Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Given.
L. B. Mek said:

one of the most beautiful Aurora\'s I have ever witnessed was on a quite secluded pebble beach in Cornwall, we were there for a long bank holiday weekend to visit the Eden Project,
your words took me to that place and my memorable conversations with those unassuming, generous and warm people,
really liked the characterisation details as well:
\'Old Rosie would just for fun endeavour to wink at my ignorance that by smiles, we help Heaven to send small treasures\'

September 15th, 2020 02:43

Given.
Romantic Bloom said:

Awe! Sweetness with a smile, thanks for sharing

September 14th, 2020 09:59

Given.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY

CARPE DIEM

Love - Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛

September 14th, 2020 08:58

Given.
dusk arising said:

Can\'t help but be drawn into the character of dear Rosie here for I too have known those who live simple lives adoring their environment and those who frequent it. They have such grace in the full meaning of the word. Stepping away from the bustle of 21st century life to spend time with somebody like Rosie will always reward us in some unthought of manner with a gift of their grace and peaceful joy of life.

Yes, took me away to past meetings and time spent in peaceful harmony with rich characters of yesterdays.

A lovely memory of fine Rosie you share with us today and i thank you for I really enjoyed reading it and the peace on reflection i found.

September 14th, 2020 06:25

Given.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

September 14th, 2020 05:10

Show Me.
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words are so true Fay and maybe one day everybody will be caring and be best to live their lives.

Andy

September 12th, 2020 01:25

Show Me.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

maybe it will come true

September 11th, 2020 17:46

Show Me.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Teach Me Thy Way O Lord ~ Teach Me Thy Way
Thy gracious aid afford ~ Teach |Me Thy Way
Help Me to walk aright ~ more by Faith ~ less by sight
Lead Me to Heavenly Light ~ Teach Me Thy Way ~ AMEN

Angela here ~ Good Friday FAY ~ Thanks for sharing a very Beautiful Prayer. Life is too precious to waste it being Judgmental.
V 1. Suggests we can all be Peacemakers & Encouragers
V 2. Replacing Criticism with Care & Frostiness with Forgiveness
V 3. Replacing Pride & Prejudice with Peace & Partnership !
We are praying that COVID19 will bring us closer together in 2021 ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy with Love ~
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !

September 11th, 2020 09:52

Show Me.
AwHec8 said:

Great Write there Fay Slimm. Don
You must have a very connective soul to be able to access these words of wisdom.

September 11th, 2020 07:56

Show Me.
orchidee said:

A fine write/prayer Fay.

September 11th, 2020 07:03

Show Me.
dusk arising said:

Now there\'s a prayer and a half. But i reckon the solution is granted to most who become a parent. Oh not right away with that wriggling noisy attention seeking bundle of fun and squeels. But as he/she/they grow it occurs. Unconditional love they call it. The spin offs from this milestone provide all you have asked for in your prayer.

September 11th, 2020 05:09

Between Worlds.
L. B. Mek said:

impressive in its ambitious scope, wonderfully creative

September 11th, 2020 03:23

Between Worlds.
dusk arising said:

I have to admit to being sidetracked by the geometry of this presentations mimicry of your very own figure. Such a tiny waist. However, I digress.

- resumes minutes later having calmed down -

dreamers embroidering that which cannot be sewn..... wonder here at the many possibilities of this metaphor for each is a poem itself. and \'bejeweling poems with tokens adorning the ordinary\' is something you show to us regularly with your observations of the natural world.

All in all, this is an insight into Poetic Fay for every phrase is a characteristic of your wonderful poetry which we see here on mps daily.

September 11th, 2020 00:54

Between Worlds.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA here - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for a POEM with such a DIABLOIC shape ! *Everything is Beautiful in its own Way !* Sunrise - Sunset & the whole Natural World ! If One is a True Poet then the sights & sounds of Nature trigger Ones Muse - to fashion Poetic Jewels. Such gems ameliorate the ordinary beyond the imagination of shallower Bards.

Your final TRIPLET is your final word and the lyric
for which we lesser would-be Poets all strive !

Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !


September 10th, 2020 17:02

Between Worlds.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Fay, and those words are always within us.

Andy

September 10th, 2020 15:16

Between Worlds.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow your phrasing is creatively awesome and top notch!! I was admiring \' bejewelling poems, signatured ego, and scribes adding zest to twilight\', Woww so imaginative and poetically exquisite. The shape is fabulous as well. Kudos.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

September 10th, 2020 14:55

Between Worlds.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

September 10th, 2020 09:58

Between Worlds.
Romantic Bloom said:

Awe just Adore The beautiful lines, and the format is quite lovely too!

A wondrous tapestry of a writer’s skills!

September 10th, 2020 07:23

Waking.
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful, like how you hid a separate rhythmic layer of the poem within your lines, hard to pinpoint initially without concentrating since you purposely didn\'t use that much punctuation,
brilliantly creative and it has such a healing/soothing element to it

September 10th, 2020 03:07

Waking.
Michael Edwards said:

I feel sleepy just reading your dreamy poetic prose - don\'t wake me if I should fall asleep before finishing this com ...........zzzzz

September 9th, 2020 12:58

Waking.
dusk arising said:

Well you \'bright-eyed doer\' you\'ve been and gone and done it again aintcha?

I\'m jealous of your dawn appreciations. I envy your ability to witness the damn thing cos i languish beneath my duvet far too long these days and furthermore the houses opposite somewhat restrict my view of any horizon.

But one day Fay. I shall rise afore the dawn and upon my ready steed achieve the heights of those Malvern hills to witness days arrival in all its splendour (knowing my luck it will be foggy) and pleasure your screen with words to paint the vision i behold as beauty beckons the daylife-creatures into action.

Wonderful poetry as only you can ascribe Fay.

September 9th, 2020 11:48

Waking.
Unsub said:

Fay,

superb description of breaking out of slumber into the new dawn.

Sleep is still such an unknown process. What do our brains connect to when we sleep?

Totally absorbed in this one.

Unsub.

September 9th, 2020 03:31

Waking.
Goldfinch60 said:

OK Fay I am awakened have been up and about for almost four hours so I actually saw the daybreak in real time, not dream time.
Wonderful words as ever though.

Andy


September 9th, 2020 03:16

Waking.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.
A gloomy thought maybe, yet going into Autumn: Soon, at the Autumnal Equinox, there will be 12 hours daylight and 12 hours dark. Then it\'s less daylight each day until the Shortest Day in December.
I recall it when I go up while still dark, and fell over the cat (or dog). Who put the lights out outdoors?!

September 9th, 2020 02:47

Disguised.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words once more Fay, may that rose always bloom for you.

You have pushed me into another quest now. I didn\'t know who the artist was it certainly looked like a pre-Raphaelite painting, having looked up the picture I found that the artist was Emily Sandys who was in the pre-Raphaelite dominion, it is my favourite type of art but I had never heard of her, I didn\'t even realise that there were any females in that group. Ah well more time to be spent on studying her work. Thank you.

Andy

September 8th, 2020 00:19

Disguised.
Romantic Bloom said:

A sweet poem!

September 7th, 2020 23:18

Disguised.
dusk arising said:

Yes such lovely creation upon the plant and here upon my screen.
Then presented as a heartfelt gesture of positive intention from afar, reassures and reaffirms romance.

The sending of a single rose. Probably the most romantic gesture we know.

September 7th, 2020 17:28

Disguised.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

loved it fay,

September 7th, 2020 12:53

Disguised.
Michael Edwards said:

One of the most stately of flowers - the regal rose. Great write Fay.

September 7th, 2020 05:33

Disguised.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

September 7th, 2020 05:22

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