Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Blackrock.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing an elegant poem with a warning message. There are many rocky (and iceberg) dangers in the Sea often hidden but always sinister ! It\'s the same with LIFE there are many hidden rocks and pitfalls ~ which we should all avoid !
January 25th, 2017 05:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing an elegant poem with a warning message. There are many rocky (and iceberg) dangers in the Sea often hidden but always sinister ! It\'s the same with LIFE there are many hidden rocks and pitfalls ~ which we should all avoid !
January 25th, 2017 05:59
Asking.
RAJ NANDY said:
A great reflective poem Fay! You had been the leading poet of that disbanded Swedish poetry site - \'Poetfreak.com\' for the last 6 years now! Though I had met you earlier in \'Poemhunter.com\' initially. This site will benefit from your postings no doubt! God bless! - Raj, New Delhi, 24th Jan 2017
January 25th, 2017 02:33
RAJ NANDY said:
A great reflective poem Fay! You had been the leading poet of that disbanded Swedish poetry site - \'Poetfreak.com\' for the last 6 years now! Though I had met you earlier in \'Poemhunter.com\' initially. This site will benefit from your postings no doubt! God bless! - Raj, New Delhi, 24th Jan 2017
January 25th, 2017 02:33
Effaced.
Augustus said:
Yes, the title and the last line. Lots of wear on this old rock as well.
January 24th, 2017 22:48
Augustus said:
Yes, the title and the last line. Lots of wear on this old rock as well.
January 24th, 2017 22:48
Effaced.
janetaylor said:
a bold a mighty pen has written a masterpiece again! fabulous fay! i love the depth and meaning of this piece ~ and i adore that it has a masculine flair.
January 24th, 2017 18:14
janetaylor said:
a bold a mighty pen has written a masterpiece again! fabulous fay! i love the depth and meaning of this piece ~ and i adore that it has a masculine flair.
January 24th, 2017 18:14
Effaced.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay - you\'ve done it again - thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
January 24th, 2017 16:07
Michael Edwards said:
Fay - you\'ve done it again - thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
January 24th, 2017 16:07
It Maybe.
Augustus said:
Women along the costal waters can relate. Well done.
January 23rd, 2017 17:31
Augustus said:
Women along the costal waters can relate. Well done.
January 23rd, 2017 17:31
It Maybe.
Michael Edwards said:
Another corker Fay - some great word associations.
January 23rd, 2017 11:13
Michael Edwards said:
Another corker Fay - some great word associations.
January 23rd, 2017 11:13
It Maybe.
janetaylor said:
this is magnificent fay. i love it when you write with thee and thy. it is absolutely elegant. your words flow beautifully with the feelings of waiting for love\'s return.
January 23rd, 2017 11:04
janetaylor said:
this is magnificent fay. i love it when you write with thee and thy. it is absolutely elegant. your words flow beautifully with the feelings of waiting for love\'s return.
January 23rd, 2017 11:04
Magical Hush.
tadpole said:
Hello FAY, made it at last and glad I did too or else I would have missed your magic poem.
January 22nd, 2017 10:56
tadpole said:
Hello FAY, made it at last and glad I did too or else I would have missed your magic poem.
January 22nd, 2017 10:56
Magical Hush.
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem that I enjoyed reading. Goes with image well. Awesome!
January 21st, 2017 19:36
Christina8 said:
An amazing poem that I enjoyed reading. Goes with image well. Awesome!
January 21st, 2017 19:36
Magical Hush.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
two beautiful images,the poem and the photo
January 21st, 2017 16:18
ron parrish aka wordman said:
two beautiful images,the poem and the photo
January 21st, 2017 16:18
Magical Hush.
Jarid said:
This is such a beautiful poem and the imagery to match. Well done.
January 21st, 2017 15:51
Jarid said:
This is such a beautiful poem and the imagery to match. Well done.
January 21st, 2017 15:51
Magical Hush.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Damp grayish pearls forest air hangs here. Mysterious peace makes mourning relent. Love makes life cheerful and regeneration shows us destiny. Very interesting poem is shared here.
January 21st, 2017 14:51
Pintu Mahakul said:
Damp grayish pearls forest air hangs here. Mysterious peace makes mourning relent. Love makes life cheerful and regeneration shows us destiny. Very interesting poem is shared here.
January 21st, 2017 14:51
Magical Hush.
Augustus said:
Combining nature and love in an elegant way. Magical!
January 21st, 2017 11:35
Augustus said:
Combining nature and love in an elegant way. Magical!
January 21st, 2017 11:35
Lovescape.
Pintu Mahakul said:
In thine hands I am soft-sift. Moments of intimate fancy do magic in mind. Very amazingly I am drawn to this Lovescape. I am sealed by thy fervour. I am tasting the certain bliss here. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 20:30
Pintu Mahakul said:
In thine hands I am soft-sift. Moments of intimate fancy do magic in mind. Very amazingly I am drawn to this Lovescape. I am sealed by thy fervour. I am tasting the certain bliss here. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 20:30
Lovescape.
Michael Edwards said:
Just love your use of the language Fay - superb.
January 20th, 2017 16:22
Michael Edwards said:
Just love your use of the language Fay - superb.
January 20th, 2017 16:22
Lovescape.
Fay Slimm. said:
So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your supportive comments - am glad too that the visual was welcomed - I rather like adding an image to my verses.
January 20th, 2017 14:21
Fay Slimm. said:
So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your supportive comments - am glad too that the visual was welcomed - I rather like adding an image to my verses.
January 20th, 2017 14:21
Lovescape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ This poem is elegant in both it structure and language. Its demure message is a tribute to the love of a Shy Lady to the expectations of her lover. Your poetry has raised the bar for MPS and encouraged us all to write better ! Thanks for adding a Perfect visual !
January 20th, 2017 12:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ This poem is elegant in both it structure and language. Its demure message is a tribute to the love of a Shy Lady to the expectations of her lover. Your poetry has raised the bar for MPS and encouraged us all to write better ! Thanks for adding a Perfect visual !
January 20th, 2017 12:35
Never Again.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Air of sharp crystalline will not again invade this exact skyline. Time\'s impact is wonderfully reflected in this poem. Every day comes with its originality. Nature\'s speech is very amazing. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 03:45
Pintu Mahakul said:
Air of sharp crystalline will not again invade this exact skyline. Time\'s impact is wonderfully reflected in this poem. Every day comes with its originality. Nature\'s speech is very amazing. An excellent poem is shared.
January 20th, 2017 03:45
Never Again.
Tony36 said:
Great write, living on a farm I have learned to cherish each day
January 19th, 2017 14:26
Tony36 said:
Great write, living on a farm I have learned to cherish each day
January 19th, 2017 14:26
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