Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



Over ?
Laura said:

My Dear Fay,

As to your comment,
I can see why.

That last stanza
does it for me.
Un cri de coeur!

An awesome write!
Loved it!❤️
Into my favorites it goes.

~Laura~🌻

February 17th, 2020 05:12

Winged Hearts.
Maxine Smith said:

So dreamy

So beautiful

So hopeful

A stunning write Fay, left me wanting to fly away into the dreams of hearts.

February 16th, 2020 08:19

Far More.
Neville said:

I seem to recall these words made me feel so very bloomin nostalgic the first time I stumbled upon them... and the feeling is just as intense this time round..... a warm glow on a cold Feb day... lovely…

Neville

February 16th, 2020 08:02

Winged Hearts.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

A nice offering today, Fay.
A Byron quotation finds itself with me as I read you.

\'Friendship is love without his wings\'
~ G.G. Byron

Catherine Cookson was inspired by this in writing her novel \'The Wingless Bird\'.

Ex animo, Alan

February 15th, 2020 07:16

Winged Hearts.
Joe Dawson said:

What the heart desires and what the voice will tell are two entirely different things. Not all appetites for love are the same, but underneath love is love, and soon there is no humiliation in a heart knowing, nor a heart reaching out to fulfil a lovers fondest wish - preferably on wings. Lovely write. Joe


February 15th, 2020 07:03

Valentine Moon.
Joe Dawson said:

Is that you Fay, back turned, gazing at the moon, if it is then I am sure your crush is complete and your every desire satisfied. Forgive my cheek. Joe

February 15th, 2020 06:52

Winged Hearts.
Goldfinch60 said:

My heart has already flown with my lover.

Good words Fay.

Andy

February 15th, 2020 01:42

Valentine Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful valentines write Fay.

Good artwork as well - Dali?

Andy

February 15th, 2020 01:00

Winged Hearts.
MendedFences27 said:

If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I assume that a \"winged heart\" can fly and bond with another. Sounds like a perfect description of Love. - Phil A.

February 14th, 2020 16:44

Winged Hearts.
Neville said:

How good is this ….
Very and it V Da too innit…..

Hope you got loads my friend...

February 14th, 2020 09:59

Winged Hearts.
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely poem Fay Powerful and strong, yet gentle as a feather

February 14th, 2020 08:11

Winged Hearts.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay. Let\'s fly, unassailably!

February 14th, 2020 05:37

Valentine Moon.
Neville said:

I don\'t do Valentines as a rule but loved these words …

hope you get loadsa cards, roses and stuff dear Fay.... x

February 13th, 2020 18:15

Valentine Moon.
Clara said:

Aw wow. This is really good! A valentines poem like no other I\'ve ever read before. Thanks for sharing!

February 13th, 2020 17:23

Valentine Moon.
dusk arising said:

Please, please send me a valentines Missy Moon for the crater good of mankind i plea.

Although, to be honest it breaks my heart having to throw away all those envelopes which land on my doormat each year. Such a waste of wonderful trees.

February 13th, 2020 17:20

Valentine Moon.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening FAY - ANGELA here. Love the visual very whistful thinking - reflects the final doublet ! In the folklore of many Civilisations *Sister Moon* especially the New Moon - is associated with LOVE and there are many songs embellishing this theme ! The MOON can be large & luminous in February - provided its not to cloudy ! In the N Hemisphere it usually too cold - in February - to spoon al fresco in the Moonlight but Brian & I can enjoy it through the double glazed picture window ! Last year (2019) I was all alone in NZ on Valentines Evening ! The Moon was big and the air was balmy so I clung to Ruth (who was missing David) because the Tall Handsome KIWIS always had their eye to the main chance. We did get a few *Brotherly* hugs and kisses at the Catholic Church Valentines Dance but we remained Sober & Faithful - HONEST ! Brian I I love Valentines Day and Im staying at Brians Flat tonight (special concession) so we can have a Valentines Breakfast Together before work ! There is a Valentines Dinner & Dance tomorrow evening at the Catholic Church - We like to honour our SAINTS ! Please check my Poem Tomorrow *SAINT VALENTINE* an Acrostic 5 9 Sonnet !

Thanks for a beautiful Valentine Poem
Love the nuances in the Final Doublet !
LOVE Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛

February 13th, 2020 15:27

Valentine Moon.
MendedFences27 said:

Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts tonight will be waiting to see if their \"crush\" will call.
A beautiful poem Fay. A great description of the angst of the day. Some may get broken, but many will rejoice.
Happy V-Day - Phil A.

February 13th, 2020 14:19

Valentine Moon.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Good poem of course Fay, Lovely subject from your silver tongue. Hope you get all you wish for tomorrow. We have just adopted a beautiful new mare here in Yorks so she will be getting my valentine and a bunch of carrots. I will send her a card though ~ via moonpig!

Ex animo, Alan

February 13th, 2020 08:02

Beginnings.
Poetic Dan said:

exultation.. Was a new one for me ;) thank you so much for bringing me her, I glad not to miss it!

I still need to absorb it all better but it felt Regenerating for me, guess it is the willingness to understand something new.

Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect

February 13th, 2020 07:06

Valentine Moon.
Saxon Crow said:

Beautiful poem about Mother moon

February 13th, 2020 04:45

Valentine Moon.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

February 13th, 2020 04:42

Beginnings.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tribute Fay, as we get older we enjoy life more and more, I certainly am.
RIP Kevin - you will be missed.

Andy

February 13th, 2020 02:57

Beginnings.
FredPeyer said:

Fay, you wrote a very fine tribute to Kevin. I am going to miss his writing too. But that is life. We come and we go. Hopefully we can do something worthwhile during our short time on this earth.

February 13th, 2020 02:33

Beginnings.
Neville said:

This is so fitting for such a very, very sad occasion..
I had such a lot of time and respect for Kevin may he now RIP

Great words & a fine tribute Fay

Neville

February 12th, 2020 14:39

Beginnings.
dusk arising said:

You\'ve so well encompassed the joy of life in advancing years here. I felt you were writing my own feelings.

Sadness though in us all today with the news of Kevin. A unique and exceptional poet. Artistically painting mood with his words. A true romantic who shared with us his lust for life as well as his fragility.


I wish you well as you move to the great beyond poet friend.

February 12th, 2020 13:38

Beginnings.
orchidee said:

A fine tribute Fay.

February 12th, 2020 12:24

SHALL WE ?
dusk arising said:

Oh for contentment! That knowing togetherness bred of love trust and respect. Oft the aftermath of the intellectual skirmishes of besting whilst getting to know and test the other.

February 12th, 2020 03:31

SHALL WE ?
FredPeyer said:

There is definitely something to \"Silence is Golden\", and you wrote about it beautifully. As always!

February 11th, 2020 21:52

SHALL WE ?
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Power in your words Fay. Delightfully composed, delightfully received.

Ex animo, Alan

February 11th, 2020 15:31

SHALL WE ?
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes minds can write to each other.

Andy

February 11th, 2020 15:26

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