Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



If.
Neville said:


These words are .. in the truest sense of forever truly beautiful and as far as this art we share is concerned, shall stand the test of time .... x

August 25th, 2020 03:19

Full Spate.
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write Fay. In my maturing years I look upon each day with wonder and always look forward to the next one.

Andy

August 25th, 2020 00:38

Full Spate.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Brian & I love Mountan Streams - But they are at their most exciting in *Full Spate* ! So it is with LIFE & LOVE - The fuller the spate the more intense the Experience !

Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokie πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ€Ž

August 24th, 2020 15:03

Full Spate.
siranswerer said:

Fay, others say what I feel when you write, so I won\'t say anything else, except, I love it.

August 24th, 2020 14:08

Full Spate.
MendedFences27 said:

It certainly is true,\" the nearer\" we \"come\" the more intense each day becomes. Just beautiful words Fay. beautiful. - Phil A.

August 24th, 2020 12:38

Full Spate.
dusk arising said:

Oh Fay, what a beauty you have penned here. All in their later years will feel your words and know.

As a poet you know what that means, for in the heart of a poet is the desire to pass on our emotion to our reader, to give something. You truly have done that in depth here.

Fav\'s of course.

August 24th, 2020 07:18

Full Spate.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

August 24th, 2020 05:29

Watching.
L. B. Mek said:

instinctively moving,
reads like a diary of a young heart\'s: untainted certainty, full of hope and wonder at all the new, yet to be discovered

August 24th, 2020 05:08

Full Spate.
Neville said:


I could read these words over and over ... and no doubt I shall ..

poetry personified dear lady Fay ... x

August 24th, 2020 04:15

Full Spate.
L. B. Mek said:

the first deep breath I take after reading one of your nature poems, is some of the sweetest I shall ever taste:
\'more vivid each floral bloom,

sooner seems seasonal

change, hues extra beautiful,\'

August 24th, 2020 04:10

Full Spate.
Audax said:

As always, your worlds have a way of captivating your audience. Never give up on this talent of yours and always follow your heart. I find your work to be very inspiring!

The opening stanza of your poem reminded of a song: β€œMy Last Breath” by Evanescence

August 24th, 2020 03:55

Betweeness
Audax said:

Even if we do feel alone at times, we must always make the best of every moment and take advantage if any opportunities. For me, I focus on developing myself to be better than I was yesterday, so that I can help out others to do the same as well.

August 24th, 2020 03:50

Lush
Audax said:

Truly amazing! You have a way with words!

August 24th, 2020 03:47

Watching.
Audax said:

Thank you for sharing a wonderful piece to read. I found it enjoyable!

August 24th, 2020 03:27

Watching.
dusk arising said:

Awww pictures, pictures, pictures.... I\'m writing the play in my mind.
This has such presence.

So many questions, so many answers.... lovely composition leaving your reader wanting more.

August 23rd, 2020 13:23

Watching.
Michael Edwards said:

Well I like a happy ending - there\'s enough doom and gloom at the present time. great stuff.

August 23rd, 2020 07:21

Watching.
jarcher54 said:

You and your happy endings! Here you went and called to mind all those tragic ballads of widows and lovers alone on the strand waiting for the whaler/sailor/fisherman who never comes home. Then you spoiled it! (-:

August 23rd, 2020 06:48

Watching.
Neville said:



what a picture .... such is beauty, such is love ... sent a shiver down me spine ..

August 23rd, 2020 03:37

Lush
Michael Edwards said:

Lush are the words of dearest Fay
posted here regularly every day.

August 23rd, 2020 03:24

Watching.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write once more Fay, I can see her waking out in the sea to meet him.

Andy

August 23rd, 2020 02:54

Watching.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay. She would have to rather wade in the river here, about 2 miles away. The sea is about 60 miles from us! Well, she could catch the No.7 bus there. lol.

August 23rd, 2020 02:01

Lush
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

August 22nd, 2020 10:00

Lush
dusk arising said:

Reading you today brings forth the lust in me for red wine. I haven\'t had a sip of red wine since i had a stomach op in 2018,... used to love a ful bodied red.

Chateau-neuf-du-Slimm or Cabernet Slimmvignon. With such care into the nurture of your vine of words today I\'m reassured that 2020 will again be a classy vintage. A corker!

August 22nd, 2020 06:03

Lush
Neville said:



................. this is gurt lush our Fay ..

August 22nd, 2020 03:41

Lush
L. B. Mek said:

\'Deep lush of bunched purple winds in trust
around mother-vine.\'
wonderful depiction, full of zeal for nature\'s majesty

August 22nd, 2020 03:39

Lush
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Fay, can you send me a case when it is ready. LOL

Andy

August 22nd, 2020 02:52

Betweeness
Michael Edwards said:

Great write dear Fay

August 21st, 2020 13:13

Betweeness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Love this FAY - Whether one is single or with Partner one has always to CARPE DIEM cos there are always opportunities to be grasped ! Between - Yesterday & Tomorrow - Solemn & Grey nowness - Waking & Sleeping & Heaven & Paradise ! You just have to be awake enough to grasp ! Thought provoking - thanks for sharing !

Blessings & Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›
Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks !

August 21st, 2020 05:54

Betweeness
Goldfinch60 said:

Even though have been together with my loved one for most of my life, I am coming to terms with the wonder of being alone, with the occasional lapses into my wonderful memories with my loved one.
Wonderful words once again Fay.

Andy

August 21st, 2020 03:14

Betweeness
Neville said:


this is quite simply but one of the reasons I fell in love with this most beautiful of art forms .....

August 21st, 2020 02:38

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