Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Friendship\'s Love.
MendedFences27 said:
Well spoken verse on friendship. We are lucky if we have one true friend in life. Sometimes it requires an inordinate amount of acceptance. Great write. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2017 13:13
MendedFences27 said:
Well spoken verse on friendship. We are lucky if we have one true friend in life. Sometimes it requires an inordinate amount of acceptance. Great write. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2017 13:13
Friendship\'s Love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, friendship is so special.
March 8th, 2017 08:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, friendship is so special.
March 8th, 2017 08:49
Friendship\'s Love.
willyweed said:
I agree Fay friendships love is different and special ! great point to this gem. WW
March 8th, 2017 07:53
willyweed said:
I agree Fay friendships love is different and special ! great point to this gem. WW
March 8th, 2017 07:53
Cutting Free.
Augustus said:
Your poem is full of hope for the future in the face of failure. Nicely done. \"From parched discord.\" Wow!
March 7th, 2017 17:25
Augustus said:
Your poem is full of hope for the future in the face of failure. Nicely done. \"From parched discord.\" Wow!
March 7th, 2017 17:25
Cutting Free.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Cutting free\" means leaving behind the baggage of the past, finding a new way, a new path, and using the education of experience to guide us to the right way. Well done Fay. Now if we all can just follow your advice. Try, try, try. good one. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 17:22
MendedFences27 said:
\"Cutting free\" means leaving behind the baggage of the past, finding a new way, a new path, and using the education of experience to guide us to the right way. Well done Fay. Now if we all can just follow your advice. Try, try, try. good one. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 17:22
Cutting Free.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ As you say \"nil desperandum\" ~ Opportunity is always just around the corner ~ and sometimes it hides ! BUT we must seek opportunity and act on it ! Love th expensiveness of the visual a perfect compliment to a challenging poem ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 7th, 2017 14:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ As you say \"nil desperandum\" ~ Opportunity is always just around the corner ~ and sometimes it hides ! BUT we must seek opportunity and act on it ! Love th expensiveness of the visual a perfect compliment to a challenging poem ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 7th, 2017 14:30
Cutting Free.
willyweed said:
learn from mistakes move forward ever into the future finding better and better each time we dare look! nice work Fay!
March 7th, 2017 11:28
willyweed said:
learn from mistakes move forward ever into the future finding better and better each time we dare look! nice work Fay!
March 7th, 2017 11:28
Being Ready.
MendedFences27 said:
I really liked Stanza 4. \"Hedgerows dancing to Spring\'s evocative music.\' - great image. Another great write Fay. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 6th, 2017 14:54
MendedFences27 said:
I really liked Stanza 4. \"Hedgerows dancing to Spring\'s evocative music.\' - great image. Another great write Fay. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 6th, 2017 14:54
Being Ready.
willyweed said:
I got my diggin\' tools out and at the ready wishing the spring would just get sprung. woo hoo ready set dig it! ww
March 6th, 2017 09:18
willyweed said:
I got my diggin\' tools out and at the ready wishing the spring would just get sprung. woo hoo ready set dig it! ww
March 6th, 2017 09:18
Being Ready.
Michael Edwards said:
Great joy - in your usual great use of the written word.
March 6th, 2017 08:52
Michael Edwards said:
Great joy - in your usual great use of the written word.
March 6th, 2017 08:52
Being Ready.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the structure of this poem FAY ~ Five balanced tercets ~ throbbing with rhythm as suits the subject. The whole poem symbolises Spring bursting into life all around us ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ beautiful ! Love the Spring flowers. Yours B
March 6th, 2017 08:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the structure of this poem FAY ~ Five balanced tercets ~ throbbing with rhythm as suits the subject. The whole poem symbolises Spring bursting into life all around us ~ AMEN. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ beautiful ! Love the Spring flowers. Yours B
March 6th, 2017 08:48
Spring Knows.
Augustus said:
And you know nature. Nicely done. Interesting concept of duty assigned to a season.
March 5th, 2017 19:03
Augustus said:
And you know nature. Nicely done. Interesting concept of duty assigned to a season.
March 5th, 2017 19:03
Spring Knows.
MendedFences27 said:
Can\'t get here fast enough. The resilience of Nature is truly amazing. Beautifully described here in your poem, Those \"greening things\' are indomitable , and \"Spring\" is duty-bound. Loved it - Phil A.
March 5th, 2017 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
Can\'t get here fast enough. The resilience of Nature is truly amazing. Beautifully described here in your poem, Those \"greening things\' are indomitable , and \"Spring\" is duty-bound. Loved it - Phil A.
March 5th, 2017 18:18
Spring Knows.
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely work - spring appears to be with us - certainly here in middle England - about 10 different species of flower now in bloom in the garden - but beware - only about 16 weeks and the nights start drawing in.
March 5th, 2017 12:47
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely work - spring appears to be with us - certainly here in middle England - about 10 different species of flower now in bloom in the garden - but beware - only about 16 weeks and the nights start drawing in.
March 5th, 2017 12:47
Spring Knows.
willyweed said:
Spot on nature poem Fay wonder work you pen here! Bravo WW
March 5th, 2017 12:47
willyweed said:
Spot on nature poem Fay wonder work you pen here! Bravo WW
March 5th, 2017 12:47
Spring Knows.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely POEM heralding Spring ! All the daffs came out for St David\'s day and the crocuses are beginning to show. For a myriad of reasons Spring really is the loveliest Season of them all ! God has promised (at least for those in the UK !) Summer & Winter & Springtime & Harvest will NEVER cease ~ AMEN. Love the Poem ~ love Snowdrops ~ thanks for sharing ~ B
March 5th, 2017 12:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely POEM heralding Spring ! All the daffs came out for St David\'s day and the crocuses are beginning to show. For a myriad of reasons Spring really is the loveliest Season of them all ! God has promised (at least for those in the UK !) Summer & Winter & Springtime & Harvest will NEVER cease ~ AMEN. Love the Poem ~ love Snowdrops ~ thanks for sharing ~ B
March 5th, 2017 12:34
Spring Knows.
Solomon said:
Lovely write! Very descriptive and well thought out!
March 5th, 2017 11:38
Solomon said:
Lovely write! Very descriptive and well thought out!
March 5th, 2017 11:38
Spring Knows.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Must not talk ourselves out of it - Spring will probably be here about June. Oops!
March 5th, 2017 11:23
orchidee said:
A fine write. Must not talk ourselves out of it - Spring will probably be here about June. Oops!
March 5th, 2017 11:23
Spring Knows.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, spring us within touching distance.
March 5th, 2017 11:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, spring us within touching distance.
March 5th, 2017 11:18
Time\'s Needle.
MendedFences27 said:
The majesty of the morning Sun. Chasing the darkness and spreading light upon the earth. All cycles of life respond in unison to the birth of a new day. Words well chosen and a glorious topic make for great poetry. Well done. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:10
MendedFences27 said:
The majesty of the morning Sun. Chasing the darkness and spreading light upon the earth. All cycles of life respond in unison to the birth of a new day. Words well chosen and a glorious topic make for great poetry. Well done. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:10
Time\'s Needle.
Augustus said:
You awaken in the morning in a more gentile manner than I. This is just lovely.
March 4th, 2017 16:59
Augustus said:
You awaken in the morning in a more gentile manner than I. This is just lovely.
March 4th, 2017 16:59
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