Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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Neville said:
aww bless you dear lady Fay .. that upside down multi hued smile in the sky was a rainbow after all .. x
May 10th, 2023 12:27
Neville said:
aww bless you dear lady Fay .. that upside down multi hued smile in the sky was a rainbow after all .. x
May 10th, 2023 12:27
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Parisab said:
‘Monotone minds by your
own alchemic bosom’
I see you are enjoying and connecting with your environment by yourself-that’s always powerful and makes a poem special.
May 10th, 2023 11:27
Parisab said:
‘Monotone minds by your
own alchemic bosom’
I see you are enjoying and connecting with your environment by yourself-that’s always powerful and makes a poem special.
May 10th, 2023 11:27
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orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
More like \'His chariots of wrath the the deep thunder-clouds form\' in some places, quite atmospheric.
How\'s Cornwall for rain? The rain is rather wet in our area - it usually is! lol.
May 10th, 2023 07:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
More like \'His chariots of wrath the the deep thunder-clouds form\' in some places, quite atmospheric.
How\'s Cornwall for rain? The rain is rather wet in our area - it usually is! lol.
May 10th, 2023 07:21
Undertow
Bella Shepard said:
Such a timely and powerful message dear Fay. Why can our foresight not be as vivid as our hindsight. It\'s one thing to say that history repeats itself, it\'s another to simply accept it.
May 9th, 2023 12:24
Bella Shepard said:
Such a timely and powerful message dear Fay. Why can our foresight not be as vivid as our hindsight. It\'s one thing to say that history repeats itself, it\'s another to simply accept it.
May 9th, 2023 12:24
Undertow
arqios said:
That is an undertow that will always be swelling beneath the surface. Poignantly gripping.
May 5th, 2023 08:38
arqios said:
That is an undertow that will always be swelling beneath the surface. Poignantly gripping.
May 5th, 2023 08:38
Undertow
Neville said:
I hear thee loud, as do I also hear thee clearly ..
and tho\' again dear lady Fay the message resounds just as powerful and meaningfully .. x
May 5th, 2023 04:52
Neville said:
I hear thee loud, as do I also hear thee clearly ..
and tho\' again dear lady Fay the message resounds just as powerful and meaningfully .. x
May 5th, 2023 04:52
Undertow
Bobby O said:
From the reddened undertow….caught…sightless obedience
Really vivid and meaningful w the descriptive element never in the way , just joyously sling to augment without pretense.
I enjoyed it. Read it twice. Thanks
May 5th, 2023 04:32
Bobby O said:
From the reddened undertow….caught…sightless obedience
Really vivid and meaningful w the descriptive element never in the way , just joyously sling to augment without pretense.
I enjoyed it. Read it twice. Thanks
May 5th, 2023 04:32
Clandestine Biscuits
Neville said:
Ahhh, such is life .. but sometimes ..
how perfect her ink flowed on the occasion of her poeming this whole series of occasions .. x
May 4th, 2023 01:14
Neville said:
Ahhh, such is life .. but sometimes ..
how perfect her ink flowed on the occasion of her poeming this whole series of occasions .. x
May 4th, 2023 01:14
Clandestine Biscuits
Bella Shepard said:
To seize those momentous experiences of your life with such happy abandon is exciting, exhilerating and treasured forever. I think those clandestine biscuits are the most delicious. Such a great poem my friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:24
Bella Shepard said:
To seize those momentous experiences of your life with such happy abandon is exciting, exhilerating and treasured forever. I think those clandestine biscuits are the most delicious. Such a great poem my friend!
May 3rd, 2023 13:24
WHAT IS
Neville said:
this is quite simply magnificent dear lady Fay ..pinned pitch perfect to an otherwise anxiously awaiting page .. and quite possibly now, one of your most glorious very best .. x
May 2nd, 2023 23:04
Neville said:
this is quite simply magnificent dear lady Fay ..pinned pitch perfect to an otherwise anxiously awaiting page .. and quite possibly now, one of your most glorious very best .. x
May 2nd, 2023 23:04
Gifted
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay I just found this gem. I\'ve come across these muiscians in so many different places playing guitar, violin, pecussion and it is a treat for all who stand and listen. Musical talent is appreciated no matter where it happens, concert hall or in the parking lot after a ball game. I think they play because they love, fornutate for us. Beautifully done dear friend.
May 1st, 2023 10:13
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay I just found this gem. I\'ve come across these muiscians in so many different places playing guitar, violin, pecussion and it is a treat for all who stand and listen. Musical talent is appreciated no matter where it happens, concert hall or in the parking lot after a ball game. I think they play because they love, fornutate for us. Beautifully done dear friend.
May 1st, 2023 10:13
WHAT IS
Bella Shepard said:
The pic that accompanies this poem speaks so beautifully of embracing all that life has to give. It speaks of giving ones self up to the freedom to be, to explore, to love. This is just breathtaking dear Fay, and at this later stage of my life I truly see the value of not missing a minute. Thank you for this gem!
April 24th, 2023 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
The pic that accompanies this poem speaks so beautifully of embracing all that life has to give. It speaks of giving ones self up to the freedom to be, to explore, to love. This is just breathtaking dear Fay, and at this later stage of my life I truly see the value of not missing a minute. Thank you for this gem!
April 24th, 2023 12:17
WHAT IS
MendedFences27 said:
Probably the deepest and most meaningful to-do list I have ever encountered. Your opening line sets the mood for what follows, things to enrich the heart, mind, and soul. A beautiful piece of poetry. - Phil A.
April 22nd, 2023 08:40
MendedFences27 said:
Probably the deepest and most meaningful to-do list I have ever encountered. Your opening line sets the mood for what follows, things to enrich the heart, mind, and soul. A beautiful piece of poetry. - Phil A.
April 22nd, 2023 08:40
WHAT IS
Doggerel Dave said:
\'The saga of living\' has a fundamental truth within Fay, your earlier verses indicators which can aid and enrich that saga more.
April 22nd, 2023 03:00
Doggerel Dave said:
\'The saga of living\' has a fundamental truth within Fay, your earlier verses indicators which can aid and enrich that saga more.
April 22nd, 2023 03:00
WHAT IS
orchidee said:
What is - this? Answer: a fine poem Fay!
I too will start to sing (verse 3). Aww, why do they wish I wouldn\'t?! They say it\'s worse than two cats fighting. heehee.
April 22nd, 2023 02:27
orchidee said:
What is - this? Answer: a fine poem Fay!
I too will start to sing (verse 3). Aww, why do they wish I wouldn\'t?! They say it\'s worse than two cats fighting. heehee.
April 22nd, 2023 02:27
What We Had.
Bella Shepard said:
Sad reminiscences can lay bare the path that lead to them, and we wonder how and why. Still, we question what might have been different, or maybe it was just to be. You have phrased this sentiment so beautifully dear friend.
April 15th, 2023 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
Sad reminiscences can lay bare the path that lead to them, and we wonder how and why. Still, we question what might have been different, or maybe it was just to be. You have phrased this sentiment so beautifully dear friend.
April 15th, 2023 14:00
What We Had.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that one more moment be there Fay and become a lifetime.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that one more moment be there Fay and become a lifetime.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:36
What We Had.
MendedFences27 said:
Such a great poem about a love lost, and cherished. A sad lament indeed. Very well crafted to evoke what are certain memories for most readers. I loved, \"fold away in practiced phrases.\" - Phil A.
April 14th, 2023 21:03
MendedFences27 said:
Such a great poem about a love lost, and cherished. A sad lament indeed. Very well crafted to evoke what are certain memories for most readers. I loved, \"fold away in practiced phrases.\" - Phil A.
April 14th, 2023 21:03
What We Had.
Neville said:
Yes absolutely brilliant .. sadly the perfect lament that so many of us will relate to .. x
April 14th, 2023 07:21
Neville said:
Yes absolutely brilliant .. sadly the perfect lament that so many of us will relate to .. x
April 14th, 2023 07:21
What We Had.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(dear Fay, if you get a chance
try and find a song by India Arie
titled \'long goodbye\'
your poem, like that song
made me relive a few painful, yet
oh so cherished memories
thank you! dear cherished Poet)
April 14th, 2023 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(dear Fay, if you get a chance
try and find a song by India Arie
titled \'long goodbye\'
your poem, like that song
made me relive a few painful, yet
oh so cherished memories
thank you! dear cherished Poet)
April 14th, 2023 04:23
Gifted
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many wonderful musicians who play in the streets Fay.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many wonderful musicians who play in the streets Fay.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:50
Gifted
Neville said:
I have known many such gifted individuals .. some have clearly fallen on very hard times, whilst others have chosen to avoid the limelight .. However, your observation is a treat to the senses regardless .......... Neville x
April 13th, 2023 04:27
Neville said:
I have known many such gifted individuals .. some have clearly fallen on very hard times, whilst others have chosen to avoid the limelight .. However, your observation is a treat to the senses regardless .......... Neville x
April 13th, 2023 04:27
Gifted
Lorna said:
Was he real? I love buskers but don\'t get to see them much in the country..... I hope he really played for you Fay.
April 12th, 2023 16:42
Lorna said:
Was he real? I love buskers but don\'t get to see them much in the country..... I hope he really played for you Fay.
April 12th, 2023 16:42
Listening.
Lorna said:
Now I can\'t wait to put out the feeders for the day..... I am overrun with wrens but also my cardinals, jays, titmice and some spring robins have shown up.... they eat me out of house and home but love every one...... your beautiful imagery pays them tribute! I\'ll read it to them today.........
April 12th, 2023 05:23
Lorna said:
Now I can\'t wait to put out the feeders for the day..... I am overrun with wrens but also my cardinals, jays, titmice and some spring robins have shown up.... they eat me out of house and home but love every one...... your beautiful imagery pays them tribute! I\'ll read it to them today.........
April 12th, 2023 05:23
Listening.
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to Nature\'s Symphony is wondrous Fay.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to Nature\'s Symphony is wondrous Fay.
Andy
April 12th, 2023 01:21
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