding very high with waves of life. There is storm on the horizon and this is just along with fishing. To fasten the entrances to the lower part of a ship using wooden boards. to prepare for a difficult situation is wonderfully managed here for protective life. Knives are flashing at harbour\'s side. Earning their crust from wild sea is amazing and this mesmerizes mind and this is meant for togetherness. They are brave like ocean. May God bless them all! A brilliant poem this is. This reflects life very well.
March 2nd, 2017 17:09
Still Climbing.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Legacy of light\'s departure confronts the tail-end of innocence and carefree life. Calmness is thrown far with force. This is so sad that life acts with changes with merciless views. Getting betrayal is painful and this leaves wounds and scars in mind. Offence scribbles memory. Uncontrolled strength is gathered. Forgiveness has taste in life to solve many problems. This is wise to climb up from stage of bitter betrayal to a moment of fortune, joy and success. Very thought provoking and thoughtful poem is shared here with excellent expression.
March 2nd, 2017 16:58
Pintu Mahakul said:
Legacy of light\'s departure confronts the tail-end of innocence and carefree life. Calmness is thrown far with force. This is so sad that life acts with changes with merciless views. Getting betrayal is painful and this leaves wounds and scars in mind. Offence scribbles memory. Uncontrolled strength is gathered. Forgiveness has taste in life to solve many problems. This is wise to climb up from stage of bitter betrayal to a moment of fortune, joy and success. Very thought provoking and thoughtful poem is shared here with excellent expression.
March 2nd, 2017 16:58
Still Climbing.
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. A very graphic description of the pain and hurt felt from betrayal. A ray of hope in the strength of her to keep on climbing. Well spoken. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:01
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. A very graphic description of the pain and hurt felt from betrayal. A ray of hope in the strength of her to keep on climbing. Well spoken. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2017 13:01
Still Climbing.
Augustus said:
\"Innocence and calm hurled away\". You have such a unique descriptive pen. There is so much we learn about ourselves and others when trust is violated. Great write.
March 2nd, 2017 12:30
Augustus said:
\"Innocence and calm hurled away\". You have such a unique descriptive pen. There is so much we learn about ourselves and others when trust is violated. Great write.
March 2nd, 2017 12:30
Still Climbing.
WriteBeLight said:
Betrayal is terrible, and hopefully something to recover from. Great job Fay.
March 2nd, 2017 12:07
WriteBeLight said:
Betrayal is terrible, and hopefully something to recover from. Great job Fay.
March 2nd, 2017 12:07
Still Climbing.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY for another poem elegant in both structure and subject. The hallmark of a Good Poet. The sentiments in your poem exactly complement the angst and resolve in the poster. Thanks for caring B.
March 2nd, 2017 11:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY for another poem elegant in both structure and subject. The hallmark of a Good Poet. The sentiments in your poem exactly complement the angst and resolve in the poster. Thanks for caring B.
March 2nd, 2017 11:13
Still Climbing.
willyweed said:
lash out first ask questions later? lots of that going around, my daughter reads to poor children after work a day or two a week, they are very needy and all want my attention Dad she says... I said go figure Kim?
March 2nd, 2017 07:29
willyweed said:
lash out first ask questions later? lots of that going around, my daughter reads to poor children after work a day or two a week, they are very needy and all want my attention Dad she says... I said go figure Kim?
March 2nd, 2017 07:29
Live Silver.
MendedFences27 said:
Images that jump from the paper to the reader: of herring, sails, boats, gulls, nets, hatches, knives and salt barrels. Olden times when going to sea was far more dangerous than it is today. All to earn a mere crust from the sea. What a great poem. Loved every word of it. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2017 20:50
MendedFences27 said:
Images that jump from the paper to the reader: of herring, sails, boats, gulls, nets, hatches, knives and salt barrels. Olden times when going to sea was far more dangerous than it is today. All to earn a mere crust from the sea. What a great poem. Loved every word of it. - Phil A.
March 1st, 2017 20:50
Live Silver.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ love the concept of the fish being \"live silver\" ! God hear us when we cry to thee for those in peril on the sea ! Thanks for caring 7 sharing ~ Yours B
March 1st, 2017 17:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ love the concept of the fish being \"live silver\" ! God hear us when we cry to thee for those in peril on the sea ! Thanks for caring 7 sharing ~ Yours B
March 1st, 2017 17:29
Live Silver.
Philip said:
Your poem conjures up a time gone by at sea and on the harbour excellently.
Phil.G.
March 1st, 2017 10:28
Philip said:
Your poem conjures up a time gone by at sea and on the harbour excellently.
Phil.G.
March 1st, 2017 10:28
Live Silver.
willyweed said:
I don\'t like fish & chips but there is nothing not to like with this poem nice one Fay! sweet ww
March 1st, 2017 10:21
willyweed said:
I don\'t like fish & chips but there is nothing not to like with this poem nice one Fay! sweet ww
March 1st, 2017 10:21
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