Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Love so Lovely
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful utilisation of repetition
to outline some necessary
ingredients, in a successful
love story:
gentleness
tenderness
warmth
potent
that cocktail for a \'meant to be\'
realised, in but a heartbeat
or a fluttering, blink
such a wonderful read,
thank you! dear Fay
February 17th, 2023 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful utilisation of repetition
to outline some necessary
ingredients, in a successful
love story:
gentleness
tenderness
warmth
potent
that cocktail for a \'meant to be\'
realised, in but a heartbeat
or a fluttering, blink
such a wonderful read,
thank you! dear Fay
February 17th, 2023 05:53
Errant
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tread cautiously lovers for maybe
romance
that moonlit caught
can move to foolish as fate
at will alters true to fantasy\'
so sweet
such a unique portrayal of intimacy
dear Fay
(on our tippy toes, we inch forth
tepid, yet ears deafened
by our pulsating, anticipation)
February 17th, 2023 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tread cautiously lovers for maybe
romance
that moonlit caught
can move to foolish as fate
at will alters true to fantasy\'
so sweet
such a unique portrayal of intimacy
dear Fay
(on our tippy toes, we inch forth
tepid, yet ears deafened
by our pulsating, anticipation)
February 17th, 2023 03:26
Besting the Best
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pillow\'d upon my fair love\'s ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,\'
(you spoil us dear Fay
a lovely read, thank you!)
February 17th, 2023 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pillow\'d upon my fair love\'s ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,\'
(you spoil us dear Fay
a lovely read, thank you!)
February 17th, 2023 03:22
Valentine\'s Call
L. B. Mek said:
heartachingly, Beautiful!
thank you dear Fay
February 17th, 2023 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
heartachingly, Beautiful!
thank you dear Fay
February 17th, 2023 03:18
Errant
Bella Shepard said:
The accompanying picture so aptly evokes the nature of your poem dear Fay. In the light of day all that is true will be revealed, but the cloak of twilight feeds our imaginings. A beautiful write my friend!
February 16th, 2023 13:49
Bella Shepard said:
The accompanying picture so aptly evokes the nature of your poem dear Fay. In the light of day all that is true will be revealed, but the cloak of twilight feeds our imaginings. A beautiful write my friend!
February 16th, 2023 13:49
Errant
Neville said:
I got the distinct feeling this was no chance encounter .. one or the other had it planned for months I reckon .. x
February 16th, 2023 11:16
Neville said:
I got the distinct feeling this was no chance encounter .. one or the other had it planned for months I reckon .. x
February 16th, 2023 11:16
Errant
orchidee said:
I never get as far as clandestine on me walks with Fido. He never lets me, of course! heehee.
February 16th, 2023 09:25
orchidee said:
I never get as far as clandestine on me walks with Fido. He never lets me, of course! heehee.
February 16th, 2023 09:25
Errant
arqios said:
...anything clandestine hints at danger and the unseen. Very emotive and sobering.
February 16th, 2023 08:39
arqios said:
...anything clandestine hints at danger and the unseen. Very emotive and sobering.
February 16th, 2023 08:39
Besting the Best
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and sounds Fay, especially the last one.
Andy
February 16th, 2023 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and sounds Fay, especially the last one.
Andy
February 16th, 2023 03:01
Besting the Best
Neville said:
Now this takes some beating .. but rest assured we both know it can\'t be .. x
February 15th, 2023 12:53
Neville said:
Now this takes some beating .. but rest assured we both know it can\'t be .. x
February 15th, 2023 12:53
Besting the Best
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
What an amazing poetess you are!
It is such a pleasure to read your poems. This one brings out the best of memories for me.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 15th, 2023 11:27
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
What an amazing poetess you are!
It is such a pleasure to read your poems. This one brings out the best of memories for me.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 15th, 2023 11:27
Valentine\'s Call
Rocky Lagou said:
Ufff!!
Such a poignant yearning on Valentine\'s.
But truly so prettily depicted and conveyed.
Thank you Fay for your words.
February 15th, 2023 10:09
Rocky Lagou said:
Ufff!!
Such a poignant yearning on Valentine\'s.
But truly so prettily depicted and conveyed.
Thank you Fay for your words.
February 15th, 2023 10:09
Valentine\'s Call
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful yet lonesome write, my friend. Well done!
February 14th, 2023 11:31
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful yet lonesome write, my friend. Well done!
February 14th, 2023 11:31
Valentine\'s Call
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of missing love Fay, may that love be there for you.
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of missing love Fay, may that love be there for you.
Andy
February 14th, 2023 02:15
Valentine\'s Call
Neville said:
indeed .. it is quite lovely and sadly hugely beautiful ............. ❤️
February 14th, 2023 01:00
Neville said:
indeed .. it is quite lovely and sadly hugely beautiful ............. ❤️
February 14th, 2023 01:00
Tasted.
[email protected] said:
You have very colorful images, but too often it feels overwrought.
February 13th, 2023 20:48
[email protected] said:
You have very colorful images, but too often it feels overwrought.
February 13th, 2023 20:48
Valentine\'s Call
LeeAnn said:
This is beautiful and I love it. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2023 19:15
LeeAnn said:
This is beautiful and I love it. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2023 19:15
Tasted.
L. B. Mek said:
dear Fay, this breath, inspiring
majestic Poem
may just be my absolute
favourite
of all your ageless greats
Brilliant!
I\'m so jealous, I so wish I could write like you
your wording imprints itself upon our very souls
\'I halted and listened
to liquid laughter.\'
February 13th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
dear Fay, this breath, inspiring
majestic Poem
may just be my absolute
favourite
of all your ageless greats
Brilliant!
I\'m so jealous, I so wish I could write like you
your wording imprints itself upon our very souls
\'I halted and listened
to liquid laughter.\'
February 13th, 2023 04:06
Tasted.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, a friend of mine goes horse-riding through the country side and has a wonderful time in so doing.
Andy
February 13th, 2023 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, a friend of mine goes horse-riding through the country side and has a wonderful time in so doing.
Andy
February 13th, 2023 02:53
Tasted.
Neville said:
this is one of those that must surely be a keeper .. the beauty contained herein is quite simple unforgettable and am sure will be re-visited ........ x🌹
February 13th, 2023 01:42
Neville said:
this is one of those that must surely be a keeper .. the beauty contained herein is quite simple unforgettable and am sure will be re-visited ........ x🌹
February 13th, 2023 01:42
Tasted.
Doggerel Dave said:
I almost felt I could ride a horse (total illusion, experience has taught me) after my read, Fay. The sensory experience was so close to the actual in your lines, that it has saved me a trip on foot(!) to experience for myself... great stuff.
February 12th, 2023 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I almost felt I could ride a horse (total illusion, experience has taught me) after my read, Fay. The sensory experience was so close to the actual in your lines, that it has saved me a trip on foot(!) to experience for myself... great stuff.
February 12th, 2023 19:10
Tasted.
Bella Shepard said:
One again you take me to an enchanted place, where it seems dreams are real. Just to imagine being in such a place takes my breath away dear Fay. Thank you for another gorgeous canvas, splashed with natures bounty, and a true fav.
February 12th, 2023 15:02
Bella Shepard said:
One again you take me to an enchanted place, where it seems dreams are real. Just to imagine being in such a place takes my breath away dear Fay. Thank you for another gorgeous canvas, splashed with natures bounty, and a true fav.
February 12th, 2023 15:02
Felt but Unheard
willowthewisp said:
“Here I wait until
love finds a way
and it will.”
The simple, gentle yet unwavering resolution of these lines—what a beautiful way to put this sentiment.
February 10th, 2023 22:19
willowthewisp said:
“Here I wait until
love finds a way
and it will.”
The simple, gentle yet unwavering resolution of these lines—what a beautiful way to put this sentiment.
February 10th, 2023 22:19
Bought
L. B. Mek said:
saddest part, is that
as aged a topic, as this may be
as current, a trend this be
in society\'s unsavoury shadows...
great wording, as-ever
\'captures again satin-soft sighs
of clandestine bliss.\'
February 10th, 2023 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
saddest part, is that
as aged a topic, as this may be
as current, a trend this be
in society\'s unsavoury shadows...
great wording, as-ever
\'captures again satin-soft sighs
of clandestine bliss.\'
February 10th, 2023 05:25
Regeneration
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a new dawn, as welcome
as a new family member
what a brilliant concept
indeed, we truly need to think
of our gifted days that way, dear Fay
thank you! just lovely
February 10th, 2023 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a new dawn, as welcome
as a new family member
what a brilliant concept
indeed, we truly need to think
of our gifted days that way, dear Fay
thank you! just lovely
February 10th, 2023 05:19
Bought
Neville said:
very tongue in cheeky say\'s this kept man ........................... x
February 9th, 2023 09:00
Neville said:
very tongue in cheeky say\'s this kept man ........................... x
February 9th, 2023 09:00
Bought
orchidee said:
She may get some \'ardour\' but I never do! Aww, Fido won\'t let me. heehee.
February 9th, 2023 07:54
orchidee said:
She may get some \'ardour\' but I never do! Aww, Fido won\'t let me. heehee.
February 9th, 2023 07:54
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