Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



December Sky
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful FAY ~ Come day ~ go day ~ come day again. Love the visuals ~ Nature always inspires an ode or two. Love the structure and subject of your poem ~ thanks for sharing.

January 15th, 2017 10:14

Tasting The Wine.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

getting in tune with your soul

January 14th, 2017 20:43

Tasting The Wine.
Augustus said:

Beautiful free verse.

January 14th, 2017 18:56

Tasting The Wine.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

January 14th, 2017 16:01

Tasting The Wine.
Michael Edwards said:

Beautifully crafted.

January 14th, 2017 14:55

Tasting The Wine.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES Highland Air does indeed taste of wine ~ grass-scented. A quality poem ! Love the visual it add piquancy to the poem !

January 14th, 2017 12:44

Tasting The Wine.
Phoenix8523 said:

Beautiful and nice, I read it twice! -- phoenix

January 14th, 2017 12:34

I Day.
neharocks said:

Oh my god. Its beautiful and has powerful feelings.

January 14th, 2017 00:59

I Day.
Augustus said:

Loved the delicate sensual innuendo in contrast to the crude surprise at the end. Welcome to MPS. You fit right in.

January 13th, 2017 22:20

I Day.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lol,fay you have hit the jack pot on reviews,great first poem

January 13th, 2017 22:03

I Day.
Christina8 said:

Welcome Fay! A wonderful poem! Hope to see more soon.-Christina

January 13th, 2017 14:52

I Day.
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 13th, 2017 14:32

I Day.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FAY ~ Thanks for your first poem which is elegantly penned and beautifully illustrated. I enjoyed the playfulness of your poem ~ it is a battle we all face each morning.

January 13th, 2017 14:21

I Day.
Hopey_xx said:

Love it! Great work :)

January 13th, 2017 13:03

I Day.
WriteBeLight said:

Wonderful images you have written.

January 13th, 2017 12:41

I Day.
Phoenix8523 said:

Wonderfully written! -- phoenix

January 13th, 2017 12:29



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