Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Listening.
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully capatured dear Fay, there is nothing like the trilling and warbling of Natures sweetest creatures.
April 11th, 2023 13:17
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully capatured dear Fay, there is nothing like the trilling and warbling of Natures sweetest creatures.
April 11th, 2023 13:17
Listening.
Neville said:
Sshh .. listen, but don\'t say a word .. aint it just beautiful say\'s Nev to a little bird ..... 🐧💙x
April 11th, 2023 12:13
Neville said:
Sshh .. listen, but don\'t say a word .. aint it just beautiful say\'s Nev to a little bird ..... 🐧💙x
April 11th, 2023 12:13
Memories
Neville said:
absolutely magnificent and I dont often use the M word Fay .. would I be correct in thinking I have seen this particular image before .. and the poem itself has an incredible familiarity .. the hallmark of a 24 karat masterpiece .. there now, that\'s two M words most deserved and true .. x
April 11th, 2023 03:38
Neville said:
absolutely magnificent and I dont often use the M word Fay .. would I be correct in thinking I have seen this particular image before .. and the poem itself has an incredible familiarity .. the hallmark of a 24 karat masterpiece .. there now, that\'s two M words most deserved and true .. x
April 11th, 2023 03:38
Memories
Bobby O said:
Limestone luminescence.
Such a descriptive phrase.
Nice
April 10th, 2023 16:52
Bobby O said:
Limestone luminescence.
Such a descriptive phrase.
Nice
April 10th, 2023 16:52
Memories
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a beautifully crafted piece of writing that captures the fleeting nature of memories and the power they can hold.
April 10th, 2023 14:16
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem is a beautifully crafted piece of writing that captures the fleeting nature of memories and the power they can hold.
April 10th, 2023 14:16
Memories
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay I can see the story unfold as if I am watching it on the big screen; the perfect setting, the beauty of twilight, the anticipation of the lover and the flight of birds heralding his arrival. This is priceless dear friend, once again you work your magic.
April 10th, 2023 09:04
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay I can see the story unfold as if I am watching it on the big screen; the perfect setting, the beauty of twilight, the anticipation of the lover and the flight of birds heralding his arrival. This is priceless dear friend, once again you work your magic.
April 10th, 2023 09:04
April\'s Insistence
Neville said:
in a word beautiful .. in a poem, even more so .. and I doubt you could have found a better image to head the page .. x
April 10th, 2023 04:47
Neville said:
in a word beautiful .. in a poem, even more so .. and I doubt you could have found a better image to head the page .. x
April 10th, 2023 04:47
April\'s Insistence
Parisab said:
Another lovely poem before spring’s full return-thanks for sharing!
April 8th, 2023 15:05
Parisab said:
Another lovely poem before spring’s full return-thanks for sharing!
April 8th, 2023 15:05
April\'s Insistence
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of spring leaps out of your chosen picture, and your first stanza dear Fay is right outside my window, it is heavenly. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the lovely month of April!
April 8th, 2023 12:12
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of spring leaps out of your chosen picture, and your first stanza dear Fay is right outside my window, it is heavenly. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the lovely month of April!
April 8th, 2023 12:12
April\'s Insistence
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"April\'s Insistence\" is a beautiful ode to the arrival of spring and the transformative power of nature.
April 8th, 2023 06:28
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"April\'s Insistence\" is a beautiful ode to the arrival of spring and the transformative power of nature.
April 8th, 2023 06:28
April\'s Insistence
Accidental Poet said:
My favorite season. Wonderful write Fay. 🌹😎
April 8th, 2023 06:12
Accidental Poet said:
My favorite season. Wonderful write Fay. 🌹😎
April 8th, 2023 06:12
April\'s Insistence
Lorna said:
Ahhhhhhh I can smell the damp earth trying her best........
April 8th, 2023 04:55
Lorna said:
Ahhhhhhh I can smell the damp earth trying her best........
April 8th, 2023 04:55
Unsung
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Fay, those silences can say so many things to us in our lives.
Andy
April 8th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Fay, those silences can say so many things to us in our lives.
Andy
April 8th, 2023 01:51
Unsung
jarcher54 said:
Thoughtful use of quiet words and calm rhythms. I appreciate how you can compose something so deeply personal without one reference to \"I\' or a specific event or figure from your life. Quite a gift.
PS minor typo in penultimate line: \"is\"?
April 7th, 2023 18:10
jarcher54 said:
Thoughtful use of quiet words and calm rhythms. I appreciate how you can compose something so deeply personal without one reference to \"I\' or a specific event or figure from your life. Quite a gift.
PS minor typo in penultimate line: \"is\"?
April 7th, 2023 18:10
Unsung
Bobby O said:
The salve is to be treated respectfully so it cannot be expected to be free
April 7th, 2023 13:34
Bobby O said:
The salve is to be treated respectfully so it cannot be expected to be free
April 7th, 2023 13:34
Unsung
Neville said:
for if not smothered stillness guides minds
to find in heard quiet
something of beauty waiting behind sound ..
poetry most surely personified .. x
April 7th, 2023 06:54
Neville said:
for if not smothered stillness guides minds
to find in heard quiet
something of beauty waiting behind sound ..
poetry most surely personified .. x
April 7th, 2023 06:54
Kinship
MendedFences27 said:
A touching poem about the bond between sisters. Written such that it brings emotions to arise, \"and shoulders were cried on.\" Yet there is some joy in the memories that it evokes. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2023 14:09
MendedFences27 said:
A touching poem about the bond between sisters. Written such that it brings emotions to arise, \"and shoulders were cried on.\" Yet there is some joy in the memories that it evokes. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2023 14:09
Kinship
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Now Neville may be referring to my dog Fido. He does not mind eyes leaking. He only minds folk not marking poems 18+ when they should be. It sets him off barking!
lol.
April 6th, 2023 07:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
Now Neville may be referring to my dog Fido. He does not mind eyes leaking. He only minds folk not marking poems 18+ when they should be. It sets him off barking!
lol.
April 6th, 2023 07:37
Kinship
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is just bursting with all types of sentiments, and I am loving everything about it. That sense of communion with a beloved, always in the back of our heads, it\'s so beautiful that we wish it would last forever.
April 6th, 2023 07:33
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is just bursting with all types of sentiments, and I am loving everything about it. That sense of communion with a beloved, always in the back of our heads, it\'s so beautiful that we wish it would last forever.
April 6th, 2023 07:33
Kinship
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Kinship\" is a beautifully written poem that celebrates the enduring bond between siblings. ..
April 6th, 2023 04:58
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Kinship\" is a beautifully written poem that celebrates the enduring bond between siblings. ..
April 6th, 2023 04:58
Kinship
Neville said:
I don\'t care what that dog might say or think .. Fuck it, this just made my eyes leak Fay .. and I swear, if I had favouwrites, this would be there among those perched topmost .. 💜x
April 6th, 2023 04:02
Neville said:
I don\'t care what that dog might say or think .. Fuck it, this just made my eyes leak Fay .. and I swear, if I had favouwrites, this would be there among those perched topmost .. 💜x
April 6th, 2023 04:02
Kinship
Lorna said:
Oh my goodness how this touched me Fay......absolutely beautiful.....thank you
April 6th, 2023 03:37
Lorna said:
Oh my goodness how this touched me Fay......absolutely beautiful.....thank you
April 6th, 2023 03:37
April Affair
Bella Shepard said:
Nature in April, always seems to be bursting with love and new life. You capture it so beautifully dear friend that I can almost hear those calls and chatterings, \"It\'s time\". Thank you for this Spring gem!
April 4th, 2023 13:30
Bella Shepard said:
Nature in April, always seems to be bursting with love and new life. You capture it so beautifully dear friend that I can almost hear those calls and chatterings, \"It\'s time\". Thank you for this Spring gem!
April 4th, 2023 13:30
April Affair
Doggerel Dave said:
Rambunctious dicky birds....spring has sprung...although I had not noticed...but I do understand and enjoyed the spring feeling it gave me, Fay.
April 4th, 2023 07:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Rambunctious dicky birds....spring has sprung...although I had not noticed...but I do understand and enjoyed the spring feeling it gave me, Fay.
April 4th, 2023 07:18
April Affair
Neville said:
what a delightful and accurate reminder of this particular time of year .. probably my favourite .. I also think I should have been called Jack .. x
April 4th, 2023 04:57
Neville said:
what a delightful and accurate reminder of this particular time of year .. probably my favourite .. I also think I should have been called Jack .. x
April 4th, 2023 04:57
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