Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Wonderment.
Michael Edwards said:
Just read this quickly but my wife is waiting to go shopping so will read again later - looks pretty darn good on first reading.
April 6th, 2017 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
Just read this quickly but my wife is waiting to go shopping so will read again later - looks pretty darn good on first reading.
April 6th, 2017 02:48
Winnow The Wind.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ As we grow older we begin to experience some of the extremes of love ~ but we never fully understand them. Love grows and love wilts ~ but we never (fully) understand WHY. I have learned to enjoy it while it lasts ~ but not to suffocate (in misery) when it dies ~ but to learn positives from the experience ~ and move on as gracefully and gratefully as possible ! Yours B.
April 5th, 2017 16:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ As we grow older we begin to experience some of the extremes of love ~ but we never fully understand them. Love grows and love wilts ~ but we never (fully) understand WHY. I have learned to enjoy it while it lasts ~ but not to suffocate (in misery) when it dies ~ but to learn positives from the experience ~ and move on as gracefully and gratefully as possible ! Yours B.
April 5th, 2017 16:21
Winnow The Wind.
Michael Edwards said:
A great read fay with some really great lines.
April 5th, 2017 15:37
Michael Edwards said:
A great read fay with some really great lines.
April 5th, 2017 15:37
Winnow The Wind.
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good Fay
I like the\" taste of
Ruby red wine\"
I have a poem
About memory
From youth, it has
The line, \"memory
Flows as I take a
Sip Of blood red wine\"
April 5th, 2017 14:02
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good Fay
I like the\" taste of
Ruby red wine\"
I have a poem
About memory
From youth, it has
The line, \"memory
Flows as I take a
Sip Of blood red wine\"
April 5th, 2017 14:02
Winnow The Wind.
kevin browne said:
beautifully written. such a gorgeous tone to this poem that it makes me feel to be the lost gold for you. a perfect poem of love.
April 5th, 2017 08:15
kevin browne said:
beautifully written. such a gorgeous tone to this poem that it makes me feel to be the lost gold for you. a perfect poem of love.
April 5th, 2017 08:15
Yellowness.
Christina8 said:
Stunning pic to go with your well written poem. Absolutely loved reading it. Spring is just coming to where I live. Great job!
April 4th, 2017 13:51
Christina8 said:
Stunning pic to go with your well written poem. Absolutely loved reading it. Spring is just coming to where I live. Great job!
April 4th, 2017 13:51
Yellowness.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely poem for a great flower. I currently have large trumpets, jonquils, split coronas, doubles, pink trumpeted, and miniature species all in bloom but they are about to go over now - but there is so much to follow and look forward to.
April 4th, 2017 13:44
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely poem for a great flower. I currently have large trumpets, jonquils, split coronas, doubles, pink trumpeted, and miniature species all in bloom but they are about to go over now - but there is so much to follow and look forward to.
April 4th, 2017 13:44
Yellowness.
Philip said:
Fantastic, expressive poem. I can see the daffodils so clearly in my mind. Phil.G.
April 4th, 2017 12:06
Philip said:
Fantastic, expressive poem. I can see the daffodils so clearly in my mind. Phil.G.
April 4th, 2017 12:06
Yellowness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May you float in Spring as you do in these words.
April 4th, 2017 08:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May you float in Spring as you do in these words.
April 4th, 2017 08:14
Yellowness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Nothing stirs the muse quite like a \"Host of Golden Daffodils\" Thanks for caring and sharing. My poem (and Fusion) today is about the equally beautiful NORTHERN RED CARDINAL ~ Yours B
April 4th, 2017 07:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Nothing stirs the muse quite like a \"Host of Golden Daffodils\" Thanks for caring and sharing. My poem (and Fusion) today is about the equally beautiful NORTHERN RED CARDINAL ~ Yours B
April 4th, 2017 07:45
Yellowness.
Garry said:
Captured scents of happiness.
What a wonderdul image beautifully put.
More summery than my lastest posting.
April 4th, 2017 06:06
Garry said:
Captured scents of happiness.
What a wonderdul image beautifully put.
More summery than my lastest posting.
April 4th, 2017 06:06
Youth\'s blood.
Philip said:
Excellent Fay. I really like the first two lines of the second verse. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:20
Philip said:
Excellent Fay. I really like the first two lines of the second verse. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:20
Youth\'s blood.
orchidee said:
A fine write. War is such a waste of time really too.
April 3rd, 2017 13:09
orchidee said:
A fine write. War is such a waste of time really too.
April 3rd, 2017 13:09
Youth\'s blood.
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks for posting this - great read and it reminds me I need a haircut.
April 3rd, 2017 06:44
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks for posting this - great read and it reminds me I need a haircut.
April 3rd, 2017 06:44
Youth\'s blood.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love thin poems ~ lovely to recite ! The History of WW1 tells me that being BALD (or having a NUMBER ONE) was the preferred hairstyle in the trenches. There were of course (as far as I know) no females on either side. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.
April 3rd, 2017 06:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love thin poems ~ lovely to recite ! The History of WW1 tells me that being BALD (or having a NUMBER ONE) was the preferred hairstyle in the trenches. There were of course (as far as I know) no females on either side. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.
April 3rd, 2017 06:26
If Only.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I too write with the sound of the dawn chorus in my ears.
April 3rd, 2017 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I too write with the sound of the dawn chorus in my ears.
April 3rd, 2017 00:23
If Only.
Michael Edwards said:
Apart from the sparrow who I love simply for his cheeky understated appearance the blackbird has to be one of my favourites and this beautifully expressed poem does full justice to his fabulous song
April 2nd, 2017 11:31
Michael Edwards said:
Apart from the sparrow who I love simply for his cheeky understated appearance the blackbird has to be one of my favourites and this beautifully expressed poem does full justice to his fabulous song
April 2nd, 2017 11:31
If Only.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ As is your wont ~ you did your very best to capture the \"birdsong\" in your elegant poem. The result is verbal melody ! Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 09:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ As is your wont ~ you did your very best to capture the \"birdsong\" in your elegant poem. The result is verbal melody ! Thanks B
April 2nd, 2017 09:48
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