Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
If Only.
willyweed said:
When lovers meet below the sun
The blackbird sings her happy song
The blackbird sings the lovers play
The blackbird sings her song all day
When lovers touch below the moon
The blackbird sings her sweet love tune
The blackbird sings the lovers kiss
The blackbird sings her song of this
When lovers love below the sky
The blackbird sings her lullabye
The blackbird sings the lovers form
The blackbird sings and love is born
April 2nd, 2017 09:21
willyweed said:
When lovers meet below the sun
The blackbird sings her happy song
The blackbird sings the lovers play
The blackbird sings her song all day
When lovers touch below the moon
The blackbird sings her sweet love tune
The blackbird sings the lovers kiss
The blackbird sings her song of this
When lovers love below the sky
The blackbird sings her lullabye
The blackbird sings the lovers form
The blackbird sings and love is born
April 2nd, 2017 09:21
If Only.
Philip said:
Fay I am listening to a blackbird now with my door open as I read your uplifting piece. Phil.G
April 2nd, 2017 07:41
Philip said:
Fay I am listening to a blackbird now with my door open as I read your uplifting piece. Phil.G
April 2nd, 2017 07:41
If Only.
WriteBeLight said:
Very nice tribute to the songbird Fay! I love them so much.
April 2nd, 2017 07:03
WriteBeLight said:
Very nice tribute to the songbird Fay! I love them so much.
April 2nd, 2017 07:03
Changing.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wind sheeted shore and cheesy like bread are stored in memory of wise expression. Storm is on the way but maroon sky is in new hope. An amazing poem with excellent wording is shared here.
April 1st, 2017 20:56
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wind sheeted shore and cheesy like bread are stored in memory of wise expression. Storm is on the way but maroon sky is in new hope. An amazing poem with excellent wording is shared here.
April 1st, 2017 20:56
Burgeoning.
Pintu Mahakul said:
This means ice ceases and once birdless branches can become leafed and ready. A great imagery is drawn in this poem. This smoothly flows. Muddy ground tires of sodden trying to create movement. Green grasses smile remaining in dress of Earth. Very nice perceptional is shared during spring.
April 1st, 2017 20:53
Pintu Mahakul said:
This means ice ceases and once birdless branches can become leafed and ready. A great imagery is drawn in this poem. This smoothly flows. Muddy ground tires of sodden trying to create movement. Green grasses smile remaining in dress of Earth. Very nice perceptional is shared during spring.
April 1st, 2017 20:53
Love Sings.
Pintu Mahakul said:
While life\'s closest relationship ripens life blooms to feel joy of enlightenment. Hurt unhealed from
sitting in pain will suffer dejection. An inspiring and meaningful poem is very well written and shared.
April 1st, 2017 20:50
Pintu Mahakul said:
While life\'s closest relationship ripens life blooms to feel joy of enlightenment. Hurt unhealed from
sitting in pain will suffer dejection. An inspiring and meaningful poem is very well written and shared.
April 1st, 2017 20:50
Until Day.
Pintu Mahakul said:
While we feel pain and tiredness sleep brings opportunity of getting relief. Troubles melt in to dream. Wisest emotion floats ever. A great poem basing of perception is shared here.
April 1st, 2017 20:47
Pintu Mahakul said:
While we feel pain and tiredness sleep brings opportunity of getting relief. Troubles melt in to dream. Wisest emotion floats ever. A great poem basing of perception is shared here.
April 1st, 2017 20:47
Until Day.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very challenging poem ~ it made me sad ! This is often my experience as well \"Sorrow blights our evening hours ~ but after SLEEP ~ hope dawns in the morning.\" May this be you experience ~ NOW and in the FUTURE ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIANt
April 1st, 2017 07:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very challenging poem ~ it made me sad ! This is often my experience as well \"Sorrow blights our evening hours ~ but after SLEEP ~ hope dawns in the morning.\" May this be you experience ~ NOW and in the FUTURE ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIANt
April 1st, 2017 07:53
Until Day.
WriteBeLight said:
Beautiful work Fay. I love my sleep :) You touched on the comfort I feel when I doze off.
April 1st, 2017 06:14
WriteBeLight said:
Beautiful work Fay. I love my sleep :) You touched on the comfort I feel when I doze off.
April 1st, 2017 06:14
Until Day.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write fay but you were up before me to post this one !
April 1st, 2017 00:58
Michael Edwards said:
Great write fay but you were up before me to post this one !
April 1st, 2017 00:58
Love Sings.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for some very wise advice ~ between the pithy lines of your epigrams ! Thanks for caring enough to share. Yours B
March 31st, 2017 17:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for some very wise advice ~ between the pithy lines of your epigrams ! Thanks for caring enough to share. Yours B
March 31st, 2017 17:31
Love Sings.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m really struggling for inspiration when it comes to serious poetry - I do admire how you keep coming up with something different and uniquely yours every day - nice one Fay
March 31st, 2017 04:56
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m really struggling for inspiration when it comes to serious poetry - I do admire how you keep coming up with something different and uniquely yours every day - nice one Fay
March 31st, 2017 04:56
Burgeoning.
orchidee said:
Descriptive write. Erm, I recall a flurry of snow in late April last year. Now I\'ve spoilt things! doh! Let\'s hope it stays Spring-like!
March 30th, 2017 10:46
orchidee said:
Descriptive write. Erm, I recall a flurry of snow in late April last year. Now I\'ve spoilt things! doh! Let\'s hope it stays Spring-like!
March 30th, 2017 10:46
Burgeoning.
Philip said:
Loads of spring enthusiasm in you lovely verse. Phil.G
March 30th, 2017 09:08
Philip said:
Loads of spring enthusiasm in you lovely verse. Phil.G
March 30th, 2017 09:08
Burgeoning.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BURGEON ~ To spring into life overnight ! Great word ! Thanks FAY for increasing our vocabulary and sharing another elegant ode with an elegant message of burgeoning SPRING. Love the line \"Music of March unsettles the breast of restless nature\" I observes that struggle very day last month and now (at last) APRIL is here ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B. Love the visual it complements the message !
March 30th, 2017 08:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BURGEON ~ To spring into life overnight ! Great word ! Thanks FAY for increasing our vocabulary and sharing another elegant ode with an elegant message of burgeoning SPRING. Love the line \"Music of March unsettles the breast of restless nature\" I observes that struggle very day last month and now (at last) APRIL is here ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B. Love the visual it complements the message !
March 30th, 2017 08:05
Burgeoning.
Michael Edwards said:
Full of optimism with some great lines - especially like the last line.
March 30th, 2017 06:12
Michael Edwards said:
Full of optimism with some great lines - especially like the last line.
March 30th, 2017 06:12
Changing.
willyweed said:
kind of made me hungry, very interesting take on the weather! storm clouds approaching?
March 29th, 2017 07:54
willyweed said:
kind of made me hungry, very interesting take on the weather! storm clouds approaching?
March 29th, 2017 07:54
After A Sip.
orchidee said:
No please! It\'s me joking! let\'s not have a deep theological / philosophical / whatever discussion on it!
March 28th, 2017 08:54
orchidee said:
No please! It\'s me joking! let\'s not have a deep theological / philosophical / whatever discussion on it!
March 28th, 2017 08:54
After A Sip.
orchidee said:
Good write. I\'m permanent of course. Well, I keep saying I\'m millions of years old! I wish I would shut up sometimes! heehee.
March 28th, 2017 08:53
orchidee said:
Good write. I\'m permanent of course. Well, I keep saying I\'m millions of years old! I wish I would shut up sometimes! heehee.
March 28th, 2017 08:53
After A Sip.
Michael Edwards said:
Dipping toes into the moment - great words in a great poem.
March 28th, 2017 07:27
Michael Edwards said:
Dipping toes into the moment - great words in a great poem.
March 28th, 2017 07:27
After A Sip.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another well penned and enigmatic poem ~ to start a busy day ! The time between dawn and day is always uncertain ~ but with the Sun comes thoughts of love & liberty ! My poem today explores the Solar System with HAIKU ~ enjoy ~ Yours B
March 28th, 2017 05:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another well penned and enigmatic poem ~ to start a busy day ! The time between dawn and day is always uncertain ~ but with the Sun comes thoughts of love & liberty ! My poem today explores the Solar System with HAIKU ~ enjoy ~ Yours B
March 28th, 2017 05:52
Bubble Magic.
Michael Edwards said:
Catches the magic of bubbles with you usual superb descriptive verse
March 27th, 2017 12:54
Michael Edwards said:
Catches the magic of bubbles with you usual superb descriptive verse
March 27th, 2017 12:54
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