Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Mothering
Doggerel Dave said:
No better descriptor for a good bond between mother and infant in those early years than \'peerless\', Fay.
March 13th, 2023 07:42
Doggerel Dave said:
No better descriptor for a good bond between mother and infant in those early years than \'peerless\', Fay.
March 13th, 2023 07:42
Mothering
L. B. Mek said:
lovely words, dear Fay
and a timely reminder of upcoming mothers day
March 13th, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
lovely words, dear Fay
and a timely reminder of upcoming mothers day
March 13th, 2023 04:52
Newly-Felt.
Bella Shepard said:
The glow of new love; excitement, anticipation, beautifully crafted into this poem, a last stanza that softly lingers. Just beautiful dear friend.
March 10th, 2023 13:50
Bella Shepard said:
The glow of new love; excitement, anticipation, beautifully crafted into this poem, a last stanza that softly lingers. Just beautiful dear friend.
March 10th, 2023 13:50
Newly-Felt.
Neville said:
I am well n chewly masticated our Fay .. a delightful main course .. bring on the seconds I hear them all say ... x
March 6th, 2023 10:14
Neville said:
I am well n chewly masticated our Fay .. a delightful main course .. bring on the seconds I hear them all say ... x
March 6th, 2023 10:14
Newly-Felt.
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read!
hope you\'re feeling better dear Fay
March 6th, 2023 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read!
hope you\'re feeling better dear Fay
March 6th, 2023 06:36
Newly-Felt.
orchidee said:
It\'s one of my comments of: \'I never knew there was so much to newly-felt, but I know now!\'
March 6th, 2023 06:29
orchidee said:
It\'s one of my comments of: \'I never knew there was so much to newly-felt, but I know now!\'
March 6th, 2023 06:29
Newly-Felt.
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice and while it is well written I am too dumb to understand what is going on
March 6th, 2023 05:36
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice and while it is well written I am too dumb to understand what is going on
March 6th, 2023 05:36
Indifferent Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections of the meaning of life and its cycle. Our vision is too short and narrow to see the magnificence of all you so beautifully portray in such wonderfull wording.
March 3rd, 2023 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections of the meaning of life and its cycle. Our vision is too short and narrow to see the magnificence of all you so beautifully portray in such wonderfull wording.
March 3rd, 2023 06:28
Indifferent Nature
Bella Shepard said:
Your pic lends itself beautifully to this poem dear Fay. The hidden life of Nature is revealed only when we take time to be still, observe, and be awestruck by its splendor. A wonderful write my friend. Hope you are on your way to a healthy and speedy recovery.
March 1st, 2023 13:37
Bella Shepard said:
Your pic lends itself beautifully to this poem dear Fay. The hidden life of Nature is revealed only when we take time to be still, observe, and be awestruck by its splendor. A wonderful write my friend. Hope you are on your way to a healthy and speedy recovery.
March 1st, 2023 13:37
Indifferent Nature
Doggerel Dave said:
Frozen shoulder is indifferent too. I hope it doesn\'t last as long as mine did.......
I\'ve admired the way you structure your poems before ..must repeat that once more, Fay.
And of course: \'Get well soon\'!
February 27th, 2023 18:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Frozen shoulder is indifferent too. I hope it doesn\'t last as long as mine did.......
I\'ve admired the way you structure your poems before ..must repeat that once more, Fay.
And of course: \'Get well soon\'!
February 27th, 2023 18:48
Indifferent Nature
Neville said:
Ouch indeed Fay .. I am so sorry to learn of your present discomfort .. I know first hand just how bad a frozen shoulder can be .... Great poem re-posted .. PS How did you manage to frame it like that? x
February 27th, 2023 05:47
Neville said:
Ouch indeed Fay .. I am so sorry to learn of your present discomfort .. I know first hand just how bad a frozen shoulder can be .... Great poem re-posted .. PS How did you manage to frame it like that? x
February 27th, 2023 05:47
Indifferent Nature
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, hope you feel better soon dear Fay
\'Cobwebbed with questions
each today
covets happenings forecast
to endings
after beginnings\'
so deep, and so true
we must treasure our now
reminds me of a line from the Magnifico himself, Lorenzo:
\'Nought ye know about to-morrow\'
(
https://dvpp.uvic.ca/poems/cornhill_series/1877/pom_12302_the_triumph_of_bacchus_and.html
)
February 27th, 2023 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, hope you feel better soon dear Fay
\'Cobwebbed with questions
each today
covets happenings forecast
to endings
after beginnings\'
so deep, and so true
we must treasure our now
reminds me of a line from the Magnifico himself, Lorenzo:
\'Nought ye know about to-morrow\'
(
https://dvpp.uvic.ca/poems/cornhill_series/1877/pom_12302_the_triumph_of_bacchus_and.html
)
February 27th, 2023 04:56
Let Me Sing
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Let me sing breathless\'
\'Let me sing pleasure
where love\'s taste and sipped nectar
give sated measure\'
\'Let me sing fervour\'
\'Let me sing again
lyrics of close-coupled memories
missed but remembered forever.\'
February 24th, 2023 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Let me sing breathless\'
\'Let me sing pleasure
where love\'s taste and sipped nectar
give sated measure\'
\'Let me sing fervour\'
\'Let me sing again
lyrics of close-coupled memories
missed but remembered forever.\'
February 24th, 2023 05:03
Being Ready
L. B. Mek said:
\'nod to awaking\'s evocative music.\'
how I cherish these past few years
gifted
to welcome Spring, in-step with your
delectably timely, poetic songs..
simply majestic, dear Fay
thank you!
February 24th, 2023 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'nod to awaking\'s evocative music.\'
how I cherish these past few years
gifted
to welcome Spring, in-step with your
delectably timely, poetic songs..
simply majestic, dear Fay
thank you!
February 24th, 2023 04:58
Togethering
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true, dear Fay
such life-affirmingly, radiant
poetry
thank you!
February 24th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true, dear Fay
such life-affirmingly, radiant
poetry
thank you!
February 24th, 2023 04:55
Let Me Sing
Neville said:
a song of joy and sheer pleasure .. tis one surely to treasure ..
I am so glad I popped back to check on what until recently was a blank page .. x
February 23rd, 2023 02:29
Neville said:
a song of joy and sheer pleasure .. tis one surely to treasure ..
I am so glad I popped back to check on what until recently was a blank page .. x
February 23rd, 2023 02:29
Let Me Sing
orchidee said:
Good write Fay, but Fido won\'t let me sing! lol.
February 22nd, 2023 13:56
orchidee said:
Good write Fay, but Fido won\'t let me sing! lol.
February 22nd, 2023 13:56
Being Ready
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Fay, Spring is approaching very quickly.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Fay, Spring is approaching very quickly.
Andy
February 22nd, 2023 01:50
Being Ready
Neville said:
reading this seems to make the long wait, more worthwhile .. x
February 21st, 2023 06:28
Neville said:
reading this seems to make the long wait, more worthwhile .. x
February 21st, 2023 06:28
Being Ready
orchidee said:
I was ready and expecting a good poem, and so it was! heehee.
February 21st, 2023 05:31
orchidee said:
I was ready and expecting a good poem, and so it was! heehee.
February 21st, 2023 05:31
Togethering
Doggerel Dave said:
Would that it were so, Fay...let\'s hope...
February 21st, 2023 01:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Would that it were so, Fay...let\'s hope...
February 21st, 2023 01:28
Togethering
Neville said:
we all have something fundamental but so important to learn from the message you have poemed and pinned so prominently here ...... x
February 20th, 2023 09:55
Neville said:
we all have something fundamental but so important to learn from the message you have poemed and pinned so prominently here ...... x
February 20th, 2023 09:55
Love so Lovely
Parisab said:
Great reciprocity between the adverb and adjective and so lovely!
February 17th, 2023 18:50
Parisab said:
Great reciprocity between the adverb and adjective and so lovely!
February 17th, 2023 18:50
Love so Lovely
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format of this poem and how the modification of the adjective by the adverb in a repetitive manner not only reinforced the feeling but gave a rhythm and structure to the poem Wonderfull
February 17th, 2023 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the format of this poem and how the modification of the adjective by the adverb in a repetitive manner not only reinforced the feeling but gave a rhythm and structure to the poem Wonderfull
February 17th, 2023 06:02
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