Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
April Affair
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"April Affair\" is a beautifully crafted piece that uses language to capture the essence of Spring and the natural world.
April 4th, 2023 04:47
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"April Affair\" is a beautifully crafted piece that uses language to capture the essence of Spring and the natural world.
April 4th, 2023 04:47
Would We ?
Lorna said:
Went looking for you and found this sad story.......... so heartfelt.
April 3rd, 2023 17:14
Lorna said:
Went looking for you and found this sad story.......... so heartfelt.
April 3rd, 2023 17:14
Would We ?
Neville said:
Harrowing ..
I was not expecting that Fay .. Nevertheless,
such an event is now perfectly preserved in its very own poem as indeed it should be 💜x
Neville
April 1st, 2023 04:54
Neville said:
Harrowing ..
I was not expecting that Fay .. Nevertheless,
such an event is now perfectly preserved in its very own poem as indeed it should be 💜x
Neville
April 1st, 2023 04:54
Would We ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Fay, so much of this is going on in our world nowadays.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Fay, so much of this is going on in our world nowadays.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:40
Once Fired
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fay, that feed is there for us all in Spring.
Andy
March 31st, 2023 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fay, that feed is there for us all in Spring.
Andy
March 31st, 2023 01:47
Once Fired
Neville said:
I had been wondering why my stamens seem to have a mind of their own .. x
March 30th, 2023 09:08
Neville said:
I had been wondering why my stamens seem to have a mind of their own .. x
March 30th, 2023 09:08
Once Fired
arqios said:
Reading this as \'fired up\' and that appears to have worked for this reader.
March 30th, 2023 06:55
arqios said:
Reading this as \'fired up\' and that appears to have worked for this reader.
March 30th, 2023 06:55
Once Fired
Doggerel Dave said:
No use talking to me...Autumn is about to arrive...though after Summer that may be no bad thing...
Love the optimism, Fay - I hope it comes true for you....
March 30th, 2023 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
No use talking to me...Autumn is about to arrive...though after Summer that may be no bad thing...
Love the optimism, Fay - I hope it comes true for you....
March 30th, 2023 05:50
Telling.
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m a believer that it is not self-love that propels these kinds of attitudes, but rather self-hate. They grab for everything in order to become whole.
A wonderful poem about a type of love all too often seen. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2023 09:49
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m a believer that it is not self-love that propels these kinds of attitudes, but rather self-hate. They grab for everything in order to become whole.
A wonderful poem about a type of love all too often seen. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2023 09:49
Telling.
Neville said:
ouch .. I bet the rat never thought he would feature in such an awesome universal truth .. x
March 29th, 2023 08:11
Neville said:
ouch .. I bet the rat never thought he would feature in such an awesome universal truth .. x
March 29th, 2023 08:11
Becoming Other
Neville said:
if you originally poemed this blinda on paper and in ink .. then I want you to place an order for a dozen bottles of it write now & post it to me .. address to folla .. You just wrote magic my fine literary friend x
March 28th, 2023 04:51
Neville said:
if you originally poemed this blinda on paper and in ink .. then I want you to place an order for a dozen bottles of it write now & post it to me .. address to folla .. You just wrote magic my fine literary friend x
March 28th, 2023 04:51
Becoming Other
MendedFences27 said:
\"Transmutation\" by \"losing the I,\" to empathize with \"Other\" of Nature\'s creatures. Your poem takes us out of life\'s humdrum to escape into this world of \"Others.\" A lovely way to begin my poetic journey. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2023 19:43
MendedFences27 said:
\"Transmutation\" by \"losing the I,\" to empathize with \"Other\" of Nature\'s creatures. Your poem takes us out of life\'s humdrum to escape into this world of \"Others.\" A lovely way to begin my poetic journey. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2023 19:43
Becoming Other
Bella Shepard said:
Looking at the picture you have chosen, my body just relaxed. Such peace, and such beautiful imagery to evoke our oneness with all of nature, our connection to every living thing. \"nosing for pollen, sodden in gold\", solid gold words. This is such a fav dear friend.
March 27th, 2023 14:43
Bella Shepard said:
Looking at the picture you have chosen, my body just relaxed. Such peace, and such beautiful imagery to evoke our oneness with all of nature, our connection to every living thing. \"nosing for pollen, sodden in gold\", solid gold words. This is such a fav dear friend.
March 27th, 2023 14:43
Counting Sheep
L. B. Mek said:
your words makes me want to read James Herriot again
I think I will, this weekend
thank you! dear Fay
such a lovely picture as well
March 27th, 2023 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
your words makes me want to read James Herriot again
I think I will, this weekend
thank you! dear Fay
such a lovely picture as well
March 27th, 2023 03:29
Counting Sheep
Michael Edwards said:
Oh dear Fay - your (sheep) pen never fails - as always a read to savour..
March 26th, 2023 15:24
Michael Edwards said:
Oh dear Fay - your (sheep) pen never fails - as always a read to savour..
March 26th, 2023 15:24
Counting Sheep
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay with the adorable pic, and your wonderful imagery, I can almost smell those high country fields. Years ago I had the privelege of seeing a farrowing barn full of piglets, only minutes old, and I\'ve never forgotten it. I can only imagine the thrill of hunting for new life in those high country fields, and the dedication of those who sought them. This is such a beautiful spring piece, thank you.
March 26th, 2023 10:31
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay with the adorable pic, and your wonderful imagery, I can almost smell those high country fields. Years ago I had the privelege of seeing a farrowing barn full of piglets, only minutes old, and I\'ve never forgotten it. I can only imagine the thrill of hunting for new life in those high country fields, and the dedication of those who sought them. This is such a beautiful spring piece, thank you.
March 26th, 2023 10:31
Counting Sheep
Neville said:
made me feel like visiting my friend who is a local shepherd .. so both me and him are grateful to you Fay .. x
March 26th, 2023 07:38
Neville said:
made me feel like visiting my friend who is a local shepherd .. so both me and him are grateful to you Fay .. x
March 26th, 2023 07:38
Counting Sheep
Doggerel Dave said:
For city folk (like me) the rural farmer\'s life is very hard to conceive of, Fay. But you do your best, and your best does it very well. Thanks.
March 26th, 2023 04:49
Doggerel Dave said:
For city folk (like me) the rural farmer\'s life is very hard to conceive of, Fay. But you do your best, and your best does it very well. Thanks.
March 26th, 2023 04:49
Invention
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can be reached Fay, I have reached it.
Andy
March 26th, 2023 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can be reached Fay, I have reached it.
Andy
March 26th, 2023 01:37
Invention
Neville said:
Milton would be proud of you Fay and I sure aint talking about Milton Keens neither ..... x
March 25th, 2023 07:18
Neville said:
Milton would be proud of you Fay and I sure aint talking about Milton Keens neither ..... x
March 25th, 2023 07:18
Mothering
Neville said:
Yesly, indeedly & most superbly executed poetry .. 💙x
March 25th, 2023 02:19
Neville said:
Yesly, indeedly & most superbly executed poetry .. 💙x
March 25th, 2023 02:19
Invention
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like the birth of an idea. Enjoyed your second line of stanza 3, along with phrases like,
\"white whispering dove\" and \"human intent for liberty.\"
\"Love\" may not be a novel idea but it seems much more difficult to find these days. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 12:45
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like the birth of an idea. Enjoyed your second line of stanza 3, along with phrases like,
\"white whispering dove\" and \"human intent for liberty.\"
\"Love\" may not be a novel idea but it seems much more difficult to find these days. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 12:45
Invention
Bella Shepard said:
Freedom to live, to grow, to think, to dream, to imagine, all rolled up in this beautiful poem. What are we not capable of when we let go of our percieved limitations. This is just beautiful dear Fay!
March 24th, 2023 12:14
Bella Shepard said:
Freedom to live, to grow, to think, to dream, to imagine, all rolled up in this beautiful poem. What are we not capable of when we let go of our percieved limitations. This is just beautiful dear Fay!
March 24th, 2023 12:14
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