Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm



IF.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Another excellent composition Fay. This is how it should be done.
Hopefully you will allow me to re-route it into my Fayves so that it is easy to recall when all is quiet with me and it\'s time for nice things.

Ex animo, Alan

January 9th, 2020 08:58

IF.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

January 9th, 2020 07:03

Battle.
myself and me said:

The setting moment could be so beautiful and so powerful as well. Beautiful writing.

January 8th, 2020 18:13

Battle.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Thanks for sharing we have saved as a FAVE ! As a ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENTIST I am aware that all life on EARTH depends on the SUN to maintain the avaerage temperature @ 16C ! Note that the radiation from the Sun we recieve is constant and deetermined by our distance form the SUN (93 million miles !) So if we increase CO2 more of the Suns Thermal Energy is trapped on earth causing GLOBAL WARMING !
I love all poems that showcase Brother Sun ! He likes centre stage and Clouds are a problem but they make his entrance (SUNRISE) and exit (SUNSET) very spectactular ! We have enjoyed SUNSETS in every Continent ! The SUN has provided Planet Earth with free energy for Millions of Years and will continue to do so ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANELA & BRIAN
πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 8th, 2020 16:14

Battle.
Maxine Smith said:

A wonderful write Fay.

January 8th, 2020 09:25

Battle.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

January 8th, 2020 08:06

Battle.
JaydeVictoria said:

Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!

January 8th, 2020 06:55

Battle.
dusk arising said:

And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night attire.
There i was considering you to be her handmaiden at each break of dawn.
Delightful.

January 8th, 2020 06:03

Chance.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that passion exist forever in their lives and your writing Fay.

Andy

January 8th, 2020 00:58

Chance.
dusk arising said:

The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out to be sated. The need to be able to relax into a blissful togetherness.

All expressed so well in the depth of your words today.

January 7th, 2020 18:11

Chance.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Thanks for a beautiful Love Poem ! Brian & I had the same feeling that it was a forecast of how we will feel AFTER we are married ! Especially the (as yet) unknown pleasures we will experience *Love without Frontiers* ! As you know (and understand !) even though we are in our 30s we have never cohabited. It is counter to our Spiritual Values - also Brian is a Deacon in our Church and we are both Youth leaders ! Our self-control has made the anticipation of the Pleasure & Sexual Freedom - we will share in Marriage - all the more Sweeter ! Your POEM has given us a glimpse of uninhibited intimacy ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Coincidently it has spawned a Collaboration Poem by Brian & I - Title *Love & Marriage* - look out for it tomorrow !

Ble3ssings & Peace & Joy & Love
Your ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 7th, 2020 15:16

Chance.
Maxine Smith said:

Beautiful Fay

January 7th, 2020 15:11

Chance.
LAWLESS said:

There is an ember within us all that occasionally needs reigniting.

Excellent poem. Thanks for the thoughts and emotions you have conveyed.

January 7th, 2020 10:34

Chance.
FineB said:

Hello Fay.

A superb write.

Chance and opportunity are everything in life.

Keep writing FineB

January 7th, 2020 08:27

Chance.
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully done as ever!

January 7th, 2020 06:00

Chance.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 7th, 2020 04:09

Heart-Breakers..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !

Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

January 3rd, 2020 18:29

Heart-Breakers..
myself and me said:

\"Tho\' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief\'s waves\"
Splendid, indeed.

January 3rd, 2020 12:23

Heart-Breakers..
Maxine Smith said:

A fab read Fay.

January 3rd, 2020 06:59

Heart-Breakers..
FineB said:

Hello Fay,

A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.

Keep writing FineB


January 3rd, 2020 06:05

Heart-Breakers..
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 3rd, 2020 05:01

Heart-Breakers..
Michael Edwards said:

Great format - great write.

January 3rd, 2020 04:53

Winter\'s Low Sun.
Maxine Smith said:

Superb write Fay, starting the year with a few poetic bangs.
Love this.

January 2nd, 2020 17:18

Winter\'s Low Sun.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.

Ex animo, Alan

January 2nd, 2020 15:55

Winter\'s Low Sun.
Michael Edwards said:

So atmospheric - great write.

January 2nd, 2020 14:31

Winter\'s Low Sun.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. We\'re into the light evenings now - yes?! I\'m a bit early, though we\'ve passed the Shortest Day. Let\'s wisely spend that extra minute or two of daylight extra each day! lol.

January 2nd, 2020 12:30

New Leaves.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fay. May your New year be full of wonderful leaves and beautiful flowers.

January 2nd, 2020 01:37

New Leaves.
dusk arising said:

From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and behold. Wishing you many more seasons of foliage to contemplate.

January 1st, 2020 14:13

New Leaves.
LAWLESS said:

Haven’t seen a Shape Poem in a while, very nice.

January 1st, 2020 10:56

New Leaves.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).

HNY
Ex animo, Alan

January 1st, 2020 08:39

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