Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Abundance.
MendedFences27 said:

Living here, this is the beginning of what most here call the best time of the year. Everything becomes pumpkin-spiced, candied apple, butter and sugar corned. County fairs spring up. The foliage sets the country side ablaze in beauty....but then this year there\'s Covid 19...blah. Thanks for reminding me of the greatness of September. - Phil A.

September 3rd, 2020 10:07

Abundance.
orchidee said:

Godo write Fay. I never knew there was so much in September, but I know now. How do they fit all that in 30 days?!

September 3rd, 2020 06:00

Abundance.
Neville said:


.. such is September my lady and superbly struck ... now captured to savour any time of year ..... and truly...

September 3rd, 2020 03:57

Abundance.
jarcher54 said:

I appreciate how you so often approach a subject or place or event objectively, without a word about yourself, yet every bit of your work is so inherently personal. You seldom use the word \"I\" but the vision is so you.

September 3rd, 2020 03:03

Abundance.
Poetic Dan said:

Oooo, I really enjoyed that as I try to reconnect with my birth star... Thank you for helping with the vibration to be felt from Mars...

September 3rd, 2020 02:54

Interchange
L. B. Mek said:

brilliantly pro humanity, inspiring wonder in the mechanics of our very existence and a subtle nudge, reminding us to not take it for granted

September 3rd, 2020 01:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words Fay, the senses can define so much of our life and transfer so much into different senses within our brain.

Andy

September 3rd, 2020 00:36

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dusk arising said:

Amazing isn\'t it that we are such wonderful creatures and sophisticated beyond our own knowledge yet we can be so callously indifferent to our equally sophisticated, wonderful fellow homo sapiens.

Yes within the sophistication you poetically explore here there lurks the raging beast, the plundering rapist the cunning serial killer.

Your work always leads me into thoughts around your chosen subject, no less today. Perhaps the dark side of me is showing or maybe it\'s mankind\'s guilt oozing out - so sophisticated yet so savage.

Yes to your closing line.... but if only we could.

September 2nd, 2020 07:19

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orchidee said:

Good write Fay.
Aww, they took a pic of my brain - only three brain cellls in it! lol.

September 2nd, 2020 04:17

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Midweek FAY - Angela Here - Thanks for sharing some precious TRUTHS!

\"As Humans - created in GODs Likeness
We have this Treasure in Earthern Vessels\"
Paul The Apostle who wrote The Epistles

Our five basic Senses of Sight - Sound - Scent - Savour
& Sensuality are Divine Treasures afforded in part or whole
to each Human Being together with the abilities of Speech
& Script. These attributes make us SPECIAL *Angels not Apes*
Your elegant ODE reminds us that ONE SENSE triggers ANOTHER
making the Whole Person infinitly greater than *Sum of the Parts*
INDEED *Human enrichment far exceeds a Brain Scan !*

Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love A & B & Smokey 🧡💙🤎

September 2nd, 2020 04:11

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Neville said:

this gift you have crafted so fine and made available today must surely rank amongst my personal Fay\'ve\'s dear lady and poet ....

... absolutely amazing and true ... x

September 2nd, 2020 03:52

Interchange
Audax said:

Humanity is truly a remarkable species filled with so many wonders that go beyond what one sees with their own eyes! A truly amazing piece you wrote!

September 2nd, 2020 03:33

Gifts
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening Fay - Angela here just catching a few moments of MPS Time before its time for bed again ! You Cornish Pixies know just how much the Sea ameliorates SUNRISE & SUNSET and Cowes faces both East & West (see map) so one can observe both in a Day in all their Channel reflected GLORY. There is always something Magic & Divine about both events & Venus (on whom we will never walk !) is always the Bright & Morning Star !

From the Rising of the SUN
To the going down of the same
The LORDS Name is too be PRAISED ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛

September 1st, 2020 16:50

Gifts
dusk arising said:

The dawn so beautiful and so inspiring. Wow were you inspired into fluid verse when the light caught you this time around. That\'s one of the wonderous things we poets possess I believe, the ability to be inspired in a different way on a different day by the same type of event - though no two dawnings are the same.

Love the way you romance the passage of venus of the night laying down before the glory of arising day.

P.S. I\'d love to know what you thought of the fairy tale i posted yesterday about Louise rabbit

September 1st, 2020 15:11

Gifts
Michael Edwards said:

The inspiration for both poets and artists alike. Superbly captured .

September 1st, 2020 09:54

Gifts
orchidee said:

Yes, good write Fay.

September 1st, 2020 05:53

Gifts
L. B. Mek said:

is Venus the moon and the Knight her ever present Sun? or am I tangled up in your web of sumptuous Poetic ambition and lost in my mere mortal capacity of deciphering,
Poetry with half a step, in a magnificent dreamscape

September 1st, 2020 04:01

Gifts
Neville said:


... pon my word.. your words doth make me come over all unnecessary ... such is the beauty of em ....

September 1st, 2020 02:44

Gifts
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words once more Fay, dawns early light is so wonderful.

Andy

September 1st, 2020 02:34

Who Dares.
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful write and the picture is so majestic: nature in its unvarnished state

August 31st, 2020 04:06

Lovescape
Neville said:


Splendid in every respect my Lady of the pen ...

August 31st, 2020 03:40

Lovescape
Laura said:

My Dear Poetess Fay,

You have such an affinity writing in this particular ‘archaic style’. In my humble opinion, you do it best. I do enjoy reading it very much. Your talent in writing in this particular style is laced throughout your poem “Lovescape”. The pic you chose complements the poem beautifully.

Impressive!

Laura🌻

August 31st, 2020 03:34

Lovescape
L. B. Mek said:

\'I seem much given to yield.

Seared to frazzle on need\'s rack
fear beaten with thine ardent flame\'
absolutely beautiful!

August 31st, 2020 03:33

Lovescape
orchidee said:

Thou hast produced a fine work Fay.
I could use \'thee\' and \'thou\' I suppose.
I\'m torn sometimes between seeming old-fashioned by using them, but maybe having maybe more rhyming choice if I did use them.

August 31st, 2020 02:14

Lovescape
dusk arising said:

As leaves repent to leave upon turn of autumnal breeze so doth reticence vacate staid and salted haunt of concealed soul passion for thee thou subject of wordy finery herefound upon screen of ungodly device.
I shall tarry here a while in contemplation of such delight as been afforded in this reading.

Forsooth innit.

Love the old style.

August 31st, 2020 01:51

Who Dares.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words once more Fay, otters are wonderful creatures.

Andy

August 31st, 2020 00:32

Who Dares.
Neville said:


super poetry Fay .. reminded me of \'Ring of bright water\' ...

August 30th, 2020 16:56

Who Dares.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Angela here - Good Sunday Evening FAY! Brian & I love the sleekness & bravery of the OTTER - our fave aqueous animal ! Love the photo - Awesome! Our new Mantra (Now we are ONE) *They who Dare - as ONE in Life & Love - Will always be VICTORIOUS - AMEN!

Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛

August 30th, 2020 13:07

Beach-Combing
Neville said:


How very bloomin apt my dear lady Fay.. I woz only wanderin along some of your very wild and rugged shores this very early mane ... and must have just missed the mermaids hairdresser because shorn n strewn locks were everywhere ..... x

August 30th, 2020 12:57

Who Dares.
dusk arising said:

Ferocious rarity now, the otter is something to marvel over. Superb picture you chose here too.

Yes I think you bring to the fore the ferocity of these truly wild creatures today.

August 30th, 2020 09:38

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