Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Disguised.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

loved it fay,

September 7th, 2020 12:53

Disguised.
Michael Edwards said:

One of the most stately of flowers - the regal rose. Great write Fay.

September 7th, 2020 05:33

Disguised.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

September 7th, 2020 05:22

Disguised.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

A rose by any other name
Wonderful write today Fay

September 7th, 2020 04:25

Chimerical
L. B. Mek said:

encapsulates the mysticism qualities of wind chimes wonderfully,
great write

September 7th, 2020 04:04

Disguised.
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully empowering metaphor of that time when all beautiful roses begin to bloom and enrich, their corner of existence

September 7th, 2020 03:12

Chimerical
Goldfinch60 said:

The sound of those chimes always remind me of sitting out in the garden on a fine summers evening with my beloved Joyce. Thank you for the memory Fay.

Andy

September 7th, 2020 00:45

Chimerical
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

September 6th, 2020 09:38

Chimerical
Ifeanyichukwu said:

Your poem is enjoyable, free flowing and clear language. It resonates a universal theme everyone can relate with. Very refreshing for a beautiful Sunday!

September 6th, 2020 08:42

Chimerical
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

CHIMERA - A Mythical Creature of Several Creatures (Notes) an apt appelation for A WIND CHIME !

Good Morning FAY on a Sunny Sunday. How is Cornwall - showing & sharing its Autumness ?
Love the POEM - we too have *A Windchimes* in our Garden - very soporiphic al fresco in the Evening with a *Glass of Rioja* while my House Husband is preparing the Dinner!
Love all the *bons mots* in you elegant *Tone Poem* Sonorus - tremolous quiver - toning jingle - whisper - hovering rustle (of leaves in harmony !) - playful air-currents - tuned tingle - mystical draw - transfixing pleasure - rhythm resonates! As I read your Lyrical Poem I could sure hear those CHIMERI !CAL WIND CHIMES ~ AMEN !

BLESSINGS & Joy & Peace in all things
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

September 6th, 2020 04:07

Chimerical
dusk arising said:

Ha! Honorable tinklings upon breeze announce back door left open. Maybe perhaps robber enters and clever Missy has subtlety alarm system installed. Inscrutable!

September 6th, 2020 03:56

Chimerical
Neville said:


... there is something rather ethereal about the sound of distant or hidden wind chimes, methinks ...

... meknows you have captured the essence of it here .....

September 6th, 2020 03:44

Revival
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Costa really have thought of everything for toppings these days haven\'t they?

September 6th, 2020 03:17

Revival
Goldfinch60 said:

They daren\'t go into my coffee, it would would do them no good, as the scotch in it would make them drunk! LOL.

Andy

September 6th, 2020 01:07

Revival
blue orchid said:

i think we can all relate to this in some way.thank you fay,for reminding me to look before i drink.lots of love melissa aka frogspoetry

September 5th, 2020 15:53

Revival
Michael Edwards said:

And then drink the coffee. And here\'s me chasing flies around our conservatory with a whackem stick.

September 5th, 2020 14:30

Revival
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Eveaning FAY another Sunny Day in Esex - time for me to relax away from WORK. Loved the PIC *n POEM. Your elegant ode reminded me that ^All Creatures Great & Small* are an integral part of Mother Natures Food Chains & Food Webs! Thank you for RESSUSECATING the FLY and not KILLING it ! Knowing You I pressume you drank the coffee without a second thought - I know i would have done! Please check my Poem *Seven Ages of Woman* I am surea it will strike a chord.

Blessings & Love & Joy
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! !

September 5th, 2020 14:27

Revival
dusk arising said:

And when revived I\'ll go find you a nice warm dog **** to dine upon.

Hmm well respect to all living creatures is fine but i\'d like a little some of that back in so far as, if a fly is going to walk over my cheese then firstly i\'d like him to have clean feet and secondly not to regurgitate the last meals digestive juices (as they do) onto my cheese.

Now if that were a Bee in your tea, then I\'d not have a Bee in my bonnet about a fly.

However, that\'s just me inflicting me upon your fine poetry today. Rapping my own knuckles here.

Rather a sweet piece you have penned here. Certainly good reading for an audience of children\'s ears too.

September 5th, 2020 12:32

Revival
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

September 5th, 2020 09:58

Revival
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and now flying again

September 5th, 2020 09:43

Undiluted
Michael Edwards said:

Another mistresspiece (said he being very PC).

September 5th, 2020 05:25

Revival
L. B. Mek said:

immersive, it reads as an actual thought I might have had myself in the past, though not necessarily about a fly, nor with a tea cup as a culprit

September 5th, 2020 03:30

Revival
Laura said:

My Dear Fay,

This reminded me of the waiter’s joke,
β€œThere’s a fly in my soupβ€œ.
A most enjoyable read.

Have a wonderful day.

Laura🌻

September 5th, 2020 02:41

Revival
Neville said:


Ah\' I recall this little gem.. and enjoy it as much today as i did when first discovered .... x

September 5th, 2020 02:37

Undiluted
Goldfinch60 said:

Positive words Fay leading to the light that can be in all our lives.

Andy

September 4th, 2020 23:59

Undiluted
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening FAY - Brian here!

Midnight - all alone on the Moonlight
Can agrevate ones Memories - and
make the day seem *worse than it was* !
However as the night wears on - There
is some light @ the end of the Tunnel.
We*ve all been there - AMEN !

Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angel & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

September 4th, 2020 15:52

Undiluted
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening FAY - Brian here!

Midnight - all alone on the Moonlight
Can agrevate ones Memories - and
make the day seem *worse than it was* !
However as the night wears on - There
is some light @ the end of the Tunnel.
We*ve all been there - AMEN !

Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angel & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

September 4th, 2020 15:52

Undiluted
Neville said:


... Me n me mate D A are in complete agreement with regard to how well crafted your \'Undiluted\' post is ... pure unadulterated poetry ...

September 4th, 2020 09:11

Abundance.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Friday Fay ~ Thanks for showcasing SEPTEMBER ~ My Fave Month too & my Birthday Month. Thanks a fine tribute - You inspired my Poem today *SEPTEMBER LOVES* !
Love the structure of Your Eulogy !
V 1. BEAUTY is the word that jumped out
V 2. *Russet through emerald lushness* !
V 3. *Laced with change*
V 4. The period of GESTATION is almost OVER !
V 5. Summers SAPRANO is transposed to Autumns CONTRALTO

My fave S EPTEMBER POEM ~ EV ER !
Blessings & Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›


September 4th, 2020 03:37

Undiluted
dusk arising said:

And that is how life flows for the positive minded.
Another of your well woven tapestries here lifting us out of dark blues thru sensible pastels of reassurance and into the light of futures promise.
When i read your poetry today somebodies famous song lyrics came to mind:-
Strumming my pain with her fingers,
Singing my life with her words,
Telling my whole life with her words,
Killing me softly with her song.

I know where every line of your piece today comes from believe me. So well written.

September 4th, 2020 02:23

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