Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Never Again.
Augustus said:

The Perfect Moment. Had to be there. Very, very nice.

January 19th, 2017 11:33

Never Again.
WriteBeLight said:

Very nice Fay!

January 19th, 2017 10:10

Never Again.
Michael Edwards said:

One of my top favourites on the site - I hall read it again and again - believe me.

January 19th, 2017 07:51

Never Again.
Fay Slimm. said:

Thank you Brian - nature gives us so much material for poetry and I constantly go back for more. So pleased you enjoyed this one.

January 19th, 2017 05:46

Never Again.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thank you FAY ~ for reminding us that each DAY is unique and precious. Not only sensuously but also opportunitywise ! A really beautiful poem ~ and visual ~ in form and function.

January 19th, 2017 05:18

Friend or Fiend ?
Jarid said:

I know this feeling so well. Great poem.

January 18th, 2017 15:23

Tasting The Wine.
janetaylor said:

heathered summits ~ wow how do you do it Fay? i love it!

January 18th, 2017 12:04

Friend or Fiend ?
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 18th, 2017 11:42

Friend or Fiend ?
Michael Edwards said:

My wife suffers badly from sleep disorder but me - I could sleep on a flagpole. Just loved this piece so well crafted.

January 18th, 2017 11:05

Friend or Fiend ?
ron parrish aka wordman said:

not bad till you lose count and have to start over

January 18th, 2017 09:01

Friend or Fiend ?
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha. Been there and have done that! Nice!

January 18th, 2017 06:51

Asking.
Pintu Mahakul said:

Knot of love is tightened and emotion has flown from true heart. Proving this in twilight above sky is mesmerizing. Very beautifully penned love poem this is and this is interesting one.

January 17th, 2017 19:19

Asking.
Augustus said:

Beautifully done. Elegant style. Sorry for your loss. Hugs.

January 17th, 2017 16:15

Asking.
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem! So sad to lose a love or friend and then to be left asking why. Great job!-Christina

January 17th, 2017 12:14

Asking.
WriteBeLight said:

Very sweet remembrance and poignant question. I am sorry these kinds of questions ever have to be asked. Nicely done Fay.

January 17th, 2017 10:38

Asking.
Sefrin said:

What a beautiful read. These words can truly touch any heart.

January 17th, 2017 07:40

Asking.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Elegant structure ~ but such a sad Subject. There is no answer to the question why one person ~ in a loving relationship is taken and the other left. Talking to the bereaved ~ those most able to cope say their strength (to go on) is in their Happy Memories and No Regrets. I figure that that is how it is with you ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN

January 17th, 2017 07:38

Unforgettable.
WriteBeLight said:

Very beautiful and visual.

January 17th, 2017 06:21

Unforgettable.
janetaylor said:

you had me transfixed fay. your words show years of wisdom interlinked with passion laced with golden imagery. loved it!

January 16th, 2017 15:42

Unforgettable.
NB said:

your poems are always fascinating.. such a great piece of writing :))

January 16th, 2017 14:18

Unforgettable.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FAY ~ I really appreciate your linguistically elegant tribute to an UNFORGETTABLE MAN ~ beautiful !

January 16th, 2017 11:29

Unforgettable.
Michael Edwards said:

Such great use of the language - love it.

January 16th, 2017 11:13

Unforgettable.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

January 16th, 2017 10:58

Unforgettable.
Anthony woodard said:

I love the richness of the words you choose
Well-done

January 16th, 2017 07:44

December Sky
Augustus said:

Poetry loving nature.

January 15th, 2017 18:18

December Sky
ron parrish aka wordman said:

a lovely write fay,and the images was right on

January 15th, 2017 16:12

December Sky
WriteBeLight said:

Very sweet☺️

January 15th, 2017 12:20

Tasting The Wine.
Anthony woodard said:

Beautifully discriptive image prevoking

January 15th, 2017 12:03

December Sky
Michael Edwards said:

I look to nature in most of my more serious stuff so really appreciate this one - great write.

January 15th, 2017 11:21

December Sky
Fay Slimm. said:

Thanks Brian - as you say Nature has an unending supply of subject matter - -- so pleased you found something of value in this short piece.

January 15th, 2017 10:25



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