Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Wild Land.
RAJ NANDY said:
A reflective poem Fay about Nature and man, depicted here through your poetic lines! -Raj, New Delhi.
February 10th, 2017 22:53
RAJ NANDY said:
A reflective poem Fay about Nature and man, depicted here through your poetic lines! -Raj, New Delhi.
February 10th, 2017 22:53
Wild Land.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY. Left to their own devices all of Nature survives in an equilibrium of Natural cycles ~ chains and webs. Things only go wrong and species become extinct when Man ceases to operate as part of the Natural System and become technologically abusive and obtrusive ! Thanks for caring.
February 10th, 2017 17:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY. Left to their own devices all of Nature survives in an equilibrium of Natural cycles ~ chains and webs. Things only go wrong and species become extinct when Man ceases to operate as part of the Natural System and become technologically abusive and obtrusive ! Thanks for caring.
February 10th, 2017 17:23
Wild Land.
Augustus said:
Freedom has its disadvantages. Given the choice of a cage or the wild land I know the animals of prey would vote for freedom. Only man would choose to put them there, messing with what is real and true. Nicely done
February 10th, 2017 17:11
Augustus said:
Freedom has its disadvantages. Given the choice of a cage or the wild land I know the animals of prey would vote for freedom. Only man would choose to put them there, messing with what is real and true. Nicely done
February 10th, 2017 17:11
Carpé-ing Diem.
Michael Edwards said:
I was with it all the way painting pictures in my mind - superb as always Fay. So looking forward to when the lychnis and campion grace our countryside once again. Although I see in the garden already I have polyanthas, crocus, snowdrops and hellebores blooming their little hearts out.
February 8th, 2017 06:32
Michael Edwards said:
I was with it all the way painting pictures in my mind - superb as always Fay. So looking forward to when the lychnis and campion grace our countryside once again. Although I see in the garden already I have polyanthas, crocus, snowdrops and hellebores blooming their little hearts out.
February 8th, 2017 06:32
Sharing.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ For many retried people (who live alone) in our Church Circle it is their DOG that keeps them sane. This especially true if their Children & Grandchildren live far away. We have to remember that DOG spells GOD in a Mirror ! I have never owned a DOG (my Mum always had CATS) but I sense that DOGS have a special empathy with their owners ~ which is beautiful to see ! Lovely poem ~ thanks for sharing. Great picture love the significance of the brolly over the DOG not his OWNER !
February 6th, 2017 16:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED FAY ~ For many retried people (who live alone) in our Church Circle it is their DOG that keeps them sane. This especially true if their Children & Grandchildren live far away. We have to remember that DOG spells GOD in a Mirror ! I have never owned a DOG (my Mum always had CATS) but I sense that DOGS have a special empathy with their owners ~ which is beautiful to see ! Lovely poem ~ thanks for sharing. Great picture love the significance of the brolly over the DOG not his OWNER !
February 6th, 2017 16:11
First Love.
RAJ NANDY said:
Truly a steamy romantic poem Fay! The first love is always remembered as a treasured and a nostalgic memory ! Thanks for sharing, - Raj, New Delhi.
February 5th, 2017 23:45
RAJ NANDY said:
Truly a steamy romantic poem Fay! The first love is always remembered as a treasured and a nostalgic memory ! Thanks for sharing, - Raj, New Delhi.
February 5th, 2017 23:45
First Love.
rrodriguez said:
The girl seems to be very mature, while the young man is still immature, but her prodding won him over. Did I get it right? This is quite descriptive with a nuance for the, as Brian says, coquettishness.
February 5th, 2017 20:54
rrodriguez said:
The girl seems to be very mature, while the young man is still immature, but her prodding won him over. Did I get it right? This is quite descriptive with a nuance for the, as Brian says, coquettishness.
February 5th, 2017 20:54
First Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM FAY ~ in both Form end Function ! No other life experience can compare with First Love. You have captured the nuances perfectly ! Love the coquettishness of the photo ~ it complements the text !
February 5th, 2017 18:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM FAY ~ in both Form end Function ! No other life experience can compare with First Love. You have captured the nuances perfectly ! Love the coquettishness of the photo ~ it complements the text !
February 5th, 2017 18:28
First Love.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
first love,from a boy to a man,who could forget
February 5th, 2017 18:04
ron parrish aka wordman said:
first love,from a boy to a man,who could forget
February 5th, 2017 18:04
OURS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ an elegant poetic tribute to TRUE LOVE !
February 4th, 2017 14:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ an elegant poetic tribute to TRUE LOVE !
February 4th, 2017 14:27
Oh Word.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you FAY for this very profound Poem. It reminds us of the key role played by JESUS (The Word) in Creation. \"All things were made by HIM and without HIM nothing was made ! You mention the Flora and the Fauna and the 92 Natural Elements (Hydrogen to Uranium) and Man and Music etc. etc. An excellent tribute to the WORD ~ Glorious and replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN.
February 3rd, 2017 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you FAY for this very profound Poem. It reminds us of the key role played by JESUS (The Word) in Creation. \"All things were made by HIM and without HIM nothing was made ! You mention the Flora and the Fauna and the 92 Natural Elements (Hydrogen to Uranium) and Man and Music etc. etc. An excellent tribute to the WORD ~ Glorious and replete with Grace & Truth ~ AMEN.
February 3rd, 2017 16:18
Oh Word.
Michael Edwards said:
Always look forward to reading your postings - they never disappoint and this way up there.
February 3rd, 2017 07:00
Michael Edwards said:
Always look forward to reading your postings - they never disappoint and this way up there.
February 3rd, 2017 07:00
Making Richer.
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - there aren\'t many who can use the language to such effect but you are certainly one of them - always look forward to reading your work.
February 1st, 2017 11:23
Michael Edwards said:
Just beautiful - there aren\'t many who can use the language to such effect but you are certainly one of them - always look forward to reading your work.
February 1st, 2017 11:23
Making Richer.
RAJ NANDY said:
The photograph and the poetic words blend beautifully to paint the picture of a dream like Dawn! -Raj, New Delhi.
February 1st, 2017 09:08
RAJ NANDY said:
The photograph and the poetic words blend beautifully to paint the picture of a dream like Dawn! -Raj, New Delhi.
February 1st, 2017 09:08
Early Bird.
Christina8 said:
I think this is an absolutely wonderful poem Fay!
January 31st, 2017 18:34
Christina8 said:
I think this is an absolutely wonderful poem Fay!
January 31st, 2017 18:34
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