Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Owl-Sound.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Just on a late lunch break - next clinic @ 3:30 pm just perusing MPS when this gem popped up. You know how much I love OWLS very mystic & wise creatures - and very adaptable ! deja I love the deja-vu picture you paint of candelabra - old hearths - silk clad dancers (toujuours la romanitique) now haunted & hunted by hungry OWLS - perfection ! Love the visul !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›
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And our latest FUSION *SUNRISE or SUNSET* Thanks !

February 3rd, 2020 09:28

Owl-Sound.
dusk arising said:

\"An absolute hoot!\"
Makes you feel grateful youre not a little rodent type creature out there in the cold dark. I shudder at the thought.

I often see these beauties hunting above the lit up M5 nearby. Nature adapts to our changing world. As i was retiring to bed the other nite my outside light clicked on as i approached the front door, i opened it to see a lovely sleek fox trotting down the road outside - in the heart of the city.

February 3rd, 2020 09:19

Far More.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FAY ~ beautifully penned wit a Betjemanesque flair for rural description. See Ireland with Emily ! It brings to mind preaching at the Gospel Meeting on Sunday Evening (6:30 to 7:30pm) in Rural N Ireland. It always rains in NI ! They all arrived (At 6:25) - soaked but in their Sunday Best - they had come to the Ecclasia - The House of God. They sang the Hymns with reverance and none of them slept during the sermon - on The Prodigal Son ! I closed the Service @ 7:25 and by 7:30 most of them had deoarted - no Tea & Irish Scones. The retired Folk who tidied the Chairs & collected the Hymn Books etc and locked up the Bretheren Chapel explained that the majority were Cattle Farmers and need to attend to their Beasts even on the Lords Day ~ Amen. As in your Poem I was impressed with their devotion on a cold & damp evening and especially the fact that they had trned out Booted & Suited & every Sister with a fine Chapeau fit for a trip to Buck House. Of such memories are our lives forged. I was staying with one of the Congregation and we did get our Tea & Scones and a nice bit of Ham with fresh picked Irish boiled whole new potatoes !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA XOX

January 30th, 2020 20:20

Far More.
orchidee said:

Oohh, it\'s never \'proper rain\' or is it?! Is it that drizzle stuff?!

January 30th, 2020 12:06

Far More.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Oohh, hardly worth wearing Sunday best if we got to contend with all that. That\'s a lot of weather to be having! lol.

January 30th, 2020 04:41

Notes.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words about a beautiful sound Fay - thank you.

Andy

January 30th, 2020 02:17

Notes.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Ahhhhh FAY *The Morning Chorus* I love it ~ In many Countries you dont hear it. We are blessed as a Small Island with millions of Birds & hundreds of species. I have quite a few treees near my Flat so it wakes me every Morning ! When we go to bed with a burden (I try not to !) it is always lightened by the Morning |Chorus ~ AMEN. Thnaks for sharing ~ love the visual !

Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Angela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

January 29th, 2020 16:40

Notes.
Maxine Smith said:

Always a fan of the sounds, the smells the anything of nature.
Man and women’s best therapy.
Wonderful Fay.

January 29th, 2020 15:53

Notes.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

A wonderful bird-song to enhance anyone\'s day Fay. Thanks for passing on the dulcet trill.

Ex animo, Alan

January 29th, 2020 15:12

Notes.
Michael Edwards said:

The sounds of nature - the most beautiful sounds of the planet.

January 29th, 2020 14:12

Musing
Maxine Smith said:

I felt quite dreamy and full of hope reading this one Fay.
I just wanted to escape into that sky of positivity.
Amazing work.

January 28th, 2020 14:55

Musing
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful fulfilling write Fay, ending with such positivity,may that blue sky always be with us all.

Andy

January 28th, 2020 01:25

Musing
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for your elegant POEM it struck a BELL ! For all of US in everyday life there is some life changing - Changes & even Decay ! The lives of Angela & I will change rapidly after APRIL New House - New Cat - New Neighbours - New Experiences (as a Husband & Wife) and eventually a New Family ! How will we cope having both been single fior over 30 years ? We are both MUSING and both praying for BLUE SKIES AHEAD ~ HELP !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™

January 27th, 2020 18:09

Musing
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Good to record this and play it back with closed eyes Fay.
Reminds me of Mnemosyne\'s daughter, Erato.

Ex animo, Alan

January 27th, 2020 06:56

Musing
dusk arising said:

\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies, coming my way\".

No matter what is thrown, faith is enduring and recollection of past battle reinforces steadfast faith.

Nonetheless your words speak of the worries and torment within as we balance fate and faith.

Beautifully written as per.

January 27th, 2020 05:59

Unforgettable.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Fay, that love will go on for eternity.

Andy

January 25th, 2020 01:05

Unforgettable.
markziff said:

Tears come to me where words do not, thank you. 😒

January 24th, 2020 18:55

Unforgettable.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Once again in an exqusite Love Song you have mirrored all that I hope to share & experience with Angela when we are married ! For Spiritual Rasons we have only sipped the Aperitif of our Love. But we have been more than staisfied till we EXTERIENCE the Full Menu ! Each verse brings us neaarer to the fulfilment of experiental Love ~ Beautiful !
I trust that when ~ at the appointed Time ~ I pass from the Pysical to the Spiritual dimension ~Angela could read this ~ as an Testimony to ME ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ~ BRIAN πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

January 24th, 2020 18:05

Unforgettable.
Nemo said:

This was an emotional read.
Wonderfully written 🌹


January 24th, 2020 14:59

Unforgettable.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual \'putting music to words without the notes\'
Unforgettabubble.

Ex animo, Alan

January 24th, 2020 14:45

Unforgettable.
Maxine Smith said:

Beautiful and moving, such an emotive read Fay.
For sure β€˜shall meet again’
Wonderfully written as always.

January 24th, 2020 13:06

Unforgettable.
dusk arising said:

I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed yearning in older singles cries out to be touched and sated.
Life is wonderful, life is cruel, life is love.

January 24th, 2020 12:00

Unforgettable.
orchidee said:

A good write Fay.

January 24th, 2020 11:54

Stirrings.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful positive write Fay, we must all move forward in our lives.

Andy

January 24th, 2020 01:22

Stirrings.
Michael Edwards said:

Super work Fay.

January 23rd, 2020 13:45

Stirrings.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

One of life\'s lessons I think Fay. And so very well described.

Ex animo, Alan

January 23rd, 2020 08:04

Stirrings.
orchidee said:

A good write Fay.

January 23rd, 2020 06:48

Stirrings.
dusk arising said:

You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has to be learned.
Learning too to reflect upon the positives of the past rather than dwell upon the negatives can transform how one feels about ones life existence and self worth.

A wholesome message conveyed in your poem today.

January 23rd, 2020 05:15

A Given Day.
Goldfinch60 said:

May those \'given days\' be forever with you (and us) Fay.

Andy

January 23rd, 2020 00:16

A Given Day.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of Cornwall.

Ex animo, Alan

January 22nd, 2020 15:05

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