Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Who Dares.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Angela here - Good Sunday Evening FAY! Brian & I love the sleekness & bravery of the OTTER - our fave aqueous animal ! Love the photo - Awesome! Our new Mantra (Now we are ONE) *They who Dare - as ONE in Life & Love - Will always be VICTORIOUS - AMEN!

Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

August 30th, 2020 13:07

Beach-Combing
Neville said:


How very bloomin apt my dear lady Fay.. I woz only wanderin along some of your very wild and rugged shores this very early mane ... and must have just missed the mermaids hairdresser because shorn n strewn locks were everywhere ..... x

August 30th, 2020 12:57

Who Dares.
dusk arising said:

Ferocious rarity now, the otter is something to marvel over. Superb picture you chose here too.

Yes I think you bring to the fore the ferocity of these truly wild creatures today.

August 30th, 2020 09:38

Who Dares.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

August 30th, 2020 07:12

Beach-Combing
Goldfinch60 said:

As d a has said us inlanders can only dream of walking by the sea beach-combing but your words always take us there Fay so I am grateful to you.

Andy

August 29th, 2020 00:08

Beach-Combing
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

August 28th, 2020 05:58

Beach-Combing
dusk arising said:

Oh for gently windswept hair, sandy toes and feet and the distant roar of tide out. A rarity for us in-landers who are jealous of your shoreline familiarity and romance it\'s idea.

August 28th, 2020 05:55

Beach-Combing
L. B. Mek said:

nature needs no combing to deliver its poignant fruits, merely a gifted Poet\'s: keen eyes, to unravel the majesty from the debris,
makes one yearn for the Seaside that little bit more, a beautiful write

August 28th, 2020 04:13

New Appetite.
MendedFences27 said:

Life is a series of changes. One must keep going through it all. \"And the butterfly flapped her wings\" as a result of a tornado 3 days previous. One event leads to another. \"Regrets\" should never be felt, when making ones path through life.
Enough philosophy. Another lovely poem, Fay, and somewhere a butterfly is flapping her wings. - Phil A.

August 27th, 2020 12:35

New Appetite.
Syd said:

Beautiful poetry Fay!

Take care - Syd

August 27th, 2020 06:48

New Appetite.
orchidee said:

Yes, caan I have some of that too?! Will it be too much for me? lol.

August 27th, 2020 05:08

New Appetite.
dusk arising said:

A story of regret, repair, revitalisation and readiness. Life\'s rich tapestry. What resilient things we are to over come such hurt as love can bring. Such a powerful driving force is this pairing desire within us all.

August 27th, 2020 04:44

New Appetite.
Goldfinch60 said:

We must always move on in life when one chapter of our book finishes.

Andy

August 27th, 2020 04:16

Invasion.
L. B. Mek said:

beautifully written,
has me reminiscing a Sunny morning, forcing eyelids closed for a few more minutes as the Sunrays pelt eyelids with Iris shooting stars and a gentle smile tugs loose: at experiencing one of the simple wonders of life,
indeed, our chosen perspective is a key factor in those gradient shades of our life\'s horizons

August 27th, 2020 03:29

New Appetite.
Audax said:

Nicely written, and a piece that speaks of moving on from a former lover in order to continue writing one’s story, which is what I gathered! Thank you for sharing your words!

Please check out the newest I published on my page, if you haven’t done so already!

August 27th, 2020 02:54

New Appetite.
Neville said:

... Quite summat is this our Fay

Appetite whetted & imaginations well n truly stirred ..

He\'ll take a dubble helpin of what the lass infurred ...

Neville ... x

August 27th, 2020 02:53

Invasion.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful light filled words Fay.

Andy

August 27th, 2020 01:20

Invasion.
MendedFences27 said:

Light fascinates. Brings forth all the color our eyes can perceive. Your prismatic poem, in colorful language tells us of the spectrum we see in life.You pen great words to bring us rays of hope. Loved it. - Phil A.

August 26th, 2020 18:34

Invasion.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thanks for a delightful picture and discourse on COLOUR!
White light as you know is composed of SEVEN COLOURS (R O Y G B I V ). Because these colours have different wavelengths they travel @ different speeds. When White Light hits a PRISM or a drop of WATER it splits into the seven colours of the SPECTRUM (RAINBOW) - R O Y G B I V !
Thats the Scientific Explnanation - BUT - I prefer your DISCOURSE - cos its much much more Sensual & Poetic. Science is AWESOME but lacks EMOTION~ Except @ the point of DISCOVERY!

Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian πŸ§‘πŸ’™

August 26th, 2020 11:42

Invasion.
Michael Edwards said:

So beautifully described.

August 26th, 2020 10:22

Invasion.
dusk arising said:

Taking on the challenge to poetically describe the most beautiful beginning of each day is no easy feat yet i was absorbed here re-reading several times for full effect.

August 26th, 2020 04:03

Invasion.
Neville said:


this aint heavy .. this is a light invasion .... amazingly described with the tools of her trade .. prism perfect in every hue described and displayed ...

August 26th, 2020 02:26

Invasion.
orchidee said:

I never knew so much happened with light - well, I know now! Good write Fay.

August 26th, 2020 01:58

If.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANFELA HERE - Good Evening Fay almost time for BED! We didnt post today both too busy earning a crust! Special POST tomorrow by ME *MY SENSE OF TOUCH !* ENJOY. Loved your Poem (FAVE) it reminded me of one of my fave Seasonal Songs ~ but yours READS ~

If ever you should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in Summer
When we*re basking in the Summer SUN
If ever You should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in Autum
Moonlight in the Autumn - Loves Al-fresco FUN
If ever You should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in WINTER
Cold outside - but inside Passion Wild doth RUN
If ever you should LOVE ME - Dont love me just in SPRINGTIME
When the LUST of Blue ~ Green Spring has just BEGUN !
Summer - Autumn - Winter - Spring
With Your Love - Each Season My Heart Sings
Each Season My Love ~ Plays Your Heart Strings
Summer - Autumn - Winter - Spring

Thats how the MUSE moves ~ may post
sometime & Acknowledge source !
Blessings - Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ€Ž

August 25th, 2020 18:22

If.
MendedFences27 said:

Well, I simply love this one, not just the emotions it conveys, but the descriptions of the seasons. Those emotions sustained through eternal seasons, bring uplifting hope for everlasting love. Just terrific. High Praise - Phil A.

August 25th, 2020 09:42

If.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

August 25th, 2020 09:40

If.
Audax said:

Sweet and sincere words I read of a love that flows and radiates through every season! Truly remarkable and astonishing!

August 25th, 2020 04:46

If.
L. B. Mek said:

If, Rudyard Kipling wrote with the empathetic grace of a liberated lioness\'s genius: of female intuitiveness - it would sound a lot like this...
a read: riding upon the gentle river of beautiful imagery your words weave, from first - to that last stanza\'s tug of universal yearning,
of a love outlasting youth\'s fervent desires, to graduate into those lasting fields of majestic grey devotion,
breath-taking: in its deceptive simplicity

August 25th, 2020 03:56

If.
Michael Edwards said:

Just simply flows with tenderness - great piece Fay. more than just a worthy read.

August 25th, 2020 03:33

If.
dusk arising said:

By \'eck chuck, there\'s a lorra luv-n-devotion in that there, there is.

\'appen as i\'ve read it twice now and i were reet the first time.

August 25th, 2020 03:19

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