Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Challenge.
Barry Hodges said:

\"me-istically\"??

January 16th, 2020 13:10

Challenge.
kevin browne said:

You show so many colours towards life reealing the beauty inside your wonderful poem. Short, powerful and sweet. Just perfect I\'d say...!!!

January 16th, 2020 11:24

Challenge.
Michael Edwards said:

If there is no chance that you may fall then there is no chance that you can climb. Sorry just love writing these little snippets and this one goes with youe excellent write.

January 16th, 2020 09:25

Challenge.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

January 16th, 2020 08:17

Breaking Through.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 15th, 2020 10:05

Breaking Through.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

A very happy and meaningful write I think Fay.

Ex animo, Alan

January 15th, 2020 07:17

Breaking Through.
Michael Edwards said:

And froiendship - it does - another brill piece Fay.

January 15th, 2020 06:30

Breaking Through.
Maxine Smith said:

I did enjoy Fay.
There’s nothing like true friendship, the love and the challenges they bring.
Great work.

January 15th, 2020 05:40

Turbulence.
Maxine Smith said:

A beautifully expressed read Fay.

January 14th, 2020 15:21

Turbulence.
kevin browne said:

I\'ve wridden on the waves you so beautifully express about in the English Channel. The sea I worked on fishing boats 4 years for the first 5 years of my life, yet I can still smell it, felt it and love it and that the salty water still lingers on the tip of my tongue. Beautifully written..!!

January 14th, 2020 03:45

Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write Fay, I was there in my minds eye.

Andy

January 14th, 2020 01:03

Turbulence.
Nicholas Browning said:

Unhinged language woven like this can be quite lovely, and that it is. A job well done, Fay.

January 13th, 2020 22:24

Turbulence.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

very mighty piece of creation,you painted it well

January 13th, 2020 20:30

Turbulence.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY ! Love the shape ~ three neat blank verse quadrilaterals ! Reminded me of the six margarine boxes of veggie soup ~ I make on a Saturday Morning ~ with a little help from Sous-Chef Angela ! I then freeze them for use in the week. Of such activities is True Love forged ! Cauliflower & Stilton last Saturday !
Each of your elegant quadrilaterals contained an apt description of the waves crashing in the North Cornish Coast ~ which I have witnessed (and sailed in) awesome !

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 13th, 2020 18:56

Turbulence.
Nemo said:

You describe so perfectly 🌹

January 13th, 2020 12:14

Turbulence.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

January 13th, 2020 11:51

Turbulence.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

A very vivid portrayal of coastal mightiness. Although 60 miles from the sea you have taken me there. I am soaking wet but it was worth it.

Ex animo, Alan

January 13th, 2020 07:30

Folly
ron parrish aka wordman said:

war is always bad,mans money racket

January 12th, 2020 19:08

Folly
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening FAY - Brian & I are both pacifists becaus in our own Extended Families we can trace the Agony & Ecstasy & Price of WAR ! Donald Trump ordered the assasnation of ONE MAN - An Iranian General ! 56 Iranian Civilians died in the Funeral Stampede & 176 in the Ukranian Plane - 52 Canadians & 4 Brits = 232 for ONE MAN - thats how WAR eascalate. If there is not a TRUCE then thousands more will die !
Your very elegany POEM discusses the Development of War ! V1 It starts V2 It escalates V3 It outstrips its cause V4 It ceases ! Love the final doublet :

Called in the same grief - DEATH readily calls
For opposing despoilers - to cease from WAR - AMEN !

When will they ever LEARN - When will they ever LEARN ?
Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 11th, 2020 15:59

Folly
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay, the folly of war is known to all who are sent but they are only be forced to fight by their so called leaders.
May Peace be with us all .

January 11th, 2020 01:35

Folly
Maxine Smith said:

Wow what a read Fay.

Insightful yet so elegantly written, only you can do this, amazing.

January 10th, 2020 13:26

Folly
LAWLESS said:

This means an enormous amount to me. I am simply astounded by your talent dearest poetess.

January 10th, 2020 10:06

Folly
FineB said:

Hi Fay,

A good and insightful write.

Very relevant today.

People need to be kinder to one another.

Lets avoid wars at all cost.

Keep writing FineB

January 10th, 2020 09:44

Folly
dusk arising said:

A fine message today.

If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not get in the way.

January 10th, 2020 05:55

Folly
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

The earth is hushed, A silent chill,
Serene and blushed ~ calm and still.
When nought is heard and nought is said,
No more wars for we\'re all dead.

Ex animo, Alan


January 10th, 2020 05:05

Folly
orchidee said:

A good write Fay.

January 10th, 2020 04:21

IF.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay, may he come to you in dreams and reality.

January 10th, 2020 00:56

IF.
Heather T said:

You\'ve broken my heart with this beauty and haven\'t wasted a single syllable. I\'m always amazed at the way you wring the language for everything it\'s worth.

January 10th, 2020 00:12

IF.
Maxine Smith said:

Stunning, intimate and loving.
Written with excellence as usual Fay.

January 9th, 2020 13:59

IF.
dusk arising said:

This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the intangible lingering romance within the heart which lives on.

You show your mastery here.

January 9th, 2020 12:48

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